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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Ariel N. Agnes [Approved, General, 1-2]   Sat May 02, 2015 11:54 am






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• Name: Ariel N. Agnes
• Cup Size: C
•Alias: The Little Mermaid / Queen of the Deep.
• Zodiac sign: Aquarius
•Gender Preference: Girls [Openly Lesbian]
• Age: 7000
• Race: General Iramasha
• Gender: Female
• Appearance:



Ruby Hair: Ariel has hair that is the color of a vibrant precious jewel. The color of a ruby gemstone which glimmers like droplets of crimson blood when touched upon by the light. This color is customary for her, as well as one of her trademark characteristics. It is lush, full luxurious hair with curls that would put any mundane supermodel to shame, hair that has a slight texture of roughness, and yet retains an enviable smooth- softness that has yet to be run down by the sea. The length of her marvelous hair runs down her back resting at the very lowest reaches lingering on her curvaceous hips. Now for Volume of the hair? Her hair is very thick being that due to good genes she has very durable hair that has withstood the salty waves beating against it for millennia, as such it is also easy to assume that her hair is more then just “Lovely” it is durable and resilient given after as said before many thousands of years? Her hair has yet to lose that lovely glitter that gives it it’s other worldly shine.

Oceanic Blue Eyes: Her eyes are the color of a calm tropical sea, blue with flecks of green, brown and other oceanic hue’s. It is said her eyes while they change always hold the blue color within them a trademark of a being that is exclusively a denizen of the sea. When her mood is good, these eyes are a sapphire blue, clear and as pristine as the oceans on a calm day at their finest, a blue that is soft and striking like the morning dew as it is hit by the rays of the sun. When she is angry, they are turbulent a montage of grays and blues that linger together to create a scene akin to a mighty storm in the waters of alaska, or like a tropical storm that is morphing into a hurricane. Now when she is neutral her eyes retain the color of a glassy pond, transient and undecided, ever changing in the different rays of the sun, sometimes blue like the tropic’s other times glacial like the arctic or slightly green like the indian ocean, or some river. When she is sad? Her eyes retain the color of the deep ocean, a blue so bottomless that it merges with the black depths of her pupils, fleks of purple, and dull slate blue-gray framing the edges of the outer iris. So her eyes are themselves a gateway into her moods.

Moonlight Skin : Ariels skin is soft and luminous like the moon that pulls the oceans tides. Radiant and pure white like the desert sands of hueco mundo, or a soft shell of abalone that has settled in the ocean floor, it also is smooth, softer than a downy bed of feather, but also like the face of a newly born babe not yet destroyed by the wind and the environment around it. Skin that despite the salt of the sea’s has been nurtured by the unique mineral deposits of sea-weed and even the minerals of the waves, this skin is soft but also slightly rough, a unique combination that is like the oceans, sometimes smooth, soft, forgiving. But other times a fickle rough mistress that is both the scourge and the adoration of many sailors. Now her skin is also free of wrinkles, being vibrant, resilient, firm and plump. It is the skin any kind of model would strive for, and probably spend millions to maintain, the skin of a goddess wouldn’t be a stretch when describing her skin.

Body Type: Ariels body is a tapestry of soft pliable but also firmly toned muscles that lay in the wrapping that is her soft and lovely skin. She isn’t butch but she isn’t scrawny, but rather a comfortable mixture that lay somewhere in the middle of the two, combining her muscles that have been built differently than a human or land dwellers due to her existence being one that is of and within the oceans , not on dry land. Like with her the external abdominal oblique muscle is quite large and well toned, giving her that often sought after hour-glass shape. This toned muscle comes from the motions of swimming with her long fish like lower body which emphasizes the side to side swishing motion needed to propel herself through the water. She as well has a strong Rectus abdominal muscle, or the muscle that your abs are a part of due to also the wave like motion needed to move the tail up and down for gathering speed.

Next her back is also built quite differently in the toned levels of the muscles, for example her internal abdominal oblique muscle is rather toned and well built up from the motion of propelling herself through the water on a day-to-day basis for thousands of years. Not to mention her thoracolumbar fascia , [the deep muscles in the center of the lower back right above your pelvis] muscles are toned but not too tight, built up thoroughly given unlike most land-dwelling beings, this muscle instead of being part of the back only, is interconnected with the muscles of her fish tail lower body. In this way it is a highly different caliber of importance in her anatomy when compared to that of a human beings, it is used regularly resulting in a deep v-line in her lower back rather than just a soft fatty region.

As well her Latissimus Dorsi Muscle or the muscle that has the triangular shape running the entirety of the back is also thicker than a humans, having a ribbed built shape on the deep tissue level to allow the back’s wave like motions to be enhanced, giving her that ability to move and accelerate despite the resistance of water at high speeds. Essentially like the Thoracolumbar Fascia, it is interconnected with her fish like tail and is used to enhance her mobility and power in motion. Next her Trapezius Muscle , or the muscle in the center of the upper back is built up however unlike swimmers or lifters it has a firm but pliant build, rather than being bulky and thick, due to less heavy weight lifting given the lessening of weight underwater from the viscosity of water, instead it is built more for extended use, given the arms are often in motion to help clear debris out of the way while swimming.


Her Lower body and tail: Ariels lower body is that of a fishes, or as many people have dubbed it a “Mermaids Tail” This tail is roughly 8 feet in length, ending with the fins at the end, which look similar to that of a whales in shape. Now in terms of exterior looks, the tail that starts around where ones groin would be and down, is covered in thick scales that have the general color mixture of aqua marine, flecks of blue and green merging together which shine brilliantly in the light. these scales are both durable, and stream-lined, as they are made to both protect and aid Ariels movement through the water on a day to day basis. The texture of the scales is smooth but rough, having been worn down and rebuilt stronger in hundreds of hundreds of cycles over many long years of traversing both shallow and deep depths of water, not to mention being strengthened in durability from the frigid cold of the deep ocean or arctic waters, and the more mild temperate warm waters of the tropics as over many years she has traveled and searched every inch of the oceans.

Thickness wise, Ariels tail is as thick as her hips at their thickest part which is the portion that a humans rear would be at. From there the tail tapers in thickness gradually slimming down until it reaches the thickness of a calf muscle at the thinnest part which is just before the fin at the end of the tail.


Sea-Shell Bra: Ariel only has one real article of clothing that she must wear. That is a bra that is made up of two halves of a clam. This clam however seems to be special in the fact that while most are relatively shallow, hers seem to be deep, being able to easily cover her c-cupped size bust.

• Branch/Position: (The Branch basically tells us which part of the Iramasha Family you are in. Go here for more information: http://www.platinumhearts.net/t5667-the-iramasha-clan-v2-sign-up )

• Race: General Iramasha

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• Personality:

Reserved/ Outgoing: Ariel is generally reserved in how she handles others that she doesn’t know. Given she is used to living on her own after the disaster that took her family and well the other beings of her particular kingdom away from her. This means she doesn’t just jump into a encounter with another person, or creature, instead she tends to be a little of a ice princess or like a hermit crab at first. Keeping up a tight shell of guarded expectations so that she doesn’t end up either making mistakes that would be to her detriment, or to keep herself from being embarrassed. So when she speaks to others for the first time, either she may just stick to short but still polite answers. going for the quality of her interaction over the frequency of interaction , both verbally or emotionally. Or she may just plain end up being silent for a good duration of the encounter until she feels uncomfortable at which point she may excuse herself, thank the person for the company, and leave. In many ways this sometimes can end up being misconceived as she doesn’t like company, which in all regards is totally both untrue, and also the exact opposite of her thoughts on the subject, given interestingly enough, despite this cool demeanor there lays a surprisingly social butterfly of a girl beneath it.

