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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]   Thu Sep 25, 2014 6:37 pm






• Name: Mujin Makiyoshi
• Titles: N/A
• Gender: Male
• Appearance Age: 19
• Age: 19
• Affiliation/Rank: Shinigami

• Appearance Description: From a young age, Mujin has possessed relatively fair skin; through the years however, it has become lined with scars and shifted to a light tan. Jet black locks cascade from the crown of this man but are held up by a black headband, to avoid spilling into sea blue pools as it continues down the back of his neck. ; Harsh eyes possess a natural fierceness that strikes fear in to those who stand against them; paralyzing the largest men with dismay. A average nose possessing a smaller bridge progresses down from the center of his eye, maintaining proportion with his slender facade. Small and hidden nostrils lay above thin rose lips, lightly tinted red from the blood flow to the area of his body.

The lack of broad shoulders is made up for in his striking distance; able to reach twenty-eight inches without advancing. An abundance of ripened muscles line his upper body, large veins visible upon his arms. The remained of his upper torso(pectorals, abs, and back muscles included) remains consistent with his arm, revealing him as very well built for a man of his size—lithe.

Thin legs possess great power and acceleration; though lacking in comparison to one proficient in fighting. Beneath his black garments, he wears white boxers with vertical blue stripes. The cloak and his other standard Shiningami outfit however, is simple though eloquent. It gives of a casual and fierce air, making him seem like a man of great professional skills. And while this apparel is quite suave in the face of customers, he also holds more stealthy and combat flexible attire for special purposes.

Mujin holds his body with great posture, body language depicting a great pride he bears within. He stands above the average male, and will grace those he knows with a gentle smile. Anyone else who lays eyes upon the male would shiver out of fear for his merciless facade. Even with such a fierce countenance, his body remains tranquil, lacking of any and all tensions as he stands and moves about the world. This makes him very unpredictable, and would surprise many who face him with a fist.
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• Personality: Mujin, depicted by peers as a vigilante of the common man; revolutionary with the demise of corruption within his eyes. In the eyes of his adversaries, he is seen as cold and merciless, though he regards them as an obstacle to his ideal world — justifying their deaths to come. Violence retorts the concepts of religion, corrupt entities, unrighteous laws, and other oppressive bodies, strong adamancy fueling his motives. And while he fights for all, he also fights for personal reasons; attacking those who betray his acquaintance or seek to inflict harm upon his comrades.

His softer side comes from the womanly nurture of his mother before her death. He feels a strong sympathy for the weak and less fortunate, especially after having been born into such wealth. In some manors, he is the 'Robin Hood' of his time, taking from the greedy and giving to those deprived of enough to survive. Benevolence is demonstrated to both women and children, as well as the common man; he is one of the few remaining warriors to uphold chivalry.

Mujin is a man of his word, known to fight for the things he loves with great resolution. Comrades are those he trusts, employing in friendship regardless of decisions or appearances. Another thing he feels passionate about, is his liberty. Without freedom, then life isn't worth living; while Mujin strives to protect his own, he also struggles to preserve the liberty of others. With that in mind, he feels strongly about conserving the innocents of children; it is difficult for him to bare the death of a child or see one involved in combat at such a young age.

Actively, Mujin supports artists and revolutionists around the world who continue to analyze politics and the truth behind a filtered media. It is an inspiration to him; he takes the most liking to abstract and surreal art. He is able to comprehend the ignorance of man and thus makes an attempt to educate those possessed with such unawareness. And when attempts to educate those lacking in knowledge fail, he makes a judgment on whether there life is deserved to continue or not; disrespectful attitude towards the male will bias him towards one's death.

Mujin is as internally complex, if not more, than his exterior semblance. He constantly battles moral, questioning the validity of his justifications, and his self made life purpose. Sorrow, although hidden, overwhelms the man, for he cannot hold back the tears within for those who suffer at the blade of the greedy. As most teens, hormones have also swayed him to the topic of love, causing him to feel empty with the lack of someone to call his own. However, his primary sadness, which also results in insomnia, results from his "mother's" death; which felt as though the skies had rained down acid upon his soul.

Philosophy

Take all that you want. Strength is your only absolute. Everything that you love and want you must fight for to protect. Without strength you are weak, if you are weak, you are not mean to be in this world, you are obsolete. Freedom is his motive and power is his means. Mujin believes that his goals will be achieved, his beliefs will be protected, and all those that oppose will be obliterated.

Morality

There is no concept of good or bad within the young mans mind. His actions are simply his desires. Whatever he does, he does because he wishes it. Others actions have no moral alignment within his mind, simply what they chose to do. Though that does not mean others actions don't cause different reactions from him, should you do something he dislikes, he will handle it.

