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Chao
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Age : 30

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S H I N I G A M I

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: Ayane Redwood
Gender: Female
Age: 345
Appearance:

Ayane Redwood [Older] [WIP] Rio1

Ayane looks much older now and her hair has lost its pink colour and is now more dark violet with a rose blend. Here eyes are of a bright green which appear darker whenever she starts to feel ill. She has a very cute face and a well shaped body to match her looks which often gets people asking her out, but having her boyfriend beat the day and nights out of them. She stands at about 5'7 and wears a common get up worn by dealers in a casino. reason for it, is how she decided to grow up from her younger self and into a more respectable woman which is explained later. She wears purple and white colours at a mini skirt and a smart shirt barely able to hold her breasts within.

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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality: Ayane truly acts like a little girl no matter how hard she tries to mask it. if she see's something cute and cuddly, she can't help but go and hug it and demand one herself be it a teddy, a cushion, an ornament or even a kitten, she loves cute things. There was one time where she saw a baby girl and thought it was cute in its dress and demanded to have a baby like that soon before her boyfriend fainted.

however, she made an oath wehn she grew up to become the woman of her boyfriends dreams and has succeeded in every single way except for her personality as she iss till very childish, somewhat clumsy and tends to steer towards the prettier side to life. She would be more than happy to pick out clothes for her boyfriend but they would usually be something she would wear instead, buy them, and end up wearing them herself thus showing the last ten times they went shopping together.

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There have however been times where Ayane gets very into her fake attitude. When she tries to act all womanly and smart, she tends to say things she shouldn't and gets in trouble. however this isn't always a bad thing as it brings out her sexy side. Seeing as having a bigger chest and looking good was something she wanted to do for her boyfriend, she now shows off the fact that she looks like she does whenever she gets the chance to, but only towards her boyfriend and only when their alone. She is a timid person when it comes to anything sexual after all but not towards Poliro (boyfriend).

There;s also two things which Ayane has proven to be very good at and everyone that knows her, knows she can do them both. The first, is she is a pretty good guitarist. Ever since she became a shinigami, she took it upon herself to play the guitar and many people looked up to her from her talent. However, she tried not to sing out of embarrassed and only really plays her guitar when nobody is around. The second thing she is good at, is playing any kind of card game. For some uncanny reason, she has the luck of the gods and is able to win most games without even trying as though it was her destiny not to lose a card game. That, and she has an ability based around it so she technically cheats.

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B A C K G R O U N D

History/Background:

Ayane used to live her life away from her older sister until they met close to Ayane's eventful day. Where April was with her family most of the time, Ayane was a lost child at the age of 3. During a raid at a thieves guild that the family lived for, Ayane was hit by a nasty surprise as it all went up in flames while she slept. Struggling to even wake up from the crumbling debris around her, Ayane managed to fall out of a window and escape by crawling away slowly. At such a young age, this little girl managed to escape her death and fled unwillingly to a new location. An old man found her crawling through the streets and chose to adopt her as his daughter. From her, her name was Madeline Taptowel under the authority of Old Man Raikenkesh. This old man looked after her through her life until the age of 5 where she took a wander into the forest. Raikenkesh told her not to travel too far because of demons that lived within. The old man was very knowledgeable about these sorts of things which wasn't a surprise. He wore shinigami garbs.

Before even stepping out of the house, Madeline was given a lesson on Shinigami and hollows. After she knew what to look out for, she travelled into the woods to play around. After a while, she felt a sense of foreboding. Something was watching her and it made her feel uneasy. Her walk turned into a jog which quickly became a run. Soon, she was sprinting out of fear away from the safest place she could rely to be. The old man was out shopping in town now so going home would only provide shelter. Bursting through a thicket, Madeline appeared in a large clearing with a huge lake in the middle. She had never been here before nor had she been this close to an actual lake. She lived inside the house all the time and only recently started to go outside. So this is what is behind all those trees? Suddenly, something made her jump out of her skin as a short yell following by a loud crash into water could be heard a few yards away. The water next to her was now in the air with something just as scary standing next to it. A huge monster with a white mask stood with its back to Madeline. Then it turned round and spotted her. Quickly, she let out a scream and ran backwards as fast as she could before turning her weight to run forwards. Getting closer to the house, she realised the creature had stopped following and was more interested in something else. Was that a hollow? Madeline had a few questions but her young age caught up with her. Soon, she fell asleep in the middle of the woods up against a tree.

