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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Yui Nightfang[Approved Temp 4-3 until Thread completion]   Sat Mar 15, 2014 6:38 pm









» Name: Yui Nightfang [Formerly Demonica Nightfang]

» Titles: (Former Title: The Black King) The Ruinous King

» Age: 15ish appearance wise. Real age is around 10-20 years old?

» Gender: Female

» Affiliation/Rank: (What Group are they apart of or are they rouge?)



Madness Markings: Stemming from the mad demon blood in Yui’s Body which was inherited from her predecessor Demonica nightfang, when Reigen made the vassal which was her flesh and blood; These markings are seen often on her clothing and even as a rectangular Pupil in her Iris in times of anger or great Hardship. These markings are the flourishing Reminder of her past life, but also a integral part of her identity and sense of self. As from these markings many irregularities can generally be found. Some of these derive a deeper meaning then mere markings on demonic cloth. Such as insight into her mind and psychological condition, or even possibly giving insight into her past prior to her souls relocation displaying or acknowledging memories that Yui herself may have forgotten after a standardized period of time.

Simple Clothes: Yui has a basic but striking sense of fashion, which can be seen through her plain white black clothing scheme. This attire is summarized by stockings, ballet flats; a short cropped shirt and a open white jacket. But if you looked further into the matter; these clothes simply are a reflection on her mind and the moments of Enlightening from her prior body, mentality and soul. It signifies how she went from worrying and over complicating things, to perceiving the world as it was in a simpler time, a older place. As such this also shows she doesn’t have a major sense of “Vanity” or “Fashion” when regarding her normal attire, given to her the clothes she wears are merely a formality, or “Courtesy” To the general populace as per the norm that people who run around naked are generally frowned upon.

Teenage Build: Despite probably being in human years in her twenties in rough estimate, she doesn’t look it. Yui possesses a kind of child-like or at least teenage body build, her body isn’t the standard full hour glass womanly shape sought after by most Adult Females. Instead she does have slightly large hips, and shallow curvature; both are nothing like the sharp defined curves and angular features of an adult though. Meaning her body isn’t over developed but rather seems normal atleast for her appearance age given that appearance wise she looks to be roughly either 15 or 16 instead of the widely varying appearance ages that Demonica Nightfang herself had possessed . So all in all in terms of body build she seems to be a general age of 15-16.

Striking Eyes: Originally Demonica Nightfang in her life had striking and memorable Ruby eyes that would pierce into a person’s very soul metaphorically speaking. Yui on the other hand, despite being the vassal that Demonica’s Energy and soul was originally put into; has a striking steely gray color in her eyes. A calm gray which goes well with her plain appearance and mannerisms; They are not harsh nor are they probing; they show little emotion but are not hostile either. Instead the eyes seem to naturally convey a tinge of calmness and a kind aura to them, in regards to special people that know her to say the very least. Thanks to this her striking eyes are a of a captivating sort, not displaying a defined or clear history, instead often displaying subtle clues in regard to her personality or state of mind amongst them. Making it so that she has a slight mysterious air about her, which is not undermined by a repulsive persona, making her distant but loveable at the same exact time, or what you might call Humane.

Facial Markings: Kind of like her Madness Markings but marginally different. These are a manifestation of the previous powers that she has inherited from Demonica Nightfangs soul , pours and her body as it was morphed and contorted by Reigen to form the vassal that is Yui NightFang. As such the color of them tends to be a calm but vibrant royal shade of purple in most normal situations; however the coloration can change in rare cases which signifies a dramatic change in the psychological state of Yui’s mind. Generally though the calm purple color is prevalent as the common color in terms of visibly discernable colors.


True Self: Appearance wise, because of the metamorphosis and because she became a demon that was the essence of another demon, the demon Demonica Nightfang. Her true self is not hidden like most demons or like individual souls that seek to hide themselves . Her shifter form and true demon form are one and the same; as they are her and she is herself. This mainly is the manifestation of a lack of need to have an alternative form or a way to hide her true sense of self. This is why no matter which situation you find her to generally be in, she isn’t going to change in appearance. She might change her clothes or hair style from time to time; but changing her actual body in terms of appearance is something that doesn’t happen. She is quite simply unable nor Unmotivated to do so, which is why her appearance doesn’t shift.


Demon Characteristics: Yui unlike most demons even in her true form, doesn’t have striking or overly apparent demonic characteristics appearance wise unless there is a major shift in mentality as stated multiple times above. However it isn’t entirely erased from her body; Pointed fangs and Triangular ears, weird shaped pupils and unnaturally pale skin are characteristics that can be seen in most situations because she cannot hide them. These are her demonic characteristics or the visible traces other then markings and strange tendencies that show predominantly in her body at all times.



» Personality:

Observant: Yui has some of demonica’s old quirks still imbedded in her body but she also has some newer personality traits that run predominant as well. One such is that Yui Nightfang is keen and observant, preferring to discern the situation and see what is going on rather than the normal approach which might be either speaking with another to learn about it, or even possibly jumping into the fray without the slightest inkling of what is going on. As such in the beginning of almost any given situation, this knee jerk reaction gives her a subtle distancing aura. It makes her seem shy or possibly even like she is a mute, just because when she’s observing or trying to pick things out of a situation she tends to remain silent. Her silence stems from the fact that because she has this reaction that generally speaking leads her to observe things before the engages in them. This means she can get lost in her own thoughts, and even “Zone Out” for a good chunk of time before she either has seen enough, or is too curious to sit still.

