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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Hizaki Yuudeshi (W.I.P)-[Major Revamp]   Fri Jun 29, 2012 9:21 am




» M A N I A C ' S M A I N T H E M E «


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    - T H E I N T R O A N D S T A R T O F O N E ' S V I S O R E D




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    » Name: Hizaki Yuudeshi
    » Titles: The Dark Shell - Self-Given Nickname
    The Maniac - When he switch/release with his inner hollow
    The Speed Maniac - A nickname gained because of his speed
    The Strength Maniac - A nicname gained because of his power and sheer strength.
    » Appearance Age: His appearance resembles to a teenager/adult that aged between 18-25.
    » True Age: Previously 410 as his true age last year in 2411 (2011), Now his age increased by 1 to 411 as his current true age in the year of 2412 (2012) of this current year.
    » Gender: Hizaki is always a MALE. No matter how much you look at him, he is always a male from his very hair, to his very toe. How do you expect him to be a female? Spells? Although that might be possible.
    Affiliation/Rank: Yuudeshi Clan.
    Vizard Corps.
    Lieutenant Colonel Of Sector One, The Internal Affairs.

    » Appearance Description: Hizaki's looks, his appearance is like that of a one young man, who would stand tall and proud in the Yuudeshi family. His expression was nothing more but a change between his moods, either he gets serious, or he would turn into a playful yet laid-off person depending how busy or free he is. His clothes were like any normal human would wear, except his clothes serves different purposes. The long sleeves of his clothes actually hid one special bracelet on his right arm. When he rolls up his right sleeve, you can see a bracelet, which is made of a special reishi that are purely made the bracelet into a pure gold. The bracelet locks itself tightly on his arm. It was specially designed by Hizaki Yuudeshi himself, with some special tools that will be stated.

    If you look closer at the bracelet, it has a red crystal that would always glow. The bracelet cannot be removed, no matter how much strength that person put in, even kenpachi's strength could have a hard time taking it off. The bracelet would always be hidden at the right side of his sleeve. As the appearance of the bracelet was said, it is made from special reishi that made the bracelet to turn into a pure gold with a red crystal that always glows on the bracelet. Weird, ancient symbols can be seen under the bracelet, that might serve something special if it can be red by any specialist.

    Hizaki's hair wasn't the most dissapointing, but the most satisfying part he had. His hair wasn't mixed with black and white like Zin's one, but a pure, complete black on his hair. If you could look at the history, his hair was previously completely white before the hollowfication/unknown infection got him. It was purely made of white, no fakes at all. He was born with that kind of hair, until the day he was infected for the first time, wihout any traces of him knowing. His hair just simply, and slowly turns black, and slowly. Just a month passed by, his hair would be a complete, pure black. The black hair might be the cause and influence from his inner hollow. If his inner hollow ever dies, his hair would switch back to its right color and shape, its pure, white hair. Though the black hair wasn't as dissapointing as it is, as long as it is either a pure black or a pure white, nothing more.

    Hizaki's always place his dual Zanpakutō seperately during duels/fight against any of his opponents. The Fire Element of his Zanpakutō will always be placed at his left waist, while The Dark Element would always be placed at his right waist, due both of his hands had its habit to weild the same sword with different strength. His right hand seems to grip his Zanpakutō tighter than gripping his other Zanpakutō at his left hand.

    His Height is almost as dissapointing as it is, to be a few inches shorter than the one he admired, his brother, Zin Yuudeshi. His height is about 5 feet 7 Inches tall. How dissapointing is it? Hizaki hardly even grow taller, as he remains the same, old height ever since from 2009 until the current day. His height never grows, not even a little centimeter that has ever increased in his whole lifetime. He never really checked the cause that never increased his height for so many years, even if he cared and checked the cause, what can he do about it anyway?

    Hizaki's eyes were a bit.. special than any other of his siblings. His blue eyes weren't like of that one ordinary person could have. His eyes was almost like a human eyeball scope. His eyes were capable of looking clearing about a few feets away from his current position. It was like a cyber eye-made eyes from the Cybermind shop, but surprisingly, his eyes were nothing more but an eyeball from a human flesh with nothing installed. As his eyes was once checked before, and nobody ever seen him entering the Cybermind shop, not even KJ, who was the owner of the Cybermind. This "speciality" remains a mystery in the Yuudeshi Family but for Hizaki, this "speciality" might be the cause from his inner hollow.

    His weight, you don't wanna know how normal it is. He may look skinny, but do not underestimate him because of his weight because it's not something funny to laugh at his normal-like weight. He weights 135 pounds (one hundred thirty five pounds) given by his height and the amount of time and effort of training he did currently and previously. He looks pretty thin and short for his appearance, but you could see some of his muscles on both of his arms if you could see him shirtless. He is mostly seen to be always wearing his shihakusho, including the black belt he is wearing. He also includes the smooth coat that he secretly made to temporarily hides his spiritual pressure until he takes it off. Though it looks like an ordinary coat that any humans could wear.