Purpose

To prove that no rules or regulations can hold you from your dreams. To attain true freedom. To have absolute control.

• Likes: Mujin like's a great deal of things from children too all types of art, reading on his alone time as well as the occasional spar with a comrade.

• Dislikes: Mujin dislike's sweet food other than banana bread, As well he dislikes when others cause harm too children are attempt too talk toward him in a angry tone or simply talk down too him.
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  • Balanced Fighter~ Mujin trained each one of his skills equally and upon graduating the academy he finished first in every one of his classes, Kidou, Hoho, Zanjustu and Hakuda their was none he was not just as perfect in as the others making him quickly become know as a balanced fighter.

  • Immense Budding Power~ Mujin Zanpaktou is all about enhancing the user's spiritual power through increasing it and likewise enhancing his ability's in gauging power. Upon unlocking shikai Mujin due to his ability's likewise gained a immense amount of power creating an overcoming air about him within the area in which he is, densely pressuring all else near. He also became perfect at gauging a individuals amount of raw energy meaning making him fearsome due to knowing when a enemy is about to run out of energy thus his attacks are swift.

  • Speedy Zanjustu~ Upon finally drawing his weapon Mujin deduced that he did not need to draw his weapon until the exact moment he planned on using it, with that being said the young shinigami posses a speedy draw. Quickly becoming known for cutting his fellow students down in Zanjustu class as soon as he unsheathed his blade and with deadly accuracy only to re-sheate his weapon.

  • Hakuda Dog~Upon entering the academy Mujin had goals only to master Kido however as he began to even himself and learn each skill set albeit at the same level, despite this Mujin is flawless with performing his hand to hand techniques and yes that means all of them simply training in order to perfect a technique the moment he thinks of it is something he prides himself on, his Hakuda is extremely well remembered and it causes a very bad problem for opponent's who can not deduce his style and a way to counter being countered.



• History: Mujin's human life was as normal as could be. He had loving parents and was raised in your average neighborhood with a low crime rate. The only real thing not normal about his life was his size. By the time Mujin reached middle school he already towered above his classmates, hell even his parents were dwarfed when standing next to him. Making friends was a challenge for Mujin because of his appearance, but once a friend was made they knew they could count on Mujin for anything.

Though Mujin would not be one to start a confrontation, he would be the one still standing by the time it ended. He enjoyed fighting just from the excitement in gave him, even joining fights that had no relation with his friends or himself, usually resulting with the fighters uniting against a common enemy that had no business being there, Mujin. Mujin would come out of those incidents with little more than cuts and bruises, while his opponents would have bruised egos and broken bones, usually breaking their hands upon punching his unnaturally rock hard body. Not to mention the fact when Mujin at least punched someone it was a guaranteed broken bone and/or other type of internal injury. That fact quickly earned him the nickname "The Burning Fist." Mujin had always thought that he would lead the life of a champion fighter and it would have probably ended up that way if it wasn't for that fate changing day.

It was only days before his nineteenth birthday. Mujin had been training himself in preparation for years so that when he turned nineteen he could register as a professional fighter. Mujin was out running through town with his best friend and training partner, running so that he could increase his endurance. Though it's not like he needed endurance training or for that matter any other type of training. As they ran through their usual route Mujin had an uneasy feeling in the pit of his stomach, though he just shrugged it off as being hunger, since it had been 5 hours since he last ate. They continued running towards their midway point, an eight lane highway overpass. Then "It" happened, while running through the overpass a massive earthquake hit the town. At that moment Mujin heard the overpass beginning to rupture. Mujin yelled to his friend to run, as they ran Mujin realized that they wouldn't escape the falling debris or at the very least HE wouldn't. Mujin grabbed his friend and used all of his strength to throw him clear of the overpass just moments before it collapsed, essentially crushing Mujin.

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• Reiatsu Color: White with black outline

• Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Exusia

• Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance:
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• Inner World: The inner world of this spirit is some what weird simply a white ocean which is actually Reiryoku being a never ending amount which simply goes on forever under a blue sun and clouds.

• Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance :
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• Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: The Zanpakto focuses on augmenting the user's kidou ability through the power of the sun and moon.

Sunlight Exposure: When in direct sunlight the user's energy actually begins too heat the nearby area (1 mile) gradually increasing the temperature by 2°; the heat is from the blade naturally drawing in solar waves which cause the blade too stay 10° above temperature for at times scalding slices.

Moonlight Exposure: When in the night time the blade begins drawing in the power of the moon and though

• Release: Exusia, Showcase Your Power!

