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Joined : 2011-08-07
Posts : 1892
Age : 29

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Mikan Mischevang [Miki Mischevang] - | Finished | Left_bar_bleue17560/99999Mikan Mischevang [Miki Mischevang] - | Finished | Empty_bar_bleue  (17560/99999)
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Fri Sep 09, 2011 10:56 am
ARRANCAR


GENETICS

Character Name:
Mikan Michevang [Nicknamed Miki Michevang]

Character True Age:
513

Character Appearance Age:
17-20 [Late Teenager]

Character Gender:
Female

Orientation:
Serve Under Cero Espada [Meaning serving under ashlei]

Personality:

| | R U T H L E S S | |
Mikan is a ruthless person around people.She kills, she slaughters, she does anything that would able to slaughter those who oppose her sisters, herself and ashlei.She also shows no mercy to anyone except to her sisters.Not only that, she is quite a cold-hearted and a "tsundere" person.

| | M A D | S C I E N T I S T | |
Mikan is the smartest scientist of all sisters.She does all kinds of experiment, as long as they are worth of doing experiment, depending if they are worth having them being an experiment for her.She likes doing an experiment on any person.But she does not do an experiment on her sisters and ashlei, and only does it on others.She would do an experiment on her sisters, unless its a request.

| | K I N D | |
Mikan only had shown her kind and cute side towards ashlei and her sisters.She shows it to no one but her sisters and ashlei only.Which no one had ever seen her being kind and cute towards others, but her kind and cute side, possibly might show to the ones she loves.

| | C R E E P Y | |
Mikan wasn't as creepy as you think, but her smile is a little bit creepy.But if she smiles [when she is happy], she looks cute and smiles like an angel.If she had an evil intention while smiling, it would be very creepy and demonic, which others can felt dark aura from her that she will do something really bad.She is as creepy as ever.

| | P R O T E C T I V E | |
Mikan is a person who is an extremely protective one.She dares to protect anyone she loves, especially ashlei and her sisters.She does not care about her own life, instead he wanted ashlei and her sisters to live, and she cares for their lives as well.She would rather die than having ashlei and her sisters getting killed.

Likes
Mikan does have something to like.She likes doing experiments, spending time with ashlei and her sisters and much more enjoyable things.As long as there are things that is fun and enjoyable, she can't help liking it.Her most favourite place to go is the beach.Where the place she can relax and having fun with ashlei and her sisters.At least she hope that she could go there once in a week, or maybe everyday in the summer.

Dislikes
Mikan have a few things that she dislike about it.Mostly, she dislikes those who oppose and does not follow ashlei or her sister's orders.Also, she dislikes any kinds of mens who thinks they are a total smartass and a pervert.And also dislikes those who interrupt her experiment or stops her from doing it.She hates having her experiment being interrupted or stopped when she was in the middle of the experiment.Interrupting her holidays, ashlei or her sisters will be an extremely bad idea.When she knows about it, she would eliminate the person immediately wihout showing mercy to the person at all.

Hobbies
Her only two hobbies, is spend her time with ashlei and her sisters, and also doing an experiment on anyone she thinks that it is interesting and worth to be an experiment for her.

Talents
Mikan has a talent doing an experiment and knowing all kinds of cero and all cero's information.She also knows almost anything about bala, despite she uses them and studies them and able to learn how to use them properly all by herself.

She also has another talent that she was able to cook, mostly the most delicious food that ashlei and any of her sisters had ever taste.Her experience in cooking had quite improved a lot when she was alive.

Fears
Mikan, has the fear of death.Mostly, not worrying about her own death, but she worries about the death of her sisters and ashlei.She did not want them to die and wanted to protect them at all cost.She rather protect them with her life instead of protecting her own life.She is quite a protective person to her sisters.

GENETIC LOOKS

Appearance:
Spoiler:

Bone Appearance:
On her hands.The hollow piece on her hands was hidden in her gloves.

Hollow Hole:
Located on her stomach.