    His Reiatsu Color is mixed up with black and orange (flame-like) reiatsu that can be visible enough to see if he releases enough of his spiritual power. The mixture of the reiatsu(s) is mostly manifested by his inner hollow, who possesses the power to control any darkness that is within range. Because Hizaki weilds both zanpakutos', His inner hollow and his spiritual power would mix into one, creating a spiritual pressure/power that is enough to be mixed into a powerful, long-lasting energy. This was influenced from his inner hollow.

    » Appearance Picture:
    Spoiler:
     

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    The Surpressing Bracelet: Or A.K.A The Release Bracelet. A unique bracelet forged by Hizaki Yuudeshi himself when he found out that there is a hollow inside him, as simple, inner hollow. Hizaki did not reach the level where he could actually overcome and take a full control and trust from his inner hollow, that is why this bracelet was made, hidden on his right arm. Wihout this bracelet's sealing ability, Hizaki would've gone berserk by now and turns into a real hollow.

    The tools and material used on the bracelet, was simply a special reishi that he found in a cave during 2008, as it was found before War With Nero during the year of 2009. When he went back to the same location where it found the cave, it was gone. What and where is this cave coming from? That question remains a real mystery around soul society, even to the Yuudeshi Family. He kept the special reishi inside a container that he specially made to trap any reishi that might dissapear if left for too long. It was kept until the year of 2010, it was after the War With Nero ended. He forged it after he fought against his inner hollow for the first time, after he was injured by the Adjuchas-class hollow in the past.

    Made, crafted with the special reishi which is nameless, able to form itself into a shape of a bracelet. It is also mixed with his own blood and spiritual power, to double and power up the bracelet. With its power doubled up, it is powerful enough to prevent Hizaki himself from going berserk nor letting his inner hollow out. If his inner hollow, Moon, insisted to switch souls/places wihout Hizaki's will to remove the bracelet, the red crystal, which was placed on the bracelet, will glow brightly. What it does is not really sure, but it increases the power of the seal and becomes impenetratable for his inner hollow to force its way out. If it still forces its way out no matter what, the crystal itself, will glow brighter, increasing the power even more and restrains his inner hollow from moving, until it has calmed down.

    Removing the bracelet can be a serious matter. Once removed, he could switch souls/places temporarily with his inner hollow, for a short period of time. Instead of summoning the mask himself, the mask appears itself during the soul switch. His inner hollow, Moon, can prevent the mask from forming itself on his face. Which then, Moon, gets the same power, strength and any abilities at its normal stage. But if Moon decides to form the hollow mask, its power triples, including the abilities' strength. Depending on what tier he is on, that is how long it last, but Moon gets 2 times faster the hollow mask dissapears, means if the person's mask duration is 8 post, it becomes 4 post for Moon, because its power and strength is tripled (3 times the power). The power and strength of the ability (and himself) is tripled because Moon is a hollow himself, donning the mask triples his power while Hizaki's power is only doubled.

    With the bracelet still on, Hizaki can actually uses his mask even his bracelet surpresses his inner hollow. Because Hizaki made it a surpression bracelet, he customize it, to make it able to be shifted its seal strength by either weakening it or make it stronger, giving him the ability to wear his hollow mask. Hizaki couldn't actually weaken it completely, because his bracelet doesn't allows that unless he removes it. Tuning up the seal to be stronger can be only powered by 2 times, while the crystal powers it up by 3 times. The hollow mask actually doubles his power, instead of tripling it unlike his inner hollow.

    The Speed Maniac: His speed is really good, but not as good as his other brother, Shadin Yuudeshi. The speed is actually inherited from his inner hollow, thus giving him so much speed that is able to compare against any levels. His speed isn't as good as the one he called "The God Speed" which he called Shadin Yuudeshi using the nickname, because the speed of shadin was so fast, that he couldn't even able to calculate and observe his movings. As for Hizaki, because the speed was inherited from his inner hollow, he can move in a fast pace, almost able to catch up to a master shunpo/sonido with a simple running. He hardly depends on his shunpo a lot, mostly focusing on dodging attacks using his own bare legs to avoid any incoming attacks. He only uses his shunpo skills, if he is being caught in the corner or either in emergency use since he doesn't like to use shunpo a lot.

    The Strength Maniac: His strength is enough to be related to Kenpachi's strength, but more stronger. The strength is not also inherited from his inner hollow, but this time, it is inherited from his Zanpakutō spirit, giving him the strength to be enough to rival kenpachi's strength, which he usually uses for hand-to-hand combat, and he mostly uses during sword combat. The boost of strength gives him an advantage to take down his enemy with his sheer power boost. Although his height is shorter than most of his brothers and looks kinda thin, underestimating his strength won't be funny at all. Although, his strength doesn't have that extreme power enough to actually rival radioactive's strength, since he requires radioactive energy and power to gain enough strength to relate to him, but he does not have the requirements nor he can do the requirements.

