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» Name: Schwarzilber Teatime (Shvahr-zilber Tay-uh-tom-ay)
» Titles:
» Age: Looks roughly 20. True age is 389.
» Height: 6 ft 1
» Gender: Male
» Affiliation/Rank: Rogue

» True Appearance Written: Wears a luxurious looking black trench coat with a silken black long sleeve shirt underneath. Wears smooth night black jeans with somewhat tall night black combat boots.

» True Appearance Picture
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» Personality
Jolly:
Schwarzilber can be described as a very happy person, hardly ever being seen without a smile on his face. In most circumstances he will be seen as cheerful, happy to help out someone in need, never commiting a wrong for personal gain. But sometimes, this trait of seemingly endless cheerfulness can be seen as eerie, sometimes even terrifying, as Schwarzilber always smiles, even when surrounded by blood and death, as such things seemingly have no effect on him.

Infatuated With Battle: This is where most view Schwarzilber's cheerfulness as eerie. Some may even describe Schwarzilber as insane after seeing him in battle as he is so infatuated with it he will most likely be seen in a frenzy-esque state while in the throes of combat. This is not, however, to say he fights without mercy, for even if he derives great joy from battle, he does not derive joy from death. This also is not to say, however, he will completely hold back in a fight as he will most definitely injure, sometimes heavily so, anyone he faces in battle. Schwarzilber also does not see the purpose of honor in combat, as he will usually use any means and advantages that will enable him to win.

Uncaring Towards Society: Schwarzilber is not one who will discriminate against any being, regardless of things such as race, gender, or anything else that would seperate them from other beings. This, however, is not because he thinks such a thing is overly wrong and despicable, he just doesn't care who or what someone is, taking in everyone and accounting them as an individual being, different from any other. He does not care what society would look down on someone or what rules may bind them, he will only use his personal judgement and nothing else when judging someone in any way.

Protective of What's Close to Him: Schwarzilber may protect something or someone only due to personal reasons, but when something or someone grows close to him, he will fight ferociously for them. When one of his friends is looked down upon due to societal reasons, he will not look upon it as such. He will view such an act as a being or group of beings endangering his friends physical or mental state and will take actions according to such, most of the time ending with the "threats" being subdued due to most possibly heavy injuries.


» Likes: The thrill of battle.

» Dislikes: Nothing in particular.
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» History
Childhood
Schwarzilber was born on Earth, where though he has long since forgotten. He doesn't remember much about his family except the time when he was about 13 to 15, exact details evading his memory, when his father gave him his sword. He didn't quite know what then, but he felt something for that sword as soon as he touched it, this "Radio" that his father gave him. His known life started when he recieved that sword. He trained tirelessly with it, constantly striving to better himself, fueled by a drive previously unknown to him to achieve greatness with this sword, unlocking abilities of his own along the way.

Schwarzilber left his family at around 20, his drive for greatness leading him to adventuring. He went here and there around Earth, constantly honing his skills for year to become. He soon discovered that this drive within himself strove for combat, as he often lost control of himself amidst battle while training. Sometimes coming to standing over dozens of bodies. However, even though his inner drive sometimes lead him to kill, he did not kill without reason, for even though he cared little about society, somewhere within himself he guess he found it wrong to kill the innocent. And so when he had a desire to kill, he kept himself to slaughtering various low lifes that included mafia, murderers, muggers and various others.

After a while, when he was about 23, he decided that his inner desire to kill might someday hinder his skill in a fight, and so to calm himself he decided to take up meditation. If one could have been watching Schwarzilber in this point of his lifetime, they would rarely see Schwarzilber doing something aside training or meditation, him still constantly striving to become better.

The Wandering Swordsman
Around the age of 57, finally managing to get his inner bloodlust under control but still deriving great satisfaction from fighting, Schwarzilber took to traveling abroad, training in various places around the globe. He went to many places, even travelling between dimensions thanks to the powers of Radio. At this point Schwarzilber focused less on training with Radio and more on training himself, seeking to find a balance in between himself and his blade.

Schwarzilber found out that he really didn't have a knack for standing his ground or withstanding attacks, and so he set to improving his speed, for even if one could strike him down with a single blow, he would still win if that single blow were to never hit. Though as his abilities evolved, Schwarzilber realised his body was undergoing changes, becoming unbelievable fast and regenerating almost instantly before his eyes. Using his body's newfound properties Schwarzilber set to training even harder, worrying less if he hurt himself from pushing himself too hard due to his newfound powers. And to further his abilities even more, Schwarzilber immersed himself in his hobby of meditation, pushing his perception to newfound levels.

During his many years of battle, perhaps due to a strain on his sanity though even he himself doesn't know for sure, Schwarzilber's personality turned into a more cheerful persona as he got used to the great amounts of bloodshed around him as he trained.

