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Zero
Zero
Entity of Contradiction
Joined : 2010-12-01
Posts : 1368
Age : 26

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Left_bar_bleue9000/10000Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (9000/10000)
Tiers:

Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty Zane [APPROVED 0-5]

Fri Apr 15, 2011 2:11 pm
Human Template




General Information

Name:Zane
Age: 16
Gender: Male

Overall Appearance

Personality:
Friendly/ Zane usually doesn't go offensive unless provoked or ordered to. He is very good at being on people good side even when he shouldn't be. This trait has lead him a great way to being the Stone cross commander.

Serious and taunting/ In battle if a opponent is holding back against him then he will taunt them and will not hold back unless there is a given a valid reason too. In these cases it contradicts his freindly nonviolent side.

Encouraging/ Zane will support his friends and allies in combat to make them more confident also he will do this when training other to help them to keep pushing them selves. This is also another great thing that got him to be a commander

Average Teenager/ Even through he is a k-world commander he can act like a average teenager that pulls pranks, is rebellious to suggestions from other, and just trying to have a good time. Some hope though that he will soon enter his adult years so he's not exactly like this.

Claustrophobic/ Zane Doesn't like to be in tight places unless he feels safe inside if it. Often people will notice that his room has higher ceiling and wider rooms because of this. Many people unless they are close to him know about this fear.



Appearance:Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Boys-anime-guys-7855061-312-500
Height: 5'11

Weight: 140

Natural Abilities
Natural Quick Thinker

High Endurance

Powers


Power Development Stage 1 Appearance: is normal appearance

Power Development Stage 1 Abilities:
Spirit Shields/ Zane has the ability to create spiritual shields that can take shape of a square or hexagon. These Shields can become as big as 1 meter by 1 meter in size and are very thin but are strong enough to hold off normal attacks that can be any type. Usually can block attacks that are considered the common attacks and use least amount of power needed to use.

These shields if they are hit by a attack that is meant to explode it can contain it for a post and be moves to explode near the opponent. If they are containing a explosion then they'll take the shape of a orb. If they are broken then the explosion is released as well. This can put Zane is a dangerous position if he is trying to just get the explosion away from him.

Also Zane can use his thin shields as weapons to be launched at opponents even through they are thin,also they are very sharp as swords and blades. They can be dangerous and very difficult if they are tilted to where the edges are facing you but they have been changes from Defense to Offense. When they have edges are facing you they don't cover to much space because of them being thin this means that Zane is open for an attack. But thanks to his cyber brain's ability to do multiple things at once and quickly means that he can have some tilted and some not.

With all the things his shields can do already Zane can layer them so that they can withstand more powerful attacks. In stead of Using two single layered shields he can use one single layered shield. With this his shields are more sharper and stronger than before.

Zane has a limit of using 600-800 shield a thread or day. Even with that he can only have up to 300- 500 shields out at same time. Over time through these limits will become greater and Zane will grow stronger. These shields even though they are commanded to move by mind they can only move at a speed of 80-85 mph maximum for now

Shield platform or walk way/ Zane can make a platform out of the shields to be able to go to sky to fight aerial opponents. This platform moves at the same speed as all shields. The platform thankfully is able to hold on to Zane as it goes at speeds that can make him and allies fall off.

Great shield wall/ With his shields Zane can double the amount of shield he can bring out to create the Great shield wall. It is made out of 500 double layered shields. This can only be used once a thread so far and once used he may not use he shields for the rest of it.

Shield Dome Teleportation/ By cover himself and Allies in a dome Zane can take them to a different dimension or back to K-world to rest. If Dome has a hole in it will fail to work and takes a 1 post charge to activate. Also Zane can use this dome just for cover.

If he uses it for cover then Zane will leave a hole the Size of one shield because they block all communication on inside if sealed fully.

Chi Powers: Zane's chi is very special and go along with his powers. Now Zane can't really command his chi to do anything. For some the abilities he just uses and the other are just auto to happen if he aware of it or not.

Auto shield/ If a character does not strike Zane at a speed over 60 mph of his own current speed then a shield will appear to decrease the blow and maybe even prevent it from doing any damage.

Chi Speed/ Zane can run a a max speed of the amount of shields he can use in a thread. So if Zane hadn't used a shield yet his speed can be somewhere in between 600-800 mph maximum but minimum of his speed when using chi is 50 mph. So to say if Zane had 500 shields left he could got at a speed of 500 mph but every time he uses this for one or two posts he needs that much time of a recharge and will cost him 15 shields.

Geppo: Being that there powers
somewhat evolve around the Yin and Yang, moon step would be their form
of flash step, high speed movement where in the case of tier you will be
able to keep up with the Shinigami's flash step. Yuèqiú bù thought does
have one thing that is different from the Shinigami's flash step
because it makes no noise.

Tekkai "Iron Mass": Training
themselves as much as possible along with the Chi in their own bodies
they have formed a almost 'perfect' body where their muscles are so
close together that they have higher endurance then the normal human,
also with using this they are able to form Chi on their own skin, this
is constantly active, and is a lot like the Arrancar's own Hierro.