    Kidō: Hizaki Yuudeshi is your ordinary everyday life average Kidō user. His skill in Kidō is just normal, like any other Kidō users. He wasn't famous in Kidō nor an expert in all Kidos. Surprisingly, he was able to use and make his own custom Kidos. But able to use Kidō's up to #50, which is as average as it is. He usually uses Kidō just to 'buy' some time or just to make things 'easier' for both himself and his opponent. But using Kidō to 'buy' some time for himself or his partners to escape is the best way to avoid endangering himself and any of his partners. As again, Hizaki wasn't much fan of a Kidō user, because he relies mostly on speed and strength, nothing else that what he aimed for, Power that can rival Zin Yuudeshi.

    Shunpo/Hoho: Basically, He is a master on Hoho, not because of the training, because it was naturally inherited from his inner hollow, who is specialized in speeds. Because the inheritance from his inner hollow, his skill in shunpo is enormously high, and impressively fast, but not as fast as his other brother in Yuudeshi Family, Shadin Yuudeshi, the one who he called the "God Of Speed", nickname given by Hizaki himself because he once envy his great potential in speed, wanting to be like him as well like Zin Yuudeshi too, this is when his inner hollow starts to exist within him, and that is also when he first gained his Zanpakutō. His strong admire and strong will to become like both Shadin and Zin Yuudeshi, this is how he masters shunpo quickly after the inheritance from his inner hollow.

    Cero/Bala: On extremely rare cases, he hardly even depends on both of them, giving him quite a beginner skill on both cero and bala because he hardly uses any of them. Only during in the time of need, or either verge of death, or any near-death situation, that is only when he uses Cero or Bala by that time of need. Even his inner hollow thinks the same way as Hizaki Yuudeshi, preferring to fight with skills instead.

    Expert Swordsmanship: Although Hizaki's skill wasn't like any master users, Hizaki can actually perform great skills with his swords during combat. Because Hizaki has no skill nor Knowledge on Hakuda, he always brings his Zanpakutō anywhere with him, as a self-defense weapon. He escapes when it comes to hand-to-hand combat, because he has no skills completely about it.
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    » Personality: (Please write AT LEAST two paragraph's on their personality.)

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    » Zanpakutō Name: Tsuin (Twin, Originally the name of his Zanpakutō, the fire element), Tsuki (Originally the name of his inner hollow). Sōtsuki (Twin Moon).

    The reason and the cause of these names are because Twin and Moon, weilds different purposes and power and dissagrees to each other's opinions and purposes, thus seperating themselves from one blade, into two blades, resulting Hizaki to have dual Zanpakutō. If you were confused about the name, because his Zanpakutō seperated, Hizaki had a name for the seperated Zanpakutō, as for Twin Moon. Twin as for his fire elemental Zanpakutō and Moon as for his inner hollow, Twin Moon as for their combination of their names. During bankai, Only that time, Twin and Moon would work together, as a team.

    » Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance:
    Spoiler:
     
    His Zanpakutō spirit, resembles to that one of a young feminine woman, which has the appearance of a woman that he admired before at the human world, except he has already lost that interest for a very long time, but that face, will always be in front of him.

    Twin looked like a feminine woman with a suit of armor made up of reishi. It is nearly unbreakable but it still be able to break depend on the person's strength. Her suit of armor is heavy, but durable one. She stands 5 feet 5 inches tall, barely just 2 inches shorter than Hizaki Yuudeshi's height. Whenever Hizaki enters her inner world, he would always tease her height first before starting any kinds of serious training. Her height made him feel ease for not worrying about anyone who is taller than him, including Zin Yuudeshi's height that is a few inches taller than him, which he disliked about it.

    Her weight was quite surprising for Hizaki. She weights the same as Hizaki Yuudeshi although she was shorter than him. Probably she ate something fatty that made her weight increased. This weight, however, angers Twin because she had the same weight as Hizaki, which made her feel fat in front of him. With her suit of armor on, that makes her 2 times heavier than his weight, because the suit of armor is typically much more heavier because it was made from a durable steel made from reishi, which looked more realistic although it was originally made from reishi itself.

    Her hair, was silky and pure white. It was long, smooth and yet, each time Hizaki looks at it, he wishes that his hair would be like hers, since most Yuudeshi family members have white hairs, except for a few ones in the family including him. He wanted to be like them, but his hair, mostly a true dissapointment, because his hair wasn't white and cool.. and stuff.

    » Zanpakutō Spirit Personality: (What type of personality does your Zanpakutō Spirit have?)

