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 {Reverted} Mr. Caveman, the Despairing Demon Slayer [APPROVED, 1-2++]

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Subject Post 1PostSubject: {Reverted} Mr. Caveman, the Despairing Demon Slayer [APPROVED, 1-2++]   Mon Sep 17, 2012 8:33 pm

-- Little to No Influence on Other Characters (Hardly ever used other than for OOC-RP's in XAT.)
-- Vasto Lorde makes no sense (pointed out many times by Raiki.)
-- Caveman is technically still alive site-wise, regardless of spirit/living status.
-- Easy Tweaks in Background/History.

» Name: Malcolm Stone
» Titles: The World-Class Terrorist, Mr. Caveman.
» Age: 26
» Gender: Male
» Affiliation/Rank
{Former} Demon Lord TelcinVohlis/Demon Slayer
Rogue/Demon Slayer

» Appearance Description
-- Height: 8'0"
-- Weight: 230lbs.
-- Body: Skinny
-- Skin: Light
-- Hair: Messy, Long, Dark Brown, Complimented by Messy Full-Beard.
-- Eyes: Gray
-- Shirt: Dark Tee-Shirt with Bold White Text:
-- Pants: Dark Denim Jeans.
-- Footwear: Black Workboots with Steel Toes.
-- Headgear: A Dark Baseball Cap.
-- Accessory: A pair of sunglasses.

» Appearance Picture:

Mr. Caveman's

-- Very Heavy
-- Very Durable
-- Moderate Swing Speed
-- Very Strong Impact
-- Designed to Harm Spirits


» Personality:
-- Highly Arrogant (Boasts about his kills.)
-- Motor-Mouth (Swears a lot.)
-- Bloodthirsty (Kills a lot.)
-- Highly Focused (Stays quiet When Intending to Kill.)
-- Death-Crazed (Willing to Fight at Full Power Until Death.)
-- Threatening Aura (Anyone Near Him can Feel Death Hanging Around Them.)
-- Frank (He is "To-The-Point" in More Than One Way.)
-- Surprising Intellect (He is Smarter Than He Looks.)
-- Indiscriminating (He can Fight Anyone Without Special Accommodations.)
-- Reaver (The More Damage Taken, the Better He Fights.)

» Likes
-- Killing Spirits and Spirit-Sympathizers.
-- Thrills of Danger.
-- Swearing.
-- Killing Demons, Half-Breeds and Hollows.
-- Booze (even though he prefers whiskey.)

» Dislikes
-- Spirits and Their Sympathizers.
-- Quiet Places.
-- Being Told What to Do.
-- Dishonorable Killing (killing without a chance of a fight.)
-- Pausing and Monologuing.


» Background
Malcolm is born at Atlanta, Georgia, USA. At the age of ten, he killed his family while influenced by Demon Lord TelcinVohlis. After the killing, TelcinVohlis took Malcolm in as his new Demon Slayer, the kind of superhumans who are capable assassins and fierce warriors that only works for their master, but if the master is killed, they go rogue and act on their last known order. For ten years, Malcolm is trained by TelcinVohlis. After his ten year training, he was granted a Slayer Stone in form of an Onyx forged in Hell, and then he runs political assassinations of Demons and Humans alike under the orders of TelcinVohlis.

At the year 2402, Malcolm Stone assaulted the Osaka Mansion and killed 64 People, including the Japanese Air Force General, Hanako Shikijou Senior and five politicians in what is called, "the Osaka Massacre." Only two of the sixty-six people escaped, including Malcolm's original target, Naoki Shikijou. With the military and politicians aware of the massacre, Malcolm escaped Japan under the guidance of TelcinVohlis. At Europe, he encountered the military forces of the United Kingdom, France and Germany, but the combined forces are decimated by him. In recognition of the feat, Malcolm earned the title; "World-Class Terrorist; Mr. Caveman," because the leaders cannot figure out his real name. Years after, he returned to Japan as he attempted to perform assassination of Naoki Shikijou inside DEPTH-Com Tower; a feat that increases his noriety, even though he failed to kill Naoki and escaped Minatumi City, the highly secured home of DEPTH-Com Tower.