To those who get past this rocky shell that she puts up, they are greeted by a near 180 shift in personality. Given she is very social to those she knows. Having both joy in companions and as well a insatiable appetite for both talking, and interacting. She is at heart very much outgoing, being able to completely adapt to the situations she puts herself in, well as long as she knows the variables around her at least. In these situations she may even be the one who is talking too much , barraging a person with both questions, and scenarios that she thinks up in her mind. This is partially of course because she doesn’t often get to interact with people, as one might think given she often dwells in the depths of the ocean rather than surfacing and interacting with sea-goers, such as sailors , or the occasional castaway that is swept off of their respective ship by a storm or rogue wave. So she is a interesting conundrum.

To summarize, in many ways she is outgoing , social , and even an extroverted person, so long as she is familiar with those around her. On the flipside, in unknown situations with unknown people she is not familiar with, she is very reserved and distant as both a habit and a general precaution so that she won’t end up harming herself in any real way.


Depth Of Knowledge: Ariel is as most that live as long as she has; very knowledgable about the world, however unfortunately as is shown when she is interacting with those who are not of the sea, her knowledge is fragmented and incomplete in many area’s. Such as she has great knowledge on past periods of time, like the era of swords, and knights that rode horses and donned shining armor of steel. Or of the colonial times like when america was founded. Things like that she is fairly familiar with due to the books that have been dropped over the sides of boats in storms, or from wreckages that litter the ocean floor. She loves to read these things as she comes across them, and for this reason she also knows a lot about primitive weapons, classic novels and other things of this nature, meaning she has great historical knowledge , but less recent knowledge seeing as how most modern day information banks in the 25th century is done wirelessly and stored on computer databases with new-fangled gadgets.

Another gap in her knowledge, is that Ariel is unbelievably smart when it comes to water, such as boats, or even just the things that live under the ocean, given she has lived many hundreds of years beneath the blue waves traversing the depths , and learning as she goes along. So , she again is very knowledgable about things that are of the past, or about the water itself, and yet she knows very little about things that are on land, in the air, or are part of recent information.

Honor and Integrity: As a princess and born into a nation where honor and integrity was stressed? Ariel believes strongly in keeping her word, and conducting herself in a honest and respectable manner. Treating others with respect to her is second nature, as she wishes herself to be treated with the same courtesy and respect that she gives to others. As well being of a royal line or at least in her old nation a royal line , such behavior was not only expected of her, but it was also a sign of good upbringing, and crucial in diplomacy and interacting with those from other underwater tribes, or other nations, as most legends of mermaids appearing was true, and this was a matter of upholding the reputation of the underwater people. Meaning this core belief is very very important to her, as Ariel tries her best to show respect, honor, kindness and integrity to those she meets, no matter how uncouth, impolite, or rude they may be to her.

However this is more than just acting, she believes in lending aid to those that are in need of it, as well as treating those who are injured with respect, and showing benevolence rather than excessive force or violence to get a job done. These things are in her mind and upbringing at least, not only unneeded, but had been considered in her own society’s norms as downright disgraceful. Not only to oneself, but to one's ancestors honor and integrity as it was believed that the living was the progenitor of the gene’s that carried the souls and honor of their ancestors with them every single day. As such one's actions not only as explained reflected the person's own character , but also reflected the character of every single ancestor in their bloodline. So it is because of such an upbringing that Ariel doesn’t show disrespect , and works her hardest to be not only honorable, but to be spiritually a person her ancestors and her own civilization could look down on with only respect and be able to live in the afterlife peacefully.


Powerful Presence: Ariel in herself has a strong presence, born from her upbringing as nobility, and also from her feelings and very self worth being questioned every day from her own actions. She doesn’t say things with her mouth, but instead she carries her mouth with the weight of her entire being, her value’s her past, and her goals for the future. All these things are poured reverently into her words, her posture, her demeanor and her very presence. As she doesn’t act only for her own sake, with her she shoulders the reputation of thousands of beings that have long since passed away, she shoulders not only her own ancestors and her bloodlines honor. She has resolved to shoulder the bloodlines of every single one of her subjects , her citizens bloodlines. Their honor , their integrity, she carries is all and projects it proudly , but also shows it humbly, not letting her presence be flavored by vanity, but rather be flowing like her ocean heritage.

She has a vibrant aura, and way with her words and a way of carrying herself. She doesn’t behave like she is of royalty and thus should be entitled to everything. Instead she behaves like because she is royalty she should act with the responsibilities and the needs of her people before her own intentions. She behaves instead of as an individual being , as a person influenced by many people, and a person whose choice reflects not one, but thousands. That is why her Presence, her very aura is strong like a tangible force, comparative to the strong relentless beat of the oceans waves , its pressure, and its depth. She believes her actions are only possible because she has those who are not here in body, but instead reside in memory deep within her heart give her the strength and the sense of weight to act as one should.

However because of this, her powerful presence is unique, as it doesn’t exude a single ounce of self within it. It instead is comparative to the weight of an army from its collective force and power, then a single general whose charisma is able to bolster thousands. Instead of being singular her presence has the feeling of multiple , many presences that have merged into one giant force , that is the very nature of her powerful aura.

Preference Of Women: Ariel prefers women in terms of her sexual orientation. She doesn’t feel women are superior however, and she doesn’t feel that women are better than men, instead this way she acts is because of a more spiritual reason. She would rather be with one of a kindred spirit, who understands the toils and pains of her own existence, and doesn’t need to be hinted to get a point. Probably also due to her reservations about the unknown, she feels in her very soul you might say, that if she is with someone who is of similar gender, she can truly be open and have a wholesome relationship, rather than one that would be at best, tentative and stressful for her. This notion however is not influenced by any scorn for men, as when in the palace, back when she wasn’t alone, she would often dine with, and converse with men on a regular basis, however she often as well would turn down courting of men because as she put it, “While i have no disdain with men, i have no real love for them either”

Showing that there is no real problem with her interacting with men, it's just kind of like she enjoys hanging out with people of either sex, but she only has any real depth of romantic interest with those of her own sex, rather than with those of the masculine gender.

No concept of time: Ariel doesn’t think about things in terms of days, or years. She has lived centuries alone, which has warped her very perceptions on time. She thinks about things in less concrete terms, and generally never has used or found need of the word, today or tomorrow. To her there are very broad and undescriptive ways to categorize time such as in the present, in the past, or in the future. So if she says it might happen in the future to her a day or even a hundred years doesn’t make much of a difference, as all of it is in the “Future” As such she also doesn’t really grasp the meaning of a life-span or a lifetime, as she has not reached the end of hers, and as well she has lived the span of time that is in many many human-lifetimes. So she hasn’t really grasped time, or urgency, instead she takes things in stride and moves through them as they arise, so that she can eventually grow and go through these things and eventually move on to other things.

Depth Of Emotion: Like the Sea Ariel has a surprising depth of emotion in her being. She has had the time to search within herself yet hasn’t been able to define things under concrete things. Instead she feels things through the hammering of her heart, or the weight that builds in one's chest, or through the pangs of pain in the heart, or the cool indifference of the mind. Sure she knows the words “Sad, Happy, Angry, Depressed”. However she doesn’t really label her emotions under those terms, given she hasn’t had to for a majority of her life describe her emotions to another being. Instead only identifying with them in terms that she herself non-verbally understands. As such she has a very complex grasp or hold over her own emotions and understands how they shift in a very vague way. She may have trouble explaining how she feels if asked to do so verbally, however if it's just herself she can quite clearly grasp, understand and then figure out how she is feeling, and trace it back to what made her feel that way.


