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» Name: Anastasius is his current name.William"Verathius" Mischevang Was the given name of Verathius before long since abandoning the name of his human days. Removing himself from the painful time and memories that came of it. Childhood fancy turned into murder and somewhat contempt for what was taken from him and lost to him. Verathius may long ago of been William, but those days have long since passed and moved on to a new horizon. Few remember that name besides he himself and perhaps his sibling who he held a deep connection with Ashlei. That was alone enough for him as he followed her loyally even into becoming a hollow though not aware of it.


» Age: He is seven hundred and fifteen years old. Being born a couple minutes after his sister Ashlei. Making him one of the older children of the family. Though few know it due to his nature of not getting involved in much and flip-flopping often. This is due to a disconnection between his core from an incident that happened a while back. He suffered some damage that caused mental instability from several factors. But as one of the older children, his presence isn't forgotten easily and he does leave a lasting impression. Often forgotten behind his more well-known sisters in Rose and Ashlei. Verathius does pose an intimidating factor for his age but something else also. The lingering truth behind what sort of powers a completed form of him would hold. Had he not suffered from the neglect and damage he had for so many years. Soon that answer will be granted without a doubt.


» Race: He may of started as a human and climbed his way up the food chain as a hollow. But Verathius is an Arrancar in his final form. Having reached his pinnacle of evolution by some standards. His sisters only desired to experiment and toy with the brother. But that was due to his inability almost to say no to such things. It wasn't as though Verahtius could very well say no to those type of things easily. But he always had this need to please his sisters. To take care of them and be the man of his family. Psychologically he had issues that couldn't be defined in a small portion. As an Arrancar, even his power structure was strange and undefined until recently. Causing issues as he got closer to his truth. He couldn't locate the remains of William from those days left behind in Verathius's shadow of pain and suffering. He was the Bulwark of the Mishevang, the one who absorbed the punishment of it all. But some things don't stay gone forever even when broken.


» Gender: He is one of few males belonging to the Mischevang clan. Not many of them made it through the processes that created them all. Part of it was due to things that happened on that night. But a great many details exist outside of that incident also that make him and one other known. Verathius is by far the oldest living male member of the Mischevang family. Which if anyone met his sisters would know that is quite something of an accomplishment. While he is rather unwilling to get into the details of it. Being one of two known men for a family filled with women does make it a sausage fest almost. But some hope does exist for new males to appear and keep the bloodline moving forward. From either sisters or the brother. Though it's unknown what each is doing at this moment. The only certain thing is that Verathius is whole again and ready.


» Physical Appearance: Nothing special really stands out in his apeparance. Anastasius has a rather normal look with black hair and two different eyes. Often times just wearing the outfit in his image and little else.


» Occupations: Presently his occupation is protecting his family within the Espada. Having stepped away from being a duo of William or Verathius Anastasius has no inkling on the subject.

» Affiliation: Most assume his affiliation with Shadow Fall remains solid. Or perhaps his union with his sisters is still strong in this regard. But in terms of everything he made the choice to leave that behind now. To find William again what he'd lost along the way to become Verathius and when Ashlei left him. This wasn't decided lightly as he did have connections in both worlds highly. But neither K-World nor Shadow's Fall has what he seeks in the long run. Verathius doesn't care about the Hollow's boorish pride or reasons for this that or the other. He simply dislikes the factions and how high and mighty demons act. Believing they need to be knocked down several pegs without given any hope. He believes they need to stop acting so high and mighty and remember that it wasn't they who fought the Shinigami the longest. It wasn't they who struggled to survive in Hueco Mundo's harsh world. He does have a bit of pride but in truth something else trumps it.

Verathius simply doesn't like what the organizations did to his sister's. He believes it made them both lose their ambitions. Lose sight of what they could accomplish and create without those factions. The Hollow Empire could have been more and so much more could have happened. Rose threw potential away and so did Ashlei, they settled for things and took small wins. From Mana and Kin like dogs accepting table scraps. When they could have had the entire steak, this was something that rubbed him wrong. But he remained quiet dealing with his conflict and being muscle for them. Fighting battles in several locations helping Khala destroy the Gotei on one occasion. Fighting in Iceland and the Moon on two other occasions and doing well. But it was something about the fights in Malaysia and other places that finally made him snap his affiliation with Shadow Fall in half. At some point, he began despising demons and everything to do with them. It felt like they looked down their noses at him every chance they got.

So at this moment he is independent of everyone and swears allegiance to none. He is the Lone Mischevang and his goal will be met soon. Someday he will find his way without those sisters. The manipulation and deception just to use him and throw him away again. It was time for him to decide on his own what he'd accomplish with or without them. That was what made Verathius make this choice in the long run to affiliate with no one. Not Rose or any of the previous hollows as in his eyes even Ashlei settled for Table scraps at one point. Joining that Unholy Alliance of Mana's to sit at her table. That was something of a slap in the face for him as he couldn't believe it. One who'd accomplished much as a hollow and had pride threw it all away to sit at that table. But nothing was done to bring others in and break apart this so-called union. This was his only way to truly quit dealing with them all and fighting Kiriel at the end did help him snap that leash.


The Mental Aspects








» All is One:While the previous traits did exist within the realm of possibility. Anastasius is one who's assumed both memories fo Verathius and William. He is the fusion of both the lives and personalities of both men. But he is different in a large degree when it comes down to his specialties and skills. He veers further away from being a bulwark in regard to something special. He doesn't see that he can ever really join with Rose or Ashlei again. They both have used and tossed aside their kin too often. It's something he has moved on from in developing a new sense of self. He decided the Espada would be his family and his fraccion precious kin for him. Though this choice isn't a reflection of what he considers perfect choices. As Nagato and he will not always see eye to eye, but he and his twin didn't either. So in that regard perhaps something has remained much the same. His personality is a fusion of the two previous personas obviously. Making it out to stand out a bit more clearly. However his confusion and often times stopping to think on things. Are signs of a newer train of thought. One devoted less to the school of previous beliefs. William had been an energy genius. While Verathius was only concerned with protecting the weak.

Anastasius has more than kept that train of thought here. Realizing what he'd done had been productive. Verathius was right to shield family but limited his view too narrowly to the sisters. William fled and wanted to be alone with research. He didn't wish to be chained down. That narrow view of fleeing from everything even duty. That was an incomprehensible thing in of itself. Running from the things you are expected to do is something that is below mention. But doesn't belong, showing that he inherited his sense of duty from Verathius. But he also had William's ideas for Cero and energy based things. But believed smart planning was important instead of mindless fighting.




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»Ashlei Mischevang: His twin sister he shared the womb with. The golden child of the Mischevang family who could do so little wrong. She was the perfect princess of the family and the one he was programmed to protect. He was made to do one thing for the girls with Ashlei at the lead. Regardless of feeling or choice, William was her dog and little more. He wasn't seen as her twin brother or even acknowledged as one of the older children. He was seen by his father as a means to protect the precious daughter. The bright mind and future of the family. William doesn't hate his family or sister even that much when it comes down to it. Women in this world weren't seen as people so much as important objects. The father was a stern brilliant man capable of many things. Ashlei was the prized jewel in a way for him among other things. But perhaps that was the society more than his father and he can acknowledge that now. But Verathius can now understand and see it for what it really is. Ashlei was just like his father and used him. He was a tool to be used until he had no further use. She never cared he was her twin nor did she showcase anything of love. This was the unseen outcome, perhaps the others didn't know it. Or maybe even more sad they just didn't care what befell him. He was the expendable toy they could use up and toss away. William wasn't around his sister's much despite how much he cared for them. This matter so little when it came down to everything involved. Even when he became a hollow she continued using him as a doormat.

