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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Edge Maverick [APPROVED, 2-1+]   Sat Mar 17, 2012 11:34 am

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Name: Edge Maverick
Alias': Nerd, Brainiac, Geek, Genius
Age: 29
Birthday: July 30th
Gender: Male

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Clothing
Edge is very lean and sports bright, "futuristic" (keep in mind it’s not that futuristic for the Twenty-Fifth century) clothing, bracers that cover his entire left arm, and greaves on his legs. His shirt doubles as body armor (made out of tibartanium, a synthetic material he invented), and is long enough so that it goes lower than his waste. The shirt-armor is also sleeveless. The chest-area of the shirt acts as protective gear, and isn't skin tight. While there is white and blue, the most noticeable color on his shirt is red, which is on the vest-like area of it. He also wears a leather belt wrapped around his hips, which is also connected to a longer blue belt that is not tight on him as it has extra length. The collar of the shirt is a deep gold, and helps protect his neck from possible attacks, as it is made of a denser form of tibartanium. Edge wears a pouch on his left hip which utilizes advanced space and matter technology that allows him to continuously place objects into it, despite it seeming too small to fit all of it in (keep in mind this doesn’t mean he can fit a rocket launcher in there as it couldn’t get fit through the opening, while he can fit countless hand tools inside).

Body
Edge is a lean, fair-skinned individual who appears young for his age, but attractive nonetheless. His hair is a a golden, almost white, blond and comes down to the middle of his cheeks. He has bluish-green, almost grey eyes, that are rather piercing when looked into directly. He has a rather light skin tone, and is about 5'11" (his suit makes him appear 6'4"), weighing in at about 145 pounds. Despite his wiry frame and lean appearance, Edge actually has a good bit of muscle in him.

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  • Responsibility and Blame
    A responsible man with a deep-seated sense of right and wrong, Edge often hastily springs into action due to his straight-shooter personality, leading others to brand him as reckless. Perhaps this is one reason why his childhood friend Reimi Saionji is always lecturing him. A downside of his sense of his right and wrong is how much responsibility he takes for his actions. If he does something considered to be wrong, he will take full responsibility for it, even if someone else was involved or he was forced to do it. He will also blame himself despite the fact that it isn't always his fault. He has been known to become depressed from blaming himself too much.

  • Importance of Friends
    Edge treats his friends like family, willing to pretty much die for them, which is why he tends to sometimes be a bit over-protective of his allies. He will act as a shield to guard those close to him, and even strangers. He is very friendly to those he see are in trouble, and will lay do what he can to make sure they come out of danger OK. Another noticeable trait of his, is how goofy he can act. If not in combat, he tends to joke around and act silly in general, which is why he is seen as so friendly. Despite this, he can be very serious, especially if someone he knows gets hurt. If he sees someone he knows get hurt, he will usually bum-rush the enemy, no matter how strong they are.

  • Intelligence
    Considering he graduated from highschool when he was 13, calling him intelligent would be a gross understatement. His IQ is somewhere in the 250-270 range, with it being located closer to the higher end of the spectrum. His intelligence is actually what makes him hold friends so dearly, because when he was growing up he hopped from school to school and intimidated others with his intelligence.

  • Science over Religion
    Edge is a scientist and engineer, and as such has no use for religion. He has been quoted saying "Religion is an infection, a virus even, and must helps create radical terrorists and evangelicals....that poison the minds of the young". He has taken a stand on fighting religion, and is one of the most prominent atheists in the world. He is not allowed into the Vatican, much less Vatican City, as his punishment for getting multiple churches shut down in the US by the government for various crimes.

  • Politics
    He is also very interested in politics, being an honorary member of the US Congress. He has considered running for president (as the age limit was reduced to 28 in year 2067, which makes him qualified to run), but decided against it when he considered the possibility of not being able to further his research for 4 or more years. He is a die-hard Liberal Democrat, but decided in the event of running for president, he would probably run as an independent instead of a Democrat. In 2399, he helped pass the HBRA. The HBRA, or Higher Beings Rights Act, gave equal citizenship to Iramasha in the United States, and even gave hem the right to marry (in non-religious foundations).