Reitsu Colour:
Red

ZANPAKUTÔ

Sealed Zanpakutô:
Mikan Mischevang [Miki Mischevang] - | Finished | Katana

Racial Abilities:

| | B A L A | |
Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal Cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twenty-fold speed.Unlike others, her bala is two times faster than the original bala used by other arrancars.

| | C E R O | |
Cero are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Gillians, Adjuchas, Arrancar, and the Visored have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently.She was able to fire off a cero, about ten times faster than the bala when fired by her.Due being a cero specialist, she was able to use all of the cero used by different arrancars.

| | C E R O | D O B L E | |
Cero Doble is a variation performed by Nelliel Tu Odelschwanck,
by swallowing her opponent's Cero and returning it back to the user along with her own Cero, making it more powerful. This attack was seen used against Nnoitra Gilga.She was able to use is two times more powerful than the one that nel used it to return back the opponent's cero.

| | C E R O | S I N C R E T I C O | |
Cero Sincretico is a variation performed by Dondo Chakkaka Birstanne and Pesche Guatiche. This attack was used against Szayel Apollo Granz. Pesche and Dondochakka charge their Cero simultaneously and combine them, forming a large, swirling sphere. They then fire the combined Cero, launching a multi-colored beam. Although it does not work on him, Szayel Aporro admits that it is a "marvelous technique"and that if they had used it before he had time to analyze their reiatsu, he would have been defeated. However, it does seem to greatly drain Pesche and Dondochakka---both are panting and on the point of
collapse after performing it.

| | G R A N | R E Y | C E R O | |
Gran Rey Cero is a Cero that only Espada are capable of using. It is performed by mixing an Espada's own blood with the Cero. The result is a Cero with a much greater attack power and speed as well as a change of color unique to the Espada. It is also many times more powerful than a normal Cero, capable of disturbing the fabric of space, it also seems to spin like a razor upon release as it compresses and decompresses due to the sheer speed and raw power. It is a drastically potent Cero, used only by the Espada themselves. This attack was first used by Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez in order to incite Ichigo Kurosaki into donning his mask. It is stated by Ulquiorra that using a Gran Rey Cero is one of two things that are forbidden while in Las Noches, as it is so overwhelming that it could destroy the fortress.Which she can only use it on her resurreccion and dues ex resurreccion.

| | C E R O | O S C U R A S | |
Cero Oscuras or more grammatically correct Cero Oscuro, is a black Cero used by Ulquiorra Cifer in his Resurreccion form. He also compares it to Ichigo's black Getsuga Tensho. It covers any exposed light into pitch darkness.Though the only Espada shown to utilize this technique so far, Ulquiorra told Ichigo that, "This is an Espada's fully powered Black Cero." Ulquiorra also referred to it as "our Cero." The Cero Oscuras' range is vast, and its attack power is massive. It is powerful enough to shatter Ichigo Kurosaki's entire Hollow mask and critically injure him in the process. It is strong enough to destroy half of the dome over Las Noches.The superior Cero Oscuras is far greater than an average Cero.Mostly she was able to use in any form, sealed, resurreccion and dues ex resurreccion.


| | G A R G A N T A | |
Garganta is how Arrancar and Menos-class Hollows move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tosen, Kisuke Urahara and Mayuri Kurotsuchi have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.There is also another use for Garganta, only shown once:Garganta Broadcast, a visual broadcast similar to a television screen, created by using individual Garganta portals.Her limit was able to use 3 garganta broadcast.

| | H I E R R O | |
Hierro refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power.While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakutō bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable.Stronger Arrancar generally have proportionally stronger skin than usual.Her hierro wasn't much strong like other arrancar does, but able to take quite much of damage.

| | N E G A C I O N | |
Negacion are energy fields are used to rescue fellow Hollows. Only the Gillian-class Menos have shown the ability to use it. Negación fields surround a target in a square beam of light that isolates the target from the dimension they are currently in, making it impossible to harm them. The field then pulls the target towards the Menos that created the field. Espada have a special cube-shaped device called Caja Negacion (反膜の匪 (カハ・ネガシオン), kaha negashion; Spanish for "Negation Box," Japanese for "Anti-Membrane of Negation") meant to simulate Negación fields, which are used to punish their subordinates if necessary. The cube, when used on a subject, traps them in an alternate dimension from which there is no escape; however, this assumes it is being used as intended. More powerful Arrancar, namely the
Espada themselves, can escape given enough time.Her negacion was rather unique, she was also able to use the negacion to travel different location by forming a shape of a box.She was also able to use it to travel/escape back to Hueco Mundo as well.

| | P E S Q U I S A | |
Pesquisa is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions very similarly to sonar.Which she can sense how many souls were within 1 feet area, and how much spiritual power do they have inside them.

| | R E S U R R E C C I O N | |
Resurreccion returns the essence of an Arrancar's offensive Hollow abilities to their humanoid bodies.Arrancar seal the nuclei of their abilities within the form of a sword, entirely different from what the Shinigami use. When they release their weapons' seals, they unleash their true power and their true form.The only time they can return to human form is when they reseal their
powers in sword form. Changing their form without resealing their powers in a sword is the same as burning off an arm, and if they were to discard part of their released form, while in it, they can never return to normal again.