But perhaps in some ways, this was a blindness from Verathius. The village didn't see his sister as a shining example of life. His father wanted her safe from those wretched vultures who'd dare kill her. But in the end, he ended up breaking free of those chains and binding. Becoming something more finally after biding his time. The noise and confusion were broken allowing him to soar higher and beyond. Blindness was part of it all as he didn't see what was there. Even now to an extent, he doesn't know why he acted like a servant instead of a king. This conclusion is only lead him to believe something the father did cause this undying loyalty to family. This unquestioning faith and trust despite being a tool for use for them. Maybe somewhere he wanted to be needed by them as Verathius. Perhaps to feel some form of emotion or attachment again. But there didn't exist a way to turn back time or bring back a feeling that was fake.

»Rose Mischevang: His second relationship is a strange one almost distant. Verathius and Rose never connected as well as he'd of liked. He couldn't find a way to bond with her as Verathius because William was gone. Each incarnation that returned simply had nothing to offer her. But it was like this even back in those days as his father trained him to protect them. Verathius didn't manage to do that even though he tried. He did everything could to protect those girls including Rose. But it made little difference for William in the end. Verathius devoted himself as their Bulwark to the end. Blindly being their lap dog and following orders. It simply wasn't of his interest in the long run. While he still holds a little relationship for Rose he does care about her. She is one he suspects he will be trading blows with in the future. Her and Ashlei have walked on him long enough. It is long past time that he grow a backbone and stop being a doormat for the girls. His father is no longer present to order William around.

And if blood need be spilled to make his stance clear then so be it. He will spill as much as required to make his position clear. Nothing will please him more than to show his sister's how wrong they are to assume he's their being to use. He is not an item or a thing you can own or call to your side. It's not that simple or easy no matter how much he cares about them. Verathius nor William will jump to save them from this void. The Hollows are coming and it's time for a revolution to begin. The fires are burning already in the Demonic Horde. It's long past time for the Hollow Monarchy to come upon those Demons. William doesn't understand his sister's or care about why they chose that side. In every battle, there are different sides and conclusions. They've drawn and chosen where they stand. Alongside the demonic beings who like their father see them as nothing but items. Verathius is through being some toy of Shadow Fall or K-World. Neither of them can satisfy his desire presently.

»Moonie Iramasha: Exchanging ideas with fist instead of words. That was Verathius's first major battle as an Espada of the Shadow Fall. Fighting within Poland against the Iramasha of stout spirit and strength. They clashed creating craters and destroying the world around them. Leaving behind few things within their wake as they fought. William and Verathius both respect Moonie a great deal. Finding him to be a fantastic warrior and fighter. Despite his more simple nature, even William saw the Iramasha potential. Seeing it was a fantastic foe across the enemy lines. Viewing him as a rival of sorts to motivate himself further. The Moon God of the world was a very fascinating man who fought many battles. Clashing with the likes of names he could only dream of a battle against. Verathius didn't conclude or consider Moonie as a friend of any kind. This was simply the way this relationship worked out. They merely were foes who fought on the other sides of the battle.

»Nagato Tengan: These two people have never met despite both of them standing atop the Hollow race as a pinnacle of purity for their people. They both stood somewhere and went each way they could. Deciding on different routes and opinions. Verathius does respect Nagato, though he's unsure if that is returned. He does know the name and gives him the proper respect. Hollow's respect a single thing before anything else. Strength above all else is the thing they must acknowledge. And Nagato is indeed a strong and fierce man capable of doing many things. He is perhaps one of few capable of bringing Shadow Fall down. Maybe even K-World should he decide they are in the path of Hollow evolution. Though William isn't able to read Nagato perfectly, he's fairly certain of one thing. The Sage isn't going to be playing nice with Shadow's Fall in the future. Nor are many of the hollows he is aware of in this world.

»Barragan Luisenbarn: Perhaps a brief meeting before he declared himself free. Verathius made this declaration as he was nudged by William. This is a relationship built on respect and understanding. He won't bow before the power he see's here like Nagato. But he does respect the figure of Barragan. It's simply a fact that he cannot ignore the man's seen some action. Being a relatively old figure in the hollow community among them. Nagato and Barragan are likely the two oldest of that species. Deserving a nod of respect in that regard. But even then trust is something he doesn't intend to give Barragan or blind loyalty again. He does believe can predict Barragan pretty well. This is something he's learned from observing history. Seeing how the world played out and figuring out knowledge has provided much. William respects Barragan and believes he and Nagato will change things for Hollows. What role will William play in these events to come is the only unknown.


»Tien Mischevang: A small meeting with a family member William remembers their father hiding. But beyond that, the two didn't connect or develop a relationship. A bond was never forged or forced on him like Ashlei. This was a relationship that just like many of his relatives and sister's was something small. He was the twin brother of Ashlei so many a day were spent with his sister. This was simply the course that came from everything. William's father's will would be upheld and the precious sister's guarded. Tien was one of them but she'd not be the one that bound him again. So while their relationship as Hollow's is unknown. He is known to her as a presence at the very least among things.


»Shadow's Fall and K-World: This category may be a small one but one thing is clear. He despises them and those within this faction deeply. Verathius and William are akin to a single being on one subject matter entirely. Mana and her damn kind have overrun and stepped over the Hollows now taking center stage. Perhaps Envy is a word that could be used to describe his tiredness of it all. Demons have used and treated his people much like the family he had once done. The consideration that he and those around him are merely tools to be used and disposed of as time goes. That part has tired him out and brought about his final conclusion. Neither of them is worthy of the Hollow's powers they've obtained. They are both beings who've flown into the sun at this point. They've forgotten just how big the Hollow people are in a way. That the beings who represent the hollows are enormous in many ways. Both these organizations have earned his disdain and distrust at this point. K-World did nothing with the former Primera who once served with loyalty and devotion. Shadow's Fall used him until William emerged prepared to bring about a conclusion. In closing his standing with this organization is light given his killing of Kiriel, Mana's brother.





History Begins



» Beginning: What can one say about life in a place not many are? He was born William Mischevang around the same time as his sister Ashlei. Both of them came into this world with bright hopes and expectations. Both Ashlei and William were bright figures in the family. The father was the man of the house and his word was law. William, when he was able to walk, was taken to work. This is where many lessons his father gave him would begin. William could shine like a diamond and his father didn't care. Protect the women was the preaching his father provided every time. There wasn't a moment where he could give his thoughts. William's intelligence was pushed down by his father every moment. He didn't want to enable a book smart child capable of science and quick thinking. This world required hunting and toughness above all things. William showed a knack for the hard labor and built his body for it working with his father. Men were meant to do this while women stayed at home tending to those chores. William tried to carry a burden as his father wanted him too. Protect the girls and women was all his father said. He made sure through pain or whatever was required. William understood this wasn't something to be ignored. The precedent was set and made very quickly a thing you couldn't forget. But his father pushed and pushed William too far as he went. Something that became clear as William gained a murderous impulse. When it came to protecting his sister's he didn't care till the job was done.

Even if it meant killing a human being to protect them at a young age he was fine with it. His father worked at crushing the innocence within him each day. But William managed to find small moments to hide. To let Verathius the other person he'd developed during these days out. He found that he could hide behind this figure of another persona almost. It was a Bulwark against his father and this world's cruelty to him. Protect the women and don't think of yourself or how important you are. He was a tool his father could use and that was his view on it. He dared not show his father the power's he held. Even at a young age, William had immense spiritual pressure and sensitivity. Even his senses of things when they came were almost in a sense psychic. He could predict things that were coming and plan ahead of them often. Some of this was because he simply was smart and could read star patterns and tell how clouds were forming. He was even deeply intuned with animals and able to predict habits and how to rotate crops. He was a prodigy in this sense.

William's father continued working him to the bone every day in and out. There wasn't a break to be found much. William did his best to try and hide his second self as the one his father wanted. The loyal son who did as he was told without thought. That was what was desired of him so William continued in the background. Never quite phasing out of reality from everything. He began getting interested in the energy around beings as a boy. Studying and finding it to draw in beings who didn't feel like humans. They felt dark and perhaps evil in a sense. Like something was wrong with them and unstable. But he always got a sense of foreboding around them. His father didn't see them nor did other villagers around him. This didn't bring him any form of fear or trouble as his body was put to work in fields. He regarded them carefully and in secret would often time defeat hollows at a young age. Verathius didn't dare show the powers he had in front of his father.