  • Food
    He only eats tofu, fruits, and vegetables, and refuses to eat meat. When asked about it, he only said it was "Morally wrong" and that "Vegetarianism is the next stage in our evolution". Edge detests eating meat, and will usually say something about it when he sees his friends eat meat. He doesn't necessarily mean to be rude, but he finds it to be disgusting. His favorite food is white grapes, and would only eat them instead of anything else if he could.


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Tools

P.W.G.S.

The P.W.G.S., or Proto-Weapon Generation System, is Edge’s main combat device. Its main function is its ability to transform into any type of weapon Edge requires or has a need for. This includes ranged-weapons. This means if he wants to, he can have it turn into a sword, a shield, a bow, even a rocket launcher or grenade launcher (It automatically generates ammunition which gives it practically unlimited ammo. I say "practically", because it runs on the energy of the nano's, which means there is, in fact, a limit before it must shutdown due to low power reserves.). While Edge is usually seen with it as a sword, he enjoys using it in its Magnum Mode, which is a form of a twin-barreled 40-calibur magnum somewhat resembling a sawed-off shotgun. If attacked, he can have it turn into a shield to protect him, and can even add things to it, such as a pistol or automatic rifle onto the shield. This gives him the advantage of being able to protect himself and go on the offensive as well.

It is made out of a semi-organic, self-replicating, super-cooling, nanobot-based material. The nanobots run off of their own energy sources which are just as small as them, but due to the advancements made in the last 400 years, this isn't a problem, as the sources contain quite a bit of energy, enough to run them for days at a time. Due to its sensor system, if it is in a shield form, millions of micro-sized “shields” increase their density and help protect the shield from damage when it is about to be struck. The shield, like all of the various forms of the P.W.G.S, is very durable, being able to take multiple hits from equal-leveled enemies before cracking, though extended assaults can shatter the shield. Also, its self-cooling feature allows it to rapidly fire for extended periods of time without worry of over-heating, increasing its overall fire power. This material is also super-light, being extremely light weight even when in the form of high-powered artillery. Created specifically for his own needs, he has added in the feature of energy-use. By funneling his own energy into the weapons power container, he can unleash attacks using his spiritual energy, adding both fire power and overall damage-output.

An added effect of being self-replicating means it can repair itself should parts of it be damaged or even destroyed. This is one of the crown jewels of Edge’s engineering and scientific career, and guards it with his life (the materials required to build it are not only extremely rare, but also extremely expensive, HOWEVER, he would make a replacement should anything happen to the original). When being carried around, the P.W.G.S is usually in the form of a blade inserted into the sheath on his back.

Magnum Deagles



Some of Edge's favorite guns are his two Magnum Desert Eagles, which are major powerhouses in his arsenal. He calls them "Sashitōsu" and "Watashi", or S&W for short. These guns arent just a form of his P.W.G.S, and are completely separate, custom handguns created by Edge himself. These handguns have 10 inch barrels, and have a caliber of .440 Cor-Bon (extremely high caliber, making them powerful handguns) that, thanks to the technical expertise of Edge, have a few capabilities that aren't standard for usual pistols. First off, he increased the normal cartridge size from about 7 rounds a cartridge, to 10 rounds, increasing the overall damage output as they can shoot longer before having to be reloaded. Also, he has developed special ammunition for the guns which can cause extra damage to opponent. They are not only armor-piercing rounds, but are also enhanced with chi energy that allow them to pierce reitsu/energy-based shielding, or at least crack said shields, and let them do damage to spiritual beings, and even kill creatures like demons. Despite all of the advantages to these guns, they also possess high recoil due to the type of guns they are, and can cause damage to Edge's arms if he uses them in rapid succession.

Utility Gauntlet

The Utility Gauntlet is worn on Edge's left arm, and is gold in color. It is made of Edge's special alloy Tibartanium, and provides a number of uses. The main use is its energy concentration ability. It allows Edge to gather tremendous amounts of energy into his left hand, and then launch the energy at enemies, giving access to both a beam-like cannon and a bomb-like cannon. The gauntlet also provides an energy shield should Edge be under attack by generating an energy-based shield or a physical shield that attaches to the gauntlet itself. With its shock-absorption technology and its power system, it can dish out a large amount of physical damage if need be. However, it also possesses an innate weakness to electricity-based attacks when its shield is not up.