Yin Surge: Using this move Zane with shoot a huge blast of chi that will split and try and consume the area of the target in hopes to completely surround them in this devastating attack. It's maximum range is 2000 meters and the area after this is used will enter a very deep silence also Zane will be boasted after this move as well.

Awakened appearence: Zane when he enters this form will gain a blue glow around him at first but eventually a material similar to his shields will cover him and allow him a huge defense to most elemental and range attacks but a melee attack can still crack this armor easily but don't expect it be that way because it reforms after a post. It also seems to give him pure white hair instead of his normal blond.

Awakened Abilities/

The armor: Like explain in the appearance this armor has regeneration and immunity and resistance to most elemental attacks but in the time a melee attack can break this armor their is a opportunity to strike him with an attack. also it seems to give him also levitation but will only stop when the armor is completely destroyed. This is also seems to be a holder for most of Zane's awakened power.

Last but not least this suit act also like a tranfer for air it can create air out of water or anything and make it enter the suit but this will not work in such a place like space. Also unpure air can be clean but Zane will be in contact with it all if his armor is broken.

Reflecting tube: By shaping is spiritual material Zane can redirect an energy attack at any direction the tube points to and can be sent at allies as well as enemies and the tube is always the right size to fit the attack. This ability can only be stopped by destroying all of Zane's armor.

Armor replicas: Similar to his multiple shield back in his first power stage he can focus multiples of his armor and have them attack enemies with his mind he can command individual suits when to attack and to block at the right time. also due to no body this suit can do some very extreme moves that are usually not possible for Zane and people in general. Max amount to be created is 15 and the can be regeneration 3 times. they have same effects of regular armor.

Armor Transfer: Zane: Can give up his awakened armor to an ally to assist them in battle as well but Zane can still use all his abilities as long as the armor on the ally is in tact. The process is rather instant if he is within 300 ft of them 1 post if not.

Armor Cuffs: If a enemy is weakened to a certain extend of unconscious or low spiritual energy he can create a armor around them that disallows movement and can only be broke by a enormous return of strength from the victim or their is no escape if they are extremely weak 3-1 and below can not escape once captured.

Chi orb blast: Creating a orb of spiritual energy Zane can throw this attack opponents to deal spiritual explosive damage it will expand to 30 ft in all directs on impact Zane use max of three a post.

Inspired defense: Using his strongest defensive ability Zane can give as many of his allies as he wants armor like his but sacrifice is dis allowance of using awakening in rest of the thread and the next one this is his ultimate defensive ability and can make a very huge wall in great numbers and strength.

Zane hasn't discovered the full power of his form so he will gain more abilities for this and he has a release for this form due to his chi seal on him it is a big X on the back of his neck when he releases the seal he will awaken and the mark will disappear for time being.

Unseal phrase: Welcome to my enlightenment!

Seal: I'll be unenlightened til another day comes....

Background/Roleplay Sample

Background: Zane was original known as Zane Fenier, a part of one of richest family in K-world but as he grew older he started to hate his family for who they truly were and how they treated him as a kid. So at the age of 8 he had decided to run away and hide in the streets of K-world. Even through his parents asked for people to search for him they were unsuccessful in doing so until one day a searcher found him in one of the alleys of K-World when he was 9.

When The man approached he knew that he had been found and started to run but this guy was hired to catch people so it was easy for him to catch up to him. As he reach a dead end, Zane was trapped and was near to the end. But in his mind he thought of something to protect him and stop this man. What was created was his first shield. It surprised the man and he jumped back as he saw it. The shape of it was a hexagon.

The Next Thing Zane though was he wanted the man to go away. So the shield turned and spin until it appeared as a spinning blade. It rushed at the man and just barely missed him. With that the man was frightened and ran away to report what happen but a member of one of the crosses saw the whole thing and was a little surprised at what the kid could do. So he took him with him to his home and told his fellow members and decided that he could be useful and started to train his abilities.

As he turned 10, Zane was now understanding his abilities better and how to control them. With Consent of couple of Higher rank people in k-world he was allowed to join the Stone cross. When they asked for his name he just said his first Zane and stuck with just his first for rest of his life. After he joined through he never saw the people who helped him train but started to do so with other members of the cross and got a new place to live.

As time continued Zane trained, got taught, and did various mission for the cross. This made him a great member of the stone cross and higher rank among them. When he turned 13 instead of getting a gift from the current Stone Cross commander he was chose to take over for him because his birthday was the day he was retiring. So Zane took over Stone cross at a young age. But most through that since he was younger it would be better because he could be a commander longer than most humans can.

Once he became a commander he decided to upgrade him self and went to a store called the cybermind. Once he was there he had purchase various things as well as the cyber brain for himself and a few BH1s. After this not much trouble has happened in k-world for the stone cross commander to be called upon so he trains and does his paperwork when needed.

At Age 15, Zane came across many during this year and had become very active in combat as a commander. His most remembered things in this year was being the guard for Hanako as she "visited" K-world and his attack on Atarashii that has started a very large battle that has destroyed the settlement. In which case through it is unknown what his current operations are but he is still very loyal to K-world but is starting to think their ways of doing things are becoming less of how things he thinks should be done. To be truthful Zane has become bit more a accepting person in which case he isn't so coldly to his opponents but will he show or tell them that actually well no. The Zane today is a more kind one but still Zane.