For the past 300 and some years Schwarzilber has watched the world turn, never really caring for any society and overall sticking to the backround as he furthered his own skill. He continues his wandering even now, in search of new power in his constant strive to better himself, though over the years his inner desire has calmed down into a more manageable personality, though many still feel an eerie aura emanating from him, perhaps from his inner desire still stirring within.

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» Natural Abilities:
Unbelievable Speed: Shwarzilber is EXTREMELY fast. He has spent most of his lifetime focused on improving his speed. Be it reaction speed, movement speed, swinging speed, Schwarzilber is over the top fast in every category. Faster than a jet, appearing as a mere blur or less, it is nearly impossible for most people to keep track of Schwarzilber as he moves. This has improved Schwarzilber greatly, for most of his fighting style focuses on not being hit, as he has little in the defensive category.

Coordinated and Flexible: Due to him favoring high speed combat, Shwarzilber has improved his body and coordination to a very high level to keep up with his fighting style. Able to dodge and weave through most attacks with ease, walk on his hands, balance his sword on his feet, perform ridiculous midair movements, be ambidextrous, and have accuracy bordering on a 100% shot, Shwarzilber is VERY capable in combat and his coordination helps him with many other weapons.

Amazing Sword Skill: Shwarzilber has trained for nearly his whole liftime with his sword, rendering him a master with it. Due to his high speed fighting style, Schwarzilber has had little training with countering or blocking, focusing his fighting style around periodic strikes while passing at high speeds. Schwarzilber is very hard to counter, as he swings with unbelievable speed, even sending out a thin shockwave that can cut through buildings, and very easily people.

Impact Resistance: Schwarzilber, due to constantly training while moving at high speeds, has developed a resistance to blunt impacts. This, however, is limited to his momentum vs his opponents momentum; ie, if his fist impacts someone while Schwarzilber is traveling at high speeds, it will have little repercussion towards himself. But if someone else impacts him at high speeds or when he isn't moving, or moving very slowly, it will still do a fair amount of damage; but if he were to hit a wall afterward from the force of the punch, damage from that would be reduced. This resistance does not extend to any impacts that are not blunt, for even a person weak in both power and skill can cut through Schwarzilber's skin and flesh with ease.

Insane Regeneration: Due to Acceleration, Schwarzilbers molecules regenerate and regrow at astonishing speed, instantly closing around wounds and rendering him extremely hard to kill. This extends to instances where vital organs are impaled or limbs severed, for his body regenerates fast enough to near instantly close around seemingly fatal wounds and regrow and/or regenerate his organs, and even if a limb is severed, the molecules within it would regenerate fast enough to keep the limb alive, even in an instance where the limb severed is Schwarzilber's head. If a limb is severed, it may be retrieved and reattached. If not retrieved a new limb will grow in it's place. In the instance where Schwarzilber's head is severed and not retrieved, a new body will start to form out of the head, the original body falling lifeless when the new body is functional.

Through many years of meditation, Schwarzilber has greatly increased his physical perception and energy perception, eventually achieving the act of focusing them within his eyes, amplifying them greatly.

Right Eye: This eye holds Schwarzilbers energy perception. It is able to read energy signatures at a very high pace with very high accuracy, enabling him to track people with skill and read an energy attack quickly to develop means of countering or getting around it.

Left Eye: This eye holds Schwarzilbers physical perception. It is able to read movement in a 360 degree radius around himself. It can expertly read movements outside or inside of bodies, able to determine injuries or illness with relatively good accuracy. In reading the motions inside of someones body, Schwarzilber can tell when and how someone will move or strike, aiding him in dodging or countering an attack.

In the instance where one of Schwarzilber's eyes are damaged, that eyes perception will still be readable, however, the information it recieves will be smudged or fractured depending on the damage, making it harder to read or process.


» Unique Abilities:
Acceleration: Schwarzilber's fighting style was originally built upon this technique, but over many years of training he can now use his moves without it, though Acceleration will still amplify them greatly. Acceleration was Schwarzilber's first learned ability. It accelerates Schwarzilber's molecules, making his speed, stamina, and healing go through the roof. It is possible, using Acceleration, to vibrate fast enough to go through solid objects, but he can only pull this off with objects without much spiritual pressure. Another thing Schwarzilber has learned to do using Acceleration is the generation of lightning. Schwarzilber can vibrate his body in a way so that it'll generate electricity, which he can then discharge as a boost in movement, power, or as an attack. However, even though Schwarzilber can generate lightning he has no ability that grants him control over it.