Tactician: Because she is observant Yui has turned out to be when she wants to at least, a pretty solid Tactician. This means that either in normal or combat situations she tends to have a good grasp on what’s going on and keen insight or a theory of just how it turned out that way. This doesn’t mean that she has a solid surefire understanding of a situation, but it does mean her guesses though rarely 100% accurate, are generally in the margin that essentially means she is able to have a good idea about whats going on. accuracy range. Meaning if someone attacked her using a ability she’s never seen before, she might not understand or know what it is right away—but after a few encounters with it she probably will begin testing out a working theory to single out what the general function of the ability or situation is.

Simple Outlook: Yui doesn’t like to make things out to be more complicated than they really are. She tends to have a simple outlook on instances and situations that either befall her or she finds herself somehow tied up in. If you asked her what she thought of a highly delicate political debate or problem? She would probably just either A: Shrug, B: Smile at ya , C: Divert your attention, Or D: Quite Clearly just tell you She just didn’t give a flying shit about it. To her life is simple in the way that she understands herself, she knows the other person, and she knows what her heart says it right and what is wrong. Outside of that, and the feeling of her heart beating in her chest—not much else really seems to be of great concern to her. As In her mind, Life is something that is worth living and you only live it once knowingly; there isn’t really a reason to waste it through worrying over the small stuff—or overthinking the large stuff. So she just goes with that and follows that motto.


Human Emotion: Yui doesn’t hide or fake her emotions something which was learned from her Predecessor demonica Nightfang. If she is sad, she tends to cry; if she is mad , she tends to yell or want to hit things. If she is bored she will find something to do, if she is tired; she might go to sleep. You see even though she does Admit she is a demon, it is in her personality to be who she is. There really isn’t a end goal that would justify hiding or faking who she really is just to impress or change the useless opinion others may have of her. That’s why she doesn’t hesitate to display emotion when she needs to, and doesn’t hesitate to be herself even if it’s a bad time to do so. All in all this means that honestly she just displays how she is feeling outwardly more than Demonica Nightfang did.


Curiosity: Yui is noted sometimes to have a curious edge to her, asking questions looking for answers to those questions. Simple things that just are the average urges of a teenage girl. She enjoys finding out new things and adding onto her knowledge; because every new thing she learns means that she can live life with more to do in it, have a fuller life if ya will think of it in that way. This means that while she isn’t going to nag someone to death over it, she will sometimes ask clarifying questions on someones actions or motives if she finds them particularly deviant from the norm. Or if the actions are ones she has found to be interesting or otherwise enlightening, she also might ask to either know more or why the person feels that strongly about what they had been talking about. Though her questions never are long winded probing questions, they tend to be short clarifying questions that honestly express her interest or curiosity regarding what has piqued her interest.


Deep Insight: Yui is usually a laid back individual but she can express a solid knowledge or understand of the world at large when needed. She understands things a great deal more then she generally will let on due to just how she is. Thanks to that fact when she does show it her words have a deeper meaning to them. They are generally insightful and relevant to what ever situation evoked that particular side of her in the first place, generally speaking morals, lives, people, even existence doesn’t particularly worry her a lot, it is just simply something else that’s there; that’s existing. Yet when she is worried about it , questions she asks most of the time are not ones that can be easily answered. Such as “If this world is truly Evil, then why do we still cry and mourn” Or “If the human condition is such a weakness, then shouldn’t they band together to overcome that weakness?” stuff like that , or “If life is told not by your words , but by actions; then what is your legacy? “ Simple things that evoke deep thought and make others think about what is being said, generally come out of her lips when she is in a more Philisophical or Insightful Mood.


» Likes: (This is self explanatory. What does your character like?)


» Dislikes: (This is self explanatory. What does your character dislike?)



Demonica's History

Demonica's First Fight With Eric


Demonica Fights Phantasia

Demonica Protects Iceland

Demonica's Quest to get stronger

Demonica Wandering

Demonica Meets Hebi

Demonica Returns to Shadow Fall

Demonica's Final Fight With Eric


Australian War Arc

Demonica Meets Reigen

Demonica's Final Thread


Yui's History : Note Will Be Filled Out As her threads progress

This is her opening thread, which will happen within the next few posts after app approval:

Yui's Awakening/Creation


Summary:
Alrighty, since i spoke to you about everythign else in pc.. Lets get on with your history summary.

Essentially Demonica Nightfang, originally was an immensley powerful human named shizuo heiwajima. From there what happened was due to the power of her soul, she ended up becoming a pretty powerful demon. In her life she fought eric the mad demon, and through interesting circumstances obtained some of his blood which lay dormant. Now in the recent thread Reigen and Demonica met, and began to get to know each other. and essentially Reigen offered demonica a new start, essentially to change her body. Now when this happens, this will cause her to loose her nuclear energy and memories. But what it will also cause is the awakening of her mad demon blood, this will counterbalance and cause the energy to stabilize, Also the awakening of this blood will alter the energy present, changing her whole power set to one thats attack oriented. This will explain the differences such as her maintaining a moderately similar power level ,if not slightly stronger.