Tibartanium Nano Suit



This is the armor he wears on his chest and legs (under his greaves), though when used in a specific mode, the armor changes its appearance greatly. The material, tibartanium, is of Edge’s own creation. He first synthesized this alloy in year 2408, and has been working on increasing its density and decreasing its mass ever since. Edge named the armor “The Maverick Self-Protection System”, or MSPS for short. Built into it are hundreds of millions of nanobots similar to those used in his P.W.G.S device, which is what gives it its special properties. The MSPS can rapidly change from mode to mode without any serious consequences. The suit runs on a mixture of energy stored inside the suit before it is even activated, and Edge's own innate chi energy, allowing it to stay active for awhile. Prolonged use of the suit can cause damage to Edge's body, both inside and out, as the chemicals/nanobots are damaging as the suit is used for extended amounts of time.

  • Defense Mode

    One of its multiple forms is its Defense Mode, which, obviously, is used primarily for defense. When Edge activates this form, the hundreds of millions of nanobots increase their volume, which allows the armor to cover his entire body, and also increases their density four fold, severely increasing the armor’s overall defense, by crystallizing the nanobots. Just like everything else in existence, the armor (even in this form) can only take so much damage before it must deactivate or even be destroyed. It takes a lot of damage/etc to shut it down. The increased weight also reduced blow-back from heavy-weapon usage, and also decreases knock-back from being hit by either an energy attack or physical attack, essentially turning him into a plated wall. However, because of the increased size and density of the armor, Edge is weighed down considerably and suffers from a considerable lack in speed. This form isn’t usually used for an extended period of time unless Edge is on the defensive and being backed into a corner.

  • Agility Mode

    Another form used by the Maverick Self-Protection System is its Agility Mode. Just as it says, this form is used to increase Edge’s speed and overall agility, making it more strategic to use this mode against other speed-based fighters. By lowering the density of the nanobots, and thus lowering the overall weight of the armor, Edge is able to travel at much faster speeds than he normally could with the armor on. The nanobots also generate an anti-gravitational field around the armor (Which, in case it isn't blatantly clear, is anti-gravity, meaning, it goes against gravity. Edge can limit the effects so he doesn't just float upwards.), allowing it to defy gravity by decreasing its weight even farther and increasing Edge’s jump distances to much greater heights and lengths than normal. The nanobots also cover themselves with a non-abrasive, anti-friction, anti-stick, material that allows Edge to move in a considerably different way than normal. He can “slide” along the ground for extended distances, move through water much more easily than normal, decrease friction when being dragged or moved along abrasive surfaces, and makes it so some energy attacks (such as Cero or bomb-type Kidō) slide right off of Edge’s armor, meaning if he is hit by a Cero at a tilt or along his side, it will just keep going. This gives him an extra second or two to dodge an energy-based attack (note: does not prevent a Cero from doing damage if hit directly). Attacks that explode on contact, explode on contact. Due to the armors lowered density, the Agility mode decreases Edge’s overall defenses and makes it easier for him to receive damage from physical weapons/attacks.

  • Offense-Physical Mode

    The first of the two offensive-based forms is the Physical Mode. Again, just as it says, this form is based on the physical aspect of Edge, and the changes of this form are tuned to this. This form works by sending nanobots INTO Edge’s body. By surrounding Edge’s muscle tissue, the nanobots expand and also inject a temporary organic liquid into muscle tissue itself. This liquid is a type of “safe-to-use” steroid, and increases his overall muscle mass, making him much stronger. The liquid is self-generating, giving him a near-unlimited amount to use, though he can only increase the amount injected into his muscle tissue at one time, putting a cap on his muscle mass increase. This form is strong enough to allow Edge the ability to easily pick up and toss cars. While Edge calls the steroid safe-to-use, if injected into his system for too long, he will begin to feel the neuro-physiological and neuro-psychological side effects. First, his motor skills will begin to decrease and his reflexes will decrease as well. His vision will also begin to become blurry, as well as force him into an uncontrollable rage after a long period of time, until the system sensors shut down the armor system altogether.