| | S O N I D O | |
Sonido is a technique used by Arrancar which allows them to move at extreme speeds, making it equivalent to the Hoho (or Flash Steps as they are called in the English Dub) that Shinigami use and the Hirenkyaku that Quincy use. While somewhat similar to Hohō, Sonído appears to be more instinctual than Hohō, requiring no previous knowledge to perform. It also makes a different sound; rather than the swishing or sometimes silent Flash Step of the Shinigami, Sonído makes a booming or static
sound.

| | S O U L | S E P E R A T I O N | |
In the case of Coyote Starrk and Lilynette Gingerbuck, when other Hollows evolved to Arrancars, they split their power between their bodies and their swords. But for them they split their power into two bodies, thus creating a different type of Resurrección. When they become one again, their full power is released.This might be a rare case for all of the sisters, she is the only one that has soul seperation due having too much spiritual power.Thus, splitting her soul into two, creating both herself and her other half soul named "Haizukei Shimamoto".A other male half.

Soul Seperation: http://bleachplatinumhearts.forumotion.com/t4302-haizukei-shimamoto-npc-finished#25175

| | C E R O | S P E C I A L I S T | |
The "Cero Specialist" might be a title for her, which she knows everything about all kinds of cero.She also had seen using cero and bala only, mostly relying on them instead of her own zanpakuto.She knows everything about the cero, how much power to they have, what are the limits of the cero and mostly their speed and range of the cero.

| | C O M M U N I C A T I O N | L I N K | |
Mikan's special ability is the communication link.Which she fires off a normal cero, then they seperate themself into a string and cannot be seen by a naked eye.Then the string instantly went into a person's mind [Limit about 20 people], then they were able to communicate in their mind.She was only able to communicate to those that she wish to communicate with.This can be used repeatly, as long as it was within a few miles away, they can communicate in their mind.Once they were out of range, the line cuts off.Mostly mikan uses it to communicate with her sisters whenever she was lost, needed backup or any kinds of problems.

| | E X P E R T | M A R K S M A N S H I P | |
Mikan use her cero quite a lot and had her aiming improved whenever she used her cero.Which made her aiming and her cero rarely misses.And when she was in her resurreccion, it makes it slightly harder to dodge her shot when she uses her bazooka [Gun] in her resurreccion.


| | I M M E N S E | S T R E N G T H | |
Mikan wasn't the strongest of all her sisters, but her strength is quite remarkable.Strong enough to take down about 1-3 vasto lorde hollows herself, also strong enough 2-5 captain-level shinigami, and about 3-8 lieutenant-level shinigami.Her strength are unimaginable, but not as strong as other of her sisters.

| | I M M E N S E | S P E E D | |
Mikan isn't much of the fastest of all her sisters, her speed was quite an ordinary and fast enough.Her speed was able to catch up against a captain-level shinigami flashstep, but almost slightly faster than captain-level flashstep.Even wihout her sonido, she was able to catch up against it as well.Her speed was also fast enough to dodge surprise attacks and nearby attacks in time.

| | V A S T | S P I R I T U A L | P O W E R | |
Previously, before she was an arrancar and serve under ashlei, her spiritual power was vast.She would not able to control his spiritual power properly that time.Her spiritual power unintentionally killing other hollows that goes near her, but after when she split her soul and spiritual power into half, her vast spiritual power was divided into two.Which herself and her other half share the same spiritual power, and her own spiritual power drops half of her vast spiritual power.But still, her spiritual power can still kill other hollows when they gets near her and her other half.

RESSERECCION

Resereccion Name:
Carne De Explosión
[Flesh Explosion]

Resereccion Release Phrase:
Me Derrame De Sangre Y De Carne.
[Spill me out blood and flesh.]

Release Actions:
Mikan claps her hands twice and sticks them together for a few seconds.Then, a red reiatsu would burst out inside from her hands and gathers themselves up around her entire body.The red reiatsu would be absorbed into her body after a few minutes.

Resereccion Appearance:
Her hollows piece on her hands grew long, covering both of her arms after the number of her hollow piece increased.Her clothes also had changed when she was in resurreccion.Her resurreccion covers her upper half both of her breast.Also it covers her stomach and her legs.She also appears with a half hollow mask as well.Her hair changed to red and her reiatsu still remains red as well.Her eyes turned to red as well, and she also stands the same height and weight as she previously was when she was in her sealed form.