Now , after this we get into guess work, given the thread is still ongoing. However what will happen is the transition as planned will work by using the old body , or demonica's body, and the energy and destruction of life in the vicinity around both her and reigen, this will in short transfer into the body, stabilizing it before the soul will be restored. The side affect of course being that she will not remember her PAST that pertains to her sense of self, but she will remember the functions of her skills and again maintain her energy levels, or atleast maintain the physical levels that she previously had.

This is what i can summarize so far.









ブレード道-Burēdo-dō [The Blade Road]:

For Yui Nightfang the blade road is a trait which has to do with a innate capacity for cutting objects that come in contact with her body, In fact you could say that her entire body is something that is razor sharp and fairly dangerous to come in contact with as it can cut through steel and other hard metals if she did something such as walking into the objects even on accident this level of destruction could actually occur. This can be looked at in the manner of a weapon, a keen edge of a well taken care of sword can cut through its enemies like they are butter. By keeping her blades honed at all times through demon magic, her blade road allows her to cut through spiritual and physical attacks in a sense as her body is a blade designed specifically for cutting and felling both spiritual and physical entities.


Starting with how wide spread its destruction is; is something that is hard to say as it isn’t created with the sole intent of destroying immense chunks of land at a time; it’s stealthy and designed to hit hard and hit fast to cause quick , precise, decisive ; and downright devastating damage to the opposition to bring them down with as little effort, and as quickly as possibly can be done. As coming in contact with her blade road is almost like laying yourself on so many knives that they seem to have merged into a omnidirectional force. Chops, kicks and even normal punches carry cutting force that can level anywhere from buildings to large chunks of land if enough strength is put into the strikes that are being made. As a single punch or strike generally is the equivalent of being hit with hundreds of smaller slashes that make up the large primary attack.


However the problem is that the blades are honed to the point that force is generally not needed, which is precisely why the more force she uses the less control she has over how precise her attacks could be. As the blade road is one that focuses on speed and ruthless consistency and dedication rather then strength and brute force, A blade swung with only force in mind doesn’t move or function as it should; that is basically how her Blade Road Works in a nutshell. Her attacks are quick and concise but never tense and are certainly never forced, and that’s primarily why the blade road becomes less and less effective the more strength and brute force is being used, as brute force tenses the muscles, slows down the movements and causes the asset of her body being essentially a living blade to become moot point instead of something that is fairly usable.


There are sub traits that work with The Blade Road that are important to the functionality and effectiveness of the skill that she herself remembered from the compilation of Demonica Nightfangs past experience and knowledge. That is why her Blade Road is designed for offense and destruction , given the fact that these things are a key part of who Yui is deep down in her heart.



ブレードゾーン:Burēdozōn[Bladed Zone] : One of the Main Aspects of the blade road. Bladed Zone is the radius that is optimal for striking range. Within her Bladed Zone when active she can attack, strike and move suddenly and quickly from her Pivot foot given this zone has a center and then a perimeter. In the center when using bladed zone, Yui is able to in essence move and strike twice as fast as before at least, given the true skill behind this is that when staying still she has both time to Observe, and is able to augment or enhance mobility in short controlled bursts that stay in a maintainable area. The trick is , when in the Zone she does have a weakness; Which is that this zone puts immense physical stress on the body itself which leads to damage in the legs and even the joints or ligaments if used for too long of a duration. This is why her Zone has a duration time of around 5 turns total in a thread because of the massive physical strain on the body.


精神の剣:Seishin no ken [Spirit Sword]: Another Functionality her Bladed Road has is a interesting ability known simply as Spirit Sword. As the name suggests it causes damage to the soul chain and spiritual body while leaving the physical body unharmed. However doing this does come with a nasty side effect, as generally her The Blade Road is in a balance of physical and Spiritual offense, if you shift the focus from Physical to Spiritual this means that it will stop doing physical damage, and that means she could run into a wall and instead of shredding through it; the wall might just give her a nasty red-mark on her forehead or a nasty and demented bruise. Also another major flaw in the design is that when using this she leaves herself open for physical attacks because in Spirit Sword the physical side of her blade road again, has been shut off to drastically increase the spiritual side of her blade road; Which is why this technique doesn’t have a time limit to use, as just using this aspect of the blade road in itself poses a major risk without any added side-effects.

Note though, some things like spiritual chains, cannot be directly destroyed in a single hit. Also it should be noted that the shift also presents a general mental strain because of the control exuded to actually damage things only on a spiritual level. Finally, this technique has a low success rate when actually causing lasting spiritual damage, such as 20-30% to cause lasting damage, and 40/50% to cause short term damage that lasts for maybe the duration of the thread.



