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Sat May 11, 2013 12:37 am
Deduction of Justice!

Magus Template


Name: Raito R Riyu (Right Reason)
True Age: Five hundred seventeen, has mentally aged t somewhere between 2 and 3 thousand.
Gender: Male
Aura: Deep Blue

The Mind of Right

R is LUD...I...CROUS...LY… intelligent. This is the shaping trait of his entire mind, body, and soul. His analytical skills are second to none which he knows, and a battle of wits is one of his favorite things. His eyes take in all details, and his mind uses this information to determine what he desires to analyze. This means that he can construct scenarios, see various pathways which lead to the current situation, as well as where things may go. He knows how to use this evidence to further support his own hypotheses.
However, for all of his intelligence, R is not a withholder of information. If he suspects someone of something, he will inform them right away. He isn't shy at all about information and giving it to others, indeed, he believes that cooperation can be one of the most principal factors in creating the perfect way to solve problems.
However, just like anything else, he has his life mission. What is his life's mission? Well, that would be nothing less than the preservation of the Sugiuran Race. This means that his main goal in life is understanding their existence, how they came to exist fully, what their guardian beast's are, etc. He's a historian of sorts, but he is also more then that. He also gives out what he believes to be the chances at perpetuating their species to specific people, that is, getting important people together who can produce more vital Sugiura. This includes getting out of the stigma of incest, because as far as he can tell that practice is no longer needed and is contributing to the problem at this stage of Sugiuran existence.
He has an immense dislike for fighting and violence. He finds such things as without purpose, as things can always be settled logically without resorting to such measures. He can understand when force is used as a logical resource to cause for something else to happen, such as a raid to retrieve an object, but he cannot condone its use when struggling pointlessly against another force.

Blow for Blow
However, R will not allow himself to be taken advantage of. He will do whatever it takes to defend himself if he is assaulted, using a philosophy of "Blow for Blow". If he is given crap, then he will be more then glad to return it to the place where it came from. Of course, he is passive in his emotions while performing the returning blow, as he does not allow such things to influence his actions, but he does make sure to put a firm resolve before everything which he does.

However, at the same time, he does have a small amount of sex drive. He normally doesn't show it, but he has no qualms about violating a woman's (Or man's, depending) most intimate secrets in order to solve a case that he is investigating. In fact, that's another thing. Once he has aimed towards solving something, he will do anything and everything in order to solve that mystery, even going as far as to paint himself out to be a traitor in order to accomplish his goals. That is the one thing about him that can also always be trusted, although he has been known to not be totally honest. He will always accomplish his goals in what he does, no matter what he does it is all for the ability to push forwards his objectives.

He also has a firm belief in justice. He believes in the rights of beings, all beings. He looks down on abuse and most of all on murder, on things which break the law of the land, and things which upset and violate the laws of others. He looks down on self-righteous people for the most part, believing that they are critically wrong. He believes that life needs conformity to exist, and as such, his mind full-heartedly follows this path, although his body defies it with every core bit of its being, using its subtle twitches and changes to make certain that it never goes off the edge and does something that it would regret, helping him focus.

This guy… needs his sugar. IF he doesn't have it, he goes into massive withdrawal. He has to have something with at least 25% of the daily required amount of sugar every hour of the day, meaning that every day his body runs off of 600% of what a normal person does. This amount of sugar keep his mind, body, and soul charged, which contribute to his high amounts of observational abilities as well as fuel his amazing mind. Sugar is literally his crack. IF he doesn't have it, he goes into withdrawal, and the symptoms compound upon one another the longer he goes without it. Generally, it makes him highly irritable, unable to focus, and unable to even form two thoughts together properly.
However, this man is also a heavy eccentric. He doesn't conform to any of society's norms, as he finds them to heavily be too comfortable. This is why the only way that he ca sit in a way that makes him relaxed enough to think is by putting his feet up on the front of the chair, using his crunched up body as pressure to help himself move properly how he desires. His favorite thinking position is to be sitting on a chair, his feet squished up against it, one of his hands either gracing his knee or pressed up against his lips, while his other hand preoccupies itself with picking at his face or else grabbing whatever sugary snack he is currently consuming and devouring it. To be certain, his bodily movements do not correspond with his mind. His mind has hyperfocus disorder, while his body is extremely attention deficit. This is what creates the balance within himself that allows him to act however he needs to.
Tennis Player
Yes, he is an ae tennis player. You would not know it from looking at him, but R has an amazing amount of natural skill in the centuries old art of beating the booger around. This taste is differed from his liking of exercise, as it makes him feel alive and greatly helps him think. Indeed, while he is playing tennis against an opponent, his mental capacities work even higher then when he is sitting in a chair with his knees propped up. Tennis is also his favored way of settling disputes, as he can find out anything he needs to know about a person by playing them in a tennis match, or so is his belief.
In addition, he is a very suspicious man. Now, he is not paranoid. This is an incorrect term for him. However, he feels it his need to question anything and everything, meaning that once he has his eyes fixed on a target, no matter how unlikely or how much proof comes up against that target to prove it false, he will always believe it is true, or will attempt to. If, in the end, he is proven wrong about something, he will lose completely his ability to cope with a situation and becomes completely vulnerable, having no idea how to proceed in anything at that point and needing a great amount of assistance to even remember to eat, as his entire body feels weak that he was incorrect. This is because, to him, being correct is one of the truths about himself. Most of the time, when he develops a theory, it's either not wrong or is contributing towards a much bigger theory that he cares about solving.