Firm Resolve: Ariel due to her nature, her upbringing and her life doesn’t generally waver in her resolve. She is kind, diplomatic and careful with how she speaks, but once said she is rarely one to take back what has been said. As words to her are not just flimsy things that can be said without reason. Each word she says she believes is an insight to her direct personal and firm spiritual view on the subject. Meaning, she believes her words and her actions are equal partners , not that one outweighs the other. As such she behaves as she says she will behave, or she will firmly stand with her words once she has uttered them, she doesn’t use words for manipulation , instead she uses them to communicate exactly what she feels. So if she says she isn’t going to do something, then they earth may wither, and the heavens may fall apart in time, but she will almost certainly not change her opinion or go back on her word, as that is the kind of person she really is.





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• Seishin Buki Name: Poseidons Trident: The Earth Shaker’s Spear.


• Seishin Buki Appearance: Poseidon's Trident is a spear that is around seven feet in length, made of a special and odd mental that is of a slate-gray blue color, similar to the depths of the ocean is color is of different vibrancies and as well different hues throughout the shafts length. At the tip it is comprised of a three pointed blade, the center blade being the longest at around four feet in total length the very tip being a barbed shape. The outside prongs or blades are respectively each three feet in length, ending at razor sharp triangular points which glisten like abalone shells.

In terms of weight, versus durability the artisan make of the trident is interestingly light while maintaining a firm durability that is comparable to that of a Zanpakutō. Thanks to this the Trident itself is able to take quite the beating without being dulled, dented or chipped. Making it a perfect weapon for combat due to the manner of resiliency, it possesses and the structural integrity that it boasts despite its very artful and less than combat - worthy appearance.

-water storing capacity: n/a
-Water absorption rate: 300 gallons per minute to 500 gallons per minute

• Seishin Buki Abilities:

+High Velocity Water Blasts: The seishin Buki has the ability of absorbing the water surrounding it in the ocean then taking it with intermixing of energy, after this the water is fired off in high velocity blasts that exceed that of 1000 miles an hour, turning the water into a deadly weapon that is able to essentially cleave through Hardened steel, and even other kinds of metals, and even to extent, stuff like Diamonds can even be chipped by this extremely simple but also extremely dangerous blast that essentially is the product of two things, velocity and water molecules. For this reason the fun thing about it is that the blast is able to be fired fairly quickly like a bala it doesn’t use a gross amount of energy nor does it take a very long time to charge given that its a matter of sucking up as little as a drop of water and firing it at high speed.

As such the varying sizes of normal blasts are exempt in this case, it is neat efficient and uses water in sparse conservative sums while then taking it and firing it for extreme amounts of damage in a fairly short period of time, allowing for both the rate of fire and the power to be maximized in a relatively short period of time. Though because of this the blasts themselves don’t have much mass and it initial impact is deflected there isn’t going to be as much force to defend the blast as there would if it was perhaps a high density blast or projectile.

These blasts are fired from the tip of the lance and for all intents and purposes they are compared to a low energy blast that focuses more on speed and high penetrative power.

+Earth Shaker: A high velocity depthcharge that is created by sucking up hundreds of gallons of water and manipulating it to become a huge cannon ball, it is fired at roughly the speed of sound generating enough force to displace the water around it , leading to a high-speed tremor, this is akin to that of a earthquake after firing to which it is named after. It should be noted because of its size it is very hard to change its direction, and due to mass it also takes huge amounts of energy to actually create and fire, due to this the destructive power lays more in its size and density then its speed and velocity. Only one of these can be fired a thread because of the size and energy consumption.
when using earthshaker if its interrupted she looses the ability to use it again as well.


+Orobos: Known as the world eating snake, Ariel is able to Via telepathically communicating with her trident manipulate water in a three dimensional radius around her body up to 1000 feet. This water turns into fast paced tendrils of water that free flow around her. When using her mind only these waterjets can move up to 200 miles an hour breaking the sound barrier and having the impact force of a speeding train, However when she is using her trident and hands she is able to move around the water at much higher speeds, clocking it at around 400 feet per second making it literally faster than a speeding bullet. However like most things this manipulation isn’t just done by her will and the water, instead it requires chaos energy to fuel and from it steams the constant drain of energy per every use of this move.

Meaning as long as she has the chaos energy she should be able to manipulate move and at the same time use the water in this radius around her for offensive means, However as soon as her energy reserves deplete she is unable to manipulate the water properly, and from this means she will become unable to actually use the water at all. Note however with Orobos she can manipulate it in two ways, one of which being using the tremors in the water to pinpoint the location, the other being through direct sight.

+Water Dispersion Field: As well the trident has a very special field of water that it rapidly displaces at a moments notice as a line of last defense. This water is akin to a full body high velocity water blast, turning the water from a weapon into a shield that in exchange for copious amounts of water displacement and copious amounts of energy, gives her for all intents and purposes a shield that is strong enough to take a square on blast from a nuclear war head without allowing more than 10% of the damage from the war-head to penetrate and enter to damage her. Because of its strength however, this barrier which again works by firing out water molecules in a high rate of speed in a 360 degree radius around the body is difficult to maintain and is used for sudden defenses.

Because of this the barrier isn’t a passive means of defense, it instead is almost like a failsafe, used in pivotal points in battle to maintain and preserve her well being. So this shield which works basically on the molecular level to defend can be used for around three turns continuously or the equivalent of four uses in an entire thread because of both how much energy it drains and the strain of manipulating water and expelling it at a high rate of speed on every part of her body.







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• Powers:

+Water Emperor: One of Ariels cardinal powers is the mastery in which she displays her control and subjugation of the waters that surround her in the ocean. Water Emperor works through the intermingling of very fine chaos energy, as well as a high affinity and sense of unity with water itself. These things allow for Ariel’s Manipulation of the water to be a step above merely pumping energy into it and then using it. Instead it is like taking the water and binding it until it becomes and extension of her body, to be fluidly manipulated through the fine-tuned control, of energy, and the understanding of water that is born from her living in the water for thousands of years. Making the water both physical and metaphysical seeing as it is actual water from her environment that is being used, physically being used. Yet it is only thanks to the metaphysical aspect or her chaos energy’s integration into the water that allows her to manipulate it at all. Meaning that this fine balance is also resulting in drain from the total reserve of chaos energy she is gifted with, and does so gradually each time she manipulates the water that is present in her domain.

This manipulation works in unique aspects, given once she gains dominion over the water through the integration of her chaos energy, this water becomes like a queen’s loyal subjects, it cannot be directly interrupted or manipulated by outside parties nor can the water itself be directly disrupted in passive attempts by outside parties to gain control in any way shape or form over the direct intentions or properties the water is being used for. In this manner, the water itself becomes exclusively property of Ariel during the duration that her energy runs through it. Making the water as explained a direct extension of her body, a weapon for her to directly wield, capable of affecting both the physical and metaphysical planes simultaneously in the heat of combat.

characteristically the water itself in terms of speed and force is able to be manipulated fluidly without pause or break between chains in terms of command from ariel being relayed to the water and executed. Because this water is directly if physical movements are not implemented; directly to her mind allowing for her to mentally instill the direction and control the motions of the water itself without giving a single verbal command. The usefulness of this manner of combat is however challenged because by mentally manipulating the water it loses both speed, and power at the rate of being diminished by 25%. Meaning the water will be 25% weaker than its full potential so long as she is using mental commands to control, manipulate and execute attacks with the water under her control.

Moving to its conceptual inner workings, water emperor is tightly knit with the aspects of regular water it grants certain aspects of it which are based on how water works, such as water density and water flow. Velocity and mass are also things that are affected by her manipulations, meaning her water emperor behaves like real water in certain aspects when things like velocity and force are put into the picture.