    » Inner World: His Zanpakutō spirit, and his inner hollow, shows a completely different world. Because they split, depends on Hizaki whom he train with, either against/with his inner hollow, or against/with his Zanpakutō spirit. Just depending what his mind was choosing.. He can actually fuse both the inner world into one, if he decides to train with both, but things can get a little awkward if he actually fuse the two inner world into one, having his inner hollow and Zanpakutō spirit train him. Things gets awkward, turning from a training, into an arguement between his Zanpakutō spirit and inner hollow. Fusing both inner worlds is actually an extremely rare occurance, which Hizaki has the given ability to fuse both of the worlds, giving him 2 times tougher the training, 2 times waste of time due to the arguements between the two once fused. Though it is impossible for both to train him at once, due to complications. Though his Zanpakutō spirit and inner hollow's inner world was pretty much of a unique place that hardly anyone could have.

    Twin's Inner World:
    Spoiler:
     
    Twin's inner world, was really, a hot place. The crust of dried lava on the ground, can actually emit a really hot floor, giving Hizaki a hard time to fight because he had to move his legs around just to avoid the burning pain of the dried, burning crust. The weird thing is, even if you see the crack, the dried up lava crust won't melt into a burning, liquid lava and it stays the same. The solified lava would actually starts to break into a liquid, which burns painfully if anyone actually falls in. That only happens when Hizaki gets stronger, and more 'evolved'. There is nothing more special about this place other than the hot, boiling heat from the laval crust and the hot, burning weather that the solified lava emits.

    Although the heat is pretty high, Hizaki and his Zanpakutō spirit, Twin, can actually breathe easily wihout any difficulties. The cause of this might be that both of them are so used to the heat and the place that they forgotten the heat actually also emits extreme heat that has carbon dioxide and poisonous gas, although the gas could effect them, Hizaki and Twin doesn't seem to really care about the situation, instead, they care for the training to be stronger, tougher and more durable.

    Moon's Inner World:
    Spoiler:
     
    His inner hollow's world is completely different as his Zanpakutō's spirit, as his inner world is a very wide field, or for simple, its an endless roads of field, with hardly any trees around, so that it would be a no hiding battlefield with Hizaki's inner hollow. The clouds at the sky would be weird, as its shape and colors changes randomly to whatever it could.

    The field is wide enough for Hizaki and Moon to run wherever they could, since the field was so wide and endless that gives Hizaki the advantage to increase his speed when trying to run or use shunpo/sonido during the duel/training/race at the inner world of his inner hollow. Nothing more special other than what we called "The Training Field".

    Fused Inner World:
    Spoiler:
     
    The fused inner world, that is what his inner hollow and Zanpakutō spirit, and including himself, Hizaki Yuudeshi called the inner world as. Since the sky was reddish, emitting boiling temperature wihout any trace, and darkness around the entire forest, which he can hardly see anything, but as time passes, his vision gets better in the dark. The special thing about this place that it is fused with both inner worlds, allowing his Zanpakutō spirit and inner hollow to appear in the same time, same place because their worlds' was fused, entirely.

    This is what Hizaki specially nicknamed this inner world, "The Ultimate Training World", because he would be trained by two ppl itself, His inner hollow, Moon and His Zanpakutō Spirit, Twin. This 'extremely rare' occurance only happens on special occasions. Because its effect and ability has the same type of effect like Tenshintai, used by Urahara, that gives the person the ability to learn bankai in just three days. But this inner world fusion is different, because he has achieved bankai, even if he uses this, it serves no purpose, except it was only used to learn a special ability or what he called "Dangerous yet extremely effective" abilities during entering this fused inner world. For an example, if Hizaki wants to learn an ability, that is far more harder to learn than learning just that simple ability, both inner world fuses in his mind as he enters.

    Hizaki has a total 1 day/24 houra (real time) to forcibly learn that one ability/technique that could greatly improve Hizaki's skill. That is what this inner world does. The fused inner world is not stable because it was fused from different dimensions of his inner hollow and Zanpakutō spirit, thus, the fused inner world only has its limited time to use. This fused inner world was so unstable that only Hizaki can only use it per month (real time) after being used. Forcing to use the inner world to fuse and learn another technique wihout waiting for the cool down time to end, results can be very serious. You don't wanna know what will happen if he does it.

    Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance:
    This one remains a great mystery in the Yuudeshi Family. He was unlike any of her brothers, one was with great speed, another one was with great endurance whom he admired, and the one who had it mixed. Unlike Zin Yuudeshi, who weild a single Zanpakutō, but with great endurance in the Yuudeshi family, Hizaki's Zanpakutō was different than the ones they had in the family. While Zin Yuudeshi controls his inner hollow, shared powers with Zanpakutō spirit, he was different from that point as well. His inner hollow never liked his Zanpakutō spirit, thus, seperating their powers with different abilities and seperating their inner worlds, becoming dual Zanpakutō with different powers.

    One, which was twin, the fire element of his Zanpakutō, more stronger, slower, offensive version of Hizaki Yuudeshi, that is how his Zanpakutō spirit developed and hidden within his Zanpakutō before he discovers that his Zanpakutō was no mere ordinary blade.