Fear of a beating or more pain kept him from disobeying his father. The only reason he could do this was it fell into the area. Protect his sister's without fail or without stop. That was the parts that stuck out to him the most. His intelligence didn't stop there as he truly did show skills with stars and many things. Able to pick up other languages in a small matter of time. He'd not often shown the savant level calculations he could do. But they were immense at a young age able to calculate things to almost precise points. William was able to predict things before they happened very accurately even as a boy. He knew someday he'd not be a human anymore. He sensed that his spirit was likely to become a hollow and not something else. He'd often seen other beings who wielded swords and hunted the dark ones. He didn't know at the time they were Soul Reapers. But he'd sensed danger from one at a point and killed it. Verathius had to cause quite a commotion to accomplish this feat.

Shinigami and Hollows weren't easily beaten aside without leaving scars. Flames and damage were caused by this misadventure into the world. William was kept home finally when events at home began getting ugly. Ashlei his sister had gotten into trouble. She'd often used him and did things to manipulate him even as Children. The programming simply didn't allow him to fight back or push back against the cage. This wasn't the normal things as something seemed to be going wrong. His mother had been brutally attacked and dangers were coming. Ashlei was changing and William sensed it. Something was coming soon that couldn't be escaped. Verathius the persona he'd developed would likely be put into an effect soon. It was then his sister was taken and he has beaten aside. Dragged away by the men who caged her. William was taken and expected to be an easy one to beat. The words of his father echoed in his mind more and more. Protect them all the women are important to the family. Three men took him to kill him but those three didn't survive it and were burnt so badly not even ashes remained.

Verathius had begun to arrive more as the male hurried back. When he returned to the village it wasn't going to work anymore. William's eyes felt shocked as tear's tried to cry and a voice tried to leave but failed. The shock couldn't be described as the feeling as a mental snapping. His mind wanted to cry and reach for something he couldn't. She was gone and the people here were dead, had she done it? Everyone was dead and gone as he hit the ground. Verathius slammed his fists on the ground. William's mind just couldn't handle the strain of failing. This breaking is what completed Verathius as a second personality. Making the male broken inside as he killed those three men to get back here. He couldn't do it in front of Ashlei or the others. The fires had to look like travelers had come to keep it secret. Now learning he'd failed it just didn't function. She couldn't be gone from this world not without him.

He felt a need to find her and get more power quickly. Verahtius on sheer force of will began to do something without knowing it. Hollowfication wasn't something often done this way. He began forcing his way into power no matter the cost. In his raving madness of losing Ashlei from this world. He realized she couldn't have gone ahead of him out of his reach. He had to protect her even if it meant death for him. If it meant this human shell burnt away he began turning into a hollow. Causing the village and surrounding farmlands to burn to the ground. The heat he gave off seemed to rip into the land killing those who weren't prepared. Creating a wildfire in the world of the living in this era was trouble. Forcing a hollowfication was something he didn't realize he'd done. But Verathius's sheer determination to protect Ashlei was so great. He killed himself in the process during the shock of everything.

His hollowfication once complete left him different from most and little more than a mindless husk. Searching to protect her and defend her though he'd lost memories of who she was. This was the price for ripping away his humanity to save his sister. The shock had caused damage but one piece survived this. William remained hidden among the broken Verathius. Not showing himself because he predicted this wouldn't end quietly. He couldn't recover from his failure and simply wanted it to end. To stop being the one who had to do as Father said. Even if his father was dead the men had to protect the women. That was how it was no matter if dead or alive. But Verathius had no idea why he was born this way when he awoke to a new world entirely. He'd not been aware of the situation that brought him to this destination. Unable to focus or find the purpose for being born the way he was. Unable to remember his life outside of the image of Ashlei whom he couldn't get out of his mind.

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»Hollow Life Begins: Verathius didn't understand many things that came with being a Hollow. A hunger to devour souls and things drove him. He killed people who felt similar to him in the living world. This was something he could do rather easily as travelers were abundant. Fresh meat to devour and eat giving him strength. The stronger their spirit the more power he could obtain. But it didn't seem to be enough for him in the long run. He couldn't grasp what this situation was as he'd occasionally meet his own kind now. Those beings he once felt a darkness from he'd devour them also. Showing no discretion on who or what he'd devour. Even some Shinigami ended up becoming his meal at this point. Verathius couldn't contain his hunger as he began moving forward. Only when he fought enemies and killed did he feel a clarity of everything going on. He could see Ashlei more clearly when he killed someone. His life involved moving from place to place. Killing people slowly and building up his power as he went. He'd begun devouring Menos Grande of Gillian class even in his beginning. Using smarts and his pyrokinetic powers to keep going forward. When he ate these strong ones he grew closer to an image. Something he could find answers from more. Verathius didn't get the luxury of a happy life as a regular hollow. He was often feeding on Gillian class Menos as his target. This made him feel more unstable as he went on. It was like voices were trying to scream but something choked them. William lingered not allowing those within those souls he ate to speak.

It was like he put his foot on their neck and didn't let them. They didn't bother Verathius much as he increased his power transforming frequently into higher levels. The clarity of Ashlei became more so as he got further on the train. His power also seemed to allow him a continued growth in this world. The true advantage he held came down to the shape and use of fire he came up with. Verahtius was able to defend himself from those who'd be stronger normally. By using different types of Cero and fighting in ways few imagined. Killing his first Adjuchas before he ascended his rank was a feat he held. William's raw power and potential were their for Verathius to tap into. Meaning few of these week minded fools could handle him. Eating souls and fighting were all he did at this point to try and find clarity. His life went on for many years this way in the living lands. Fighting stressful battles over and over where death was certain. Being outnumbered and outgunned so often as a hollow.

This went on for years if not decades as he disappeared into the Forest of Menos. Killing and fighting almost constantly to feed on his enemies for that sense. It was such a long time without an end fighting different enemies. From Adjuchas to Shinigami he fought and killed them all using the burning powers. Shinigami though rare would get trapped on the other side with him. But something didn't seem noticeable to him at the time. He was a Vasto Lorde who'd made the top class. It was around this time one day he can't tell you how many years had passed of killing and feeding. He simply lost the desire to eat or kill people all that much anymore. At this moment reaching the peak of what he considered Hollow Evolution. Verathius only fought when someone challenged him. Often times only killing them with the fire that came off his body. Not really bothering to get involved in things beyond that. Leaving the Hidden Sections of the Forest didn't concern him. Hollows had often times been sent to capture him to die to him. He'd killed Arrancar who attempted it on occasion.

Verathius claimed they didn't have a clearly defined goal of what they were. Using his raw power he felt something drawing him towards a conclusion. As he'd reached a peak of his evolution he'd noticed hollows died around him from his presence. He couldn't contain himself anymore in this form and something had to change. He couldn't keep himself like this any longer and avoid the sensation of people. Hiding around here he caused fires and death just from his presence. Verathius wasn't a simple being one could easily define. Losing sense of himself only to regain it slowly as he'd spent so many decades and years fighting enemies. If they could even be called much more but prey at that point. What was the point of it all in the end? He saw some try to claim their way by defeating him every moment. Thinking they stood a chance till they got close and burst into flames. Would he encounter some form of natural challenge in this world again? It felt as though this world was uninteresting.

Verathius earned a reputation as the King of the Forest. Known to remain hidden and often times not bother. Shinigami came to challenge him after going too far on occasion. Only to die without realizing the mistake they'd made. His cero was extremely powerful at this time capable of doing large-scale damage. He was even noted to fight with them on occasion against enemies. William still lending Verathius his strength to use at this moment. William had seen and considered what came and decided to wait for it all out. He began studying quietly from within as Verathius would become a body he could someday be part of. Studying the energy and its flow from within this Vasto Lorde body. The true nature of the spiritual pressure Verathius had belonging to him. Without even knowing how far off he was he realized another push was needed. This form was incomplete for the power he'd gone for. Hollows could evolve even further was the belief that he held.