Last edited by Zero on Sat Jan 14, 2012 2:16 pm; edited 3 times in total


I'm never going to be a hero! But I'm Zero!
Zero
Zero
Entity of Contradiction
Joined : 2010-12-01
Posts : 1368
Age : 26

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Left_bar_bleue9000/10000Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (9000/10000)
Tiers:

Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty Re: Zane [APPROVED 0-5]

Fri Apr 15, 2011 3:14 pm
Completed and is ready to be checked by someone


I'm never going to be a hero! But I'm Zero!
MaidInAmn
MaidInAmn
Seasoned Member
Joined : 2010-11-25
Posts : 1317
Age : 35
Location : New England, United States

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Left_bar_bleue5/100Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (5/100)
Tiers:

Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty Re: Zane [APPROVED 0-5]

Sat Apr 16, 2011 8:54 am
(looks through the checklist and tosses it over my shoulder)

I trust you well enough to put this character into good use. But since he is part of Kokuryuteishi, this will be reserved for [THEFROST] for reviewing and consultation.


Zane [APPROVED 0-5] 232?cb=20170319214106
    MaidInAmn
  • Plays as [?-?] Jiyūna Seishin
  • Roleplayer
  • Gamer
  • Writer
  • Employed Full-Time
  • Zodiac: Earth Dragon
    (Year 1988)
  • Sign: The Virgin
    (6th of September)
  • Blood Type: B-Negative
"I took roleplaying and storytelling with a live-and-let-live attitude, thus the idea of a character doing something out-of-character would add more to the character than letting it stagnate into an archetype or a character. Here: A rapid change to a character must be met with an in-the-moment conflict. Ta-da! A rule to live by!"
THEFROST
THEFROST
Head Admin
Head Admin
OTY

Joined : 2010-06-03
Posts : 19219
Age : 31
Location : Purgatory

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Left_bar_bleue99999/99999Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (99999/99999)
Tiers:
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Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty Re: Zane [APPROVED 0-5]

Sat Apr 16, 2011 3:40 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Comments/Notes: History is fine by me
Tier: 1-3


Zane [APPROVED 0-5] WVMWLOu
Zero
Zero
Entity of Contradiction
Joined : 2010-12-01
Posts : 1368
Age : 26

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Left_bar_bleue9000/10000Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (9000/10000)
Tiers:

Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty Re: Zane [APPROVED 0-5]

Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:46 pm
General Skills


  • Durability: Master
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Advanced
  • Weapon Skill: Adept


Last edited by Zero on Sat Jan 14, 2012 7:51 pm; edited 3 times in total


I'm never going to be a hero! But I'm Zero!
Zero
Zero
Entity of Contradiction
Joined : 2010-12-01
Posts : 1368
Age : 26

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Left_bar_bleue9000/10000Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (9000/10000)
Tiers:

Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty Re: Zane [APPROVED 0-5]

Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:48 pm
Added Chi abilities, Auto shield, and Chi Speed.

Please read and reapprove, Thank you.


I'm never going to be a hero! But I'm Zero!
THEFROST
THEFROST
Head Admin
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OTY

Joined : 2010-06-03
Posts : 19219
Age : 31
Location : Purgatory

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Left_bar_bleue99999/99999Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (99999/99999)
Tiers:
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Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty Re: Zane [APPROVED 0-5]

Sun Aug 21, 2011 7:37 pm
Boosting to 0-5 on the count of him being here so loud, being active in threads, being a K-World Commander and sticking with it for the long-haul.


Zane [APPROVED 0-5] WVMWLOu
Zero
Zero
Entity of Contradiction
Joined : 2010-12-01
Posts : 1368
Age : 26

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Left_bar_bleue9000/10000Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (9000/10000)
Tiers:

Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty Re: Zane [APPROVED 0-5]

Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:30 pm
updated and added Awakening and Geppo,Tekkai, and Yin Surge.


I'm never going to be a hero! But I'm Zero!
Zero
Zero
Entity of Contradiction
Joined : 2010-12-01
Posts : 1368
Age : 26

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Left_bar_bleue9000/10000Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (9000/10000)
Tiers:

Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty Re: Zane [APPROVED 0-5]

Sat Oct 01, 2011 7:11 pm
boosted skiils due to boost to 0 tier and a bit over due.


I'm never going to be a hero! But I'm Zero!
Zero
Zero
Entity of Contradiction
Joined : 2010-12-01
Posts : 1368
Age : 26

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Left_bar_bleue9000/10000Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (9000/10000)
Tiers:

Zane [APPROVED 0-5] Empty Re: Zane [APPROVED 0-5]

Mon Jan 30, 2012 7:24 pm
Will Skills



  • Willpower/Determination: Master
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Advanced


Racial Skills



  • Spirituality: Master
  • Valor: Adept
  • Perception: Advanced
  • Motivation: Beginner


Adding of this is Aprroved by The Frost


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