Buzz Pulse: Buzz Pulse is the act in which Schwarzilber vibrates the molecules in part of his body to such an extent that it will rapidly build up force, then releasing a pulse that will either rocket Schwarzilber in a sudden boost of speed, or violently repulse someone within close aproximity of him. This can be used in many ways, a sudden boost of speed in case Schwarzilber needs it, an attack to generate great distance between him and an opponent, or a last second forcefield to save him from injury. Schwarzilber can even use Buzz Pulse as an advanced version of CPR, launching vibrations into someone to give them a burst of acceleration, closing both internal and external wounds and restarting organs.


Radio: http://www.wetanz.com/assets/Uploads/wetasword01lrg4.jpg
Measurement: Blade: 3 ft; Handle: 7 in; Pommel: 2 in; Crossguard: 7 in.


Due to many years of training with his sword, Schwarzilber has developed a strong spiritual bond with it, able to instantly tell where it is even to a cross dimensional extent. Schwarzilber can even spiritually call Radio to him, dematerializing it and rematerializing it in his grasp. Schwarzilber, due to his bond and Radio's abilities, can disrupt and resolidify the energy within his blade, changing it's form into any other weapon.

Radio's Powers: Radio is a sword that can disrupt energy, lessening it's concentration and purifying it into neutral energy, energy without an element and not concentrated enough to use as an attack, though this abilities effect is lessened against non-pure energy such as elemental energy. Using this ability Schwarzilber can also temporarily disrupt spacial energy, opening a wormhole that teleports him to a target location, even cross dimensionally.

Radio's Moves: These are the techniques that Schwarzilber has developed with radio over the years. They can be used without an incantation, for those that have one, but their power will be cut to 50%.

Flash Strike: With a combination of his speed and Radio's spacial disruption, Schwarzilber can turn one strike into many, hitting someone multiple times with one swing of his sword. This is Schwarzilber's most used move with Radio, for it doesn't have an incantation and can be used quickly and to strike multiple targets within close proximity of each other. This move can also be used without Radio's spacial disruption, though the effect will be lessened.

Flash Blade: [Strike with utmost speed] Using his immense speed Schwarzilber creates afterimages of Radio while Radio disrupts space to contain said afterimages. This enables Schwarzilber to attack with his sword and each afterimage at the same time, barraging an opponent with seemingly endless strikes in fast succession. This can also be aimed at multiple targets to be used as a means to cut down a surrounding crowd or generate distance between Schwarzilber and those around him.

Flash Bird: [Fly with speed unhindered] Using a different version of flash strike, Schwarzilber sends multiple strikes through space with one or more swings. This enables him to target an opponent's weak point from far away, or to strike one or more opponents around him at long range.

Thousand Armed Asura: [Blaze forth with all your fury] Concentrating all of Radio's energy and thrusting his sword into the sky Schwarzilber unleashes his final technique. Radio disappears from Schwarzilber's hands and in doing so a cloud of a thousand copies of it form in the sky, the cloud appearing in a circular formation and the blades pointing downwards. The blades are Radio's energy condensed, and they will reform when destroyed. The cloud may vary in size because Schwarzilber can command it to disperse over a greater area or condense into a smaller one. Within the area of the cloud of blades Radio's energy disruption ability is amplified, enabling Schwarzilber to cause most abilities to either fade or go out of control and enabling him to teleport freely throughout the area. Schwarzilber can condense Radio's energy into the form of any weapon at will, and can even condense the energy into more than one weapon, enabling him to fight in a wide variety of ways. Schwarzilber can also condense Radio's energy into an unstable form that will continuously combust. This unstable energy will either detonate upon command or impact with someone elses reiatsu, though the reiatsu has to be dense enough to collide with, so it will usually explode upon contact with someone's body or within very close proximity.

Purify: Schwarzilber can use this technique without drawing Radio. Schwarzilber concentrates Radio's power into a part of his body, then, through physical contact, he can attack the energy within someones body. This will greatly diminish the energy within their body, making it very hard for them to use their powers, exhausting them, and quite possibly rendering them unconscious. While charging the powers of Radio, Schwarzilber can release them to attack the energy around him, but he cannot target the energy within someones body while using this method.


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Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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You were honestly out of Mary Sue category for a little bit, but then the whole "He has no defense! Except the defensive scheme I gave him!" part came in to play. Regeneration is a defensive mechanism, even if we ignore the whole impact thing.

Insane Regeneration: Due to Acceleration, Schwarzilbers molecules regenerate and regrow at astonishing speed, instantly closing around wounds and rendering him extremely hard to kill. This extends to instances where vital organs are impaled or limbs severed, for his body regenerates fast enough to near instantly close around seemingly fatal wounds and regrow and/or regenerate his organs, and even if a limb is severed, the molecules within it would regenerate fast enough to keep the limb alive, even in an instance where the limb severed is Schwarzilber's head. If a limb is severed, it may be retrieved and reattached. If not retrieved a new limb will grow in it's place. In the instance where Schwarzilber's head is severed and not retrieved, a new body will start to form out of the head, the original body falling lifeless when the new body is functional.