    While Moon, Dark element of his other Zanpakutō, faster, but weaker version, represents the dark/other side of him. His inner hollow always thought that strength serves nothing more than to a broken, useless, weak Zanpakutō. Speed means everything to Moon, because one's great speed, can overcome the opponent, thus, leaving an opening when the person is caught off-guard with the speed. That's why Moon chose the side of speed.

    Twin and Moon has different opinions and goals, that is why they never became one and combined their powers, resulting the one blade splits into two blades that serves different purposes. Although this was a rumor, the black Zanpakutō, originally belongs to Twin, who used to weild dual Zanpakutō herself, until his inner hollow existed within hizaki, that is when his inner hollow, Moon and Twin uses different Zanpakutō. The black Zanpakutō, wasn't created by his inner hollow. It was originally his Zanpakutō spirit's.

    The Left Zanpakutō (Manifested from his Zanpakutō Spirit who was named Twin, Fire Element):
    Spoiler:
     
    His left Zanpakutō is just an ordinary katana, with an orange hilt. Its length is just that one of an ordinary katana that a shinigami would use.

    The Right Zanpakutō (Manifested from his Inner Hollow who was named Moon, Dark Element):
    Spoiler:
     
    His right Zanpakutō is also an ordinary katana, with a black hilt. Instead of his right Zanpakutō manifested by his Zanpakutō spirit, the Zanpakutō was originally manifested from his inner hollow. This Zanpakutō appears for the first time when Hizaki was infected by an unknown infection that cause his inner hollow to form within him, resulting that another Zanpakutō was manifested. Unsurprisingly, his inner hollow and Zanpakutō spirit rarely work together. They only do, when the time calls for it. The black katana was only represent as the dark/other side of Hizaki Yuudeshi, nothing else was special about it.

    » Release Phrase: Yaite Musabori, Sōgetsu. (Burn and Devour, Twin Moon)

    » Shikai Appearance: Hizaki's appearance remains unchanged, except for his arms. Both of his arms were entirely protected by gauntlets, including brassard, which is an armor that protects the (entire) arm. The armor wasn't just a simple, ordinary human-made protection. The gauntlets and the 'brassard' was made up of reishi, preventing the armor and the gauntlet from suffering any damage during shikai, because his zanpakutos' generates reiatsu in shikai. The 'brassard' and the gauntlet also protects Hizaki's arm from getting injured that could suffer and take more damage than hizaki's own body could. If you could look closely, the armor and the gauntlet would release endless amount of reiatsu, it's almost like the armor has spiritual energy itself (although it has because it was made from reishi).

    The Left Zanpakutō (Fire Element, Twin):
    Spoiler:
     
    His left Zanpakutō, was surprisingly, more bigger and larger size than his right Zanpakutō during shikai. Twin does more damage but much of a slower speed, due to his weight and size that would gives Hizaki a hard time to swing around it like some kind of a feather. The size, strength and the power of his left Zanpakutō, twin, represents the offensive side of his Zanpakutō spirit. The Zanpakutō is much more bigger than his other Zanpakutō, which mainly light, does lesser damage but given faster reaction time and speed.

    The heat of the greatsword, twin, wasn't as hot as the sun, because Hizaki would not be able to handle of its heat. But, his Zanpakutō's heat, can produce enough heat like that of a lava from a volcanic eruption. Unsurprisingly that his Zanpakutō, twin, never cools down under 1, 300 (One Thousand Three Hundred) degrees nor its heat ever increased above 2, 000 (Two Thousand) degrees. The heat, the power, stays the same as it should be. The heat of his Zanpakutō, twin, in shikai would range between 1,300 to 2,000 degrees Fahrenheit (704 to 1093 degrees Celsius). The heat and power of his left Zanpakutō, twin, is unseemingly random but its heat and power changes depending on how many power left inside Hizaki Yuudeshi, but still remains a mystery about it, because of its random change of power and heat, anyone can hardly calculate its power.

    The Right Zanpakutō (Dark Element, Moon):
    Spoiler:
     
    Just imagine if black energy just covers the entire blade..
    His Zanpakutō, in shikai, was somehow thinner and smaller in size than his other Zanpakutō, twin. It seems to be lighter than the big one. The small size and its light weight actually gives Hizaki an advantage to react any incoming attacks faster. As again, the black Zanpakutō, represents the other/dark side of hizaki, as in, his inner hollow's Zanpakutō.

    Inside the blade, it is a pure dark energy, you cannot see the inside, no matter how much light you put into it, because, it was PURE darkness. The weird thing about the pure dark energy, is that it also generates dark electricity, that can shock anything it touches (excluding any non-metal items and some metallic items like Zanpakutō, high-quality metals and etc). Once shocked, it does nothing since his inner hollow, Moon, once said the dark-generated electrical energy was just for "fun" and its only for its appearance.

    » Shikai Abilities: Both of his Zanpakutō shares 'a few' of its ability together by fusing it, resulting more powerful version of both of them. But then, both of them does different abilities depending which 'released' Zanpakutō he uses during shikai. Either one of them, or both of them.

