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Fri Jun 27, 2014 8:03 am

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Tier: 1-3 when fixed
Comments/Notes: On a second thought, i am going to check this entire app and see how it goes.


Kade wrote:Immense Demon Spiritual Pressure: He doesn't even know his full deadly power just yet after his mind lock away. The demon's powers diminish over time to the point of where he never knew his spiritual pressure was under lock and key. After his release, Wolf's spiritual pressure shot up like thousands of rockets. Being of former clan member, Wolf has an grand amount of spiritual pressure. From the long training sessions, Wolf learned how control & restraints giving his opponents a fighting chance. When he shifts to different then his power will decrease rapidly. But when he unleashes it his enemy will known why he called the Demon who makes the trophies of men.
While i originally don't accept this, but with its given tier of 1-3, describing his spiritual pressure being so grand makes no sense and are quite far from what his tier is. So tune that down and i'll give it a go.

Kade wrote:Improved Demon Claws: Wolf has drgaon-like claws on his hands and his feets which can be used for slashing and gutting people when he gets angry or wanting to kill something. Wolf can extend them for longer slashes even retract them when friends are around, Stronger enemies may feel 35% of the attack if it blocked by barrier or strong defenses. Wolf can use her zoa koa power to empower her claws with energy to do certain energy slashing attacks as well.
How many times can he execute this ability per post? If the barrier is an indirect defense like Danku, can it pierce through its defenses and only deal 35% of its actual damage to the enemy? Can one defend himself or herself if sufficient force is applied to counterattack his claws? Is it easy to move away from his claws or is it hard? And please refix the gender to 'him' instead of 'her'.

Kade wrote:The Bio Mask are various mask designs used by the Predators. These masks contain a variety of functions which the Predators may require during a hunt. As well as protecting the Predator's head, the mask has a sound amplifier, multiple vision modes, a zoom function, some diagnostic capabilities and a recording system. Housed within the helmet is a targeting and tracking system for shoulder based plasma casters. Additional vision modes are available to determine the health status of the targets.Incorporated to finalize the shot is a lock-on system. As the quarry is decided upon, the designator will zoom a triangle in on the prey from the , which will flash and turn solid red, then fires. On top of these abilities, the targeting system can be used to heat up metals like wrist blades. Another feature of the Predator's mask is its voice translator/recorder. This device can both record and play strips of audio, which a Predator may use to express meaning or catch prey off guard, or to simply listen to the voices of their prey, as if to study their language.]
The entirety is accepted but i want to know how tough can this be? Since the Bio Mask is worn on the head, how tough can it be to protect the user of this mask/helmet if one tries to break it with force?

Kade wrote:This medical kit has surgical blades, a shrapnel extractor, wound clamps, a spatula, a burner for melting medicine, a needle full of medicine, two reloads for the needle, a container full of a blue solvent, and an emergency breathing mask. When the Predator uses the burner, he crushed pieces of plaster and the mirror, and then he adds the blue solvent, formed a gel, and cauterized the wound.
Since it is a medical kit, if it is used to heal the user, depending on the severity of the wound, how long does it take for it to heal the wound? Can it regenerate lost limbs or/and repair damaged organs? Can it only heal a specific area or does it heal the entire body? If so, how many times can he use this medical kit before it runs out of medicine to use for healing?

Kade wrote:The Combi-stick, Combi-spear, "Combat-Staff", (sometimes identified with the naginata weapon used by samurai warriors), is an exceedingly sharp and resilient weapon used by the Predator species. The Combi-stick is telescopic, extended to its full length when used in combat. It is made of incredible material, light but sharp, thin but strong. The Combi-Stick is a self-powered telescoping spear that is merely one meter at its shortest length, but extends by two meters at each end. It is primarily used as a close-quarters hand-to-hand weapon, although it can also be thrown like a spear. Yautja have been known to decorate their Combi-Stick through time with skulls and memories of different Hunts and moments in their long life, making the staff its prized possession.
Not much but if it is thrown and hit its enemy, can tough of a defense can it pierce or an armor can it pierce through? Do they carry one or multiple of spears with them? Can it be broken with sheer force?

Kade wrote:The plasma caster is a long range energy projector capable of guiding armor-penetrating plasma bolts at distant targets. Morever, the weapon's bolts explode in a burst of plasma shrapnel that damages other enemies near the point of impact. The plasma caster can be charged by the user to fire more powerful shots that are even more damaging to prey. The Plasma Caster is a mounted and lightweight weapon capable of firing multiple long-range energy burst of charged plasma. The power of the plasma burst can be adjusted manually, ranging from a minor setting to a blast powerful enough to breach interstellar craft. The plasma caster is controlled via a targeting system in the helmet, and tracks with the head movement of the firer. It can be used with a Laser Sight to increase targeting capacity, and is fired either by a mandible-controlled trigger in the helmet or by the forearm-mounted control panel. [Wolf wears two plasma casters]
How many times can he fire these plasmas before it runs out of power? Does it use a source of battery or does it use the user's spiritual energy to do so? Can plasma pierce through all types of defenses or can it pierce on specific types of defenses?