フラッシュブレード:Furasshuburēdo[Flash Blade]: Flash Blade Is also another thing Yui can use , it works by amassing demonic energy and focusing it in a similar process to a cero or beam attack. From there when she lashes out such as a flying kick or maybe a spinning backhand or even a right hook, these actions “Slice” the air and allow her to then expel that energy in a condensed form that moves at an extremely high rate of speed. This though shoots outwards in an arc and has power to chop through buildings and even sides of mountains because while it is a projectile it for the short duration it is in motion , has similar properties to Yui’s body and The Blade Road, allowing it to have comparable cutting and destructive power. This Technique doesn’t drain as much as a standard cero would, but has slightly more energy than a normal Bala.




天使狩りブレード: Tenshi kari burēdo [Angel Hunting Blade]: Reserved for holy beings this blade works in the same way a demon slaying blade might; When in use the body turns black for the duration which can last up to 4 turns before it cannot be used again, in this time damage done to Iramasha or those who rely on Holy energies in general will be greatly amplified at the cost of great Fatigue after exiting the state. Another downside however is despite the raw power the blade itself only works against angels , or holy powers it will not work against other demons or even humans unless they hold a shred of actual holy energy about them. Which is the Major Downside to the Angel Hunting Blade, it is powerful against holy entities as it emits a corrupt aura which is imbedded in slashes that destroys or weakens holy beings .



Mad Demon Section.


General Over view: Yui inherited the blood that was given to demonica nightfang by the mad demon Eric. This blood runs potent in her veins and due to this fact, she possesses genetic traits and powers that are based off of the blood of this clan which has become all but extinct over the many years that it has been around in the demon world. In this section you will find skills regarding the Mad Demon Blood.


狂気のマーキング :Kyōki no making [Markings of Madness] : Yui’s body is covered in all sorts of random runic sigils that are tied in with Zao Ka, or her demon magic, however some of those such as the markings that appear more tribal in characteristic are actually a special Augmentative trait known as “Markings Of Madness”. These markings have a similar affect as a second power which can be turned on an off in the middle of battle , given it is a “Mode” of sorts that gives Access to the abilities and traits that are given to her by the Mad Demon blood which is running in her veins. Notably though these Markings in essence just through activation create a potent release that will generate a force that can cause minor tremors and explosions within a certain radius.


There are some things that the Markings Of Madness allow that are augmentative boosts, and some that are purely extra abilities that become usable only after the engage of Markings of Madness has occurred. It is quite easy to know when it is released because the Markings Of Madness, despite the threat and strength it has is similar to the function of a shikai Awakening; it requires a verbal awakening which in turn will awaken and activate the Mad Demon Blood within her body which is what causes the markings on her face and her clothing that are normally always visible to glow a dark vibrant purple hue, before they shift colors into a nice base black.


[b]Release Phrase for Kyōki no making:
” Riot and Purge. Kyōki no making”


Physical Augmentations:



猛烈なスピード :Mōretsuna supīdo [Ferocious Speed]: Yui with madness markings engaged gains an increase in speed which makes it so that comparative to her base or natural state ; would make her base state seem like it was standing still, or possibly moving through quicksand. As this state Augmentation wise allows for its first major boost to be a natural speed boost; As a result of this boost her normal speed will be superior when compared to her outside of Markings Of Madness. For example, given the boost and because the Markings Of Madness, further focus on the innate Offensive Potential that Yui Possesses or inherited from demonica—she is able to move at speeds that leave behind after-images. Such as in battle if going full speed, It would be possible in short unsustainable bursts, for her to actually achieve a speed which would seem like it was Teleporting; As an example if she forcibly moved at max speed for a second, she could possibly move from one side of a city to maybe a point that was give or take 60 miles away.




Although, going max speed is not something that happens every 2.5 seconds , instead going max speed actually damages the body due to the fact that speeds being reached are in the range that would be destructive to even an armored demon. Not to mention, she cannot sustain max speed for an entire battle, instead max speed could be reached possibly at most 5 posts total before she would be staying in the 80% range . This is because of the fact that, while she is a demon and she does have a high threshold of stamina; there are other factors in the body such as Lactic Acid build up, and even possibly fatigue of the muscles. So max speed is not something that is without a backlash; as over using her maximum speed in any situation is something that could have anywhere from mild injury to actually fully crippling her if she goes over 6 posts at max speed. 6 posts of max speed is minor injury and fatigue, the 7th post is where muscles begin to tear themselves apart and bones will break due to the tightness of the muscle itself.



射手の祝福 :Shashu no shukufuku [Blessing Of The Marksman]: With Markings Of Madness Engaged Yui has extreme Accuracy in her attacks and movements that are superior to her base state. In fact, her Accuracy is something that becomes almost supernatural in regards to the fact she can track and strike opponents in almost any position and have a fairly good chance of hitting on target. Such as if someone strikes from the back, the fronts, the sides, Above Or Below—even if there is very little time or warning of impending attack, Yui because of this strange physical Cognitive Augmentation; unless she is fatigued or in a state of mind that impedes on her mental reasoning process , can generally match the blow even from absurdly difficult points of counter. This is because her body more specifically the reflex and body to senses coordination has been honed down and refined and subtle movements such as a twitch of the muscle, or even a fleeting shift in weight generally can be discerned.