    The Left 'Released' Zanpakutō (Twin, Fire Elemental):

    Bright Moon: It works like Ichigo's Getsuga Tensho but its effect and various of its stuff is much more different than his. Unlike Getsuga Tensho that is just simply highly concentrated, Hizaki was able to release the slash, in its elemental attack, which water cannot put it out no matter how much was it. Although it can be stopped by tier 2 - tier 0 because it wasn't concentrated enough to take down tier 1 or above easily, and that's where his limit to concentrate it reaches at the point.

    Hizaki could release the slash, far more concentrated, more powerful but slower, enables his opponents to have an advantage of dodging it much more easier. Any speeds above adept level, can just simply dodge it through sidesteps. Any guards that are caught off, can result a painful cut if caught by the slash of higher concentrate energy. Deals damage to Tier 6 - Tier 5 a fatal, massive damage, because their weak, untrained, unevolved body could not handle such highly concentrate energy slash. While Tier 4 - Tier 3, Only can be dealt with only an average, moderate damage, because of their 'trained', more 'evolved' and more 'pain enduring' can withstand that such concentrated slash. Tier 2 - Tier 1 only receives small damage (small wounds etc), because their body 'near or at' captain level can receive more damage because of their highly durable, and 'pain enduring' body that is highly evolved at that level.

    While Tier 0, receives almost from little-to-nothing, because their extremely strong body that is almost more than just a captain level shinigami. Anyone at that point of Tier 0 can feel nothing, because their body could withstand such great concentrated energy slash could feel like its tickling their body. Hizaki can release it 3 times, before 2 post cool down are required to be able to reuse it again. The more he uses, the longer the cool down gets:
    (For example, the first three release of Bright Slash was made, it needed to cool down for 2 post to be able to reuse again. For the second 3 releases of bright slash, his energy is sapped by each concentrated slash he made, thus, decreasing his amount of energy and increases the cool down, as a result, 3 post cool down after 2nd three releases of bright slash ability was made. As it means that every three releases are made after cool down, the cool down time will be added 1 by 1, a total 10 cool downs, 29 releases of this ability, will almost completely sapped from his body, as a result, he will either have to continue let his energy sap away and doing more release, and die, or withdraw himself away from battle, and be considered as that he lost the duel.)

    Crusted Lava Shield: A simple sheild made out of a solified lava. If Hizaki intends to use this ability, all it is required is that he has to slash a line in front of him, almost 100 - 500 meters long. Once a line was made, a wave of hot, boiling lava would erupt from the ground, strong enough to reach 2 times the length/height than Hizaki Yuudeshi's height, thus, it solifies when it does. It can actually block both Hadō and Bakudo, up to #40. It is quite a surprising fact that it can actually block bakudo, by using the sheild to reflect/get caught by the bakudo instead of Hizaki himself being the one to be done with it.

    It can last for 1 - 2 post total, because it wasn't that much powerful. 2 post cool down. The solified lava turns into dust once its time limit has reached, then the dust would would liquify itself and finally dissapearing from the ground with a small trace of burned ground.

    Phase Seal: A prison/seal that only works when all three lines are connected/had a contact (probably the person's body parts that is connected with anything(shoes, rings, clothes and etc) with the person. If one of the lines fails to reach the person, this phase will be submitted as 'failed'. This Phase is quite powerful, able to seal/trap a captain level shinigami that is a Tier 1 ONLY! It is listed below, with chances of trapping each tier:

    [Tier 6 - Tier 5] = 95% - 89% Trapping/Sealing Possibility

    [Tier 4 - Tier 3] = 80% to 51% Trapping/Sealing Possibility

    [Tier 2 - Tier 1] = 50% - 1% Trapping/Sealing Possibility

    [Tier 0 - Tier 0-1] = Absolute No Chance

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    The ability actually have a unique seal, mostly takes a really long time to use, recommended to be used in 1 v 1 duel. Using it events or 2 v 2 or more battles can be resulted no chance at all no matter what tier the person is, because this ability cannot receive ANY interruptions at all. It could reach almost 5 feets away (mentioning the lines).

    Once a hole has been made by his Zanpakutō, he has to let it stay at its rightful place. Three orange lines would appear to be moving out from the hole, crawling its way towards the designated target. It moves quite fast, almost at the speed of an advanced shunpo. Anyone who has speed of master and above, this ability can be COMPLETELY avoided by any master speed users. As long as anyone has any Master in General Speed, Shunpo or Sonido, it is entirely possible to avoid. Those has the same level as the line's speed, it is possible to avoid, depending how much skill the person has placed on. There are two ways to stop the lines from moving although it did not reach its limit:

    1) Using High Level Bakudo to trap the line at its position (It is possible).
    2) Destroy the path where the lines have to go through (Buys some time for the lines to go across the destroyed path)

    Once all three lines has connected with the person, it creates three pillars and an invisible barrier that blocks any escape path the person would try to run to, giving the person almost impossible to get out. For Tier 0s' , The barrier can be weak enough to be broken with sheer power, because the barrier was made to be strong enough to withstand any attacks from tiers up to Tier 1. Tier 0 cannot be withstand, because at shikai, the barrier won't be powerful enough to stop any attacks from Tier 0. Even at bankai, Stopping Tier 0 attacks are barely impossible.

