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|Subject Post 1Subject: Jaeden's Quick Fix Thu Jul 02, 2020 5:24 pm|| |
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Jaeden Crow» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t17117-jaeden-crow-approved-1-4-hazard-rating-b?highlight=Jaeden» Upgrading: Bankai:
Effectively a one use move by all meaning it is something that Jaeden has not once used. Due to the effect and side effects that come with its usage. Energy visible to the eye is drawn in rapidly before being released in a concussive force. This gravitational push pushes in all directions rapidly. Shoving everything from the ground level up to two stories of a building outwards.
This effect will cover half the Seireitei in its distance, making it a large Bankai. But the aftereffects from using it are dire. As Jaeden's reiatsu is completely spent form utilizing this. His tier drops two tiers by using it as well as p[utting him in bed rest for a week at least. These effects come right after using it. Making it entirely unwieldy as a Bankai. Thus making it the reason he prefers to use his Hollow powers to his Zanpakuto. Hollow Power:
Recorded Time* Jaeden's hollow is able to create a recording of his previous move. This let's Jaeden record one instance of something he has done. He may only do one at a time not able to record multiple at a time. Or record other people's techniques. Jaeden's able to unleash these however at any moment he selects. These create a grey/black colored reiatsu. Making it possible for others to see the effect occurring.
This represents the darkness and grief of the past haunting Jaeden. So while his mask is active Jaeden has 30 charges of this power at his usage. Though these aren't perfect effects and can't use other people's techniques. When activated a second black and white form will become momentarily visible from Jaeden's body. This in essence is the recorded move in time, to keen observes it will be easily noticed to others it will merely blend in with his reiatsu.
This can copy Kido, Cero/Bala, Hoho, Sword techniques, and regular melee skills. But they must be Jaeden's and no one else.
Because thematically his powers make no sense, for his hollow to have two. So I'm going to get rid of them and make a singular power that his hollow has with a better-defined rate and meaning. And his Bankai makes no sense as well given more is available for what it is. So I'm going to correct them both with only one getting new power in the aspect that is' presented. » Extra:
For conviience I will list the preivous skills below in a spoiler tab.
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|Subject Post 2Subject: Re: Jaeden's Quick Fix Fri Jul 17, 2020 12:11 pm|| |