  • Chameleon Mode

    Know how chameleons utilize a form of camouflage to protect themselves from predators? Well, this form works in a similar way and for roughly the same purpose. This form works by having the nanobots cover themselves in ultra-powerful light reflectors that cause Edge to become virtually invisible. Any light that hits the armor is reflected in such a way that makes it so you can see directly through the armor and Edge’s body. It also helps camouflage other parts of Edge, such as his breathing. Not only does it slow down his breathing, but it also decreases the volume of his breathing and the movement of the armor as well (this includes the noises generated when the Edge interacts with outside forces/objects), by emitting an anti-sound wave field around the armor, making it near-impossible to hear anything Edge does (this does not include speech, if Edge wants to speak he can input a command into the visor to allow speech). Another effect of this mode is it gets rid of the “smell” of Edge and the armor (as well as anything he is holding, or whatever the nanobots cover), making it so creatures or people with an acute sense of smell still can’t locate Edge. The disadvantages of this mode aren’t necessarily bad, as they don’t matter much when the invisibility can last for a near-unlimited amount of time (Edge has only tested the form for 10 hours straight). The big downside is if the armor is hit by at least a small amount of energy or receives a certain amount of physical damage, the invisibility turns off to protect the nanobots from being damaged while in this mode. A pebble hitting the armor isn’t enough, as well as being hit by a very weak (or at least compared to Edge) enemy. A bala-level attack from an opponent of equal level is usually enough to deactivate the ""invisibility". This form isn’t usually used in direct combat and is instead used to stalk enemies.

  • Offense-Energy Mode

    The last form programmed into the Maverick Self-Defense System is its second offensive-based mode. This form works in a similar way to its physical counterpart, but also in a rather different way as well. Instead of injecting nanobots into Edge’s system to connect to his muscle tissue, the nanobots become energy conduits and are sent into his body to connect to his spiritual pathways. By acting as conduits, the nanobots can not only send energy from his spiritual reserves directly to his armor for use, but can also act as transformers and multiply the total amount of energy being transmitted. Basically, it increases his spiritual energy by quite a bit, increasing his energy power. The nanobots also confer a better control of energy to Edge, so he can be more precise and skilled when using energy as well. Also, instead of using his energy for other purposes, he can actually concentrate the energy with the nanobots, able to use blasts of energy similar to Cero and Bala, since both are just energy, as well as use it for different purposes. The downside to this is, because a portion of the nanobots are not being used to increase his physical power or defense, he suffers in defense and his endurance decreases considerably, making it so he tires out more quickly and more easily than Edge normally would.

  • HJ001 Technical Visor
    The HJ001 Technical Visor is located in the helmet of the active MSDS. It not only gives Edge access to complete control over the functions of the nanosuit, but also provides extra information such as possible strategic positions, current objectives, etc. The Technical Visor is synchronized to the armor, and provides information on every single nanobot (though reading all of that information at once would be impossible, so it mainly shows information regarding sections of the suit). The A.I. programmed into the visor is called Jeeves by Edge, and is programmed to call itself that as well. The AI provides easy voice-control over the suit for Edge. Other information the visor provides Edge is blood type of any given sample, height, weight (by recording the vibrations made when the person steps/checking to see an objects strain when the person steps on it/comparing muscle mass/size/etc, to the persons height), and energy levels, among other things, of both enemies and allies.

  • Coordinated Flight System (C.F.S)
    The Coordinated Flight System, or C.F.S for short, is what gives Edge flight. This system is also located in his greaves when his M.S.D.S suit is not active, giving him flight when not in combat as well. Like everything in his repertoire, it runs on a combination of his own energy and energy already stored in the device before activation. Basically, it is caused by having the nanobots move at an extremely high rate, and generating an anti-gravitational field. The energy that is emitted from the feet of his armor appears to be a white-ish fire. Sometimes called "Booster Jets", they are built for prolonged flight and can keep him in the air for hours, as well as give allow him to travel at super-sonic speeds. The C.F.S doesnt usually suffer from any malfunctions, though if Edge receives enough damage, they won't be able to be used.


Soul State Evolutionary Powers

Soul State Evolution Stage 1 Appearance:
Edge’s appearance does not change in his Soul State Evolution Stage 1 form.

Soul State Evolution Stage 1 Abilities:

Increased Energy Levels:
In his Soul State Evolution Stage 1, Edge gains a large increase in energy levels, providing him with both more energy to fuel his nanosuit, and also more energy to use for other actions as well. He can use this energy to sustain himself longer (ie provide more endurance), increase his fire power in his Utility Gauntlet or Maverick Self-Defense System.

