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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Genie: The Wish Iramasha [APPROVED, GENERAL IRAMASHA: 3-1+]   Thu Jan 17, 2013 7:15 pm





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• Name: Genie
• Age: He never bothered to count
• Gender: Male
• Appearance: http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp258/Aroshi_01/wog165B15D.jpg (when trying to fit in)
• Branch/Position: rogue

• Race: General Iramasha


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• Personality:

Happy: Well as the trait says Genie is almost always happy, he loves being free from his lamp and granting wishes to people who need them. He loves life and always finds are reason to smile every day. He's over 600 years old and hasn't tired with living on the mortal plane.Life brings nothing but joy to him, he's learned to let the bad escape his soul so he can grow to be a better person. His life was spurred from the awesome power of the wish, the power of making people happy and being happy himself.

Helper: Genie views himself as a helper of the people, even when not granting wishes. He'll gladly fight all evil to help the people that would be harmed. If someone has used all three of their wishes and they still need help Genie finds a way to help them even if it can't be with his own personal magic. He's bee known to help build houses as well, do free farm labor, and give to the poor. He can't stand to see people ail ad he always steps in to help out a just cause, at least in his eyes.

Joker: He loves to play pranks on people and make others laugh. When he was with Aladdin he'd constantly make an ass of himself to cheer the boy up when he was heartbroken. Genie loves smiles as well and notices that a good smile comes from a laugh more than a good deed. He always walks around like a clown making things appear from thin air and appearing a fool to get the masses to smile. This makes him forget just how alone he is for a moment.

Afraid of the dark: Genie has an almost childlike fear of the dark, if feels oppressive to him and reminds him too much of when he was forced to lay dormant in the lamp until chanced upon. He remembers being birthed from the lamp, he remembers how cramped it was and the lack of light. The scared feeling he got when he thought he would stay in it forever. He remembers how he felt as if he would explode and die, but his explosion only gave way to his freedom. The lamp not being what he is a afraid of, but the darkness inside of it.

Lonely: Secretly he always feels alone. He has never known love due to his looks and what he is. No woman ever wants him but they always want to be his friends. He hides this from everyone though and smiles through the pain. Even though he is happy with life he always feels the pang in his chest of being alone. He's never crossed paths with someone like him nor has he ever met a human who would love him totally without a shield up. His world is a small one, just him, his "close" friends, and his utter feeling of being alone.

Sucker for animals: He LOVES parrots, moneys, and tigers. This probably comes from his time with Aladdin since they showed no bias and all loved him equally no matter how he looked. He'll happily beat the snot out of anyone he see's abusing animals. Even if it is a lowly pack mule or camel. He tends to feel closer to them than he does to humans since animals are supposed to die before humans, he accepts their short life span and loves them the whole time.

Strong Willed: Genie knows he is smart and blessed with common sense as well, he’ll fight tooth and nail against someone with a bad idea and if they cannot be swayed from the course of action he will go off on his own path to prove himself right. He's collided with many world leaders and prophets in his time and called them stupid to their faces. He regrets getting an attitude but sometimes it's the only way they listen to him.

Free Will: This was a learned trait given to him from myths; it states that humans and jinn have the power of choice. He has used that power everyday to walk down the path of light and to stand against evil whenever the chance arises. He could turn evil at any moment but he chooses to stay good and stay true to himself.

Likes: Animals, beautiful women, spiced teas, hookah, and friends.
Dislikes: Thieves, demons, death, famine, tight spaces, and being alone.



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• Background: Since the start of time humans have been making wishes, wishing for a better lot in life, wishing for power, wishing for love, wishing to be free from disease, the list goes on and on. These wishes all had just a tiny spark of energy behind them, as time went on and decades turned to centuries these small energy forms had to pool somewhere. They couldn't just vanish, they simply pooled and grew, gaining more power behind them as they went. Most wishes going unanswered so the energy stayed almost always. Until one day a lone thief got his hands on a lamp. Everyone thought the lamp was magical after they heard the story but they were wrong. The boy merely held the lamp as he wished he didn't need to do dirty deeds to get by, he wished for something to grant his wish and he wished for a true friend. In that moment all of the collective energy of the wishes of the past formed into one solid being. Genie, he came forth from the very lamp that Aladdin was holding. The boy was shocked to watch this happen and almost threw the lamp into a nearby fire but Genie quickly explained that he had come to answer the wish. That he was the Wish Creation. Soon they became the best of friends, Aladdin courting the princess as Genie tagged along for fun. Years past them by and Genie didn't age, he always appeared young in his "human" form, He watched in quiet agony as Aladdin did age though. He packed up and let in the middle of the night, not wanting to watch his friend slowly die before his eyes.