Despite his two failures to kill Naoki Shikijou, Mr. Caveman continues assassinating spirit-sympathizing politicians at Kyoto, Tokyo, and Okinawa under the command of TelcinVohlis. Learning that the political parties are going to Karakura Central, TelcinVohlis orders Mr. Caveman to enter Karakura Central as a Ghost or an operative is inactive in original protocols, but stealthily run information gathering. He remained inactive until Chaos Island was discovered, and then he received a new mission from TelcinVohlis. Mr. Caveman was assigned to assassinate a very important rich girl named, Hanako Shikijou Junior, the Trillionaire Daughter of Naoki Shikijou and the deceased General Hanako Shikijou Senior. During his search on Chaos Island with Nada and the captured Tina Tal'Vohla, he encountered Hanako and immediately attacks her; Hanako managed to escape him through sharp wits and luck as she rescued Tina from Caveman and Nada as well. Later on, TelcinVohlis was killed and Caveman becomes rogue, the most dangerous kind of the Demon Slayers.


» Natural Attributes
-- Demon Slayer's Extreme Endurance: Caveman developed an adamant body that allows him to survive fatal attacks with the use of toughened flesh and extreme willpower.
-- Demon Slayer's Extreme Prowess: Caveman developed the technique through his ten year training to be able to have heightened reflex, acute focus, extreme strength and signature weapon capabilities with melee weapons.
-- Despairing Aura: Demon Slayers have the technique of turning their reiatsu into a specified form of element based on their original demon master. In Caveman's case, his original master, TelcinVohlis is the Lord of Despair; thus making his aura capable of causing the weak opposition to lose their will to fight by suppressing all powers near him. His reiatsu appears as a 16ft, dark grey, electrified flame, with a lighter grey figment that takes image after Caveman. Though the suppression was only half of the opponent's original, when coupled with his extreme endurance, any attacks against him from though suppressed will only tickle him, thus despairing the victims to believe that they are facing a monster.