Range Of Water Emperor: Water emperor’s range is a tightly knit sphere encompassing roughly 500 meters of direct manipulation in the ocean/ regular waters around her. This is the radius in which her energy is being minutely discharged, then integrated to allow for the manipulative properties of the water to be aptly used at their full potential. Meaning that her range of direct manipulation ends at the 400meter marker, however the range of effects that are directly from the water in that radius may extend much farther in terms of the direction of waves, or the ripples that are generally caused. Meaning for all intents and purposes, like real water's motion, there is two prongs, one is the actual movement, and the other is the actions generated from that motion, these are the things and the range of her ability itself.


Water Emperor Bi-products:

-Marine Life Communication: One such perk of water emperor is marine life communication, allowing her to speak with and communicate with animals in the oceans, such as the ability to talk with fish, or even water bases mammals like whales and orca’s, even to granting the ability to speak with plankton or understand sea cucumbers and other simple organisms that freely float in the oceans themselves.

-Water current manipulation: Ariel N. Agnes can also directly influence the flow of the currents around her in a given radius of a 400meters potently, and less directly in a half mile radius following that. This is because Ariel as a being who is exclusively able to transverse only the oceanic realms has been able to gain the knowledge and the ability that exceeds normal mundane water users. Or those who are able to both function on land and in the oceans themselves in general. However this breaks down into simple things such as she is able to create violent sea’s in a given radius, or will the water to form things like whirlpools, water spouts , or even freek undertows that could capsize ships and other oceanic anomalies.

Like with all things though note, the larger the manipulation of the waters natural current the more energy it draws upon to naturally make it work. I.E she must be able To supply the energy present to actually build and fluidly move the water as she wants to. As such this means that she cannot move water for indefinite amounts of time, there is a limit to how much and how large she is able to work on and control meaning that the larger the attack present the more energy is used and it also means the fewer times it can actually be used before compications occur.

-Extreme Water Immunity: This is a being that lives, breathes and is essentially a denizen of water, as such she naturally boasts a very extreme level of water immunity that is to the point that when it comes to water she is extremely unlikely to be affected by it. For example, if she was even a 2 tier facing a 0 tier as long as it was water attacks she would be taking very very little damage, to the point that unless something was done there would be little to no scratches on her body. However this is again because she spends every breath, every moment and every instant of her life moving throughout the water and from this? It means that she has a naturally built up immunity to water that comes both from her nature as a creature of the sea, and as a being that manipulates water to a high amount of efficiency.

-Highly Resistant to Fire: Ariel N. Agnes is also very resistant to fire given that she is a denizen who is entirely focused on water she has the ability to put out fire like a person defending against a childs onslaught, as such this means naturally speaking? It becomes increasingly hard to actually HARM her with fire itself, but this doesn’t mean in any way that she is Immune to fire , as while fire itself doesn’t work due to her being able to quickly put it out , there is the notion that the heat of the fire if she is somehow exposed over a long period of time will cause damage to her, Kind of like how some fish need a certain temperature to survive, or how underwater volcano’s can still cook animal’s from the heat of the boiling water alone.

In this way ,while she sports extreme durability to Fires themselves, she can be harmed by extreme levels of Heat in excess of 400-500 degrees if she is subjected to it for over two turns with ease. Meaning she may be highly resistant to fire and what it causes , she is by no means immune to it, it just takes creative means to actually harm her using fire, I.e meaning indirect methods rather than actual positive methods such as .Trying to burn her using the flames themselves. Instead using side-affects of fire such as boiling the water Around her or methods of this nature can be used to harm her with a high rate of success.

-Weak against lightning: Being a denizen of the ocean she is extremely vulnerable to electricity, as she is constantly coated in water and other highly conductive elements, for example if she is hit by lightning it wouldn’t just be the point of impact that was damaged, instead it would be more likely her entire body that would be affected by the lightning, leading to intense burns and other things of this nature that would essentially mean that hit her with electricity? She isn’t going to handle it well at all, infact it is the most effective method of dealing with her.


+Water Agility: As a being that is unable to move through land or any other region other then water, she boasts an extremely high speed of movement in water that is comparative to that of someone who is a speed specialist. Unlike speed specialists though who are able to move in many environments? Ariel N. Agnes is able to move only through water, and as such over her life as a being of the sea as well as her ability to move currents has granted her a powerful talent in the art of mobility while under the seas. Being able to move distances of many hundreds of miles in the span of a few minutes being one of the many perks that comes with her strange predicament.

Beyond this Ariel is able to do tight turns, and movements within the water that enable her to move at rates that in some instances could be comparative to high speed transportation I.E sonido or other abilities of this nature, as her body has also grown up without a need for these movements seeing as she doesn’t move through dimensions or even from the air, instead moving solely through bodies of water. Meaning its a notion of if someone specializes in something they become good at it, and in her case its like many people with running or jogging, her upbringing has caused her to be able to move like this.

Now Through current manipulation she is also able to boost this speed even further by speeding up the water that is surrounding her, making it so that Ariel is able to transverse for example, from vietnam to the america’s in roughly 2 hours if moving in a direct straight line and accelerating constantly for the entire duration of the trip.




+Pressure Guard: As a creature of the deep, Ariel N. Agnes is able to withstand extreme pressures, being able to travel to the bottom of the marianna’s trench without succumbing to the crushing force present. This is probably because for most of her life she was born and raised in the deepest parts of the oceans, as such she has the unique ability to be able to withstand the pressures that it has against her. The same is true in combat, being born in the depths she has a unique resistance to gravitational and other pressure type abilitys. Her body is naturally able to deal with hundreds of times that of earths natural Atmosphere.




• Chaos Moves:

Iced Shell: By rapidly expanding and cooling off water temperature Ariel is able to through the manipulation of chaos energy generate massive shells of Ice, this shell in its normal size is essentially a crystal lattice work that is up to several meters thick and the size of her body. The reinforced ice is fairly simplistic and in return for being condensed to the point of being considered a super solid it can be melted by high levels of heat over an extended period of time. As well it doesn’t block spiritual energy through specialized metaphysical defenses, instead blocking them by raw mass and strength.

Beyond this the structure of the ice is generated in a manner that allows for its formation time to be extremely low, as well as through the method of influencing the water around her instead of making her own ice from scratch, she is able to essentially cut down both the energy consumption and cool down time in half. In short this means for a fairly simplistic spell it boasts fairly good defense capabilities.

cool down time is three turns or 2 turns when using water around her. She can use this 5 times in a thread.


Oceanic Spiral: A chaos move that is done by releasing mass amounts of water and spinning it at a very high velocity, this water which encompasses the size of a small building will rapidly expand and shoot upwards in a paper thin razor sharp twist, highly penetrative with great destructive power, this spiral is able to drill through rock, pierce through steel, and eat away at even gemstones. It requires a good deal of energy, however through the way it is utilized, it is also known to be fast firing and affective when in combat. it is able to however be used once with a two turn cool down, requiring about as much energy as a hollows cero requires.

Dragon Whip: Gathering energy and shaping water into the head and body of a dragon, this move enables the user to direct a pillar of water to a length of roughly a quarter mile, this water is specially densified so that being hit by it is comparable to being suddenly sucked into the bottom of the ocean, it has bone crushing force within it, as the dragons body is comprised of water pressurized to seventeen atmospheres of pressure at the very least. In terms of motion the dragon itself is highly mobile, able to quickly weave between attacks and then attack by itself using the mental commands of the summoner. In this way it lets the user for as long as their hand is connected to the water control and generally use this for combat situations. It should be noted on top of its high mobility the Dragon whip is able to act as a firing nozzle too, sending pressurized water rapidly from the dragons gaping mouth at ruinous speeds that are comparable to being hit by a penetrative sniper rifle round, however the blasts themselves are around the size of a SUV and have the momentum needed to smash through rock and rubble.