Increased Physical Levels:
In his Soul State Evolution Stage 1, Edge gains a large increase in physical levels, providing him with increased speed, strength, and defense. Though pretty basic, it can help him quite a bit in combat if his suit isn't getting the job done. He can deal more damage and take more damage as well as outrun more opponents in the form.

Soul State Evolution Stage 2 Appearance:

By this form, Edge gains an aura of energy that surrounds his entire body. The aura is a deep blue, and (depending on the energy output) can even create gusts of wind because of the sheer amount of energy generated.

Soul State Evolution Stage 2 Abilities:

Increased Energy Levels:
In his Soul State Evolution Stage 2, Edge gains another large increase in energy levels, providing him with both more energy to fuel his nanosuit, and also more energy to use for other actions as well. He can use this energy to sustain himself longer (ie provide more endurance), increase his fire power in his Utility Gauntlet or Maverick Self-Defense System. This is a further upgrade from his Soul State Evolution Stage 1.

Increased Physical Levels:
In his Soul State Evolution Stage 2, Edge gains another large increase in physical levels, providing him with increased speed, strength, and defense. Though pretty basic, it can help him quite a bit in combat if his suit isn't getting the job done. He can deal more damage and take more damage as well as outrun more opponents in the form. This is a further upgrade from his Soul State Evolution Stage 1.

Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Appearance:

Edge's aura from his Soul State Evolution Stage 2 form grows even alrger and more powerful. Veins also begin to be more visible on Edge's skin, as well as increase his overall muscle mass. His hair also becomes pointed and begins to stand up, and his eyes begin to glow bright blue, giving him a more menacing appearance than normal.

Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Abilities:

Increased Energy Levels:
In his Soul State Evolution Stage 3, Edge gains a massive increase in energy levels, providing him with both more energy to fuel his nanosuit, and also more energy to use for other actions as well. He can use this energy to sustain himself longer (ie provide more endurance), increase his fire power in his Utility Gauntlet or Maverick Self-Defense System. This is a further upgrade from his Soul State Evolution Stage 2.

Increased Physical Levels:
In his Soul State Evolution Stage 3, Edge gains a massive increase in physical levels, providing him with increased speed, strength, and defense. Though pretty basic, it can help him quite a bit in combat if his suit isn't getting the job done. He can deal more damage and take more damage as well as outrun more opponents in the form. This is a further upgrade from his Soul State Evolution Stage 2.

Nanobot-based Body Reconstruction:
In his final Evolution Stage, Edge gains a brand new ability like no other. Basically, with the energy he obtains in this form and the added control over his nanobots and his own body, he is able to use his nanobots to reconstruct his own body into almost anything imaginable. If he wants his right arm to turn into a gigantic sledge hammer, he can do that with his nanobots. This includes ranged weapons, as he uses his own energy for ammunition, and can create a rifle able to shoot Bala-level bullets at an automatic pace. He can form limbs into objects even larger than cars, but the size of heavy-duty vehicles is pushing it. This gives him many, many new options in combat, and also increases his overall effectiveness in battle. This is relatively simple to understand: he can change his body into guns or melee weapons. Theres no magical extra effects.

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Chi Powers:

Chi Manipulation: Edge Maverick has the innate ability to control his Chi with an astonishing level of skill. He can use it for extremely precise use, such as when hes working on any of his projects, but can also use it to charge the Maverick Self-Defense System, or use his energy as ammunition for any ranged weapons he turns the P.W.G.S into. However, he has no actual chi abilities to speak of.

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Background:

Edge Maverick was born about 29 years ago in Tokyo, Japan, to a well-off family, not rich, but certainly not middle class. Both of Edge's parents were well-known scientists in their prime, but retired over a decade ago, when Edge was about 16 years old in order to pursue their own interests at home. Edge, however, wanted to become a famous and successful scientist because of his parents, so he followed that path as he grew up. Apparently, he inherited his parents' intelligence, because not only did he graduate from high school 3 years earlier than most would, he also got a terminal degree in experimental physics by the time he turned 19.