Despite knowing this form didn't come easy or without things brought upon it. William decided it was time to nudge Verathius again. While the other form slept he gave him visions and tried to speak with him. Asking him if he'd forgotten about Ashlei and protecting her. How could this weak incomplete form protect the girl who died? This dream set him off to evolve once more as his mask burnt off and his transformation began. Ascending into a status known as Arrancar naturally without aide from anything. That was a feat Verathius accomplished again through sheer determination. The realization he wasn't chasing his goal anymore brought it back. His mask breaking brought him to a new stage past that of his current form. As his body changed again and found this new form. Verathius found reason and seemed to discover more. This possible outcome was only brought out due to another being. He'd spent an unknown amount of time as a Vasto Lorde. He'd made small trips into Hueco Mundo to kill challengers occasionally.

But now he'd lead his Nest of sorts and go find answers in this place. The Forest of Menos had been a haven which he wore like a blanket. Never deciding to spread his wings into the Deserts of Hueco Mundo. Not wishing to venture to the Nest of Sosuke Aizen during his time. He avoided that place since Vasto Lorde was sought by him. He'd killed Arrancar as a Vasto defeating them as needed. But finally leaving this place felt nostalgic. He couldn't figure out what drew him from the place he'd long called home. But Verathius left here unaware of how time had flown forward. How many hundreds of years had gone by though William had been well aware. Knowing his outer self just didn't see it and sought to defend his sisters. Not knowing the outcome beyond Ashlei was a problem. Though William had concluded she'd likely become like him. His sister was a gifted jewel after all and capable of such. The search for her would begin now in earnest, Verathius could serve his purpose.

William wouldn't fade or disappear into the background completely. He'd stay and observe till the time was right. Letting Verathius wield his body and power as he liked for now. The two wouldn't become whole just yet as the time wasn't right yet. Not everything had been made known to him as of yet. He'd find Ashlei faster then he thought as he'd encounter her in a way. Though she'd leave him with a duty that would mark his Arrancar years as dull. Verathius didn't have an eventful life outside of fighting enemies and intruders. That was his entire day and life to keep things from bothering Ashlei as an Arrancar. She'd even forgotten him to the point leaving him there for hundreds of years. Not returning to claim him till much later. But those years are important as William got a sense of scope from the world beyond. Seeing each race and things that could conclude his choices of what not was going on. Verathius would act as the Bulwark and do what he always wanted until the truth was unveiled.


»The Arrancar Tale:He wouldn't take long to find his sister who made a choice. Her brother would be a keeper to one of the entrances. Verathius decided to do this as a Bulwark and keep the trouble away from his sister. He did this duty for decades and years without question. Fighting hollows who came to encounter him at this location. He'd been left here with a single purpose and the number of enemies he'd encounter. They were many kinds and types from every race. The question was what did William do during this time period of sitting and combat. This persona didn't come out or see a need to involve himself. He'd resigned himself to staying away as he observed the energy types. Iramasha were encountered among other things. Demons even had tried to trouble Ashlei at this point. But the Bulwark would remain strong and break the advance. This was one way none would pass as he remained here till even clothing he wore began to decay.

Fabric simply wasn't made to last this test of time without running into trouble. Questions could often be raised if interesting beings or things came to Verathius. The problem was his father's voice still rung his ears making his obsession absolute. He focused on doing Ashlei's orders to the best of his skill. Nothing allowed him to deviate from that purpose. Fighting often and developing a fighting style that could be defined as brutal. Verathius utilized his raw power in each fight dispatching enemies. Never realizing just how strong he was when he did things. Time could pass forward before she came and he'd begin a pathway that took him somewhere else. It had gotten to a point here that Verathius couldn't understand who he was. Why he fought and what purpose he served past that of a Bulwark. But one day something happened interesting and Ashlei remembered him. She came and collected her brother putting a show of emotion on. Perhaps she did care in her own twisted way of it.

But his next place was within K-World during the time of Starrk there. But little happened for him here as he again became idle. Nothing seemed to be drawing or bringing him a sense of peace these days. William got to encounter those within K-World and see them for what they were. They were beings of every walk including some humans similar to himself in those days. But he wondered how much they knew about the life he'd lead in this time period. Verathius's other sister would reach out when Ashlei vanished. The Bulwark's purpose was shifted to his other sister at that moment. Defending her from all attackers and trouble. He'd been placed as Primera for a small amount of time. His sister held some business elsewhere and during this time he and Moonie would fight. This fight was meaningful for a few reasons. Verathius's core had been shaken and awoken finally. Though the match ended in a draw between the two of them. It was an exciting clash which left epic conclusion upon the land of Poland.

From here Verathius was made Segunda and would follow his sister's lead. Showing up in Australia, Malaysia, Iceland, and the Moon battles before anything happened. He'd undergone transformations after winning in these locations. Verathius had begun to change forms as William decided the time to begin was near. He began making subtle changes to Verathius's body and giving him ideas. It wasn't yet his time to come out. He'd been watching and predicting the outcome as they began. Demonkind since Verathius's arrival within the Shadow Fall had been the leading force. The Hollow's had fallen far since the days of Aizen and perhaps even further. The change didn't seem to be coming quickly on the horizon. Those battles helped build Verathius as a figure to be respected. He was a man of talent and capable but missing that driving force. So he remained the Segunda trying to break his shell more and more. Reaching for what William wanted him to find above all else. But someone noticed Verathius becoming more detached from Shadow's Fall.

Kiriel the brother of Mana decided to try and handle it in Hueco Mundo. Happening shortly after meeting Barragan and taking his leave. Verathius ended up in a battle with Kiriel that wasn't easy. He'd been pushed back further more and more. Trying to find his way back in when a familiar voice spoke up. "Time's up, it's my turn now." That voice seemed to come from within as something happened. The battle despite him losing it ended rather abruptly with William killing Kiriel. It wasn't a simple feat or an easy one for that matter. Kiriel was a strong foe with much knowledge of Verathius. But his undoing was not knowing William from the previous. William's body had changed and made him appear much like Ashlei again. The body altered it's finally time to fit his power and allow him to fight without restraint. It was time to begin moving forward as Verathius Mischevang was complete. The time of the Hollow Monochary had begun in full and the King of the Forest was done waiting.



Passive Influence



»High Heat Resistance: William always had a strange tolerance from the flames. Claiming they are a bit warm often causing him some discomfort. This heat protection or rather resilience to the flames and such things have a minor use. But it's an effective tool in the larger sum of things. He'd gotten quite a bit of practice against fellow fire based users. Fighting some who'd attempted to admonish him and claim they had a higher heat. None of this truly mattered in the long run of it. After all, the heat was a meaningless thing after a while as the ground burned. What truly mattered was how one utilized the heat. This power doesn't hold much use outside of him being able to withstand high heats. He can handle high-level explosions of city busters and such.




»Immense Spiritual Pressure Verathius is someone known to be strong despite appearances. Flaws and what not aside it's been noted some weak beings perished before his spiritual pressure. He's able to put out enough to pressure weak Captain-class Shinigami. This doesn't mean that he is able to do this to everyone but most people do get the sense he is strong. Verathius has shown the power to kill weak hollows below him just by letting them near him. This is a feat a few others have accomplished with relative ease despite his age. Verathius is a warrior tested on the fields of battle who's seen each place and location. Verathius has built ambitions and such that slowly have come from his own power. Moonie and he once held a clash of raw power and Verathius got to come out of his cage more. The soft nudges out of the world that held them captive was something he could truly enjoy. Weak enemies provided so little amusement.


