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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Xaldin   Sun Mar 10, 2013 10:46 pm




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» Name: (What is their name?)
» Titles: (Does your character have any sort of special title rank, nickname or alias?)
» Race: (What is the race of your host? Human, Shinigami, Demon etc?)
» Age: (How old they look at their real age)
» Gender: (Male, female or none?)
» Affiliation/Rank: (What Group are they apart of or are they rouge?)

» Appearance Written: (Just write down what your Ziamichi looks like if you lack a picture or want to work on this section.)

» Appearance Picture: (If you have an image, feel free to post it here. If not, remove this)

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» Personality: (You will need at least two paragraph's on your characters personality to make it passable.)
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» History: (Three paragraph minimum of your characters history. And, if you can, include when and how they became a Ziamichi.)

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» FOR THIS SECTION OF THE APPLICATION PLEASE TAKE POWERS FROM EITHER THE SHINIGAMI, DEMON, IRAMASHA, HUMAN OR QUINCY TEMPLATES ON THE SITE! OTHERWISE, LEAVE THIS BLANK OR REMOVE IT IF THEY DO NOT HAVE ANY!
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» The Spirit's Name: (What is the name of your Ziamichi's Spirit?)
» The Spirit's Race: (Is it a Shinigami, Human, Demon etc? If it isn't a race at all, just put N/A)
» The Spirit's Gender: (What is the gender of your Ziamichi's Spirit?)
» The Spirit's Age: (What is the age of your Ziamichi's Spirit?)

» The Spirit's Written Appearance: (If you lack a picture or just want to write a look for your spirit, place it here.)

» The Spirit's Pictured Appearance: (If you got an image for your spirit, post it here.)

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» The Spirit's Personality: (What is your spirit's personality like? Write at least two paragraph's.)


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» The Spirit's History: (Is there a history to your spirit? If so, at least write 2-3 paragraph's about it. Including how it got attached, created or sealed to your Ziamichi.)


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» FOR THIS SECTION OF THE APPLICATION PLEASE TAKE POWERS FROM EITHER THE SHINIGAMI, DEMON, IRAMASHA, HUMAN OR QUINCY TEMPLATES ON THE SITE! OTHERWISE, LEAVE THIS BLANK OR REMOVE IT IF THEY DO NOT HAVE ANY! IF YOUR ZIAMICHI ISN'T A RACE FROM HERE, THEN JUST FILL OUT THE ZIAMICHI POWERS SHEET BELOW OR OMIT IT!

» Ziamichi Spirit Powers: (Put their powers here)
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» Unique Traits: (What kind of special ability's does your host get from you're Ziamichi's powers? For example, if your spirit had a fire ability, it's possible your character's body can pick up on that! Or if the spirit was an animal, they could possibly gain better natural senses.)

» Forms: (How many forms, if any, does it take until the host reaches it's limit, full power and a risk of having the demon, dark side or other entity gain control of their body? If you have a good understanding with your spirit, though, this is typically a good thing)

» Drawbacks: (Is there any side effects to the usage of these combined powers? If so, put them here.)

» Control: (What kind of control does your character have over your Ziamichi? Ranging from zero to ten. When at Zero, you're character has no control over your Ziamichi. When at ten, you're character has perfect control over it's Ziamichi.)

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NOTE: Ziamichi's will have three to four skill sheets possibly. One for general skills, one for racial skills, one for the host's skill and possibly one for the spirit's skills if they are a different race.

Click here for skill sheet
Ziamichi General

» Ziamichi Host Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved. And yes, the Host can sometimes be stronger then the spirit.)

» Ziamichi Spirit Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved.)

Skills:
0 Tier is allowed 1 Master, 2 Advanced for each section
1 Tier is allowed 2 Advanced for each section
2 Tier is allowed 1 Advanced, 2 Adept for each section
3 Tier is allowed 1 Adept for each section
4 Tier and below only get beginner.

General Skills For Host
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Ziamichi Skills For Host
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sync-Rate: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills For Host
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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General Skills For Spirit
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Ziamichi Skills For Spirit
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sync-Rate: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills For Spirit
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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» Role Play Sample:(Show us what you got by posting a sample of how you role play. Any previous thread or new material is accepted!)


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Xaldin   Sun Mar 10, 2013 10:47 pm

The Spiritual Human Template

Basic Information
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• Name: (What is the name of your character?)
• Titles: (Does your character have any sort of special title rank, nickname or alias?)
• Age: (How old is your character?)
• Gender: (Is it male or female?)
• Affiliation/Rank: (What Group are they apart of or are they rouge?)

• Appearance Description:

• Appearance Picture: (If you have one, link a picture of your character.)
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Personality

• Personality: Yuri is more calm and collective around people but the guy shows more of an serious attitude because the child was born within a church most of his childhood. He wouldn't be the one who yells at a person during a dispute because his self disciplining; Yuri doesn't get mad so quickly. He'll always try to find the good within things better yet a peaceful solution before going neutral or going into a rage when bad situations come to past. At times, Yuri usually lets his ipad or cyber ipad do the talking whenever it business related or money offers thinking technology is the best way to express what a person is thinking most of the time. When he had friends, Yuri was and always is somewhat protective of his friends yet this have been know to spiral out of control though he has a caring heart. He always believed that he was something of super hero that was given an unbelievable gift taking on different roles as a hero and a friend. Through adulthood, Yuri took on a very serious role being no-nonsense & cunning warrior in his sensei's image trying to impress his family. After being trained, Yuri has inherited the way of the warrior into his having the dark desire wanting to fight worthy opponents and knows that his fate is to win or die in battle. Throughout time, Yuri started becoming more confident in his abilities enjoying the thrill of fighting against strong & powerful opponents. Seeking enlightenment with each encounter, he constantly journeys in order to improve himself. Outside of battle, Yuri is a calm, collective but easy-going man, caring only for sake and food, He has something a romantic interest in some women. He's also admits to not being very smart at times and talented but he believes that these are obstacles for him to overcome.