He soon found an orphaned youth and carried the child along with him on his journeys. The boy loving Genie like a father and Genie loving him like a son, he taught the child all he could about fighting and stay true to who he was. He showed him the true meaning of life, love. But the day came when they entered a small village and the boy fell in love with a girl there. It wasn’t hard to abandon his adoptive father as everyone in the town looked at Genie as a demon and soon the boy joined their side booing the sad spirit out of the village. Genie would sit in a valley nearby and cry for ten days and nights. His tears producing beautiful yet cursed flowers. Each one being unable to create a copy of itself as all flowers should, the species died off in months, a symbol or the loss that Genie had endured.

Moving on once more Genie moved to the deserts, the places of extreme violence and religious hate. He had wanted to bring peace to all the people there so they could learn to live side by side and enjoy each other even though their views on God differed. He had no such luck, the jews refused to speak to him claiming him a creation of Islamic evil The Muslims’ refused him as well calling him a devil and a test from Allah. He left as swiftly as he had come, not changing a thing between the warring people.

He roamed the earth making new friends daily but remaining slightly detached from them knowing they would all die. Soon he realized he could grant people wishes, he went around happily granting the poor and the outcast wishes to better their lives. He kept moving along with no real path or purpose for many years until he met a youth that reminded him very much of Aladdin, the boy being named Winston Churchill. He stayed with the boy as he aged and silently granted him many wishes, more than he was allowed. He watched the man grow and watched him become a force to be reckoned with during the human war labeled WW2. He was happy to help this man because he knew the Nazi’s had their own dark horse. A demon by the name of Sorrow, the two had crossed paths one time, it ending with Genie leaving the demon for dead. Soon the war ended and he left his friend saying he needed to go help more people.

Always he roamed onward alone, wondering what his purpose was in this world. Hoping to find peace soon.



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• Seishin Buki Name: The Lamp

• Seishin Buki Appearance: It's a golden lamp that fits in any pocket on Genie's body. It's so tuned into who Genie is that only the strongest of people other than himself may hold it. It fitting easily in the palm of his hand, the neck carved out of the most pure of gold with Islamic runes etched into the metal work.

• Seishin Buki Abilities:
Lamp Shelter: The lamp acts as a barrier for Genie, it growing I size to encase him and it becoming slightly transparent. The Barrier is fed on the amount of energy Genie pours into it. He could chose to have it block out a nuclear war head (it would leave him pretty damn weak) or it could just block the swing of a blade, bouncing off harmlessly in a shower of sparks.

Wish granter: This is solely for when he is in battle with team mates. The lamp can be used to boost the speed and strength of his team mates a whole skill level for three rounds. It affects a max of four team mates and can be subjective. If he has five team mates he can flick it back and forth between two people when they truly need it. The power drain on it isn't as much as assumed since the power comes from the infinite energy of wishes. He can't pull all that power at once the use in an attack but he can channel it to help his friends in times of need. This can be used once per battle, for three rounds as stated above.

Lamp Whistle: Genie just blows on the lamp as it emits a sot ringing noise that fatigues the opponent, the noise lasting just a moment but the effects lasting three rounds, the fatigue only drains the speed of the enemy down half a skill level. The best way to avoid this would be to separate the lamp from Genie.

Final Wish: This move will only ever be used one time as it is a self destruction of Genie, he over loads himself with as much wish energy as possible until his body begins to pull apart then he unleashes it onto the battlefield, leveling the earth for five miles in any direction. It takes one post to begin and the second post would be the blast itself

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• Powers: From his lamp an oil pours out, infused with his energy, the longer it goes unchecked and is allowed to pour the more it coats the battlefield, ignoring gravity as it climbs walls and goes up hills as well. Once Genie is comfortable with the size of the oil spill he opens a small hole in the back of the lamp and exhales into it, a tiny flame spilling out of the spout. It being pure black as it licked over the oil and ignited the field in a flaming pit of black fire.

• Chaos Moves:

Chaos Blade: Twin scimitars form in his hands, crackling black energy coating them. They actually work as a distance attack, firing beams of energy outwards for a range of twenty to fifty meters. They can work like a normal sword would but they are meant for distance to throw off the opponent. The farther the energy needs to travel the less powerful it is. The swords last for our rounds and can only be used twice per battle. Lastly when in use the first time they bump his chaos energy skill up half a skill level but not the second time.

Chaos Armor: Just as the name states its black armor that goes over Genie from head to toe, looking like full plate mail but slightly transparent showing his outline underneath. It lasts our fives rounds and increases his durability one skill level while decreasing his speed one skill level.

Chaos Amp: Here pure chaos energy courses through his body that increases his speed by one level for three rounds while decreasing his weapon skill one level; such as the increase in speed decreases his accuracy.