Kade wrote:Thus also known as the Wrist Bracer or Wrist Computer, is possibly the Yautja's most valuable tool. The compact wrist-mounted console houses several technologically advanced features, including a Sat-Com and a powerful Self-Destruct Device, as well as controls for a Predator's Cloaking Device and, in some cases, their Plasma Caster. Some Wrist Gauntlets have also been seen to include Gauntlet Plasma Bolts or Power Punch Gloves. It is possibly the most prized piece of Predator technology and its loss is often met with severe punishment. The Wrist Gauntlet is a small computer device worn, as its name implies, on the wrist, and features numerous controls for various items of Predator technology, as well as a digitized, apparently numerical display.
Gauntlet Powers
Power Punch Glove: The Power Punch glove was a Yautja device consisting of a metal bridge that extended on command from a Predator's Wrist Gauntlet to connect with "brass knuckles" worn on the hand. It was used to preform a Power Punch, a punch powerful enough to punch right through solid concrete. The Power Punch feature was going to involve the Predator's entire left arm. His existing armor would transform and expand, including flanges that flared out to shield him from splattering acid blood. [Same strength as Bala]
Self Destruct: The Self-Destruct Device is a powerful Yautja explosive device built into a Predator's Wrist Gauntlet. This weapon of last resort is used by Yautja both as a means by which to commit honourable suicide, and also to remove any evidence of their existence and prevent their technology from falling into the hands of another species. As such, it is an indispensable piece of their equipment, and a Yautja would never venture on a hunt without it. When a Yautja is on the verge of death or defeat, he will activate the self-destruct device built into his Wrist Gauntlet. When activated, the Self-Destruct Device takes several seconds time to charge, and it begins a relatively short countdown, indicated on the digitized display. It is not clear whether the process is irreversible once started, although destroying the device while it is counting down has been known to prevent detonation. The detonation of the bomb results in an explosion of unclear composition and chemistry — while the blast often creates a sizeable mushroom cloud, the explosion itself is not thought to be nuclear in nature.
Sat-Com/Cloaking Device: This has two abilities. The Sat-Com is a Yautja holographic map projector which shows a complete 3D scan of an area and is part of a Yautja's Wrist Gauntlet. Yautja use this device in their Hunts to locate enemies or other targets. The second power is the cloaking device. The Cloaking Device, also known as the Invisibility System and Active Camouflage, This is an advanced piece of Yautja technology that is able to render the user invisible, or nearly invisible, to the naked eye, as well as many forms of electronic scanning. The Cloaking Device warps light around the user's body in such a fashion that surfaces behind the creature are visible through the Predator's body. The effect is not perfect, often leaving a visible silhouette similar to heat haze, but in certain environments (and when the Predator remains motionless) it can effectively help a Predator to hide in plain sight. [Water & Electromagnetic Pulse can defeat it]
For Power punch, how many times can he use it? If it is the same strength as bala, for it to punch through a solid concrete is not defined. Can it punch through a thick concrete or small concretes like bricks?

[b]Self-destruct.. If it were to self-destruct, how powerful can it be? How big can the explosion expand?

For sat-com, how does it locate its enemies? Is it through the detection of their spiritual energy or etc? Can one escape from being detected by the radar? If so, explain how.

For cloaking, please describe how long can he cloak himself before it runs out of effect or is it permanent?


Kade wrote:The smart disc (also known simply as the "disc") is an extremely sharp circular weapon that is thrown like a discus and returns to the user like a boomerang. This weapon is extremely powerful, shown to cut through half a dozen cattle carcasses and a man in quick succession without any effort. It also has a hand grip for use as a slashing melee weapon as well. This device is capable of cutting through most substances with its devastating razor edges, and is powerful enough to cut through multiple targets with one throw.
Computer-controlled gyros guarantee that the disc returns to its wielder
Not much, but i want to know how fast does it move? Since if this is thrown at fast moving targets, describe how fast can it move and can its speed be adjusted through the 'smart device' inputted in this disc?

This may be an NPC, but i don't expect it to be abused either, especially these equipments.


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Fri Jun 27, 2014 11:02 pm

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Comments/Notes: One more.
Kade wrote:This medical kit has surgical blades, a shrapnel extractor, wound clamps, a spatula, a burner for melting medicine, a needle full of medicine, two reloads for the needle, a container full of a blue solvent, and an emergency breathing mask. When the Predator uses the burner, he crushed pieces of plaster and the mirror, and then he adds the blue solvent, formed a gel, and cauterized the wound. (The medkit can't replace limbs or organs though it can heal parts of the body which are damaged or completely damaged. That is what the gel does it a healing agent which repairs. {I REPEAT CAN NOT REPLACE LIMBS OR ORGANS}. It would take a one/two posts to heal whatever wound completely and for the hunt place the med-kit back in it holder.)
The healing. I prefer that he doesn't 'lolheal' from every wound he takes, as if i made a giant slash right across his body and he simply heals from it using the medikit in a single or two posts, it would utterly be an overpowered healing over there. And again, please describe whether it heals the entire body at once or a specific area of the wounded place?

Tier: 1-3 when fixed


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Tier: 1-3
Comments/Notes: Approved. Don't abuse the use of this NPC or i'll send you into the depths of Hell.


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