General Appearance


R cares very little for his bodily appearance, just as he cares little for societal norms in action. His body is therefore not very well taken care of, as he does not use anything particularly when he showers other then water in and of itself to calm him down and help him think. His body is that of an anorexic, being extremely thin in its size and shape, lanky. His hair is largely unkempt and descends in chaotic strands upon his face, which often times seem to get in the way of his vision.

His eyes have a great amount of dark shadow around them, as if he is wearing eye shadow; however, this is merely from the sheer amount of lack of sleep that he gets as a result of his work and constant streams of thought since he was very young. He has a rather small nose, of course, and his mouth, however, is quite different. His mouth directly reflects his emotion. Normally it is set in a determined line of thought, as if thinking about things very thoroughly. However, there are times when it opens wide in shock, his eyes close furiously shut, expressing themselves violently. Or, it curves up in a small smile, his eyes brightening and seeming completely alive, as if his entire form has changed. His mouth can often symbolize his emotions, and the rest of his body typically follows it.

Of his clothing, little can be said. He wears a plain white t-shirt over his body with medium long sleeves that go past his elbow, as well as jeans that cover around his legs to his feet. He is always barefoot, wearing no shoes on his feet or socks, his feet completely bare, just like his hands. He often has his hands either in/on his mouth or on his knees, as they are constantly moving and doing something. His hair is dark black in color, with small amounts of traces of white through it that come out looking silver from his natural hair color, and it is very rarely cut, making it seem very long on top of his head. He moves in an incredibly relaxed way, although due to his eccentrics he often seems to be an awkward position which to him is perfectly comfortable. Beneath his clothing he wears a pair of simple white boxers.

Special Body Makeup.
“Spiritual Body” is a word that describes an existence with spiritual properties. In other words, a shape is constructed without relying on components with physical properties. On the other hand, “Material Body” means something that is identical in structure as flesh bodies. A Material Body, cannot walk through walls, and will hurt and become wounded when beaten with an iron baton. However, a Spirit Body is capable of completely disregarding such physical interference. Attacking a Spiritual Body with a regular baton or sword (unless they are magical items) will only hit empty space. Sugiura have a special mix of both. Their bodies can be seen by normal humans, but they are not able to be harmed like a Material Body.

Animalistic Traits: R's animalistic trait is, without a doubt, the head which he has possessed. His ears beneath his head are futed, although youc annot normally view them. His eyes have a third eyelid within them, meaning that he never has to blink if he desires not to, and finally, he can move his head three hundred and sixty degrees if he desires to. This is correct, his head is that of a beakless owl.

Appearance Age: 17-20
Height: 5'10''
Weight: 110

Natural  Abilities

Natural or Magic?

Basic Magic:


Kidō Expert
He is also extremely adept at using all publically known Bakudo spells up until Kin and Bankin, and knows with incantation most Hadō up until 89, although he does not practice the ones beyond that and doesn't go out of his way to be skillful at the ones below that.

Magecraft Examiner Expert
Finally, he is an absolute master of understanding magecraft. Not learning it or reproducing it, as he simply doesn't have the desire to learn any other magecraft than his own, but to UNDERSTAND them. This means that he can see how they work through his extensive knowledge about magecraft, but also because of what heknows about the person who is using the magic. Generally, this doesn't meant htat he can tell how it is being structured and used, but rather how it is being used, from its point of origination to exactly what its effects are doing to influence the space around it to roughly how much energy is being used to use it. Typically, the simpler a magecraft is, the easier it is for him to understand it. The more complex and more energy it uses,t he harder it is for him to understand. Understanding a magecraft in thread can take between 2 and 8 posts to never, depending on how intricate the magecraft being targeted fro examination is.