    The Pillars would form three walls, that creates a triangle shape of wall flames, including the top of the opponent who is trapped within. The seal makes sure that nothing escapes from the prison, not even a single bit of an escape route, unfortunately, because the ability wasn't a complete version of Phase Seal, a small escape route that is found underground. It is the only route to escape since fire cannot be placed underground (yet). It is given 2 post time for the person to fully escape from the seal before the 2nd command is made.

    The 2nd command is either the release or the destruct. If the release phrase was said, the person who was trapped inside the seal will be released, not at the same location, the seal will chain the person and then teleporting the person to any random location, the random location would be mostly the space, since nobody was there at all.

    If it was destruct phrase, as simple as it is, the inside explodes like the one of a nuclear bomb, this does a heavy damage to all tiers, except Tier 0, a small damage is dealt. Once if any either both of the phrase are said, this ability will be done. As again, It is extremely recommended that to be not used in any events as it will be a complete failure no matter how many attempts he tries, because it is highly possible that he will be interrupted. Even if he is not interrupted, it is not possible to finish the whole ability. If interrupted, the ability would turn unstable, causing the lines to explode, including the Zanpakutō that will also explode. This ability can cause anyone, including himself to be hurt. This explosion will cause a heavy damage to anyone, also to his Zanpakutō that can be near broken after taking an explosion from it.

    This ability is only a one-way trip ability, to be only able to use under special circumstances. Once per thread. Using this ability can be extremely risky, and it is only safe when it is used at the right time. When's the right time is almost anytime. Only Hizaki Yuudeshi have to observe the surroundings before anything goes wrong.

    Burned Bomb: An ability that Hizaki could summon a meteorite from the sky. Although it looks like any other normal meteorites, its effect is almost like a burning fire that burns through your very skin. Once the meteorite was summoned, you can see the flames that is ignited inside, burning like an endless amounts of fire that can hardly be extinguished even at the outer space. It drops really slow, it takes almost 3 - 6 post for the meteor to drop, and then finally explode. Tier 2 - Tier 0 can actually stop the meteor from moving, or sending it to another location. Destroying only makes things worse. It doubles the blast radius and damage if its destroyed by a certain player.

    There is another way of destroying it wihout any double damage, explosions and such. Once it is destroyed, the person can either sheild the surroundings to prevent the explosion from expanding that could harm others by its blast or compress it if the person can actually manipulate wind or control gravity. If it actually exploded after crashing the ground, the area of 200 meters within can be caught by the explosion. Full Damage (Massive/Fatal to all tiers) to whoever stands at the middle of the explosion. Half Damage (Moderate/Average Damage, 100 meters away [in the explosion] from the middle of the explosion that deals maximum damage). Quarter Damage (Anyone stands 150 - 199 meters away [within the explosion] from the middle of the explosion that does full damage. No damage (200 meters or more, Deals no damage at all).

    Anyone who was caught in explosion, can suffer a little bit of side effects. Their skin would swell, and their body would feel a boiling heat inside them. They can suffer symptoms like fever, loss of energy, very high body temperature, puking and no appetite. A common symptoms but last quite a bit longer, it lasts about 1 - 10 post, depending what tier the person is. As it will be listed below:

    Tier 6 - Tier 5: 10 post before effects wears off from the person's body.

    Tier 4 - Tier 3: 5 post before effects wears off from the person's body.

    Tier 2 - Tier 1-3: 3 post before effects wears off from the person's body.

    Tier 1-2 - Tier 0: 1 post before effects wears off from the person's body.

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    For anyone who did not get caught in the explosion, only suffers a symptom. Loss of energy or the person who doesn't have the energy to do anything. The person can actually overcome this with their sheer willpower, depending to the circumstances. The user itself, will receive the side effects as well (that is not caught by the explosion).

    Once per post, 4 or 5 post cool down. Using this ability too much can actually endanger the user's life itself, since if he continuously using the same ability and keeps receiving the side effects. The side effects that he receives (after he used it continuously, approximently about 4 or 5 times), will increase by maximum 10 posts, giving him the long side effects and will be completely forced to retreat, or just simply die in the battlefield, alone.

    Burning Cero: This ability can be used if he summons his hollow mask or switch souls/places with his inner hollow. A customized cero specially used by Hizaki Yuudeshi and Moon. A flame-like energy would be charging at the tip of the blade, in a shape of a circle. If he leaves the blade straight and being fired, the cero blast would be concentrated, letting the enemy to be receiving a maximum damage (Ranged between Moderate/Average to Heavy Damage). It is fired in a straight line, so it would be easier to dodge by his opponents if they have enough speed of an adept. If caught offguard, it might be a painful explosion for them. Once per post, 2 post cool down. This way doesn't cause any side effects.

