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|Subject Post 1Subject: Noctis Soul Sorcery Tue Aug 18, 2015 11:11 pm|| |
Ok so these are kind of old so im sure they are going to need to editing and sense its a lot im going to split it into sections for whoever checks them.
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|Subject Post 2Subject: Re: Noctis Soul Sorcery Sat Aug 22, 2015 9:08 pm|| |
Energy Becon - how can it make him harder to sense if energy is oozing into his surroundings? - the descriptions a little unclear, which points glow red?
Dire rediance - how does one go about marking someone? And does the light that mark them keep up with their location regardless of where they are? Be it under ground or in another dimension?
Dire rediance heal - just break it down for me for ease of reference. How many posts healing a limb would take, a cut and such. Minor to medium isn't too concreate as my definition of medium will differ from yours.
Armor of ag - Wouldn't the temperature affect your character too?
Flames of Plegethos - no such thing as liquid fire. I think you seek lava?
Frigid Darkness - Illogical really. If the veil covers an opponent then how can your character attack without destroying the veil? Either way, needs a post count that it lasts for.
Ethereal Stride - I'm going to straight up deny that technique because limiting it wouldn't have the effect that you seek and teleportation that it involves can give you a very unfair advantage in combat. If you believe you can nerf it to an acceptable degree where its fair for both ends, I might consider it, right now its a no.
Feel free to mail me if you need help with makingg it reasonable.
Hunger of Hadar - I'm guessing the bats have no special abilities aside from scratching and stuff!
Fey Switch - Denied.
Curse of the Beast - I don't like wolves that have been conjured through magic to have a tier bound to them unless you plan on making NPC profiles for them. The energy they reflect will be dependant on your characters tier.
Howl of Doom - how often can this be used?
Iron Spike of Dis - might want to include fire resistance in the actual effect, as oppose to the note.
Coldfire Vortex - so it's not fire then? More like liquid nitrogen?
Thirsting Maw - does it require direct contact with your character to give him the stolen energy?
Ravens Glamour - I don't like the word teleport. Make it move at very high speeds to the other location.
Any techniques that I haven't mentioned are reasonable.
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|Subject Post 3Subject: Re: Noctis Soul Sorcery Thu Aug 27, 2015 2:37 am|| |
[adm]I'm tossing this into archives since Elendril has left the site.[/adm]