Waking up later, she found herself back home with the old man she now called father. She preferred to call him gramps but he didn't cater to the name too much. He warned her about going too far into the woods and gave little sympathy to her frightening experience. She had to learn that this world isn't as great as she had wanted it to be. Soon, she became 7 and the old man decided it would be best if she learned how to defend herself. The house they lived in was a small cottage but the dining room was also a part dojo. Madeline didn't want to learn any weapon combat mainly because she knew she couldn't hold a sword nor wield a pole arm. Instead, she just wanted to learn how to fight with her fists. Her tutor, the old man, was a very harsh man when it came to training and gave her the full punishment that meant to becoming a powerful warrior. the training started with simple reflexes to block and never dodge. He would throw a very fast punch and Madeline would attempt to smack it out of the way and lay her own into her stomach. This, took hundreds of tries to perfect. But soon, close to her 8th birthday she had managed to perfect a sequence that allowed her to block, strike, grab and throw which the old man didn't know she could do. Her fighting style became her own, and she thought like a wild girl.

News quickly spread about a girl exactly one year older than her had amazing strength and was literally a super hero. The old man saw this as an opportunity and took her to the home of this warrior. This place seemed so familiar to Madeline but she couldn't remember why. The old man walked into the main chambers and Madeline followed behind her. there, stood two people, the owner of the building and a girl. She was young and about a year older than she was. But, the fierce power that she was emitting made Madeline shiver in fear. Quickly, she ran out of the room and into the courtyard. She didn't want to fight something with an aura like that and the old man agreed. It didn't matter though because they declined his offer and sent him packing. Walking out of the courtyard the long way, Madeline spotted something among a set of flowers. A gravestone among roses sat against a wall a few yards away. Something on it caught her eye so she went to take a look. the old man was a bit resentful, but followed her over anyway. There, on the gravestone was a name: Ayane Redwood, died at the age of 3 during the fall of the first thieves guild. The main thing that made Madeline gasp was a picture on the grave. It was weird to have an image printed into stone but this one was awkwardly special and symbolised something. This picture showed Madeline at the age of three. Then the Old man stepped up to her and began to speak.

"well, looks like you finally found it. It has taken you a whole 4 years to understand who you truly are. I found you when you were just a baby and brought you into my home. There, i chose to name you as i had no idea at the time. When you were at the lake, i realised exactly who you were. Madeline... or should i say... Ayane Redwood. This is your true past and your true future."

Ayane had little to say but wanted to say it anyway.

"So that means that girl from before.... the one i was supposed to fight... she was..."

"yes... when you ran out of the room, i had a little chat with the owner here and he said you looked familiar. When he told me a girl died here 4 years ago, the day i found you, i realised exactly what had happened."

"but...but..."

"That girl you grew so scared of, is your sister"

Ayane quickly grew a face full of tears. She turned and ran away as fast as she could. The old man didn't bother to stop her because she needed to have some time to think. Raikenkesh returned home to find her in her room punching the wall till her fists bled. She had made a couple of dents and a lot of destroyed toys and ornaments lay scattered on the floor. However, the old man did not care for that, he knew she was up to something. Turning around, she raised her blood stained fist to him.

"If that is my sister and she has that much power, then I must become stronger. I want to be able to stand in front of her without showing a shred of fear. I want to defeat her in a fair fight"

Even though this wish wasn't an easy one to achieve, Raikenkesh helped her train for the next 9 years of her life until she joined high school. Now she was fifteen and was in the same class as a group of idiots and some bigger guys. She hadn't been around guys a great deal and didn't like them looking at her. The main reason they stared at her was to figure something out. Is she related to her? Nobody brought up the guts to say anything until a guy with orange hair randomly appeared one day. He wore the same clothing as Raikenkesh and held a large sword in his hand. He walked straight up to Ayane who was staring straight back at him.

"Hey you girl, what is up with your sister?"

"wha....what?"

"The girl in the year above you. You know, pink hair, good looks, always scaring the shit out of the guys"

"SHE'S HERE!!!"