Also this also is watered down into another concept which is as simple as Potent Depth Perception and Motion Tracking. Her Marksmanship or Accuracy can be contributed from her Mad Demon Markings Boosting and enhancing these Two fields to the extreme’s, meaning while most people need both eyes to sense or gauge depth of a strike, she only needs one. This feat means that in the midst of battle even with diminished eyesight she generally is able to see or gauge the distance between the attack, or people around her with pin-point accuracy in a fairly short amount of time. From this she is able to then gauge and track even slight movements in her peripheral , and direct field of vision even if they are moving at ridiculously high speed. The trick here is sometimes slight movements become overlooked just because the brain cannot process them all. Instead of that in this case, each of the slight movements are pieced together to form a bigger picture. Through Guess work, lighting, changes in the environment around Yui, and even slight movements that she can catch in her eyesight. Meaning while she cannot predict every nanosecond of movement with 100% accuracy, this augmentative boost means she is able to be fairly intuitive and have a good idea of where attacks, or people are coming from.



Skill’s And Techniques:



狂気順: Kyōki-jun:[Madness Order]: Yui has a particular energy technique known as Madness Order. What it does is by harnessing energy that is present from her Mad Demon blood, and more particularly the energy that is present in her body from Zao Ka, or the many demon magic seals naturally found on the demon. This energy is multiplied and warped or corrupted further through the blood, and then becomes usable in particular skills which are all found under the main technique of Madness Order. This was perfected and altered due to the innate reincarnation that she is both of demonica, and the awakening of her mad-demon blood which was inherited in the process . However this ability, and its skills also carry an innate risk on the body, and the mind. And bodily strain which is centralized on the fact that harnessing such Unruly energy for the techniques will cause decay to happen which limits mobility, making it literally a self-damaging technique.



Despite the power, the limit imposed on using it is around 6 turns, for seriously easy to understand reasons. Given the power increase in this technique which makes precise use of the fullest of all her energy, makes it on par with something that could be considered to push the very limits of the users powers. Given it is not holding back energy which is normally too much for the body to bear, just using the ability itself cause immense spiritual pain, strain, and destruction. This is why the turn limit is something that cannot be negotiable, going over 5 turns in this state causes severe mobility impairment and even major internal and bodily wounds; not to mention generalized distortion of major bodily functions too. That is even when she’s still in the standard use period; which means if she was to brave it out all 6 turns, what happens is pretty dangerous; given that is the max use period. To use it that long would mean she would be in no shape to fight afterwards, and would be extremely close to either dying or passing out. It is also worth noting that even when she first releases the mad blood inside her, it causes intense pain which can cause faltering and distraction in the heat of battle.


Yet because of the immense dangers the Main Technique imposes on the user, quite literally bringing them into a order which only stems from the madness needed to actually engage in such a self-destructive technique—generates immense energy which can surpass the max output even in peak situations from the user, greatly augmenting the destructive power possessed so that they could even if they are strong enough, cause damage that could potentially destroy mountains and small towns; of course these feats would be done in the 0 tier range using this; and even then it would require equivalent strength, or possibly energy to generate such a feat. So this technique is a intense one which causes a major change up in power and has fairly nasty side Effects, below will be the techniques usable Only with these criteria met due to their innate nature and how strong they actually are in the first place.




狂気の刃の嵐:Kyōki no ha no arashi:[Madness Blade Storm] : Usable in Madness Order, this technique is activated when Yui breaks off her own arm which will break apart and vanish into the air. From these fragments many blades will be generated each having the destructive potential that would be present from her augmented cutting and shredding abilities. These blades generally the size of her forearm, can range in the hundreds in terms of quantity and can be controlled generally through telepathic means. However the general flaw the blades would have to possess is that they despite the strength and offensive power , are not indestructible or impossible to break. In fact breaking them just takes someone with similar levels of power and a well-timed attack at normal Sword breaking angles. Which is why the blades which are able to shred through steel, rock; and probably hardened gemstone—are certainly breakable albeit at pretty dangerous conditions.



Primarily in the blade, unlike the standard katana it holds a double edged blade which has both sides honed to razor sharp levels. In terms of movements they defy gravity and tend to trail in a spiraling storm around the users body. This storm starts around 10 feet outwards from her position, and ends at the 150 foot mark outwards from her body. Of course the blades can go farther out then their original positions. The only problem is the further out they are the harder naturally they become to control and manipulate. For this reason the inner part of the storm, or the closest to her function at 2x normal speed at the 10 foot mark. Anything between there and the 150ft mark is normal speed, and anything beyond the 150ft mark well are at half-speed. Because the function is similar to a storm, the closest is the fastest the furthest may be stronger but moves much slower. The concept is widely in use here, in terms of functionality.



Now As for Side-Affects, well if she used this the entire 6 turns, as you may guess she wouldn’t get her arm back. In fact using this technique requires her to give up an arm for its duration to compensate for just how powerful it is. Another thing is if the technique itself is used over 4 turns no matter what situation she might be in, she wouldn’t get that arm back. Another thing is if she lost an arm due to miscalculation in terms of time duration when using the technique—well she wouldn’t have that arm for the rest of the thread due to the prolonged regeneration that it takes to regenerate a willingly sacrificed arm in the first place. So In short the technique itself is strong, but the side-effect that stems from it is certainly one that is a pain to deal with. Particularly for this reason this technique is generally kept as one for reserves given that its uses sometimes are more problematic in side-effects then she actually benefits from it.