Edge kept working to get more degrees and become a better scientist and engineer, to not only live up to his parents, but also provide research/inventions that would help the human society as a whole. He helped on countless research projects, as well as leading a few of his own. He was very interested in creating some type of material strong enough to protect people, such as cops, military personnel, etc. After almost half a decade of research, Edge finally found the perfect combination of elements, and created the mighty tibartanium alloy when he was just 25 years old. He used this metal to go on and create many of his modern gadgets, including his Tibartanium Nano Suit, though this wasn't til after he invented his nano-machines, which occurred about two years later, when he also created the Proto-Weapon Generation System, which, at the time, was still a prototype. Recently, Edge has taken a look at the world and decided he wanted to make the world a better place on a larger scale, even if it means fighting the dark forces currently plaguing parts of Earth.

After learning about the Vanguard, Edge became interested in joining them so he would get a better chance to help the world, as that was their primary duty. Though not currently willing to share the secrets of his technology, he has decided to help them in any way that he can, including creating tech just for them, if it means it'll provide them assistance. On a side note, Edge is extremely interested in the group called Force Feedback.

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Edge Maverick [APPROVED, 2-1+]   Tue Apr 24, 2012 8:50 pm

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Edge Maverick [APPROVED, 2-1+]   Sun May 13, 2012 10:30 am



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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Edge Maverick [APPROVED, 2-1+]   Sun Jun 10, 2012 6:39 pm

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Utility Gauntlet

The Utility Gauntlet is worn on Edge's left arm, and is gold in color. It is made of Edge's special alloy Tibartanium, and provides a number of uses. The main use is its energy concentration ability. It allows Edge to gather tremendous amounts of energy into his left hand, and then launch the energy at enemies, giving access to both a beam-like cannon and a bomb-like cannon. The gauntlet also provides an energy shield should Edge be under attack by generating an energy-based shield or a physical shield that attaches to the gauntlet itself. With its shock-absorption technology and its power system, it can dish out a large amount of physical damage if need be. However, it also possesses an innate weakness to electricity-based attacks when its shield is not up.

I noticed this with PWGS as well; you need to specify the max strength of the barriers.

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P.W.G.S.

The P.W.G.S., or Proto-Weapon Generation System, is Edge’s main combat device. Its main function is its ability to transform into any type of weapon Edge requires or has a need for. This includes ranged-weapons. This means if he wants to, he can have it turn into a sword, a shield, a bow, even a rocket launcher or grenade launcher (it automatically generates ammunition which gives it practically unlimited ammo). While Edge is usually seen with it as a sword, he enjoys using it in its Magnum Mode, which is a form of a twin-barreled 40-calibur magnum somewhat resembling a sawed-off shotgun. If attacked, he can have it turn into a shield to protect him, and can even add things to it, such as a pistol or automatic rifle onto the shield. This gives him the advantage of being able to protect himself and go on the offensive as well.

It is made out of a semi-organic, self-replicating, super-cooling, nanobot-based material. Due to its sensor system, if it is in a shield form, millions of micro-sized “shields” increase their density and help protect the shield from damage when it is about to be struck. Also, its self-cooling feature allows it to rapidly fire for extended periods of time without worry of over-heating, increasing its overall fire power. This material is also super-light, being extremely light weight even when in the form of high-powered artillery. Created specifically for his own needs, he has added in the feature of energy-use. By funneling his own energy into the weapons power container, he can unleash attacks using his spiritual energy, adding both fire power and overall damage-output.

An added effect of being self-replicating means it can repair itself should parts of it be damaged or even destroyed. This is one of the crown jewels of Edge’s engineering and scientific career, and guards it with his life (the materials required to build it are not only extremely rare, but also extremely expensive, HOWEVER, he would make a replacement should anything happen to the original). When being carried around, the P.W.G.S is usually in the form of a blade inserted into the sheath on his back.

You need to explain where the nanobots get the energy to self-replicate. I'm supposing that it's from his own energy supplies; and as such I can imagine that it would take quite a lot of energy to repair them, as it is extremely powerful weapon. In addition, you need to either have it change into basic weapons, or specify the types of effects that it can give them, in addition to how strong the barriers can be. Also, the ammo should take up SOME amount of energy.