Her other half and her current combined and released half of their full power.Her weapon in her resurreccion takes a form of a bazooka, which she was still able to communicate with her other half even while she was still in their released form.

Resereccion Abilities:

| | G R A N | R E Y | C E R O | |
Mikan can fire off Gran Rey Cero from her bazooka with one per post use and 2 post cool down.She can use and fire gran rey cero in resurreccion.She uses it for far range and not for close range, due its sheer power and force that might able to harm herself when fired at close range.


| | S P L I T | C E R O | |
When she fires off cero from her bazooka, then the cero would split up into 5 small cero that deals a small damage each.When all together hits the enemy, it causes a powerful and massive explosion that deals a highly moderate damage on her enemy, but there is a low possibility that the person can deal a fatal damage. If 4 out of 5 hits the enemy, it deals a highly moderate damage.If 3 out of 5 cero hits the enemy, it deals a moderate damage.If 2 out of 5 hits the enemy, it deals a small damage.If 1 out of 5 hits the enemy, it deals a little bit damage which it deals slightly weaker damage than the small damage, almost like only a scratch on the enemy.If none hits, nothing happens.The cero moves as fast as bala but two times faster.

| | E X P L O S I V E | R O C K E T | |
Wihout using a cero, she gathers up half of her maximum spiritual energy onto a rocket.Then she loads up her bazooka and fires it towards her enemy.The explosion is powerful and massive, destroying anything that was caught in the explosion.A very risky and forbidden ability that cannot be used by her.It is powerful enough to destroy half of the karakura city.Also powerful enough to destroy half of the Las Noches.She rarely uses it since he was too powerful to use it.

| | C E R O | S T U N | |
Mikan summons a tiny cero on her hands, which was as small as a rock.Once a certain thing or a person was stun by the tiny electrical cero, the certain thing/person would instantly being paralyzed, unable them to move no matter what they do for 1/2 post before they were able to move again, but if the person use a low-level kido or any kinds of energy attacks, it will be easily repelled.There is another way to paralyze anything within her area.She summons a huge cero on her hands, then fires it towards the ground and a huge shockwave would be released within 150 meters within, paralyzing them and made them unable to move for 1/2 post, which does not last long.This was able to use once per post.The tiny cero works on only a single thing/person.And the certain item must be an electrical item.The huge cero works on any electrical item/people within the shockwave area.The shockwave can be stopped easily, but using normal physical attacks by slashing it down with a blade.

| | C E R O | B L A D E | |
Used as a powerful cutting edge known through the Mischevang Family but only Ashlei recalled how to use it. The edge of the weapon vibrates with chainsaw like cutting creating a bloody mess if hitting skin and can even cut up objects and buildings.

First Use:
Simply put, Charge Reitsu used for the Cero into the users one hand. This reitsu then coats their hand like an arrow tip made of their reitsu colour and looking as though their hand was on fire. This is the smallest form of the Cero Blade. Striking someone with this flaming hand will slice through things with ease.

Second Use:
After creating the flame, by inputting more reitsu into it, the edge can be created. the fires would sprout further out to form a sword shape that seems to be made to look like the seele schneider but more of a triangle shape from the hand. This simply gives it more range and can extend up to a metre long. If this is done though, two hands need to be used to hold it.

Which Mikan had learned it from ashlei.And she can turn her bazooka into a cero blade for 5 post before turning back to bazooka.

DUES EX RESSERECION
(only Espada 4 and above may make use of this form unless exceptions are given by Chaoz or another Admin)

Dues Ex Name:
(what name does the second resserecion go by?)

Dues Ex Release Phrase:
(what do they say to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Release Actions:
(what do they do to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Appearance:
(describe what their Dues Ex Segunda looks like)

Dues Ex Abilities:
(explain the several powers and abilities this final form grants them)

SKILLS

(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)

General Skills

  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills

  • Perquisa: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sonido: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero/Bala: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hierro: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


PAST

History:
As a child, Mikan lived in a very small town over 200 miles away from karakura with her sisters.The place was surrounded by thick woodland area with only a single path in and out at the village.A place where she was able to live there with her sisters.She felt like becoming a stronger and better person, with ashlei.She never gets bored of this village, and able to live properly in the small town where she could see everyone happy and smiling each and everyday.

Until the day where something had happened in the village, when she begin to suspect something about her sister, ashlei.She began to wonder if she is the one who cause all the killings in the village.She did not mean to suspect something about her sister, when she heard everyone in the village agreed to kill her sister, ashlei.She ran, standing in front of all the villagers and asked them not to kill ashlei because she knows that she did not do all the killing and bad omens.She insisted for the villagers to kill her sister, no matter what they do.