The Dragon whip once cast can stay active for five turns, however after that the movement and the ability to make the dragon whip becomes unusable for the rest of the thread due to high energy use, and high energy consumption. To destroy the whip, either turn the dragon to steam, or sever the connection between the dragon and the hand, in doing so this will sever the flow of energy, making the dragon fall back down into the main body of water that it came from. If destroyed and five turns have not been used total, this technique takes six turns to recharge until the Dragon whip itself can be used again.

Sky Blue: Sky blue is a high energy technique which rapidly brings water up from the ocean in a radius of around a mile, after the water shoots upwards into the atmosphere it then is rapidly sucked down turning water into a downpour that has the velocity needed to smash through cars, break bones, and destroy virtually anything it comes in contact with. considering its power, this technique obviously uses a very high amount of chaos energy to pump this much water into the atmosphere. Given this the technique itself not only can be used possibly twice a thread, it also highly depletes the reserves of the caster, meaning if even used once? this technique will leave the user fatigued for several turns reducing their combat prowess to merely 70% of what they are actually capable of. As well once used this technique has a 10 turn cooldown before it even can be used again. Maximum of 2 uses a thread.





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• Class Title: Creature Of The Deep Sea

• Class Traits:
Depressurization: Ariel N Agnis is able to because of her class being the creature of the deep sea, use an ability known as depressurization, what it does is rapidly in a radius of water at maximum size being around the width of a city block, rapidly removes the pressure that condenses the water , first pressurizing it to the pressure at the bottom of the sea. Next by rapidly removing that pressure it turns even the smallest drop of water into a volatile ticking time bomb, one that explodes with enough force to from one city block sized bomb, to take out up to ten fold the radius of the originating explosion. Meaning that this is used offensively with her water attacks, she merely needs to get her blood intermingled with the blast prior to firing it and in this way she is able to then use this special trait to detonate the attack. However the Depressurization technique is also different because it requires her to snap, using the motion as the signal for the release of the attack itself.

Further there is another way depressurization can be used, in terms of energy attacks, it can be used to disperse energy unless specified that the energy is immune to any form of generalized manipulation. However to do so again requires her to be first hit by the attack , meaning she can reduce damage done to her in this way, but it also means that she is unable to void damage with this method, as it must come in contact with her body before she can use it at all. So it means that this method of damage or manipulation in terms of defense is rather useless, although it is a great offensive weapon due to the fact that it essentially turns water into a highly volatile explosive that can be used to take out wider area’s in the middle of combat.

Note, though the use of this ability, while possible from her class title, also is a double edged sword, as it requires blood, which if over used will result in anemia or grievous blood loss, as well as the energy factor or energy drain, which is substantial because a high powered explosive naturally will require a large amount of energy, so for these orbs it is akin if it is larger than a car to a gran-rey cero amount of energy consumption. If smaller then a car, it is around the energy consumption of a regular cero. If larger than a commercial building it will be the energy consumption of three gran rey cero worth of energy, essentially meaning, combining the energy drain, and the blood loss, that this technique is a balance of serious drawbacks in return for extreme destructive power, given these blasts are in many ways equivalent to small scale nuclear explosions, by small scale meaning if a nuclear explosion was the size of 10 city blocks, or a city block, then this would be the amount of energy that would be emitted from a single one of these blasts.

So as mentioned before, keep in mind, the ability is strong, but it requires two things, one of them being blood , which is something that is a finite resource, and the other one being massive amounts of energy, another thing that is a finite resource. Ergo, she is unable to spam the technique, and for example, if she’s using under car sized blasts she may be able to use it 10 times in a turn for five turns before succumbing to blood loss, and being put for all intents and purposes into a coma. Or she could use one big blast up to four times, and essentially kill herself from blood loss, or at the very least put herself in a coma for the remainder of the thread. So in this way it is powerful, but when abused its consequences are literally on par with the value of ones life. As such this trait is rarely used in full, given it is 1. life endangering, 2. exhausting on energy reserves. 3. highly destructive.

Deceptively Immense Energy: Ariel N Agnis from her trait as creature of the deep sea, has gained copious amounts of natural chaos energy reserves that her body itself is unable to fully contain. This energy for reasons unknown is often found intermingled and lingering in the waters that reside in her water emperor domain. Meaning that this domain surrounding her, energy wise is protected from manipulation because of the generally high amount of energy that is found within it. In example her body is only half her energy reserves, given her connection with the sea being very very high tuned, and her inability to traverse non-oceanic area’s her energy is obviously as one might expect tied in with the ocean. So unlike most individuals if one is within a mile of her they will not sense merely one signature of energy.

Instead here’s where the fun really begins, as they will feel as if immersed inside a vast being, or a small town of energy users, as while small in amount, each droplet of water naturally in this radius is holding a small fragment of this other half of her energy reserves. So while weak individually , each droplet adds up to a truly frightening amount of energy, and by being spread out, it is in part, at least partially the reason that Ariel is able to manipulate her water in this radius with such a high subjugation rate, the water is in short an integral part of herself. Beyond this, while being impressive it is also a major weakness on her part, as removing her from the water is equivalent of cutting off half her energy. I.E if you seal her away from the water surrounding her, she not only is unable to move , she is half as strong as she normally is.

So the massive amount of energy which is like a ocean in its vastness and depth, is a trait that is very abusable as a weakness for her enemies. As the larger the power, the larger the weakness that is in place to balance that power. In her case, her weakness for this massive radius or massive storage area, is that if she’s removed from it, she loses that energy until she is essentially reunited with it. This is more or less one of the many reasons she is unable to leave the ocean, besides the fact she doesn’t have feet. On Top of this it is the reason she is unable to travel via chaos energy, as doing so severs her link to a massive amount of her energy, and the water moves with her, meaning her traveling must all be done by normal means without teleportation or other things of this method. Keep this in mind for a moment, as again her energy reserves are truly large. but when considering the prospective flaws in it, she is far more vulnerable than most those of either her caliber or the level of energy she has. She has blaring flaws and shortcomings that if used against her become more potent than any sword, or any weapon that can be thrown at her.

So this brings the point that, in functionality, her vast energy is both a blessing , and a cage, she moves within it, but always is bound to it, the waters around her function to her beck and call, but as a result, she has massive consequences if she leaves them, she looses a lot of things if she is separated from her water some of these things actually include things like regeneration, halving her offensive capability, crippling her mobility and essentially making it so she for example if she was 0-2 and left her water she would be of a 1-1- tier, given that half her energy would be taken away. Follow this closely as some of the benefits should make blaring sense when you read over the previous portions.

-Aquatic Regeneration: Given her energy is so intermingled at high levels with the water within the dominion of her water emperor, she gains levels of regeneration that while not immense, are enough that to destroy her within the water becomes increasingly difficult I.E if she is blown up though it will take upwards of a week in real time, she still can partially regenerate. Now if you say cut her head off she will die as her head will no longer be in contact with the water. So to kill her one needs to simply remove her from her aquatic environment. Meaning while her regeneration is linked with the water, there is a really straight forward way to remove her regeneration.

-High Speed Movement Enhancer: Within the water Ariel’s high speed movement via natural means is greatly enhanced, so long as she is within the radius of her water emperor she is good to go. This is obviously because as explained her water emperors 400 meter radius is filled with truly high amounts of her energy when totalled up collectively. Making it so she is able to move faster than she would be previously able to. Of course as with her regeneration benifit, to remove this? Its simple, just remove her from the water and not only does she vastly drop in speed, but she essentially is unable to move because her tail is that of a fish, she doesn’t have feet, and doesn’t have wings, she has a fish tail and a water affinity, so she is very dependant on the water.