    Another way can be used to fire the cero, weaker but takes up more space, giving the enemy to have advanced speed or above to be avoiding the entire attack. Hizaki could swing his sword left or right, sending a wave of cero towards his target. Takes up almost 1 feet long space. It deals small to moderate damage. The effects are pretty unique, as his enemy's skin would be burned and they could feel the pain of their boiling skin. 2 post side effect for the enemy if caught by cero. The boiling pain of their skin is actually their illusion. It didn't do any damage, it is just to distract his enemy and temporarily decrease their focus during the battle. This way only causes side effects. Twice per post, 2 post cool down.

    The Right 'Released' Zanpakutō (Moon, Dark Element):

    Black Moon: Also works like Ichigo's Getsuga Tensho but more faster, less concentrated and weaker version of it. Also a complete dark version wihout any red outlines of it. As Hizaki weakens the bracelet's power seal, his inner hollow and his spiritual power would channel into the Zanpakutō, and adjusting the power of it to a less concentrated state, but more speed is added as he adjust it to lower concentrated state. One swing, he can release a low concentrated, but at speed of an advanced shunpo/general speed/sonido from the tip of his blade.

    The black energy would go as fast as it would, exploding if anything is hit on sight. Any master level or higher on sonido, shunpo or general speed can be given an easy time to dodge it. Lower level than advanced, can result a one, hard yet painful time when it comes to dodging it. For the same level as the speed of the ability, any information is unknown. The advanced level on sonido, general speed and shunpo have 50% chance of possibility to be able to avoid the hit and 50% chance to get hit, receiving a small amount of damage on all tiers.

    Black Seal: A simple sealing ability that relates to Bakudo but more 'working' version and 'harder' version of it. All he has to do is the channel his inner hollow's spiritual energy and his own spiritual energy into the tip of the blade, using 5% of it, he can draw a circle using spiritual energy at mid-air. Once drawn, the circle itself will burst out a complete wave of darkness and then blast itself towards the designated target. If the blast is as fast as advanced general speed. Either the same level or higher can dodge the blast fairly easy. Once the person is hit by the darkness, they would be sealed in a small box, in a complete darkness. The seal last for two post. Anyone with very strong spiritual power or vast strength can blow away the darkness. The first post would develope a spear onto the box, idle. In the second post, the spear will pierce through the box and finally deal a moderate damage on the person, with several holes on them. Twice per thread.

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Hizaki Yuudeshi (W.I.P)-[Major Revamp]   Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:04 pm



Two weeks have passed! This is in old WIP~

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Hizaki Yuudeshi (W.I.P)-[Major Revamp]   Sun Sep 16, 2012 6:34 am

Edit:
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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Hizaki Yuudeshi (W.I.P)-[Major Revamp]   Sun Sep 16, 2012 9:15 am

This Post will be edited to keep the staffs updated for any edits i've made before the thread is entirely finished.

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16th September 2012, 10:16am:
Hizaki's appearance was majorly edited and changed with more and further details that explains every single of his characteristics. Appearance might be edited again in the future if there are any lack of information about him.

17th September 2012, 5:01am:
All the personality will be left untouched until the entire application is done. Zanpakutō Spirit's Appearance is Finished.
Inner Hollow's Inner world is also finished.
Added Fused Inner World, tell me if there is any wrong with it, since i'm not pretty confident about the inner world because i never knew if it is allowed or not.
Sealed Zanpakutō's done, including the appearance.
Shikai's appearance and release phrase is finished.
Some extra Nicknames are added.

17th September 2012, 6:14am:
Appearance changed.
Some details have changed a bit.
Added extra details.

18th September 2012, 11:27am:
An extreme amount of details added about a custom bracelet under the appearance picture. Detailed weakness, Power boost, Limits and Some drawbacks.
Added abilities on Shikai, with some weakness, escape spots and other stuff.

19th September 2012, 11:36am:
Added two abilities in shikai, including side effects and cool downs.
Reserved a post that is edited specially to put any history or anything if the main post has no more space.

19th September 2012, 11:38pm:
Finished entire shikai ability of the left Zanpakutō, fire elemental. Currently progressing of doing The Right Zanpakutō, Dark Elemental. Added 1 ability only in it.

20th September 2012, 11: 35am:
Done two stuffs, you can check around the application.

21st September 2012, 1:10am:
More stuff is added?

22nd September 2012, 10:38am:
Added an ability only. Incomplete details because i couldn't think of any ideas to describe how it was used.


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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Hizaki Yuudeshi (W.I.P)-[Major Revamp]   Mon Sep 17, 2012 4:18 am

> moved back to WIP upon request <3

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Moving this to old WIP!
Ask someone to move it or finish it in there!

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