Stab.

A sharp spear piercing through her flesh.The blood began to spill out from her chest where she was stabbed by the spear.She did not successfully stopped the villagers from killing ashlei.The final, and the only sound she heard from her ears, had dissapeared.Her sight and life faded away from her mind.Her dead body was found laying against the ground, mortally wounded and bleeding after being stabbed on the chest.Her last breath has been released from her lungs, and died.

She began to wander around the village as a spirit.It was after her death and being killed by the villagers.She has been avoiding hollows and shinigamis' because she did not want hollow or return back to the soul society yet.She wanted to find her sisters first.While she was wondering around, she started to feel hatred for this small town.They killed her, her sisters and ashlei as well.When hatred was developed in her feelings, she took off the chain of fate off her chest and become a hollow herself.

After becoming a hollow, she continue watching the village until she has the chance to devour their souls.She had the desire to kill them and devour their souls.The hatred in her heart will never fade away from her feelings.A mask forming around her face, looking at the village.She watched until she heard a loud explosion at the river in the air.Her eyes widened, saw what her sister, ashlei had became.A hollow that attacked the villagers in this small village.Ashlei kept killing every single human in this village.She watched, until she left the place.

She had used her time to kill every single human and devour their souls.Finding each deceased soul and devour them as well.She avoided every shinigami she sees and decided to kill human instead of the shinigami.She went to hueco mundo and devour her fellows hollows soul because it was easier to gain more power.She continue to devour one by one, turning from lesser to gillian.After when she continues to kill and devour hollow souls, she finally and become an adjuchas-class hollow.She did not stop devouring other hollows and she continues.When she had devoured thousands of hollows, she did not know why she can't become a vasto lorde hollow.When she decided to break and shatter her mask to become an arrancar.

Eventually, she was able to break her own mask and gained a new power for herself.She had a different role and her goal now.She decided to rule over a small group of hollows that she can be stronger and use them to find her sisters.She did not know why she stopped devouring other hollows and become a vasto lorde, but it was her choice to stop.Her new personality had developed within her, and begin to do some experiments and research on each hollows she sees, hoping to get some information.She also studies their cero everyday on the hollows, until she had learned better about cero and bala.But something wasn't right.When she gets near the hollows, her spiritual pressure kills them when they gets near her.She did not know why, the weak ones can get together but why the strong ones can't.If it keeps on like this, she did not know if she could make friends.Until when she split her soul into two, having another arrancar.It seems to be her other soul.After being split into two, they decided to be friends and get into the journey together.And the guy was called, "Haizukei Shimamoto".

Yet, there is something she will never happy and comfortable about it.Her sisters and ashlei.She hope that she can be reunited with them, and live together happily.Then she heard there was a person, who was the leader of the nuevo espada and she was called "Ashlei Clixx".The ruler of the entire hueco mundo and Las Noches.She was happy about this, and decided to send a message to the cero espada and ask to meet together.Her fate with the sisters and ashlei is unknown, until then.She did not know what will happen next after meeting her sister, ashlei.


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Mon Sep 12, 2011 2:05 pm

Ive seen lots of fau'pas in this thread. i'd like to address you to the following.


  • Sorry, you can't say your a master or adept at things until after the application is approved. Even if you didn't touch the skill sheet your not going to get away with already claiming your a master at something. Zero tiers have Master and this app has no tier as of now.

  • Your communication link is also somewhat obsolete seeing as the sisters communicate Via contacting Lucy Heart, Ashleis official mech servant that opens calls between the sisters and espada at will. xD That and even if you didn't use Lucy, its perfectly fine to merely give a power to communicate with telepathy to people within a few miles.

  • You claim to have soul separation but i see no appearance for this second person or a link to their app or anything. I find Soul Separation iffy, but please give info on this boy.

  • No Gran rey cero! your not an espada yet!

  • Cero Blade is an ability Ashlei invented. If you want to use it then add that to your app but if not, then write a description different to the original Cero Blade

  • Cant help but notice that split cero does massive damage. Well, that doesn't sound fair at all xD

  • Also i dont like the way cero Stun was explained nor the fact that is will always paralyse on impact. Half of what is said didn't make much sense to me
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  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Comments/Notes: App is alright, could use some work to improve it but it will work for its purpose.
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I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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M A G I
Satan's Spawn
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Raiki
Raiki
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Posts : 1238
Age : 32

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