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Defense Mode

One of its multiple forms is its Defense Mode, which, obviously, is used primarily for defense. When Edge activates this form, the hundreds of millions of nanobots increase their volume, which allows the armor to cover his entire body, and also increases their density four fold, severely increasing the armor’s overall defense, by crystallizing the nanobots. The increased weight also reduced blow-back from heavy-weapon usage, and also decreases knock-back from being hit by either an energy attack or physical attack, essentially turning him into a plated wall. However, because of the increased size and density of the armor, Edge is weighed down considerably and suffers from a considerable lack in speed. This form isn’t usually used for an extended period of time unless Edge is on the defensive and being backed into a corner.

How strong of an attack would it take to break through it?

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Agility Mode

Another form used by the Maverick Self-Protection System is its Agility Mode. Just as it says, this form is used to increase Edge’s speed and overall agility, making it more strategic to use this mode against other speed-based fighters. By lowering the density of the nanobots, and thus lowering the overall weight of the armor, Edge is able to travel at much faster speeds than he normally could with the armor on. The nanobots also generate an anti-gravitational field around the armor, allowing it to defy gravity by decreasing its weight even farther and increasing Edge’s jump distances to much greater heights and lengths than normal. The nanobots also cover themselves with a non-abrasive, anti-friction, anti-stick, material that allows Edge to move in a considerably different way than normal. He can “slide” along the ground for extended distances, move through water much more easily than normal, decrease friction when being dragged or moved along abrasive surfaces, and makes it so some energy attacks (such as Cero or bomb-type Kidō) slide right off of Edge’s armor, meaning if he is hit by a Cero at a tilt or along his side, it will just keep going. This gives him an extra second or two to dodge an energy-based attack (note: does not prevent a Cero from doing damage if hit directly). Due to the armors lowered density, the Agility mode decreases Edge’s overall defenses and makes it easier for him to receive damage from physical weapons/attacks.

Two things with this. First, is it an ANTI gravity device or just a gravity lowerer? Otherwise, whenever you jumped, you'd just keep going up, and up, and up, and up... And second, some attacks explode on contact; you need to at least mention how some will do that.

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Offense-Physical Mode

The first of the two offensive-based forms is the Physical Mode. Again, just as it says, this form is based on the physical aspect of Edge, and the changes of this form are tuned to this. This form works by sending nanobots INTO Edge’s body. By surrounding Edge’s muscle tissue, the nanobots expand and also inject a temporary organic liquid into muscle tissue itself. This liquid is a type of “safe-to-use” steroid, and increases his overall muscle mass, making him much stronger. The liquid is self-generating, giving him a near-unlimited amount to use, though he can only increase the amount injected into his muscle tissue at one time, putting a cap on his muscle mass increase. While Edge calls the steroid safe-to-use, if injected into his system for too long, he will begin to feel the neuro-physiological and neuro-psychological side effects. First, his motor skills will begin to decrease and his reflexes will decrease as well. His vision will also begin to become blurry, as well as force him into an uncontrollable rage after a long period of time, until the system sensors shut down the armor system altogether.

Two things here as well. First, the steroid would most likely be generated by Edge's body; you need to at least mention that. Second, about how strong does it make him? Like how much weight could he lift at base strength, say 400, 500, 600 pounds?

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Chameleon Mode

Know how chameleons utilize a form of camouflage to protect themselves from predators? Well, this form works in a similar way and for roughly the same purpose. This form works by having the nanobots cover themselves in ultra-powerful light reflectors that cause Edge to become virtually invisible. Any light that hits the armor is reflected in such a way that makes it so you can see directly through the armor and Edge’s body. It also helps camouflage other parts of Edge, such as his breathing. Not only does it slow down his breathing, but it also decreases the volume of his breathing and the movement of the armor as well (this includes the noises generated when the Edge interacts with outside forces/objects), by emitting an anti-sound wave field around the armor, making it near-impossible to hear anything Edge does (this does not include speech, if Edge wants to speak he can input a command into the visor to allow speech). Another effect of this mode is it gets rid of the “smell” of Edge and the armor (as well as anything he is holding, or whatever the nanobots cover), making it so creatures or people with an acute sense of smell still can’t locate Edge. The disadvantages of this mode aren’t necessarily bad, as they don’t matter much when the invisibility can last for a near-unlimited amount of time (Edge has only tested the form for 10 hours straight). The big downside is if the armor is hit by at least a small amount of energy or receives a certain amount of physical damage, the invisibility turns off to protect the nanobots from being damaged while in this mode. A pebble hitting the armor isn’t enough, as well as being hit by a very weak (or at least compared to Edge) enemy. This form isn’t usually used in direct combat and is instead used to stalk enemies.