»Expert Combatant Verathius spent every moment of his life fighting without a doubt. He's seen fighting styles from the sword to the spear. Seen different takes on multiple things few others have. His martial skills are considerable and something to respect. He's seen multiple styles of cqc that few use. Close Quarter Combat for those wondering is a method of extremely capable fighting. The hollows and Arrancar rarely display much interest in this form of fighting. But he believes it's needed for someone like him who exclusively fights with his fists often. Verathius did enjoy using pole weapons and swords for a time before moving away from them. Fighting with your hands lets you feel out an enemy and connect with them. It's something he learned as he fought over the years against enemies. Every person has a style that they struggle within a degree. Speed, power, or perhaps something of a mix. Understanding what type of power you wield is essential to survival. It's something we all must come to grips with when we step on a battlefield. Verathius spent many of his seven hundred and fifteen years fighting. While William studied and watched building an understanding of combat. It was clear that he could grow and develop many things. Fighting and building an understanding of the world they lived in was important. Combat is something that can be defined by strategy and understanding situations. What sort of enemy are you against what moves will be useful in a realistic sense. These are considerations that a hardened veteran must show to a degree. For example, only a novice would focus on pure power without taking into account a bulky body is hard to move. Some examples if this does exist and understanding your limits is important. Verathius has spent a time and study of almost everything to do with war and fighting. To a point where even the Danava of War had been caught off guard by the sheer experience.

Verathius is a man who's lived in war and combat beyond anything else that one could anticipate. Power isn't something important or perfect even among hollows. They respect power above all else and often time's kneel before it. Instead of being themselves most of them bend the knee. Unwilling to focus on the things of importance to them. This is something that few people seem to of realized in their culture. Just because they have power doesn't mean experience surpassing your own. Knowledge is just as important as power along with understanding. These are tools which shape and define Verathius. It's what makes him a complete being past the former figure. He doesn't showcase the same problems and weaknesses of his former self. That isn't to say he doesn't have a weakness as he has plenty of them. He is simply aware of what they are and how best to cover them. That is the key element in battle. To make your weakness a strength that way few can exploit it in any way.




Cero




»Cero Fire Now this density isn't that hard to create or even manipulate. This acts as a fire would and spreads as one would expect. Covering area and zones with relative ease and cover. As much heat as he puts into this he can cause quite the destructive zone. Verathius isn't too keen on caring about the land or locations as he once was. Now, this doesn't act like normal fire obviously though if he adds his heat to it will. It simply moves and act's like it while allowing him to create and control the flames for other needs. Verathius prides himself on more strategic fighting now that William and he are one. By adding these things to the mix he is able to alter and play with his cero's even after casting them. The main thing to understand is he is able to create different kinds based on his desires. Now while not many moves have been listed it can be noted that Verathius fights viciously when using his power.



»Cero Halo This is a newer technique he came up with. Putting his hand out he assembles a cero in his palm rapidly spinning it in a circle. As the energy begins to form into a shape similar to a circle. He raises his hand into the air releasing a massive explosion that can wipe out a small city. This attack is potent and uses its momentum charged up by spinning to release a devastating amount of kinetic force. By releasing the energy all at once it extends outwards. Though this is one use as he can sharpen the edge and turn it into a razor-sharp chakram thrown at enemies. It allows for a multiple purpose use as he tends to decide things can be done in multiple ways. Verathius is a specialist in this regard to creating new cero as he goes. Even going so far as to develop new ones. Development and building are a key element to what allows him to form these disks. Now they are bright and can be avoided but the rotation and spinning can cut most things. Though some can shrug them off though they will explode, the damage is based on his cero skill. This can be used twice max and will drain additional energy using the two.


»Poise Zero Cero Anastasius does not require to extend his hand or use such forms. He is able to fire Cero from anywhere on his body. Not really needing the typical fighting pose or form. Nor does it take him long to generate them. As he is able to mainpulate the energy fairly quickly. Having a very fast load and fire though not strange given William. INheriting his skills allowed him to compile them all into a singular facet. He combines them seamlessly into a single use that made the most sense. Very quick cero generation and being able to make them anywhere he chooses on his body. though he does admit he isn't quite at other levels of people who came before him. He is able to make the cero and shoot them rather neatly. His idea for cero did implode once William's better traits were brought in. The fold being complete did make a lot of possible outcomes for cero based techniques. Finding different ways to blast people.


»Bala Saber Instead of releasing the common Bala he extends his index and middle finger outward. Making a swiping motion as a fast traveling bala extends from his digits. This cuts instead of simply exploding like normal ones. Allowing him to release a rather potent technique that moves very quickly. Though it's not able to cut through absolutely anything. It can be blocked by strong and fast enough people may dodge it. The speed of it is tied to his cero skill. Higher he is the faster it is, though it is never completely unavoidable. As someone with enough strength or reiatsu could easily block it. Or even a fast person could avoid it depending on the deployment method. Though it is a shame he cannot state it to be perfect as it is merely a bala. Never quite reaching a proper skill level for his liking. His energy output hadn't really reached a peak cell yet. Believing perhaps another fight or two may be in order here.


»Cero Disparo de dispersión Extending his hand outwards a large cero quickly forms before being shot outwards now. Upon reaching a set location the Cero will shatter into a hundred miniature ceros. Covering the area in the small tiny orbs that will explode upon contact. Calling it Cero Scattershot, he's able to mainpulate and control each small cero. Though the explosive force of them is cut in half due to the size of them. This makes it a technique more for trapping someone. If someone is smart enough even lower tier could easily go through them. Making it merely a walk through the field for some. Some might discern the patter and merely vanish away. It should be noted upon reaching master this jumps to one thousand miniature ceros. Deflecting them or detonating them is also an option in terms of avoiding it. Many avenues exist to find a path out of this minefield set where he wants. Nothing is set in clear as even strong enough energies may overpower them and blow them away.


»Cero Ricochet By firing a cero he is able to have it bounce off objects. Often times without changing the appearance of the cero itself. Making it appear normal until it bounces off something behind someone. The cero is linked to him by means of energy which he manipulates. Allowing him to control the bounces and number of times. The speed of the bounces and other things are matters of his cero skill. The more skilled he is at the form and usage of them the faster they will go. Taking into account he is elite following them for someone who meets's the prerequisites to do so will not be a problem. In fact, this cero is as strong as his others with little difference between it and others. Only that like a pinball it bounces a number of times in a machine. The world has become his machine in this essence he is using the technique to create a rather potent attack. Now as stated previously avoiding it is entirely possible even taking it for those able to do so.

A tight compressed Cero the size of a tennis ball encased inside of a thin hollowed out Cero that has a flexible manner allowing to bounce upon objects that hold no reishi. Upon the Cero colliding with reishi, the outer Cero breaks detonating the compressed Cero into an explosion.

»Sacrifice Cero Covering his body in the cero he slowly begins to radiate his power around it. His influence as he brings his hand outwards. This does damage his body depending on how long he charges it. One post is slightly damaged, Two posts are moderately damaged, three posts are severely damaged. The longer he charges it though and more of his blood mixes in. The more damage output this cero will have. Trade must be made in order to accomplish strength. Nothing begets nothing, everything, begets everything. That is the mentality of the being before you who protects his family through sacrifice. By putting himself on the line and observing the world. He doesn't run towards the fight unless willing to sacrifice himself. He can sacrifice entire body parts in order to enhance his technique. But this again comes at a price of him using the power of sacrifice and so on to empower his techniques.


»Cero Line Firing the cero from his hand it extends and even if it should miss it's intended target keeps going. Drawing a line across the air and creating a path of energy that can explode upon his liking. This line as the name is rather literally would be similar to taking a sharpie and drawing a line. This pulsating energy can be made to explode or continue chasing his target. Boxing off their movement as he does so with this technique in his storehouse. Though it's one of many he doesn't care for how tedious it gets later to control. As he needs to not cross the lines or the entire thing will explode. Which depending on how long he's drawn it in his five-meter range. It will simply wipe out a good portion of the area he is in akin to a mortar shell. Or a bunker buster hitting the city it is aiming at. On the other hand, disarming it or getting out of its range is an option as well in any case.