Yuri loves all animals except pitbulls & mad dogs, he truly believes that some animals like cats, birds and dogs are like pure hearted creatures so to speak. Like every Friday, Yuri will take bread and feed it to some birds despite bird feeding laws. In his mind, birds have an unique ability to travel across the world to soar the known skies with their wings being one with the wind. Now dogs, He hates pitbulls from a previous encounter with one but other dogs like the Lassie kind, german shepherds or bulldogs their kind nature and their instinctive nature to help their masters. It the same thing with cats but he loves petting them and seeing their playful nature.
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Natural Attributes & Supernatural Powers

• Natural Attributes: (Put any sort of natural thing your human can do without the use of reiatsu. For instance, you could put down your characters body has a high amount of defense or that they have some sort of super speed.)

• Powers: (Explain any sort of power your human might have through using Reiatsu. For instance, you could have a human who has the power over Fire or another human who can control energy blast. It's up to you where to go with this one. However, there is only a maxium of six powers.)

• Pure Abilities: (Feel free to put any abilities they might have from their powers. Such as if they had the power to generate, control and tame electricity? They would have abilities that could allow them endure harsh climates, boosted speed and things such as that.)
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Sacred Release

• Sacred Release Appearance: (Describe what your human looks like when they release their spiritual power. This is essentially equivalent to a Shinigami's Shikai.)

• Sacred Release Powers: (Does your human get any additional powers from this transformation? For instance, if you had the power to control Fire in your base, could you control heat and magma in this state? Or would you gain something else?)
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Ascended Sacred State

•Ascended Sacred State Appearance: (Describe what your human looks like when they release their spiritual power. This is essentially equivalent to a Shinigami's Bankai.)

• Ascended Sacred State Powers: (Does your human get any additional powers from this transformation? For instance, if you had the power to control Fire in your base, could you control heat and magma in this state? Or would you gain something else?)
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Background History

• Background: Yuri Shishimaru doesn't know much of his past but the only clue that he knows about his old past; Yuri's memory been completely erased but actually the son of an shinigami captain and a quincy woman who rejected him. A decision was made by an unknown man which led to child losing his shinigami powers turning the child into a normal human child. Throughout experimentation, Yuri in time would regain his power but some fail safes were placed within his body keeping his hidden powers locked making him normal like any other human child. Yuri's birth mother left the child at an orphanage which was the last time that he saw his mother and thus his shinigami powers were gone at least for now. When he was a child, Yuri was raised by an orphanage run by a sister of the church named Sister Mary Montogomo an high ranked nun. Sister Mary found Yuri in a baby crib with some food and a note from his mother saying to take care of him which the nun took him in her home. Sister Mary spent most of her life teaching the boy throughout his childhood yet she allowed him to go to school to gain an education, Yuri was a blessing from the man upstairs. Throughout childhood, Yuri was bullied in school because of the nerdy clothing he wore but in a fight the child could actually handle himself well, he had born instincts of trained fighter. Through Sister Mary didn't like violence she knew this was always going to subject that she feared the most still she always taught him to take a peaceful path to deadly situations. After finishing High School, Yuri started to discover weird powers at first the teenager thought a demon cursed him but he never told his mother about it. Secretly, He started training with his powers it was a first time the child saw a hollow a weird white looking creature which he lost the fight and was beaten badly. Yuri thought this was a message for the man upstairs to change his ways but both him and hollow had many battles with the hollow winning. About 10 years later, Yuri started mastering his powers which in the end the hollow bothering the church and it members was finally defeated still the guy had doubts about his powers. He barely managed to defeat the hollow but still why was he given such a curse-like power until he met a noble man who lost his brother because of a deadly gang. Alex Cardo was his name the guy wanted vengeance for his brother's death knowing full well revenge wasn't always the answer, Yuri helped him get over the pain. In Yuri's mind, Alex was innocent person who just wanted to give his brother justice in the only way that he knew how with sheer violence. In time, Yuri and Alex became good friends which the memory of Alex's brother still came up in some conservations which led to some hidden truths. Alex started noticing Yuri's new powers thinking the child was born with great power but with this will come great responsibility into using his powers. Alex started to train him...

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General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Human Reiatsu Sheet
  • Power Control: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Energy Usage/Regeneration: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Energy Resistance/Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Physical Augmentation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Xaldin   Tue Mar 19, 2013 4:35 pm

...Alright, well, there are a LOT of problems with this app, and for it to even be acceptable, at least 80% of it is gonna need to be redone. While I can't list all of the problems here, some of the biggest ones are the immortality, the fact that only a pure Quincy (ie. no ziamichi) can get a Vollstandig, the powers are way out there, along with the forms, the history needs some revision, and finally, though more on my own personal level, the damned ampersands (the & symbol). If you're gonna make an app and want it to be taken seriously, then please take the extra time to type out the three little letters of "and" instead of using text shorthand (just a very short personal rant). My suggestion is to cut back a lot of the excess, scale back the powers, leave out "chosen one" stuff, read the rules on Quincy and such to know what you can and cannot do, and just for me, replace the ampersands with the word "and". For the time being, however, I am gonna have to deny this app.

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Xaldin   Tue Mar 19, 2013 4:47 pm

Yikes......Um can ya place this in old wip wow I need to do some work here.......
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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Xaldin   Tue Mar 19, 2013 5:17 pm

Moved to old WIP

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Xaldin   Wed Feb 18, 2015 9:35 am



Archiving this as apart of my clean up of Old Wip

If you wish for this to be moved back to old wip please feel free to post within this thread

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