- Extreme control: Unlike most water affinity users, she has potent control by the definition, however this benifit has a rather amusing flipside to it, for her immense water subjugation and control, one must merely remove her from the water and her speed and control is cut in half, meaning she is only again half as a strong as she is in the water. So once out of the water as explained she becomes laughably weak , which is why when in the water her control is outrageously strong.

-Sea Sensory: When in the water up to a 400 meter radius she is able to sense things by the vibrations within her energy and through the water molecules and waves. This power essentially is a 6th sense, giving her the ability to locate enemies, attacks or other things with rather startling accuracy. However when one removes her from the water she becomes unable to use this perk, as essentially as logic goes, if she’s not in the water, how is she able to sense vibrations through the water? Its a double edged sword, because her energy attunement is so intermingled with water, if she’s out of the water like for example Gaara from naruto without his sand, she becomes extremely weak, and looses alot of both her offense, and defensive capabilities.


Other downsides from being out of the water:

Note the abilities in water emperor right? Well when she is removed from the water, she looses all the abilities other then her immunity and her weakness to lightning, which is in fact reduced by +50%. As well due to not being in water, she is unable to use her seishin buki abilities that have to due with surprise~ Water. So the reason her abilities are powerful is because if shes not in the water in short of many words, she’s pretty much screwed.



• Skills:

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General Skills
  • Durability:Adept
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Advanced


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Chaos Energy Skill: Advanced
  • Chaos Warp: Beginner
  • Chaos Fighting Style: Advanced
  • Gem Creation: Adept



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• Background:

Beginnings and lore : Deep in the ocean, roughly several thousand years ago, there was a great civilization that lived in the depths of mariana’s trench, this race was iramasha but at the same time they had been long cut off from the main iramasha race, they had left for the oceans tens of thousands of years ago. This race was known as mermaids by humans in later years, or merfolk by others. However this proud civilization that was said to make atlantis eventually fell into myths and legends, with not a single soul to revere or remember them in the history books. Instead their only survivor Ariel N. Agnis known as the princess of this civilization’s history has been a long and arduous one. Yet we will start at the very beginning , the beginning of the tail.

“The last Birthday” : “Happy sixteenth birthday Princess ariel” Her father had told her that, on the day that ultimately was the last that she would ever be able to see him. That day she was supposed to be courted by the prince of the realm , a man who she had absolutely no interest in, nor did she plan to actually love, or live her life with. She didn’t see the point in dating men, nor did she see the point in arranged marriages, instead she felt she should be the one to choose her own path, her own destiny and live her life for the honor of her people as she felt she should live it. In fact as she swimmed through the palace proper, looking at the magnificent age old clams that still lined the abalone halls, and the angler fish that came down from above to be the lights of the palace, their bright magnificent lights akin to orbs in the darkness illuminating the paths so that the people of the realm wouldn’t be lost forever in the dark.

”..Father trying to marry me off when i have so much i want to do, so much i want to see. “ Ariel murmured to herself in a hushed tone of fervent disapproval of her father’s actions. She was miffed though she wasn’t about to let her father have it, instead as she approached the antechamber she was going to let her father know with respect; that while she understood the customs she was not going to disrespect the prince of their race by going into a marriage she herself could not put her heart into. Her honesty, and integrity was everything to her afterall, she had been taught the greatest disrespect was to live idly by in a lie instead of pursuing nothing short of one's own true intentions and motivations. The greatest disrespect was something she was not about to commit, instead? She threw open her fathers chambers as he was discussing the marriage with her husband to be. Much to her fathers chagrin as he said quite blatantly.

”..Ariel What Are You Doing, you are to be getting ready in the tower of cleansing for holy matrimony. “ That was what her father said atleast. However Ariel with her own proud spirit was not going to let her ancestors be disrespected by a marriage that was unwanted by the bride or Ariel herself. She knew in this society that the bride was the one who ultimately could choose to reject or accept the proposal, and yet this marriage had been forced upon her; without the rights nor the courtship that was part of the age old tradition of their proud race. A tradition made to bind the queen and the king with the will of the ocean , to make them apart of it and to make sure the seas would be protected by the king and queen for ages to come. Yet the old ways had been soiled as well by her father neptune’s actions. It wasn’t that she hated her father, no it was that she was raised by her mother to uphold these traditions, she was the rightful heir and she would protect the true path of her people.

”Father, i humbly decline this marriage, it is not in the old ways which our nation lives to safeguard, a marriage that is not of the heart, nor ordained by the seas is not a marriage at all, but an arrangement that tries to prolong the lifespan of our people. Father the sea’s gave us our home when we left the lands of our ancestors in the skies, we shed our wings and grew tails, we honed our scales and became a race of prosperity and dignity. This action goes against the oceans will, and thus by my name Ariel N. Agnis, the heir of the blue throne, and daughter of neptune the 50th, do in accordance to the promise of old , bring down judgement. “

Ariel hadn’t wanted to , but her father had lost the way that honored the ancestry, she as the heir had the rightful duty to protect the purity of the race, to honor the ways that ran back to the first neptune, the one who first embraced the sea and learned of its ways and built the city at the bottom of the sea. She looked at her father as she said the words which had been passed down to cleanse the bloodline of taint and filth, to right the wrongs of the people, and to work towards prosperity. Words that ariel didn’t even know the meaning of, yet she still spoke them with a solid tongue as was commanded of her honor, her dignity, and her ancestors legacy’s.

“..Now By the right i strip you of your powers, the sea will foam in rage, and banishes you and your subjects. This is its will.”

From there the oceans indeed split and foamed, but more then that the grounds shook, and cracked the city itself began to crumble and everything split apart. Merfolk had been crushed underneath pillars of sediment, and sharks ransacked the city, devouring the people, blood and water mixed together till the deep sea was stained red with its former inhabitance’s. The great citadel and its antechamber before Ariels eyes fell apart, the great lofty domed roofs crumbled and fell , crushing the king, and the prince. Great volcano’s in the trench erupted with their vermillion haze, raising and destroying the remains of the city with rapid savagery that let very little up to chance.

The deep sea boiled, and the subjects who forgot the old ways screamed, they did not understand, but those that did laid there silently looking to the heavens above, to their origins to their past they had long since given up as their bodies boiled inside out, and their scales failed and turned to soft rubber from the intense heat. As the scent of acrid flesh, and burning bone tainted these oceans ariel was admist it all, looking at the destruction, and finally understanding the meaning of these words, of what she had done. Yet not a tear dripped from her face, she had been raised to keep pure the customs, to keep her bloodline and the promises made strong. She hadn’t done a single thing wrong, and as her tail moved, propelling her through the deep sea haze, she wouldn’t look back, instead the turmoil and hatred, self loathing and degredation, the pain and the enlighenment. She would carry them proudly on her breast, she would take them and keep them inside as she swam amidst the rubble.

As she left the palace she didn’t look back but at the same time, she also remembered, the fond times of playing in the reef, the fond times of swimming amidst the tube worms and playing with the albino crabs. The dumbo octopi with their huge ears, and even the other merfolk who now had been stripped clean to the bone, these memories she would run through remembering the price she now had paid. She wasn’t to forget , or rather she wasn’t going to allow herself to regret or forget, it was her own decision one that she had made on her own. So as she swam, she would stop at the edge of the city, and wait, solemnly watching the destruction, silently watching her home be destroyed and burnt to the ground, all of those impurities washed away by one line of words. Such actions , such consequences. Yet she would not feel sorrow, for it had been not her fault, but the fault of the king. He had chosen his path, and this was the price, she was merely holding him to his grievance and making him understand its consequences.

