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Welcome to The Platinum Hearts Scroller. Here you can find our most recent Of the Year and Of the Season winners. Happy Roleplaying! --- Member of the Year: Locke --- Character of the Year: Alastair Eisfluch --- New Characters of the Year: Mizu Morikawa and Igendai Gyakusuma --- Social Thread of the Year: A Letter for Hymn --- Combat Thread of the Year: Raise Your Spirits --- Member of the Season: Paradigm --- Characters of the Season: Byakuya Kuchiki and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Applications of the Season: Armina Willsaam and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Fight Thread of the Season: Search and Destroy --- Social Thread of the Season: Damage Assessment --- Event Thread of the Season: Midnight Assault
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Elendril
Elendril
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Joined : 2011-02-12
Posts : 451
Age : 28

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Fri Apr 01, 2011 7:15 pm
S H I N I G A M I

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: Ry Drago
Gender: Male
Age: Look's 15 actually 250
Appearance:
Spoiler:

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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality: Ry's creed in life is to "take the path with the least bloodshed. Despite this, he would follow a plan which will require the deaths of thousands of innocent people. He was also willing to attack and kill members of his own family. Ry, has been identified by many people as being afraid of death. He say's he only fear's a pointless death. His own description of himself as a "great person. He show's great pride and is very arrogance at time's as well. But this is just the Surface of Ry.

Since Ry is a very deep person. Willing to put his life on the line for those that deserve to live. He loves to be by himself for he fill's that he is very different then most people. He will some time's run off into the wood's when he wants to be by himself. He will help almost any who deserve's help. For he does not think any one should have to die a meaningless death. Or die by them self's. He also loves to talk and hang out with those who are close to him. He will sometimes talk to his brother's and sister's for hours without knowing.

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B A C K G R O U N D

History/Background: Ry born in a family that was known for their great sword skill's most of his family went off to join the soul society. Being one of the youngest he had to weight to go to the soul academy. He was so disappointed that he ran away from his house and just ran with a sword on his back but as he was running something felt his spirit pressure and chased him down it was a very powerful hollow not knowing how to fight a hollow he was hurt very badly

. But luckily a friend of his brother a soul reaper who just finished the academy came to his rescue saving him. He then told him that he had a very powerful spirit pressure and that he should enter the academy as soon as he could. So Ry waited another 2 years until he was 10 then he entered the academy. after he finished he went home but his parents could not be found So him and his brother's and sister's in the soul society got worried and started looked every for them. Searching every for them. Ry even missed all of his day's at the Academy to look for his parent's

But they were not found until 5 years later. But they were dead someone had killed them by slit their throat's. So Ry vowed to find that person and kill them as they did to his parents. And the only way he could do that was by getting stronger. So he Joined the Academy again. So he could revenge his parent's. And in joining the Academy again. Ry had a Drive to push him self to get revenge for his parent's. He even finished the Academy in the top of his class. He then went on to join the 10th squad even though he is quit clever at making thing's. He tried to get the soul society to change his Squad but they told him know because he was better suited for Squad 10. So he staid in the squad no matter how much he wanted to change Squad's

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Zanpakutô Spirit Name:Maei
Appearance:Ry Draco Shinigami  RmvalvMaei is a rueful individual with a very saturnine outlook on life. She never strays away from black when it comes to selecting her threads. Her usual attire consists of the adornments depicted above. She adores the color black, deeming that black befits her person, as well as her lack of elation or remorse. She isn't a social type, nor does she worry about anyone else other than her master. Her ashen appearance, and essence smelling of burnt wood belies her lugubrious persona. When people cross her, or wish ill upon her, she fills with rancor, desiring to singe the nay sayer through a flurry of fervid embers. To her master, she does show hints of care and worry, and remains loyal and watchful over him.
Inner World:Ry Draco Shinigami  DisgaeaCastleA large, cartoon-esque castle stands atop a large foundation of stone nestled in the center of a lake of molten lava. The environment is seemingly void of all life, the same color of gray being spread throughout the land. It is always nighttime in this world, with the dark blue sky tainted with swirly clouds and large, dark, levitating boulders. The only thing that connects from the outside environment to the castle is a long, crooked bridge made of stone

Sealed Zanpakutô :
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The Schlifer is a strong Fire Element type Zanpauktou, whose sealed state is representative of a large, rectangular broadsword with two handles. One being the actual hilt of the blade, the second being a metal bar located in the square of the bottom of the blade. The weapon can be wielded with one hand, or both

Release: Burn

Shikai Description: The blade does not change appearance. What does happen, however, is that the entire blade is suddenly engulfed in a thin coating of flames, the coating being only a couple of inches, the flames making the blade appear a fervid orange. The features and colors of the blade are still visible. The second grip is also covered in flames. The blade can be held or gripped by the user as if the flames were never there, the fire having no effect on him. The user can also send Fire Arc's when he swing's the blade.

Shikai Abilities:

Cinder Comet
By swinging the blade in an upwards arc, a fireball, with the proportions of a basketball, is launched. The flames are the equivalent of ordinary fire, making it easy to douse with water. What makes this more than just a mere fireball is the trail of fire that spills from the back of the flame, landing onto the ground. The proportionate embers span 2 meters tall, and last for one post after the fireball expires. The speed of the fireball is 10 meters per second. It has a range of 50 meters before the flame expires. The fireball itself does moderate damage at adept endurance. Low damage at Adv, and insignificant damage at master. This move can only be used once per post.

Firewall
Simple name, but it is not the firewall that deflects malicious software from accessing a computer. By sticking the tip of the blade outwards, towards the ground, a baseball sized fireball. Whence it hits, a wall of embers is erected, the wall spanning 12 meters in length, and 2 meters in height. The flames move at a rate of 5 meters per second. Same damage amounts from last ability applies here. The firewall has a range of 30 meters. This move can only be used once per post.

Searing Rain
By raising the blade behind the head, bringing the blade down in a violent swing, a basketball shaped fireball, bright yellow in color, is tossed from the blade, ascending for the first few seconds, before remaining at a constant height. The fireball travels at 6 meters per second. At any moment, the user can will for the fireball to detonate, causing the fireball to explode in mid air, creating a ring of 12, equally sized fireballs, each being orange in color. These flames span out for 15 meters in diameter before falling into the ground, immuring anything within it in a ring of flaming pyres, each one spanning 4 meters tall, 2 feet in diameter. These flames last for the next two posts before expiring. This move can only be used once per post. Damage amounts are still the same.

Note:Because of Ry's intense training and close bond to his spirit. This sword is as Light as a Feather to Ry. Where as to some other people it may be heavy and tiring to swing. But it is really hard to get Ry exhausted by him just swinging the sword.

Bankai Description: N/A

[strike]Bankai Abilities: N/A


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R P S A M P L E

Roleplay Sample: Other sample

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S K I L L S H E E T

{Please do not fill out the following until your character has a tier}

General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Kidou: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


( the credit of the Zanpakuto goes to Raen


Last edited by Elendril on Sat Apr 02, 2011 10:24 pm; edited 5 times in total
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Fri Apr 01, 2011 7:25 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in [X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Comments/Notes:Since I made the zanpaukto myself, I am certain that it is not overpowered
Other than a slight mishap at the history (Using "Elendril", instead of "Ry" for the name. Do change that when you get the time) The history is fine.
Tier:I hereby approve of this app with a tier of

3-1+


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