Magecraft Unleashed

Motivation Magic

Motive Magus
His magic has to do completely with the motives that people possess. In essence, he can identify, attempt to manipulate, and paint clear people's motivations, by using his own eyes or by using his spiritual energy.
This is the first trait about his special sphere of magic that he possesses. He is able to identify a person's motive usually just by looking at them thanks to his immense higher-level brain functions, although sometimes when this is not possible he can use his sugiuran magic. The special thing about this type of magic is that it takes after R himself. If he does not desire for it to be noticed, than it is extremely difficult to notice its actions.This means that it can only be detected by those with extremely potent energy seeking sensibilities, and they don't have any kind of malignant intentions within them either, so most auto-sensory objects cannot notice them.
What this force does, essentially, is reveal the person's motive to L. When this is used, two pictures appear in his mind, depending on how successful his detection methods are. The first is a picture of the target's reason for living, which is the easiest to get. The second is harder to achieve with a routine check and can be resisted by those with more potent energy abilities than R himself. Those who cannot resist the second, however, R will be able to find their motivation for one action. Action in this case is deemed as anything a person "Does", meaning that he can find the motives for a person taking a step or for being in a certain location.
Now, by no means are these picture perfect. They do not give any other information than a visual picture, and while most of the time this will be more then enough for R to work with, there are also a good number of cases where for usefullness' sake he cannot discern what the picture means. For instance, if a person was attempting to release an ancient god out of a jar and were so fixated on the jar that they wanted to break into a pyramid to get the seal breaker, if R obtained a copy of their reason for breaking and entering the temple he would get a picture of a jar, and only a jar, even if he has no idea what the jar means.
In addition, there is the case of the insane. In these cases, R can typically identify that they are insane just by looking at them, but if he performs Identify and gets a picture of a dandy lion, he'll figure something has gone wrong somewhere in the motivation process of the target's mind. Last of all are those whose motivations are so dark that they cannot be seen. The more negative a motivation for performing an action, the darker the picture that R receives, as the lighting for the picture is based on the target's psyche's beliefs towards their motivation. For instance, if he were to scan a man like Doctor Hebi, he would get a decently lit picture without blemish of a magnifying glass. However, if he were to use it on a politician, he would get the darkest picture possible and wouldn't be able to tell what exactly the designs of the sinister being were.
This is the hardest thing for him to do with his Motive Magic. Essentially, this type of magic seeks to influence the target's motives, changing them. Now, altering currently existing motives is much simpler then trying to create one in a person, but it is possible none the less. It is immensely difficult to make ay change to a target's psyche, and if R is unable to be calm when using this type of magic then it completely fails with a 0% chance of success. In addition, creating a new motive in a target without their acceptance has a 5% chance of working if he is completely focused, and only 10% if they are competing at the time of the motive creation attempt.

To perform this works just like his Identify; his magic shoots around the target from a point on his body, clear, unidentifiable or dark black magicks that cover around the target, before entering their body. Then, it attempts to change the single motivation which R has targeted or create the one he desires. Naturally, an opponent can resist it if they desire as it is an energy based ability and other energy based resistances can stop it; but the magic itself is extremely potent in and of itself once it begins to take ahold of the subject, once it has begun to work. For this is such strong magic that it can create motivation within a person where none such existed before, making it extremely difficult to alter once it has worked on the target.

Finally, he can only Influence one time per every three to four posts, as it is such intense magic.

OOC Note
But of course, permission is required and full knowledge must be given to the owner of the character who is being altered or changed in motivation, so that full comprehension is known to them of what could occur as a result of this.

Paint to Light

Finally is the last effect which Motivation Magic possess. This is the special power of being able to make Motivations clear to a person. This spell works like the other two, towards a specific target. However, unlike them, it targets the other person as the one who gains from it. First, R declares an action performed by the target, making it clear to them what they have done. Then, his magic hits them, and activates its special ability of being able to Identify for that action.

However, from there, not only does it send a picture of the motivation for the action to R, but it also sends a copy of the picture to the target's psyche as well, making it obvious to them what their reason truly is as well. This is used to help reveal to others what their motivation is, and can be used to make sure that the person knows clearly why they are performing an action. Of course, this has to work for finding the reason for that action in the first place, which is the harder part of Identify, so if that does not work then this effect cannot work either. However, if that effect does work, then this effect can occur with no further effort.