And Yet, what was this feeling on her breast, this deep pang of pain and the feeling of a claim being stuck in her throat. Why did she feel so heavy, so alone, and so wretched? She pondered it, and she wondered, just because she had vowed in the sacred oaths of old to keep her lineage and her promises to her predecessors. Then why was it that she felt as if seconds had drug to hours, hours had become years, and day’s well days like this one seemed to be an eternity. Every anguished shout, every cry seemed to make her body feel so cold, colder than the depths. Never had the oceans pressure ever felt so great as it had then. Never had she felt so wretched, and never had she felt like she was so alone. Yet she watched and she waited, she caused it so she would be the one to hold record to hold their last moments deep within her heart, such was the way of her people. Yet as she hugged her tail to her chest, she seemed to feel her eyes fading, the brilliance dulling, and she would fall into a slumber, caressed by the acrid smell of death and decay. Sleeping through the longest night of her life.


The Trident, Passing of the torch: It was morning when she awoke, how many days it had been she did not know. However Ariels turbulent gray blue eyes looked upon the ashes of her home, there had not been a single stone saved, not a single life spared, she was alone, so alone, so utterly alone. So with the ebb and the flow of the tide, in an alien scorched landscape, she swam through the wreckage, and wondered in her heart.. and mind. “..Was my choice the right one? could i have saved my subjects, the people that had lived with me for sixteen years, could i have saved them? I do not know if the choice i made was the right one. . I will keep their losses in my heart. Till the time i can truly say if it was just or not. “

Ariel N. Agnis had kept this in her mind, as she surveyed the ruins, not expecting to see a single thing left, nothing left but the ashes that signified the end of her everything. Yet, as the glow of the angler fish seemed to traverse from the waters above, she could see it, the gleam of metal, now a cherry red from the heat, but not broken by the storm. Her eyes gazed upon the last item she had besides her bra. The trident of Neptune, Her birthright lay there impaled in the sands , and she understood finally, in the midst of the flames her father had protected it, using the water to shield it as if it was more important than his own life. Forgoing his own flesh, his own longevity to protect and pass the torch, Ariel could only gaze upon its brilliance as it cooled the metal now estranged and different then before, tempered and made anew by the endless volcanic heat. She could only gaze at its brilliance and then slowly begin to grieve, tears running down her face. She had her answer now, and it had been her own father who had affirmed the rightness of her decision, she could not have asked for a better answer.

”..Thankyou Neptune the 50th.. you have given me what i needed , I.. will no longer doubt my choice instead i will move forward, as my name Ariel N. Agnis . . No neptune the 51st, i will act on all of our race’s behalf, and carry its legacy until my death, this is my burden, my choice and my destiny. Eventually i will too return to this place to die, but till then i will make the legacy of our race a rich one, a proud one, one that you my ancestors and the ancestors of my subjects can look upon with pride. For the price of your lives to uphold our honor, and our old ways, there is but only one price , one thing precious enough to give in compensation, One thing, one life, one future. Yes, as long as the ocean flows and there is a drop of life in my veins, as long as these lands lay in ruins, and as long as the fish live, the sharks eat, the whales breed, and as long as life moves on. I will dedicate the one thing that matters to you, to you all.

This is my thanks, the thanks for giving me my everything, and showing me what i must do. Such as the long winded speeches of my predecessors i will fight, i will breath, and i will live for you every single day. For you are gone, to pay for the purity of our kind. For you have perished because of my judgement. I give you all my future, for it is the one we all have left, so watch me in your spirit world, watch me and then when i join you all, and our race is gone, or i have found one to keep the torch alit? Then when i join you in that world of light and honor, you will cast me down to the darkness of the oceans, to the deepest abyss and i will lay there, in anguish rightfully deserved for all eternity.

Yes, my life will be for you, and i will be punished when that life is over, this is the way that our people work, and the way i will repent. So until a time our nation is to be seen again, i will travel the oceans, i will look through the glens, and forge through the sea’s. I will learn of the truth that is our reality, and i will bring it with my hands to light. Till then farewell .”


Ariel would grasp the burning shaft of the trident, even though her skin would be burned black, and her blood would drip red in the water, the pain was nothing , nothing compared to the lives she had destroyed, to the price of protecting their race’s honor? This pain was but a caress from the pain of her real path, her destiny. A destiny she herself had laid out now, one she would follow, and one she would be obedient to , until the ends of time. This was her, who she was and who she would forever be, which was why as she turned as the tridents blades left the ground, she would not look back , instead she would silently thank her ancestors, her father, her predecessors, the live givers, and the ones who lay in her genes. Paying them homage was her respect, and then she would move and begin her pilgrimage, far to the north, into the lands of ice she would go, not hesitating and not stopping, she would go to gather her strength, to learn of what she was capable of, this was her own soul searching, her manner of redemption, and she had chosen it gladly, which was why now, she moved, moved to the arctic sea,


The Lights Of the North: After many months of travel, she arrived with a pod of whales, the eldest one, whose name she had given and dubbed as sebastian the wise, spoke to her as the frigid seas kissed her skin, and her vibrant blue gaze, and bottomless as the sea’s seemed to linger. “..Princess i bid you farewell, this land is where you have been seeking, now go we must go south before my calf and its mother freeze in the frigid waters” Ariel had heard the words and she solemnly nodded, she looked towards the whale and bowed lightly, her ruby red hair which gleamed in the sparkling light having slightly moved in the waves, She had smiled and bid the whale a well earned farewell before her gaze was shifted to the skies and she began to swim upwards, body moving like the waves themselves to propel her form up, and up , higher and higher unti she had finally broken the glacial surface of the waters to be greeted by a new alien world.

A world where the air was not wet, but biting cold, where there was only frozen water as far as she could see, and for as vast as she could comprehend. Yet as she was in awe, slightly propped on an iceberg, that was when she first saw humans, strange creature with bodies like her own, yet where tails should be, there was only these strange two trunks that let them stand firmly on what looked like a strange floating contraption. She stared in interest but also she was very hesitant to interact, instead she moved back as she heard these creatures utter something in a strange tongue, instead she dived deep into the water again, traversing the waves until she was a few miles from them, out of site, away from the strangeness that was these creatures. Instead she looked up into the sky when she surfaced, and tho she did not know what they were, she saw them all the same. Ariel was greeted by lights, of vibrant shifting colors, magical lights that did not stem from sea-creatures or chemicals. Lights that slithered like great sea serpents through the skies covering them in their decadence.

Such beauty, such wonder, she watched the northern lights and felt a piece of herself be moved by the lights that sought to almost pierce her very soul, enter her heart, and swallow her compassion. She did weep, as it brought back memories of what she had done, only a few months before, Brought back memories of her promise as well , these memories would make her grasp her trident and slowly she seemed to focus, she wanted to be a worthy person for her words, she believed words and actions only were one and the same, when the person truly was as intended, honest with not only themselves, but with their home and their environment. So with her mind focused she first started with something small, she wished for the water around her to rise, she asked the water not as a stranger, but as a part of herself to rise. At first nothing happened, and she said softly with words that had been carried away by the winds themselves.

“..Let me honor my promise, please.. give me your strength my everything.” She muttered these words and energy leaked from her body, it dispersed, merged and blended with the oceans, giving rise to the waves, causing them to move with her will, her intentions. Ariel had stopped and smiled with glee, she did not show it through her words at first, but just the waters moving, had been enough to move her frigid soul, melting the ice around her heart, a tear would drop rolling down her cheeks and going into the water that was moving, she could not say the words but in her heart she thought “..Thank you.. Thank you.. “ truly her words could not be more honest, she was thankful, she loved that she had been allowed this chance, she with all her being was grateful, she was joyed and she would dance, her tail whipping the waters into a froth of frenzy, her arms rising fluidly amidst the sparkling icy waves.