»Cero Repulse Covering himself in the familiar glow of a cero he releases a shockwave outwards from his body. By releasing a wall of cero that fires away from him. Basically acting as a method to push people around him away. Those struck will suffer damage traditional to what Ceros tend to pack in this case. Making it relatively strong defensively tool for him to use. By adding this to his techniques he's made up for his Hierro losing some luster and shine. Though this did once belong to Verathius to any extent. Remaking it to fit his needs was little trouble. However, this isn't an endlessly expanding wall of a cero. It only goes three meters from him and blasts away things that got close. Allowing him to clear the chess board if only a bit. As stated hitting it will cause an outward explosion due to how it's structured. It doesn't explode inward only towards the outside. Making it very difficult to use the idea of blowing him up with his own move.


»Cero Cannon Wrapping the cero energy around his body and twisting it at accelerating rates. He then fires the blast warping it into a spin making an extremely powerful blast. The explosion of force is equal to that of the shinigami's Hadō 88. The power and force generated are well on par with this kido when performed by an elite of kido. So thus the move does fit into his tool belt rather comfortably in this regard. Making more use of his techniques within the kido field William had drawn up. Getting the best of both worlds did help him in the long run. For that, he owes Ulv a rather large debt of gratitude. As she allowed him to finally become a single person. No longer ripped apart of his best attributes. Though does acknowledge losing the Hierro was costly. Thus why he is developing something to clean it up. To make himself a more potent figure when it comes to the Espada. Developing many cero techniques even being able to influence them as he goes.


»Cero of Destruction Clapping both hands together he draws in massive amounts of energy into the center. Creating a cero before more ceros generate rapidly in that location. The energy is condensed over and over again. The move can be charged as well for each time he is left to his own devices it grows more potent. But this cero upon reaching two posts can wipe out half a city. Even when charged by an elite 1 tier, though it will tire them out very quickly. And likely lead to them collapsing upon the ground with nothing left. When using this move five turns is the limit before the cero starts breaking your own body. Anything stronger starts to damage the user turning it into a monster of a condensed cero. Combining it into a massive explosion hard to dodge even for the user. That's right this puppy can bite back on its owner and cause some serious pain. This could, in theory, kill the owner if they aren't careful like being hit by that much condense cero explosions will do some major damage. Avoiding it is entirely possible as the ball is tiny and colored yellow easy to spot. He'll generally shoot it towards them though it takes it longer than average to travel. Meaning getting away from the blast is one hundred percent possible. Because once it hits depending on the post spent building it up, thousands of ceros may be unleashed at once.


0-5 can destroy Cuba at full power, while 1-2 and 1-1 can destroy entire mountains. With 1-5 being able to destroy an entire city.


Perquisa




»Future's Requiem By using a very finite method he's able to sense the movement of spiritual pressure or other such energies within the body. This allows him to fully gauge what someone is going to do as though reading the future. This, however, isn't how the power works nor is it remotely close. Due to his expert experience as a battle combatant, he can read combat moves by the flow of energy. Knowing how someone is going to act and to what degree within it. As one may expect the length of this is tied into his Perquisa level allowing him to detect more things at a time. Extremely precise and allowing for rather reliable counter attacks. He is able to use this power to frighteningly strong applications. Able to read muscle movements and body movements when in combat. This allows him to detect things that are going to happen and react accordingly. It makes him a difficult one to catch off guard or unaware. As he's specialized in a very strange power that no other previous Espada had. It can be noted that none before him had gone to the degree that he did in this. To truly use this power you need a lifetime of battle experience and mastery of it. Now, just because he knows something does not mean he can react to it or has an answer. If someone unleashes an attack too powerful for him to manage. Then obviously ain't nothing that knowing about it does. The movement and flow of energy through the body is the key if one can mask it they are likely to be unaffected by this technique or skill in general. Making it then a question of how much more can he grow.


»Long Sight This power is able to detect the movement of spiritual pressure through the brain to assess the emotion. This allows him to be more sensitive and notice things despite being further away from him. Reading emotions and gaining an understanding of the situation rather quickly. Despite his considering of the Espada as kin to him. He does not turn this power on them unless forced. This combined with Future's Requiem allows him to predict things. Almost like seeing a future of possible outcomes. But instead of that, it is more akin to a high level of energy detection. This power's range is one hundred yards. Though he can fine tune it and lower the range when desired. To focus it on a set area and make sure of things. This is something he discovered himself to be good at. While none wanted Verathius or William for their skill sets. He's turned himself into something else born anew. His period of doubt and such or putting himself in other people's way is finished now.



Hierro



»Tribal Hierro This is the main thing Verathius is infamous for having. Special markings are similar to tattoos where his Hierro has grown thick. He is able to move this around and concentrate it in sections of his body for better defensive capabilities. This allows him to take shots most with great Hierro cannot. It's due to focusing in an area and controlling the point of absorbing the blow to pinpoint accuracy. Now it must be understood this isn't a small mark or something invisible unless under clothing. Verathius is able to control the expansion of black skin like substances. Allowing him to manipulate the points and even use it offensively to an extent. This allows him to make his blows harder on the edge of the knuckle by making his hierro stronger. Verathius can thus cause better impact through his powers. The Tribal can be used as energy conductors also. This allows for more creative and inspired uses of his powers. He's able to set his very Hierro on fire despite not being in his release form.

Verathius has completed this special form of Hierro allowing for a rather interesting effect for those who wished to observe such a thing. It acts in harmony with his other Hierro based skills. Allowing for growth and development from the user as they progress. Verathius isn't sure he is the only one capable of this kind of Hierro. Though he claims it can go a step further which makes the markings expand across his body. Allowing him to fight in a form similar to a release stage. This form is known as Tribal Ressurection by him, the effect of this form is rather simplistic. It will be listed below however to give a better understanding. It's an almost purely combined offensive and defensive power. Verathius is well regarded as the Bulwark by many Hollows. Known for the sheer levels of punishment he can endure from foes. Making him a difficult man to lock down or stop as the Bulwark surges ever forward.






»Hierro Magnums Both of his hands are coated in three times the thickness of Hierro. Allowing him to hit much harder and block weapons. His hands are in a thickness of Hierro that makes it easy to tell his body's Hierro grew thicker in that location. Making him more dangerous in that spot when it comes down to how his Hierro Functions. Punching them can very well injure a person who is ill-prepared for such. People have broken their hands and many things against his hands. The coat of thickness goes from the elbow to his hands. Making that area a danger zone for those interested in fighting him. He is able to effectively defend with a Hierro based Hand to hand style he's developed. Using his body as a weapon to fight against stronger enemies. He's earned a reputation for these as well. Being struck by them is similar to being hit by an explosion of force. As his raw strength is increased by the hardness of the blow's he releases.



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»Name: His sword's name is known as Mártir, this is Spanish for Martyr. This plays a large part of what makes him who he is. Verathius and William both personalities were martyr's for him to exist. Giving him a chance at life but also it is what defines him best. At the end of it he's always been one for the family he protects so fiercely. Willing to sacrifice or martyr himself at a moment's notice. This, of course, does come to play in the larger personality of Anastasius. He is being left and born through William and Verathius's sacrifices for him. So for him, this name holds a deeper meaning. He was and always has been the Martyr for those around him. So the name of his zanpakuto is suitable entrenched inside of his power.

»Appearance: His zanpakuto takes the form of a trident. It's very traditional in the sense of how it works. He finds this form to be fitting with gladiators in Greece. It's black with three sharp prongs on the end as one may expect. Giving it a rather easy read most think when fighting him. But Anastasius wields his trident in a very odd manner. Though thrusts are in it's not all he does with it. Often times choosing to combine moves together. While also having a few techniques based around his zanpakuto's sealed form. Giving it a bit of love from him. This appearance though strange to most of his kin or other relations suits him fine. On the end, it has a sharp point away from the one side. The martial it appears to made out of is sturdy. Offering him some usage in that form when it comes to it.

»Reiatsu Color: Ironically his spiritual pressure is a very bright yellow color. In large part, this has to do with Anastasius personality as a whole. The bright yellow is similar to a few others like him. He's given up much in the sense of developing this persona over the years. Finally creating him that remains through everything. Memories of the faded past remain like shadows in the back of his mind. But his new self illuminates the possibilities around him. Making sense of what was once shadow through a yellow hew of light.