• Shikai Description: http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-E6wk6xEYkXI/Tb6cd7KeekI/AAAAAAAACO8/79ChenXHDiM/s1600/Nagamaki%252Bwith%252Bscabbard.jpg&imgrefurl=http://defense-and-freedom.blogspot.com/2011/05/exotic-ancient-weapons-ii-nagamaki.html&h=601&w=585&tbnid=R987gnRyKaoghM:&zoom=1&docid=kPCZzrPYcDLL1M&ei=y6pjVNmkHcb2yQSL7YDABw&tbm=isch

• Shikai Abilities:

  • Exusia has a simple first ability at shikai, the weapon begins too act as a magnet for solar energy replenishing the users systems with enough energy too supply low level kidou. The ratio is 2:1 every two post in sunlight. In partial darkness the ratio is 3:1 and in darkness the ratio is 2:1
  • The second ability focuses more on applying the latent power being built up by the blade, allowing the user too direct solar waves in a offensive or even defensive fashion. How it works is the user uses the blade to direct solar waves and assualt and scorch (sun burn) the target within their radius 15 to start and adding five for 1k word trainings approved by a mod . The speed and power of this technique equals the users weapon skill.


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• Phantom Tech: n/a
• Phantom Tech Abilities: n/a
• Phantom Tech Powers: n/a

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General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Adept


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Adept
  • Kidō: Adept
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  • Zanjutsu: Adept
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  • Hakuda: Adept
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Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]   Thu Sep 25, 2014 8:03 pm

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  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[o]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


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  • Pain Endurance: N/A
  • Focus: N/A


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2 issues first is that you filled in your skills you dont do that until after you get a tier and the second is

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The Zanpakto causes one too have a unnaturally high Reiatsu for their level caused by the latent buildup off Reiryoku within the Zanpakto.

can you explain this a bit more like how much more in a sense and what can be done with it?
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]   Thu Sep 25, 2014 8:13 pm

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]   Thu Sep 25, 2014 8:35 pm

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  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
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  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


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  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus:Beginner


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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]   Thu Mar 19, 2015 12:25 pm

Archivitizing for the inactivities! Post HERE if you wish to retrieve your character.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]   Tue Oct 20, 2015 11:06 pm

[adm]Moving this character from unarchived upon request and back into active characters.[/adm]

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]   Sat May 21, 2016 6:31 pm

[mod]This profile is being moved to Inactive! If you want to move it out and start using them again, simply leave us a beep here: http://www.platinumhearts.net/t9712-the-staff-request-thread-for-moves-archives-locking-or-whatever-else-you-need-staff-for

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]   Thu Aug 17, 2017 5:16 pm

[adm]Moving this to unchecked, as this needs to be reviewed again.[/adm]
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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Mujin Makiyoshi[Approved 2-4]   Thu Aug 17, 2017 6:49 pm

[mod]Recheck time!

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• Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: The Zanpakto causes one too have a unnaturally high Reiatsu for their level caused by the latent buildup off Reiryoku within the Zanpakto. Allowing one a somewhat bigger energy pool when utilizing kido

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Exusia has a simple first ability at shikai further increasing one's Reiryoku & Reiatsu causing it too double the normal amount the user would have. This essentially allows the user a much wider field within Kido.
The second ability is found out upon unlocking Shikai, when the blade is drawn the user receives a extra boost to their Reiryoku & Reiastu x1, The blade when drawn exudes it own spiritual pressure though the user is immune. The power output is two tiers above the user maxing at 0(meaning it affects people of the tier the blade exudes and below, higher are not affected) This is a simple case of the user exuding their pure Spiritual pressure(Users and Spirit as in Shikai the blade is only allowing 50% to be utilized), and having it affect their opponents, if they are affected lowering the damage of their skills by one rank, to the point that they will immediately know they have no chance at winning the fight. So far the only known ways to negate this is to have a Spiritual pressure equal to or greater than the user’s.

Both the Shikai and the Unreleased ability are unapprovable at their current state. The sealed ability and first Shikai ability need to refer that it only applies to a Kidou reserve.

The second ability needs to be removed or reworked entirely. It is currently worded so poorly that the ability is far too overreaching to be approved. This is evidenced by:
  • Allowing a user to have the spiritual pressure and energy reserves of a 0-tier while only being 2-tier
  • Having a vague "lowering damage of skills by one rank" statement which is incapable of being equated to anything.
  • An automatic effect of "[the opponent] will immediately know they have no chance at winning the fight" which cannot be negated except by:
  • Requiring someone to be 0-tier to be immune to the ability, while this character is low 2-tier.


Also, if you had any pictures in the application besides the Zanpakutou Spirit picture, they will need to be re-hosted on a different image hosting site other than Photobucket.
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