» Racial Powers
-- Despairing Demon's Slayer Stone: In history, Demon Slayers are notorious for their association with the demons of Touketsu. Through their mastery of the arts, Demon Slayers create their soul stone with elements related to their master's. Unlike Anima Stones, Slayer Stones are usually crafted from a hellforged gemstone that are created from the fires of Hell and given to them from their master as a gift of promotion rather than fabricated on their own. When given it by their master, the Demon Slayer is considered an S-Class in their ranks as it is only given to those who have superiority among their generation. Caveman was given a Hellforged Onyx from TelcinVohlis after eleven years of service. Through his practice, Caveman was able to imbue the Onyx into the "Despairing Demon's Slayer Stone."
-- Despair Demon Slayer's Reach: Demon Slayer's version of Soul Dash, but unlike Soul Dash, the Demon Slayer's Reach has additional effects. Most of them can leave a trail of destruction behind them as they dashed to a certain location, thus anyone caught in the trail will be likely to get injured or worse. In rare cases, it can create shockwaves in two points, start and end, injuring and launching nearby oppositions away with superficial force depending on the strength of the Demon Slayer and his/her Slayer Stone. The only drawback is that it cannot be used again for a short while (2 rounds.)
-- Despair Demon Slayer's Acute Eyes: Like Soul Detection, Demon Slayers can detect spirits and living beings that holds a presence, but unlike them, Demon Slayers can see through those that are cloaked or suppressed even in specialized spells. The better rank will increase how far that the Demon Slayer can see without any distortion.
-- Despair Demon Slayer's Sorcery: Unlike the sorcerers of Anima Stone, Demons have limited range of sorcery that can only affect three things; Voice, Weapon and Zeal. Voice allows them to shake their enemies off guard with a shout or a whisper because as along they can hear it, it will affect them at full power, but cannot be used again for a while (4 rounds.) Weapon involves imbuing their weapon with a certain enchantment that allows them to do only one exclusive effect like bypassing defenses, muting the target, or leeching, however they cannot be used for more than a while (4 posts,) while they cannot be used again until the battle ends. Zeal is known as their "rage," where they imbued themselves with supernatural or even godly abilities like strength, presence, agility and defiance; the ability can only be used once per day and it is passive throughout the battle.
-- Despair Demon Slayer's Sorcery, Battlecry Soul-Shatterer (Voice:) A devastating spell of the Demon Slayer's Voice techniques, the Shatter Voice can cause severe damage to moderate spirits (Tier 3's) and disperse spiritual power from Humans and Quincy, thus leaving them unable to use Anima Stone, Quincy Bow, and Soul Evolution for a while (4 posts.) Caveman's Battlecry Soul-Shatterer is capable of creating a scar in their spiritual body, thus making it hard for them to recover their spiritual energy until it is healed by any conventional healing of a spiritual nature; for humans, it can create a scar in their soul that can render them unable to use spiritual powers until they are spiritually healed by any conventional means (for someone who uses Soul Force, it will render them into a severely injured state if they are in the Spirit World.) The only way to defend against it is quite simple; COVER YOUR EARS and block out the sound of the shout! If the words he said was muffled instead of clearly heard, the effects cannot be applied.
-- Despair Demon Slayer's Sorcery, Soul Rending Blade (Weapon:) This spell is relatively easy to figure out and to pick up on by those who are familiar with the term, "Ghost Blade." The Soul Rending Blade allows Caveman to turn his broadsword into a ghost sword that can pass through all manners of defenses. Upon passing through a spirit, it can rob them of their strength and stamina, thus making them weaker by a moderate amount for each passing. On humans or Quincy, it can shut down their spiritual defenses and enhancements all together. Considering that, the most affordable method of avoiding it was to dodge, keeping a distance or use a flashstep ability to attack him without letting the blade touch you.
-- Despair Demon Slayer's Sorcery, Defiance of Logic (Zeal:) Defiance is a spell that enhances the body of the Demon Slayer to become immune to many aspects, but not all of them. Through defying logic, Caveman cannot be a target of finishing blow (thus he has to die on his own rather than by someone's attempt,) cannot be a target of direct knock back/down (he can get knocked around by environment though,) and he cannot be restricted in mobility (without argument.) Since it is a self-buff, there is no way to prevent it other than to end it early. The best way to end it early was to avoid attacking him for quite some time (5 rounds,) or alternatively have him buried in rubble that is enough to hold him down for quite some time (5 rounds.)

» Evolution Powers: The Slaying Tide consists of three chances; if the Demon Slayer "dies," the Demon Slayer will revert back to full power and health as a wind of change. Thus fighters who fought against a Demon Slayer often complained about Demon Slayers refusing to die as the fighters often fled after their Demon Slayer opponent managed to rise from the dead the second time because they do not have the strength to continue. In mythological lore; to kill a Demon Slayer is the feat of a legend because the fighter will have to kill them three times in a row before the day is done. This means that they can get their chances back after one day (or a week after the thread is completed.)


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» Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Abilities: (Optional. Leave blank if you do not want powers.)



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General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Human Skill Sheet
  • Anima Stone Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Soul Sorcery: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Soul Dash: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Soul Detection: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Chi Skills
  • Geppo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Vindeca: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Tekkai: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Yang Surge: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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  • Zodiac: Earth Dragon
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  • Sign: The Virgin
    (6th of September)
  • Blood Type: B-Negative
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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: {Reverted} Mr. Caveman, the Despairing Demon Slayer [APPROVED, 1-2++]   Tue Sep 18, 2012 10:27 pm

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  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Master
  • Focus: Advanced

Comments/Notes: Looks good U. I wouldn't want to tango with him on a bad day though. xD
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: {Reverted} Mr. Caveman, the Despairing Demon Slayer [APPROVED, 1-2++]   Sat Sep 06, 2014 2:34 am

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I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.

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