»Release Command: The release command for his zanpakuto is Repent. It's a strange one but does fit suitable the nature of Anastasius in many ways. He is the repenting force that came from the shadows of William and Verathius. Creating a new life that is more grounded and changed. Evolution has gripped him tightly making a newer being. Repenting is the only option for a martyr to truly take. In any sense of the word that one brings forward.


»Ola de Limpieza-Cleansing Wave: A yellow hue begins to envelop his trident from the three prongs down. This move allows him to unleash a blast of heat based reiatsu outwards. It can be sent horizontal or straight in a thrust of his weapon. This isn't a cero based attack and merely him releasing his potent energy in a burst of power. Anastasius developed this technique around merely open-ended use. Not required to do much around it outside sending a slash or shot from his trident.



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»Appearance: Upon activation his body morphs slowly burning a few sections to a darker color. Not showcasing a tremendous degree of burns on him yet. But the heat coming from him does tend to alter the atmosphere around him. Sweating and stamina will deplete a bit faster when facing him. The natural area around his body in this state roughly equals the temperature of an active volcano. This level of heat does scorch things around him leaving a trail of flames. But this condensed to ten meters around him, the farther away you are from him the better. The closer you are some objects may combust into flames such as clothing or other things. This can be prevented by layering yourself with reiatsu or energy of some sort. Heat resistant fabrics that can withstand that level of heat are good also. Now as previously stated his body is burned around everywhere causing parts of his hollow bones to be a brown as though burnt. His skin, however, takes a tinge in a few places especially his hands of purple almost.

When he breathes a cloud of smoke generally comes out of his mouth and lungs. Exhaling excess heat from inside his body which is able to be ignited like Dragon's breath. This is a very special skill related to his zanpakuto powers over fire. But these flames are ones that belong to the Martyr who burned for everyone else. They didn't renounce their beliefs or anything that came with them.


»Lanza Del Llama- Lance of the Flame: Smashing both his hands together a huge burst of flames begins to emerge around them. By doing this he draws them back pulling the energy and flash tightly. Soon as he finished creating a lance of flame it's clear the lance is made up of a huge amount of heat ready to disperse or be used in melee combat. Upon landing in a location the combustion of this lance is massive. With an effective range of twenty meters upon exploding. As it released heat and debris outwards with immense force. This can easily destroy a large building for those curious. But holding this too long does damage his hands more causing pain for him. So he can only hold it for five posts at the longest before having to throw it. This is something of a multiple purpose tool as it does draw heat from his body to get hotter. But the longer he holds it the more damage is dealt with him. Making this effectively a double-edged sword. Those against it should note he will take damage if thrown too close to him. Anastasius cannot entirely control nor heal his body from these injuries. Though the damage inflicted to his body is slow it is something he feels every moment. Effectively making him burn from the lance no matter what and feel pain. The slow burn of it all is very clear when it comes from his path as a martyr in this regard. Anastasius is linked to two very important ones in his eyes believing firmly in this.


»Bandera del Redentor- Flag of the Redeemer: Once again he brings his hands together but this time the shape is different. It has a flag without emblem but embroiled in flames and waving wildly. This is planted in the ground where he stands as it sends out a twenty-meter long blast of heat through the ranks. But it has a strange effect this heat as it empowers his allies giving them fire based element attacks. His enemies are burned by both being near it at twenty meters. But also there is a drawback to this move like any other. He is actively burned while using it as any other of his techniques. These aren't free moves that allow him to use them whenever. The Flag is able to be maintained for five posts also. Due to the damage, it does to his body it's not something he should use frequently. In this regard, he only uses it when fighting around friends. As it serves little purpose otherwise. Though it can change the reflection of a battle. Entirely evolving into something completely different in this regard of things.



»Quema de estaca-Stake Burning:Now the first idea of this is that he has actively been burning others. In fact, when using this move he himself is burned and causing damage to himself. By igniting his entire body and burning it he does suffer pain but in the end, accomplishes his goal as a martyr. The heat coming from him is immense and this increases the power of his energy attacks but lowers his physical attacks. As damage is happening rapidly to his body. The searing and intense pain is a risk that is worth the reward. As the more damaged he becomes the more energy based damage he can do. His heat increases as the damage to him from it are increased. So basically it's an endless cycle of pain. This effect will continue until he passes out from pain or simply can't go on. Stake Burning is something that fits Anatsiaus entire being in this regard. He's been burned for a long time when it comes from his previous incarnations. They were martyrs and he will be one as well for his new family.

In terms of power, his strength grows over time as the fire consumes him. This allows him to become stronger as it starts at his feet. Increasing until it reaches his head in a five post period. Peaking at the fifth post with him engulfed in white flames. Now, this does damage to him during these five posts working its way to his head. In terms of the increase in power, it buffs his physical general skills. General Speed and Strength. This can only go to the elite at it's highest with no further climbing. The move will last till Anastasius passes out from pain or his body simply can no longer go. It's a buff of 2 to speed and strength when activated though as previously stated. No tier or other such growth is possible in this form.

On the first post, his skin begins to suffer from first degree burns, two posts later it is at second degree burns causing pain and anguish to the user. Another two posts later his body has reached third-degree burns and is in constant agony making his pain absolutely unending at this moment. Finally, at the next two postmark, we reach fourth-degree burns for the entire body. His skin is burning away and slowly revealing more bone as his body is turning black from the use of this technique.



Segunda Etapa




»Appearance: Upon activation of this form his body has changed severely. His skin is grey in some places showing signs of charcoaling almost. His hair has turned black with his jawline burned and most his bones turned black. But as with Stake Burning, he is getting stronger the more burnt he has become. So this is a good thing for him though it does take a massive toll on him physically. The heat coming off him would melt most things and cause high levels of degrading of objects close to him. This form is very taxing and thus doesn't have a ton of techniques or specialized forms. It only has one move and even with that, it can't be maintained long. His body is burning inside and out at intensely high temperature. This is not a form good for allies around him due to the heat surpassing anything a volcano can emit. So that makes this very taxing for him to hold up for long terms. Making releasing it for him an absolute last resort when all around him are enemies.



»Cruz de mártir- Cross of Martyr: The only move he can use and it's a one post use then his body is basically shot. He moves both arms upwards creating a posture similar to a cross. The heat that explodes outwards could destroy half of a large city. But the drawback his body is rejected out of this form right after it's used. Sending him into a regular state again. His body is able to recover from burn based injuries but that is all. But they must be inflicted by himself. So he goes into a state of rest needing to sleep for a time. To recover for a week or two maybe longer depending on the degree of damage taken previously. As stated his body will recover from the damage he takes turning his heat up this high. but he will recover after using it and be ready to martyr himself again. This implosion and explosion of heat and force is very potent and suggested range is upwards of two hundred yards. The damage will lessen further from the epicenter you get. He will be helpless after using this completely and easily taken out.

As his body will be much too damaged to do anything of note. This move is more of a sacrifice of himself. To save those precious to him, above all else that is the most important thing for him.


General Skills
  • Durability: Elite
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength:Advanced
  • Martial Skill: Advanced


Racial Skills
  • Perquisa: Elite
  • Sonido: Advanced
  • Cero/Bala: Elite
  • Hierro: Advanced


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Note: http://www.platinumhearts.net/t11720-verathius-mischevang-approved-0-2 The former thread of his app for you guys to use. I made several changes and adjustments.

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»High Heat Resistance:The highest temperature Verathius is able to withstand is that of the Sun.

Please remove that.

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»Grand Ray/ Oscuras Modification Something important to be noted for those wondering. Verathius is able to change this cero also to fit his needs. Putting a bit of change into the power and strength of the energy he releases. Now using them is a bit different as he considers them a bit pushier. Verathius claims most beings don't need to see his Oscuras or other specialized cero. They are something that few really need to witness to understand the effect. Though he is able to change the density of them and alter them as he see's fit. Causing a greater amount of destruction. His crimson halo is often enough to deal with most things. Though he does have other techniques that are much more potent when applied to this effect. When using higher end cero you get higher end results. Verathius has developed methods to do things on the next scale.