黒破滅的な王の牙:Kuro hametsu-tekina ō no kiba[Black Ruinous Kings Fang]: Yui Gathers energy into her hands and focuses it until it turns pitch black. From there the energy further compacts to form claws which take on a solid crystal property to them. These claws however are covered in tiny teeth or fangs that will spin at high speeds to generate an effect similar to a chainsaw. When struck the claws themselves can cut through both energy and physical attacks within reason; and have similar destructive power to her actual fists or body itself might as in the duration of use these claws despite their particular problems; are considered an extension of her body. In example these claws actually can have a demon barrier extended over them and can be used to shoot out her normal attacks in place of possibly say her palms.



Another interesting thing about this technique is that it can either stay as a construct, meaning a weapon or it can be broken down and fired to form a high velocity crescent shape blast which has enough energy packed into it to change the terrain within a fixed area depending on of course how many claws are still left. However shooting it off in an attack has a drawback, which is because they are usable only in her Markings Of Madness mode, it means that of course they would have a cool down, as any other ranged attack of moderate or decent power might have in the first place. Hence the fact that the Fang is amply named because it can be claws; the tools of a beast, or a crescent; the fangs of a wolf; They are ruinous because they have a special high speed shredding power which causes instead of normal exploding damage; a intense cutting damage that ends up ruining the landscape or objects the blast or claws come in contact with normally speaking. As for black, the blast is black and takes a 4 turn cool down if fired, meaning it generally can only be used once.



1角の悪魔戦闘ナイフ:1-Kaku no akuma sentō naifu [One Horned Demon Combat Knives]: Yui has a special pair of knives usable in this state. These knives are a dark black color with the same inscribed symbol as is found generally on her clothing. From Hilt to blade tip the knives are around 15 inches long, or a foot and 3 inches. The hilt is of the plain steel variety and it has no cross guard but does have Circular holes at the end for stringing them together after they are done being used.



Extremely Sharp: The One Horned Demon Combat Knives, are extremely sharp. These blades can cut through opponents on par with the user of them without an extreme amount of difficulty—but still require force behind them to actually get the job done. This is why the knives themselves seem to be able to cut through Seki-Seki stone and even Diamonds and dense armor and energy attacks functioning much like for an example a condensed Bankai would because of the fact the twin blades are in essence extremely condensed Focal Points of energy that have been manifested in a physical form. Hence why these are key items that are only found in her Markings Of Madness Mode- just mainly because if nothing else they require a lot of energy to manifest and then to control.


Extremely Durable: The One Horned Demon Combat Knives, are extremely durable as well. Being able to take extended onslaught from a 0 tier and tank through immense energy attacks for prolonged periods of time before actually they might break. Generally speaking this is because they are extremely condensed pools of energy that again are manifested in physical form. Other than that- the fact just is that they take a lot to actually break through and then even broken they would take a decent amount of damage before finally shattering.



攻撃的な悪魔の障壁:Kōgeki-tekina akuma no shōheki:[Offensive Demon Barrier]: Another One Of Yui’s Specialties is a kind of tricky spin off of a natural Demon Technique; Akuma Kyodo. While most demons can only use it defensively she is able to take that a step further because she is attack oriented. This allows her by changing the concept from defending to attacking to basically at the sacrifice of the barriers guarding skill—to turn it into a barrier that causes offensive damage. Specifically this means that instead of reflecting an attack like a barrier would, this causes for the barrier to be transformed so that it will cause shredding force to go along the actual vicinity of the attacking object which in turn would cause for the object to be cut up into many pieces rather then it just simply being bounced off or deflected like a normal attack might.


Using this skill though as you know from above, does make it so her demon barrier during the duration its in Offensive Demon Barrier Mode, is unable to actually stop attacks or the effects of attacks in the same way a standard demon barrier would. It would have to , attack and overpower it which would drain more energy than it would take just to normally block the attack itself. So this is a basic case of increased energy drain, and sacrificing defense to increase or boost offense. As that is Essentially how it works in a nutshell


Adding on to this, the attack skill is basically as strong as the barrier skill itself is. Such as if her akuma kyodo skill is of a master ranking then her Offensive damage would be equivalent to someone who had a master in offensive damage. So this skill is essentially based off of the normal demon barrier only in an inverted form functionality wise at the very least. Making it able to attack as strong as it normally would be able to defend , hence the name Offensive Demon Barrier.

because of this though, she does not have a defensive akuma kyodo.



破砕シャドウバースト:Hasai shadoubāsuto:[Shredding Shadow Burst]: Yui has another trick she can use in the middle of a fight or combat as well. She is able to use a standard shadow burst, a demon technique which normally is used to just increase speed. However when she does it using Shredding Shadow Burst it drains more energy however it adds a destructive edge to it such as if she used this and then punched while moving with her Shadow Burst Technique, it would generate a destructive slicing force which would be able to say shred through building or cause moderate injury. This can also be used to just cause damage while running past an opponent by generating a Destructive Tail-Wind that is capable of cutting through concrete , buildings, and objects such as that fairly easily. So in this way it is offensively taking advantage of a skill that is already useful by giving it a new add on at a price of again increased energy drain.