Past & Roleplay Sample

The Past... Is Painful.

Life of the Genius
In his lifetime, R was a quite strange man. He was a man who held justice dear to him, a justice the likes of which the world had never before known. He worked with the police and law enforcement agencies of the planet, solving the world's greatest mysteries of the worst criminals, using his intellect in the name of justice and to solve problems. However, this was what eventually to his downfall.

He was unable to foresee the use of something outside his capability of a human to understand, the fact of a Shingiami. He was a man of reason, of fact. The idea that someone… some-THING else could exist in the world never occurred to this man of perfect logic, and when one of his opponents used this rogue to his advantage against the innocent man, there was nothing which he could do about the fate that he was met with. He couldn't even tell what was going on as he was stabbed through the heart, to him only feeling his heart coming to a stop. He realized then, even as young as he was, that this was something that he had never been able to solve with simple logic, it was simply impossible. His opponent had cheated against him.

Birth of a Mage
However, his story was not yet over, as he came under consciousness that there was something further to this life, the existence of these mystical beings, he had looked forwards to becoming a Shinigami himself and being able to turn the tables on the one who had trumped him, getting back at them. However, destiny had quite another plan for this extraordinary man. Instead of his body changing from a plus into the Shingiami, what was planned for him, his entire boy became filled with a kind of energy, one the likes of which he had never known before.

Instead of the Rukongai, he awoke within a large tower. It was a rather strange tower, to be certain, the likes of which he had never known before. There were ornate, intricate detail structures all across the area he awoke in, and was rapidly found by a man covered in robes. R merely stared blankly at the man, trying to figure out what had occurred. The man looked at him in shock, unable to quite understand what had happened there.

Much, much later, R would deduce that it was by the act of some senior magus that this extraordinarily intelligent individual was sent from human life into the Tower, brought into this place by a Red. This was what he would later deduce, but only after years of study. After joining there, he realized that he would have to turn his fantastic mind towards study of something that intrigued him far more then he would like to admit; magic, something the likes of which his logical mind wanted, desperately, to ignore.

However, as a result, he learned more then almost any other HOW magecraft worked. HE learned that all magecraft must have a logical pattern, rhyme, or reason to how they worked, and learned that he could find out these things by looking towards what fueled the magus themselves. This led him upon his seeking of the only type of Magic which he wanted to develop of his own person, that of the Motivation. It suited him quite well, or so he believed; a type of magic geared towards identifying the motivations of a target, of showing that motivation to them, and of influencing them himself.

Eventually, he began to use his talents towards solving problems amongst the Sugiura, a talent for which he felt that he would still be great at, despite the fact that he was never truly able to solve the mystery which led to his death. So it was that he began to become known to the Sugiura, as he solved any and all problems that he was faced with using pure logic, using his logic to learn many things about the, rising upwards simply by virtue of what it was that he did. He never looked back form that point on, and developed his magic further and further whenever he began to become bored, as he realized that it was an infinite space for which he could extend his intelligence.

Not sure what do.

Roleplay Sample:

General Skills
Durability: Adept
General Speed: Advanced
Strength: Beginner
Weapon Skill: Adept

Racial Skills
Sugiura Magic: Advanced
Animal Instincts: Advanced
Martial Arts: Adept
Casting Speed: Advanced

Will Skills
Willpower/Determination: Adept
Mental Deduction: Master
Pain Endurance: Advanced
Focus: Master

Last edited by JJ on Thu Feb 07, 2019 9:43 pm; edited 3 times in total


Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense.
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Sun May 19, 2013 6:08 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Master
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Master

Comments/Notes: First time grading a sug. So whatever.

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Thu Apr 23, 2015 11:57 am

This is being moved to archives.

Thank you very much for your service over the years.

If you are ever needed again, you shall be re-summoned once more and moved back to Approved Applications.

Until then, sleep well, my dear friend. Thank you for the good times and for having put up with me for so very, very long.

And so I put away yet another Sugiura... R, you were just like L. I liked both of you, and your mind was awesome. Unfortunately, you were only ever used once, and that was an interesting experience in and of itself, as you were flashed by a f.ta. Seriously, oh my. However, you are a smart man, so you can understand well why I am doing this. Goodnight, R. You're a boss.


Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense.
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