I'd want that cero to be viewable since apparently it's his stronger attack, but people can't see it? That didn't make sense to me

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[b]»Hierro Rejenta Verathius is blessed with a feature most wish they had. His Hierro never stops growing and when it's lost it grows back. Now, this doesn't mean his arms or leg's reappear. They don't return exactly either as it would be pure Hierro there. Allowing him to regenerate lost Hierro. Now, this doesn't function like regular regeneration. It can be ascertained that his body regenerates only the hierro when the rest is lost. His skin doesn't stop till he has arms and legs again. These are twenty percent harder than normal Hierro. Making it exceptionally thick as it's twenty percent harder than his own regular Hierro. So even when he's wounded or lost a limb. Verathius is able to regrow his defenses and begin again. This allows him to keep fighting his enemies with effective means. Verathius isn't sure if anyone else has a technique or trait like this. As he is fairly sure he is the only one with this feat.

That's not a good route to go for regeneration. I'd like this removed because it doesn't make sense that Hierro can regenerate if it's on your skin and it's already removed.

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»Limitless Cero Works The main fruit of labor that could be called spellcraft. Is the fact that Verathius can mold and shape cero's as he see's fit. He is able to make new ones on the spot when it is needed. Though this is more a factor of imagination among other things. It doesn't exactly require much outside of an idea previously. Knowing that he can accomplish certain things by igniting the process of his powers together. Things like setting a cero on fire or causing the fire to ignite as it gets close. Being able to make gloves and many things are possible. It's not as though this is such a strange thing. Some hollows have been capable of more interesting tricks. Verathius merely invested time and energy into developing his cero prowess. Able to make his bala as strong as a cero in some cases. This development and evolution came through study and time. Developing an understanding of density and the required things that came from it.

Are you manipluating other people's ceros? If so, please modify it to where he has to put in an active effort to try and take over it. I don't want him being able to control other cero through his mind without proper explaination. For example: Shadin in theory can mainpluate an energy attack by controlling the kinetic energy and moving the direction away from him. That is grounded in practical theory because there is a solid connection and reason for that action to take place and it isn't absolute. But, with yours, it just seems like it is randomly occuring and I don't like that since it seems like there isn't a way to counter it.


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»Hell Halo: Verathius creates a spinning ring of fire on his palm making a rapid motion by performing this feat. The spinning spiral is able to create massive heat equal to three thousand seven hundred.

What measurements are you using there? Meters? Miles? What?

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»Phoenix Fire: Verathius generates one hundred phoenix around him. These high-speed birds move at his targets made of pure fire. They leave trails of fire which another phoenix can come out of. Once they reach his target of choice. They erupt into massive explosions capable of destroying large portions of cities. Even burning Hueco Mundo's sand desert when he used it previously on the likes of Kiriel. He was able to incinerate the Danava of Destruction and War. Turning him into ashes as fifteen hit the demon. Leaving no room for escape or chance in this technique. These birds are able to spawn at high numbers and cause burns of his highest output in this form and beyond. The longer they burn and more damage they cause. It's untold if this is his strong technique as he claims he does have another he can use. But what can be said for his regular form this is as far as he goes often times. Though he does have one final move if his enemies prove worthy.

First issue I have is the range. It's fine for him to have a city-level attack, but it leaves it vague when it can also destroy Hueco Mundo's Sand Desert. As that is the size of a whole realm essentially and I wouldn't agree he can destroy realms. So remove that bit from it.

Second, I'd also remove the bit about not being able to escape. That makes this an absolute technique and we don't have those in here.

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»Hellscape: His ultimate technique is known as Hellscape. This is final as tree's of fire and ash begin coming out of the ground around him. These burnt tree's and such cause the ground around him to turn black with ashen lands. The skies leave ash clouds falling fire dust into the air. This covers a ten-mile radius in a blast radius that is tiring. He can only do this once per thread and it lasts for ten posts. The area around him is equal to the sun he claims in heat.


Stop. Remove that mention about it being equal to the sun in terms of heat.

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« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: Elite
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Elite
  • Focus: Advanced

  • Comments/Notes: I'm gonna give him a 0-4 base tier and a 0-3 release tier since I feel he'd most likely be a bit reduced after the whole fiscao with Ashlei. Add to the fact that this character has a strong history on the site and I'd like him to keep him in the 0 tier range for now. If there is an issue with this grading, let me know.

  • Tier: 0-4 [0-3 in his release]

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  • Name [X]
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  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
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  • History is of appropriate length [X]
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  • Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
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  • Willpower/Determination: N/A
  • Mental Deduction: N/A
  • Focus: N/A

  • Fixes:

    Ability in appearance? What is this "tribal hierro"?. If it was something like muscle density that may make sense to be in the appearance section , but if your going to have a "tribal hierro" please make it in your natural abilities section, not your appearance. I will not approve something that changes hierro density in appearance.

    Personality: Please do not describe energy signatures, as a part of personality.

    "Scientific Prodigy": There seems to be no corroborated data to support his scientific prowess, please either add links to support this, or edit history to include why this is a thing.

    History: Shinigami in the forest of menos? why where they there?

    Hollow Cry: Add cooldown and energy drain.

    High Durability: Can you actually give us some descriptor of durability here? It doesn't really give us an idea of how strong his durability it.

    Hierro Mastery: Can you explain drawbacks to having moving plates of super durable armor on top of his pre-existing Hierro?

    Cero mastery: What does this actually do? For the life of me, I can't find a cohesive power in this ability. Please rework it to not include his bulwark Hierro, and give me an idea of what the ability actually does.

    Cero chains: Give me a cool down, energy drain, and better explanation on the durability of the techniques "As durable as skill mastery" does not equate to description of durability for technique.

    Cero weapon: limit to 10 cero total.

    Cero gas:how does this even work? How can gas become a cero? I also have an issue with the fact that he can essentially blow people up if they breathe this in. What are counters to this ability? What are the limitations? I also dont see how a cero could become gaseous? Explain this better.

    Cero Liquid: How can a cero become liquid? Please explain this to me. Give me limitations, and drawbacks.


    Cero shield: No, he cannot fire his own Cero through the shield. Give me a better explanation as to what kind of "megaton" is necessary to break the shield, or give me a better descriptor.


    Cero Hierro: No, I don't see how this feasibly works. I will not be approving this cero.

    Cero Halo:2 uses max per thread. Please give an adequate energy drain as well.

    Grand Rey cero/ Oscuras modification: what does this actually do? I have no idea from the description given, what this ability actually does. Please reword it in a manner that gives us parameters of change, and scope of manipulation for what he can do with these two types of cero.


    Bala Oscuras: No, i will not be allowing a bala equivalent of an oscuras.

    Halo Oscuras: Given there is actually no given upper range for it's destructive capacity i will ask you put one in. Just because he hasn't tested it to it's maximum capacity, does not mean it doesn't Have a maximum capacity.

    Cero Magnum: No, not thousands of cero. Give some other descriptor for strength please.

    Tribal cero: Give explanation on cool down, durability, as well as to what degree his defenses are weakened after using this, and how long it takes for his hierro to fully regenerate.

    Tribal Hierro Release: No, I am not letting him have a released form solely based on his hierro. Please remove this.

    Hierro Shock Absorber: I don't know what this ability does, please reword in a manner that gives us a better idea of functionally what this does. Tires typically do not absorb shock, they pop. It is the shock's or "springs" that typically absorb kinetic force when cars hit bumps.

    Hierro Extension: Please give drawback for usage of this ability, as well as cooldowns . Furthmore, please give upper limitations of use, because right now there are no limitations of use. Basing anything purely off mastery level does not constitute an actual description for potency of ability, so please give us a better idea of how potent these "add ons" are.

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    Quema de estaca-Stake Burning: Give actual descriptors on how much more powerful he becomes by setting himself on fire. As it is right now, the ability is too vague.

  • Tier: N/A
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