It Also Hurts Yui Though, by causing small cuts and lacerations on her body during the time it is in use. In this way if she used it over 10 times in a thread it would cause her legs to possibly begin giving out due to the damage which would accumulate over time from using the technique itself in the first place. Really though this is exactly why the Shredding Shadow Burst is both a blessing and a curse, it is power but it also harms the one who is actually using it. So this double edged sword is not just harming the opponent, it is generating recoil damage as well. Not only that using this has the same draw backs added on top that the normal Shadow Burst itself would use, because it is essentially just a modified version of the shadow burst.

Finally the Shredding Shadow Burst itself only works a set number of times, and say if a master of shadow movements could only use it 5 times before they would be fatigued—then Yui at the same skill level using shredding shadow burst would be only able to use is 4 times before she would be Pretty Fatigued because of the increased strain and drain that is naturally being put on the body by the energy itself. Which means in short the technique is useful but at the same time it also is causing a pretty substantial strain as stressed before numbers of times. Meaning that it is powerful, as stated before, but it is not a perfect attack that can be spammed over and over without any Consequences, and because of that it means it has holes that can be exploited such as it draining more energy, and being able to be used less. As well as the fact it generates damage to the user the longer it is used, which is why when you add them all up together, as said before it is a double edged sword.


Demon Magic Section:


核シャドウ爆発:Kaku shadou bakuhatsu: [Nuclear Shadow Explosion]: Demon magic mixed with Yui’s Bladed Energy inherited from Demonica, Allows her to generate a hybrid blast which is able to as the name suggests be transported through shadows at the price of increased energy drain. The explosion itself is a mixture of Demon Energy and Bladed energy , meaning when it goes off it can take out upwards of a mile radius. However the thing is this has a 4 turn cool down and takes up a minor amount of energy seeing as directing a potent blast which takes on the properties of a nuclear explosion by infusing it with demon magic still is not an easy feat to do. So the attack itself carries the normal properties of a nuclear explosion but also just is easier to transfer and shoot off in different directions because of the fact the demon magic inside it makes it just that much easier to control and to manipulate in general.



核鋸ディスク:Kaku noko disuku:[Nuclear Saw Disc]: Using the concept of cutting with a tad of demon magic, Yui creates a spinning Saw toothed disc made of a hybrid of Bladed and demon energies merged together to generate a blackened Hue. This Disk when fully formed is 4 foot around. It can come in two forms, a disc which can be thrown at full power. This kind of disc has enough destructive power to incinerate everything within a few blocks at base power and then cause nuclear radiation for another few blocks beyond that without much of a problem. The Second Kind however, changes it so that the chain saw disks hover around her body instead of actually being used to explode or Kamikaze something. When used in this way the discs can be carried around for upwards of 2 turns at a max of 4 discs total being out. Each disc will be a fraction of the total power of what the original disc would be. They also have enough power to each at least blow up a 50-100 foot radius around them in a concentrated burning blast.



However these discs do have a cool down time, meaning they can be used ever turn within reason meaning they cannot be spam shot every other second, but possibly can be fired at most 1 times in a turn and that could be done back to back possibly 4 turns at most before it would need a 4 turn cool down following that. Because they may not drain much, but when totaled up the amount of energy that is drained is actually quite a bit.



小さな悪魔ブラスト:Chīsana akuma bura suto:[Small Demon Blast] : Yui Generates a minor amount of energy such as a balla and then focuses it into the palm of her hand. From there the blast will form an orb the size of a baseball. This orb is black in color and can be fired outwards at high velocity to destroy a decent radius around it such as taking out possibly 200 feet at maximum around the detonation zone with a fairly flashy and loud explosion. These though because they do not use a lot of energy do not have a strong punch behind them, however they do have kicking force that is pretty notable behind them due to the force that is naturally present.



大鬼ブラスト:Dai oni bura suto [Large Demon Blast]: Same as before, but Yui puts in possibly a Cero’s worth of energy into the black blast. This when concentrated is able to take out a pretty hefty amount of land around her such as up to maybe a quarter mile if the energy was really focused. That being said this requires slight cool down, such as around 1 post of cool down after being fired once. Hence why for the most part the energy when in use is more something that is going to be used less often—It deals generalized destructive damage.




General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner




Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner










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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Yui Nightfang[Approved Temp 4-3 until Thread completion]   Tue Mar 18, 2014 3:11 pm


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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Yui Nightfang[Approved Temp 4-3 until Thread completion]   Fri Mar 21, 2014 2:28 pm

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Alright, to begin with I'm a little confused as to how this 20-30 year old is so strong? It usually takes hundreds of years for someone to ascend to such a level. According to canon, an individual requires hundreds of years training and perfection of skills prior to reaching the level of a Captain and yet this girl has reached both that level and surpassed it within 20 years. Also, how is she going from 13 to 20+? Last I checked, we didn't have a 7 year time skip lol. Then, I'd like a summary of the events that transpired, before:during and after her reincarnation or whatever it was that led up to this change.