Right her arm would rise moving lovely like a fluid ocean wave, left her arm would descend, like a lovely wave pounding against the short, fierce but breathtaking she would dance, and dance, her body moving with the ebb and flow of the tide, her joyous expressions lingering against the backlight of the moon. Higher and higher she would will these waves as she rose higher and higher from the water, feasting more and more of the land she would never herself be able to set foot on. She didn’t mind, she didn’t care though, instead she let her joy for the moment quell her sense of duty, for the night, under the light of the northern stars, she would dance and only dance. Her joyous sounds echoing from glen to glen, rising from crest to crest, captivating the creatures , the timid penguins, the mighty polar bear, the wild beasts , she would sing them a song of love and joy. Misery and praise, and something free, something joyous, she would sing it, and she would praise it. Moving in circles she would ride the waves of the ocean, ride them until she made a dizzying spiral.

She wished to test her abilities, to gain strength , to learn more about herself so as her hands moved she would conjure up great shells of ice, shells that would rise many feet thick but not extremely large. She would raise them amidst the waves to watch them sink and float , bob , then melt, and sink again into the waves. She would conjure up mighty waves, and shoot out lines of water that would mar the ice that blocked the ocean. She would breath in happiness but also more then that, she was breathing a sigh of relief, her request had been answered after all , and all she could think was of the beauty she was surrounded by, by the ocean, by the skies, by the ice. She would sing her praises and all the same she would breath that frigid air ,utterly alone, but never having been as happy as she was in that very moment. She would dance and dance until she was tired, unable to really move another inch, and then she would sink and lay happily at the bottom of the arctic sea looking up at the sea-creatures and reveling in their beauty, as she thought to herself. ”..How much of the world have i really missed. How much have i been ignorant of, i must learn more, until i know exactly what the oceans will is. “

She would spend many months and years in the arctic, searching through the underwater caverns, the icy depths, and soaring through and learning its mysteries. She loved it, and she felt every single day was a blessing for her and her own destiny. However as all things must come to an end, she too would slowly after she searched the last cave, ran the last crevice and saw the last fish, known that the oceans not only are far vaster than this little fragment of the sea, but that she must learn much more about it and the lands above if she was to truly understand the ocean itself. So she would leave around the time the crusades began in europe she would leave the arctic and begin her movements across the coast of europe, and from it, she would slowly learn of the horrors of humanity.

Horrible Humans:

When she arrived and trailed through the coast of europe she first got her real look at humans, Such vile detestable beings, in fact her first encounter with them off the coast even though they didn’t see her. Was enough to make her want to never see another human again. There was so much blood, so many bodies sprawling across the sand, so many slain and so many wounded that all she could see was the endless slaughter of war. There were people that instead of helping women, had begun raping them in the midst of the carnage. There was no honor, no dignity, it was mindless killing that seemed to never end. She wished she understood why, but she couldn’t process it. instead as she looked through the haze of smoke, of burning villages and fires she only could think about how horrible humans actually were. She didn’t know if she could stomach interacting with such beings, she only knew that she had done the same thing to her own people for just reasons, yet she couldn’t find reason in what was going on here, Instead she only saw murder, lust for killing, and enjoyment of cruelty.

”..How.. horrible.. they slaughter each other like there is no sense of unity among brethren.. what is this.. it .. it is repulsive and vile, i don’t even want to look but these things.. what are they, how are they doing this? Are they demons.. or creatures with no conscience? just.. just what is this? How is this possible , in what world would this be okay.. i hate it, i don’t even want to remember it.. but.. still. “

Ariel N. Agnis seemed to stop and think, she though possibly it was just a isolated skirmish, and that not all these creatures had the lust to only kill and seek killing, that this barbaric nature was not every single human, that instead it was really only a select few of them that had this kind of notion. Holding on to this hope she instead traveled the coast, she looked at the coastal happenings, and each time? She was revolted worse and worse. These people had they no honor? She saw every day so much disrespect so much negligence that it made her ill, it made her stomach heave and her innards turn inside out, such beings she would never ever barter with them, she knew now that to barter with humans would only spell her own end, instead she wouldn’t harm them because she felt they would be harming themselves enough already. However still she had now seen things that forever had been burned into her mind, and such she wasn’t about to let her own body her own mind be further tainted, instead? She had herself dived into the water and swam, swam as fast as she could, swam as far away as she could. She had once loved the sights of pure beauty in the upper world that she saw from the cresting waves. However now? She felt that humans had no respect, no dignity, and instead of being pure, they only seemed to be the very worst kind of being.

She felt she would rather live alone in her own world, than mingle with them and bring her own ancestors to shame through interactions with such beings. Thats what she thought at least as she slowly sank into the depths, instead she felt she would learn through what feel into her domain, and grow from it, rather than disgracing her people through the interaction with beings of such hatred, such.. barbaric interactions. So that is where she stayed, in the depths, reading of knowledge from the humans, but never interacting with them, for roughly a thousand years or more after that, she never surfaced instead, she focused and honed her own skills learning about herself as she went along, growing stronger, and waiting for the day that everything .. everything would make sense yet again.




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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Ariel N. Agnes [Approved, General, 1-2]   Fri May 15, 2015 10:04 am

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Comments/Notes:

So then Shizou, I'll be the one looking over your app today.

My only major problem for this is... What Iramasha Class is this exactly?
- I can't figure out if this is Angel/Hybrid/General? (Could you perhaps add a small section for this in the app or add it to the title?)
- From what I can infer with her having, what seems a great control over her abilities on a good scale, I'll assume though this is a General Type Iramasha?

Minor Issues:

Seishin Buki/ You stated that it can take in water, Notable I would like you to cover the rate in which this can take in water, and perhaps implement keeping track of how much water it holds within it naturally if it can? This might also help with the fact of being a fish out of water, with her Seishin Buki making water appear on any battlefield type can be useful. Notably, I would also hope that it can contain water, as you stated it needed to with large water ability like Earth shaker. If it can't then I would, note that the water absorbed in channeling Earth Shaker is lost if disrupted.

Water Manipulation/ Notably, I noticed a statement in it that said your opponents are unable to directly or passively affect the water. I'm unsure if that is okay, so I would like to confirm that if one were to interact with Ariel's energy as an example of being able to disrupt the energy held within the water, no? Or if that is not correct, could you give me a way though this as cannot go against her power is a pretty um, absolute effect.

Depressurization/ Notably you talk about this in terms of other sizes, I would like it if you could covert this to the meters that you use throughout other abilities if you can. (optional, makes thing look nicer and simpler to understand)

Optional/ Kinda becoming a pet peeve with me, Shizou, if you can and want remove the history section of the old template. If you can if this is a general Iramasha, cross out or remove the forms, as I remember, they don't have those by any means.


Tier: To be decided.

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Ariel N. Agnes [Approved, General, 1-2]   Fri May 15, 2015 10:16 am

- Water Manipulation

with water manipulation you can affect the water itself. I.E you can disrupt it if you physically affect it, or you can turn it to steam, what it means is that you can't mess with the energy she's distributed through it due to her interconnectivity with the water. so its not absolute, in fact all this does is it shows her energy is not messed with not the water itself.


with depressurization:

1cero worth: size of a suv or smaller [2 meters or smaller]

1 gran rey cero worth: roughly a 100 or so meter's or larger.

1 city block or larger: roughly 300 meters or larger.


with seishin buki: in terms of gathering water she isnt' able to store it because her whole point is she isn't really to leave the water, and i feel it might break her if she was to have this changed.

- as for the app problems ill fix those now

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Ariel N. Agnes [Approved, General, 1-2]   Fri May 15, 2015 10:38 am

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Advanced


Comments/Notes: Nice work in with ya.
Tier: 1-2

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