So...there's no limits to this at all? He's pretty much immortal? That's a no. Having anything even the rung below what is effectively the complete immortality that you're currently applying for is in the realm of demons like Mana. This application is not...remotely close to the quality needed to reach that sort of tier. This needs to be toned down, and hard.

Acceleration: Schwarzilber's fighting style was originally built upon this technique, but over many years of training he can now use his moves without it, though Acceleration will still amplify them greatly. Acceleration was Schwarzilber's first learned ability. It accelerates Schwarzilber's molecules, making his speed, stamina, and healing go through the roof. It is possible, using Acceleration, to vibrate fast enough to go through solid objects, but he can only pull this off with objects without much spiritual pressure. Another thing Schwarzilber has learned to do using Acceleration is the generation of lightning. Schwarzilber can vibrate his body in a way so that it'll generate electricity, which he can then discharge as a boost in movement, power, or as an attack. However, even though Schwarzilber can generate lightning he has no ability that grants him control over it.

Accelerating your molecules wouldn't make you faster...if anything it'd be more difficult to move due to the frequency, which would definitely lower stamina, not raise it. The only thing this power would conceivably do is increase the rate in which your body recuperates from wounds...

Through many years of meditation, Schwarzilber has greatly increased his physical perception and energy perception, eventually achieving the act of focusing them within his eyes, amplifying them greatly.

Right Eye: This eye holds Schwarzilbers energy perception. It is able to read energy signatures at a very high pace with very high accuracy, enabling him to track people with skill and read an energy attack quickly to develop means of countering or getting around it.

Left Eye: This eye holds Schwarzilbers physical perception. It is able to read movement in a 360 degree radius around himself. It can expertly read movements outside or inside of bodies, able to determine injuries or illness with relatively good accuracy. In reading the motions inside of someones body, Schwarzilber can tell when and how someone will move or strike, aiding him in dodging or countering an attack.

In the instance where one of Schwarzilber's eyes are damaged, that eyes perception will still be readable, however, the information it recieves will be smudged or fractured depending on the damage, making it harder to read or process.

What in the world does this have to do with the rest of his powers? There needs to be a coherent theme to everything...you can't just grab bag a bunch of powers...what does this have to do with the rest of the character?

Buzz Pulse: Buzz Pulse is the act in which Schwarzilber vibrates the molecules in part of his body to such an extent that it will rapidly build up force, then releasing a pulse that will either rocket Schwarzilber in a sudden boost of speed, or violently repulse someone within close aproximity of him. This can be used in many ways, a sudden boost of speed in case Schwarzilber needs it, an attack to generate great distance between him and an opponent, or a last second forcefield to save him from injury. Schwarzilber can even use Buzz Pulse as an advanced version of CPR, launching vibrations into someone to give them a burst of acceleration, closing both internal and external wounds and restarting organs.

How quickly does this tension charge? Is the projectile visible? Is there even a projectile or does he just pick a spot and things are "violently repulsed?"

Radio's Powers: Radio is a sword that can disrupt energy, lessening it's concentration and purifying it into neutral energy, energy without an element and not concentrated enough to use as an attack, though this abilities effect is lessened against non-pure energy such as elemental energy. Using this ability Schwarzilber can also temporarily disrupt spacial energy, opening a wormhole that teleports him to a target location, even cross dimensionally.

...ooh boy. That's going to be a no on the teleportation and the dimension jumping. Kakeru's Alter(an 0-2++ by the way) can't even just "flip open wormholes and travel across dimensions" and its whole thing is cutting time. That's just outright denied. Neutral energy also isn't a thing...

Flash Bird: [Fly with speed unhindered] Using a different version of flash strike, Schwarzilber sends multiple strikes through space with one or more swings. This enables him to target an opponent's weak point from far away, or to strike one or more opponents around him at long range.


Is...he firing a projectile or just stabbing his sword through the air and it instantly stabs people...the former is ok, the latter is a "lol no."

Purify: Schwarzilber can use this technique without drawing Radio. Schwarzilber concentrates Radio's power into a part of his body, then, through physical contact, he can attack the energy within someones body. This will greatly diminish the energy within their body, making it very hard for them to use their powers, exhausting them, and quite possibly rendering them unconscious. While charging the powers of Radio, Schwarzilber can release them to attack the energy around him, but he cannot target the energy within someones body while using this method.

No.

In addition, pretty much every big "stat boosting" ability listed(Speed, Durability, Coordination, etc) needs to be toned down. Those are descriptive of a level this character is not yet at.
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