Primarily a reborn individual wouldn't be able to have any abilities, think about it. She lost her memories so how could she in any way know how to manipulate the energy that sources into attacks? Additionally, no matter how good you are at rebirth or whatever happened to her, no system is 100 percent efficient, NO SYSTEM. So she would lose energy when going through the process hence why I believe for her to have a lower tier as it comes across as a death and a birth so I'd like to treat it as a new app instead of a direct revamp.

The above will reflect in my tier grading, if you disagree with the tier I give when my review concludes, feel free to contact an Admin or a Moderator. Anyway, lets begin,

Personality:
"Because she is observant Yui has turned out to be when she wants to at least, a pretty solid Tactician" - Being observant doesn't instantly make an excellent tactician who can discern 70-80% of the events that take place around her while determining a tactic against an ability that she has never seen. It doesn't seem as realistic since an idiot could be observant but it wouldn't make him any more of a tactician than the next man. Furthermore, because of the reborn and loss of memories that you mentioned, she wouldn't have any battle experience so how would she determine a tactic for every situation?

"learned from her Predecessor demonica Nightfang" - How could she have learned it? She was Demonica?

"Deep Insight:" - Contextually, unless she had some seriooous background with intelligent people and picked this trait up I don't see it being a realistic one from a 20-30 year old. Referring back to my point about her lack of experience, I doubt she'd have endured so much or been through such times straight after her reincarnation thing. However, this is a note and at the moment I have no immediate problems with it.

// - Likes: and Dislikes: < FYI they seem to have been skipped.

History:
I already mentioned this above, I'd like to have a summary rather than a link to each and individual thread, otherwise it will take longer for the both of us.


Abilities:
"ブレード道-Burēdo-dō [The Blade Road]:" - Is this a passive ability? If so, does her skin look like a set of razors and feel like a set? Or are there any distinguishable characteristics brought upon Yui when the ability is on? And does this use her energy or is she naturally dense as a razor? Because if she uses energy to turn the skin to razors then theres only a certain amount of posts that she could be able to keep it on for considering the amount of energy it'd use.
- "compilation of Demonica Nightfangs past experience and knowledge. " - You said to me that she lost all of her memories so it partially contradicts that...

"ブレードゾーン:Burēdozōn[Bladed Zone] :" - The radius for this Zone isn't mentioned. Also, I believe this would have to be based on her focus considering that your saying she has "both time to Observe" and attack.
- Also, the first section of the ability makes little to no sense mate, "Within her Bladed Zone when active she can attack, strike and move suddenly and quickly from her Pivot foot given this zone has a center and then a perimeter." Read that over, and reword it to something along the lines of, "When her bladed zone is active, she can strike and move in bursts of speed prior to pivoting on her foot and creating the zones perimeter"

"猛烈なスピード :Mōretsuna supīdo" - I have nothing against but I'm curious, what happens when her base speed is at master level?


"射手の祝福 :Shashu no shukufuku [Blessing Of The Marksman]" - So, I'm not cool with her being able to block attacks from every possible angle. Its unrealistic. Some people are fast, I doubt she could block or evade an attack from Shadin but the way your wording it come across like she can stop or counter any regardless of speed so that wont flow.
= Additionally, this ability seems to be based on "guess work" however who's to determine what she can or cant guess? I mean how are you going to maintain her guessing chances and prevent her from guessing 24/7?


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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Yui Nightfang[Approved Temp 4-3 until Thread completion]   Fri Mar 21, 2014 4:35 pm

Alrighty, since i spoke to you about everythign else in pc.. Lets get on with your history summary.

Essentially Demonica Nightfang, originally was an immensley powerful human named shizuo heiwajima. From there what happened was due to the power of her soul, she ended up becoming a pretty powerful demon. In her life she fought eric the mad demon, and through interesting circumstances obtained some of his blood which lay dormant. Now in the recent thread Reigen and Demonica met, and began to get to know each other. and essentially Reigen offered demonica a new start, essentially to change her body. Now when this happens, this will cause her to loose her nuclear energy and memories. But what it will also cause is the awakening of her mad demon blood, this will counterbalance and cause the energy to stabilize, Also the awakening of this blood will alter the energy present, changing her whole power set to one thats attack oriented. This will explain the differences such as her maintaining a moderately similar power level ,if not slightly stronger.

Now , after this we get into guess work, given the thread is still ongoing. However what will happen is the transition as planned will work by using the old body , or demonica's body, and the energy and destruction of life in the vicinity around both her and reigen, this will in short transfer into the body, stabilizing it before the soul will be restored. The side affect of course being that she will not remember her PAST that pertains to her sense of self, but she will remember the functions of her skills and again maintain her energy levels, or atleast maintain the physical levels that she previously had.

This is what i can summarize so far.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Yui Nightfang[Approved Temp 4-3 until Thread completion]   Thu Mar 27, 2014 1:31 am

Back to WIP you go.
Make the changes in your character's post and then we will keep going from there.
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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Yui Nightfang[Approved Temp 4-3 until Thread completion]   Sat Mar 29, 2014 2:38 am

Temporary Approval at 4-3 Until Your Thread Concludes so that the staff have a better understanding of the process that Demonica underwent in order to become Yui.
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