• Chaos Fighting Styles:

Chaos Burst: (his skill in these three areas will be determined once his tier and chaos fighting skill level are gained)
Chaos Impact: ^
The Fist Of Chaos: ^^

Shadow boxer: It’s a type of chaos warp that only moves parts of Genie’s body. A small opening appears before him that he would insert his fist through or his leg, aiming to kick or punch at the enemy from a distance, the opening appear as soon as his limbs go outward to attack. This ability can be used at random and goes well with Chaos Burst.



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• Custom Form Appearance He has two
The first being his true appearance when not trying to look human:
http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l206/zak3301/genie.gif

The second being his all out fighting form:
http://i1185.photobucket.com/albums/z355/cassorin1/Genie.jpg

• Custom Form Abilities:

Mythical Figure: Genie, being a popular folklore character has adopted some of the many myths about him to use in combat.

One of the three races: In myth it is described that God created three sentient races, the jinn (Genie), Humans, and angels. Now this might be incorrect due to all the other races but as he has come to make these myths part of himself, in battle if he is fighting beside a human or angel he gains a power boost, his general skills all going up half a level.

Hidden from sight: In recorded history it is said that jinn (genies) were from other planes of existence and could hide in plain sight, when standing still he can bend light around his frame and become harder to detect. The only thing giving him away being the slightly shimmer around where he should be. This becoming harder to see if he hides in shadows.

Smokey: adopting the myth that jinn’s are made from a smokeless fire by Allah himself Genie can exhale a thick smoke, (this being the smoke that vanished when he was created) the smoke hiding his spirit pressure as he moves in it.



Lastly he knows the majority of the Iramasha racial abilities.


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• Class Title: I assume I leave this blank due to being a General Iramasha
• Class Traits: read above

• Skills:


General Skills
  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Adept


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: /Adept
  • Focus: Adept


Racial Skills
  • Chaos Energy Skill: Adept
  • Chaos Warp: /Beginner
  • Chaos Fighting Style: Adept
  • Gem Creation: Adept



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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Genie: The Wish Iramasha [APPROVED, GENERAL IRAMASHA: 3-1+]   Thu Jan 17, 2013 7:47 pm

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Comments/Notes:

"Wish granter: This is solely for when he is in battle with team mates. The lamp can be used to boost the speed and strength of his team mates a whole skill level for three rounds."

While this ability has good intent, it needs to be seriously expanded. How long do the boost stay in effect? How does the boost work? How many people can be boosted? How much increase can they see in their attributes with the boost? How much energy does it take out of him, if, at all? These are the questions I'm looking for for something like that.

You can also be at more liberty to add in some more custom powers for his transformation. You can also say he generally knows most of the basic Iramasha racial stats.

And, you don't have to, but I recommend having each section in his personality be at least 3-6 sentences. That's just a personal thing with me to expand his character.

It's also recommended you probably expand a bit more on your future powers/abilities so that everything is fully covered with them. You can also feel free to add 2 more attributes to your Seishin Buki since it felt a bit lacking.

Also, here is the Iramasha Chaos Fighting Styles if you wish to look: http://www.platinumhearts.net/t6932-the-iramasha-s-hand-to-hand-enter-chaos-fighting-styles


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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Genie: The Wish Iramasha [APPROVED, GENERAL IRAMASHA: 3-1+]   Fri Jan 18, 2013 2:47 am

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  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes:
Everything looks better, but...

"Chaos Burst: He excels in this fighting style
Chaos Impact: Making himself better at this style
The Fist Of Chaos: One hit wonder baby! "


You can just spoiler those or describe in more detail how he is proficient in these. One sentence isn't going to cut it, however. I recommend, if you do write them up yourself, to at least use 3-5 sentences. You should also tread carefully since he has not received his Chaos Fighting-Style Skill Level. So, in hindsight, it may better to wait to see what his tier is and determine that for yourself based upon skill level.



Tier: 3-1+ when finished.

Please post when you have made the changes

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Genie: The Wish Iramasha [APPROVED, GENERAL IRAMASHA: 3-1+]   Fri Jan 18, 2013 5:29 am

Okay I edited it, I notice I still have an O next to godmod/overpowered so I was wondering which skills that is toward so I may correct it.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Genie: The Wish Iramasha [APPROVED, GENERAL IRAMASHA: 3-1+]   Fri Jan 18, 2013 5:59 am

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  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes: Oh, I'm sorry, I made a error in filling that godmod section out in my previous post. However, everything should be in the clear now and I'll be approving him for 3-1+.

Tier: 3-1+

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Genie: The Wish Iramasha [APPROVED, GENERAL IRAMASHA: 3-1+]   Tue Aug 20, 2013 12:57 am

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