What is the minimum amount of force exerted on the armor for it to break? Second, where does it get its energy to run all those ultra-powerful pieces of equipment?

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Offense-Energy Mode

The last form programmed into the Maverick Self-Defense System is its second offensive-based mode. This form works in a similar way to its physical counterpart, but also in a rather different way as well. Instead of injecting nanobots into Edge’s system to connect to his muscle tissue, the nanobots become energy conduits and are sent into his body to connect to his spiritual pathways. By acting as conduits, the nanobots can not only send energy from his spiritual reserves directly to his armor for use, but can also act as transformers and multiply the total amount of energy being transmitted. Basically, it increases his spiritual energy by quite a bit, increasing his energy power. The nanobots also confer a better control of energy to Edge, so he can be more precise and skilled when using energy as well. Also, instead of using his energy for other purposes, he can actually concentrate the energy with the nanobots, able to use blasts of energy similar to Cero and Kidō, as well as use it for different purposes. The downside to this is, because a portion of the nanobots are not being used to increase his physical power or defense, he suffers in defense and his endurance decreases considerably, making it so he tires out more quickly and more easily than Edge normally would.

What is the maximum multiplication this method can provide? And secondly, you compare it to Kidō; does that mean he can make Kidō-like attacks? If so, you will need to describe them. If not, then simply relate it to Cero.

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HJ001 Technical Visor
The HJ001 Technical Visor is located in the helmet of the active MSDS. It not only gives Edge access to complete control over the functions of the nanosuit, but also provides extra information such as possible strategic positions, current objectives, etc. The Technical Visor is synchronized to the armor, and provides information on every single nanobot (though reading all of that information at once would be impossible, so it mainly shows information regarding sections of the suit). The A.I. programmed into the visor is called Jeeves by Edge, and is programmed to call itself that as well. The AI provides easy voice-control over the suit for Edge. Other information the visor provides Edge is blood type of any given sample, height, weight, and energy levels, among other things, of both enemies and allies.

1. LolJeeves
2. How does it measure their weight? I can understand how it does everything else but that.

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Coordinated Flight System (C.F.S)
The Coordinated Flight System, or C.F.S for short, is what gives Edge flight. This system is also located in his greaves when his M.S.D.S suit is not active, giving him flight when not in combat as well. Basically, it is caused by having the nanobots move at an extremely high rate, and generating an anti-gravitational field. The energy that is emitted from the feet of his armor appears to be a white-ish fire. Sometimes called "Booster Jets", they are built for prolonged flight and can keep him in the air for hours, as well as give allow him to travel at super-sonic speeds. The C.F.S doesnt usually suffer from any malfunctions, though if Edge receives enough damage, they won't be able to be used.

Again, what energy source do they use to make themselves run?

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Nanobot-based Body Reconstruction:
In his final Evolution Stage, Edge gains a brand new ability like no other. Basically, with the energy he obtains in this form and the added control over his nanobots and his own body, he is able to use his nanobots to reconstruct his own body into almost anything imaginable. If he wants his right arm to turn into a gigantic sledge hammer, he can do that with his nanobots. This includes ranged weapons, as he uses his own energy for ammunition, and can create a rifle able to shoot Bala-level bullets at an automatic pace. This gives him many, many new options in combat, and also increases his overall effectiveness in battle.

Same deal as with PWGS; can the things made be given effects, or are just bland? And also, what is the maximum size that he can manipulate the nanobots into?


That's the stuff that needs fixing. Have fun.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Edge Maverick [APPROVED, 2-1+]   Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:28 pm

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Edge Maverick [APPROVED, 2-1+]   Sun Jun 10, 2012 8:28 pm

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Edge Maverick [APPROVED, 2-1+]   Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:14 am



This has been put into Archives!
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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Edge Maverick [APPROVED, 2-1+]   Mon Dec 17, 2012 4:16 pm


Taking these out of Archived and back into Approved!

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Edge Maverick [APPROVED, 2-1+]   Thu Sep 12, 2013 10:46 pm

As part of my little clean up of the application section i will be moving this app to archives due to member leaving. ask staff to move it back to approve or refer to This Thread
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