Ayane quickly stood up and shot out of the room. Running as fast as she could, she met this supposed girl walking towards her that the man meant. She looked just like the girl all those years ago that scared her to death. As she ran, the girl gave no hint as to looking at Ayane nor caring that she was running straight up to her. As Ayane got closer, she knew there was no point in even trying. She intended to lay her fist into her face and send her flying backwards. But she knew that if she tried, she would just break her arm and might even lose it. So, she ran straight past. That day turned out to be the worst day of her life. She watched the April around school like a hawk making sure she didn't do anything strange. Ayane also wanted to know how she was so strong but she would have been better leaving it alone. one night when she finally hunted down Aprils home, she stood outside the door thinking about what to do next. Then suddenly from behind, a loud crash caught her off guard and within an instant, her face had struck the floor. Turning around, a small group of hollows had turned up. This wouldn't be much trouble for her seeing as she spent over nine years training herself.

She sprang back onto her feet and dashed into the first hollow laying her fist straight through it's mask. The Old man used stray hollows as training dummies for her so this was no new feat. Soon, the group was eliminated with crushed bones and trashed masks. but that wasn't the end of it. Soon, a giant creature crawled over a nearby building with huge fangs and giant pincers. An Adjuchas class hollow had appeared which Ayane had never encountered before. No matter how hard she tried, she couldn't injure the monster which now had her pinned up against Aprils house wall. Sadly, she wasn't even inside that night as she was busy fixing a mess with some people she knew. That night, Ayane was slain by this creature and her body was lost to the winds. Soon, she awoke in soul society. Suddenly bursting upwards and slamming her head against a wall, she figured out that she was dead and now lived in the scrum of this district. She lived the next few months of her life in agony and hunger without knowing a thing about the place. Hollows appeared to try and eat her again but she stopped them quickly and defended her new refuge. Later, Shinigami began to flock around the area to try and find somebody. A girl that had recently joined the shinigami academy and was destroying every opponent she faced. Walking outside, she found the somebody that made her heart stop. Standing outside before four men was April. She was a shinigami now? Ayane just watched behind a stall to see what was happening. April easily bludgered three of them before the fourth fell onto the stall Ayane was hiding behind. He noticed Ayane and grabbed her by the throat.

"Come any closer, and this girl will be seeing red"

But April gave no answer. The only thing going through the two girls minds was the day Ayane ran straight past her in high school. That may have been a while ago but its the longest the two had ever been near each other. Quickly, the man fell down with a sword through his chest, but as he fell, he cut the throat of Ayane who was still choking in his hands. Her Rukongai life was cut short. Then again, Just like before, She woke up randomly and slammed her head on the ceiling of a bunkbed. Looking around, she found herself in a shinigami barracks a whole five years later. For some reason, she was still at the age of fifteen and could still move around. Didn't she die? That's when April walked into the room and handed her a glass of milk. She looked very happy to see Ayane awake and explained everything. Ever since the start when they were only 7, April knew who Ayane was. When she was slain by the man, she couldn't just let that be the end and put a her soul back into her body via a mod soul pill. So Ayane's soul is within a replica of her old body. This body wont age and also holds unique powers. One of these includes something where April shoved her hand down Ayane's throat. Ayane was shocked at first and fainted soon after. Then, she awoke as a small puppy with white fur. April picked this toy out especially to be her plushie form.

So from that point, Ayane lived in a shoe box next to Aprils bed. However, being a Mod Soul did have its downsides. Ayane could never be spotted by any Shinigami other than those in her squad which means she could never leave the barracks without a guide or someone to provide her with an alibi. Soon, Ayane also realised she was never going to become stronger while stuck within a small puppy toy and being a mod soul. So, she took it up with her sister. After a long conversation, Ayane convinced April to take her to squad 12 and perform an experiment on her body. What this 2 year project did to Ayane, was remove the Mod Soul capabilities from her, and traded them over for Shinigami blood and genes. Some of these were taken out of April and copied so Ayane could use Shikai and Bankai like any other person.

So from then onwards, Ayane took to the streets of Soul Society as a Shinigami rather than a Mod Soul. Now having a zanpakutou of her own, she seeks the path to greater power to be strong like her sister. However things didn't go so well after that. April disappeared from Ayane's sight and even though she tried to find her for a whole year, Ayane had not even found a clue as to where she could have gone. This sent her protective nature towards her sister spiralling out of control until she eventually grew ill from it. The 12th squad captain 'Rola karondai' took it upon himself to visit her while she was in squad 4 barracks being treated. He knew she had nobody to look out for her anymore and so he decided to act as a father figure towards her. She soon got attached to Rola and her illness faded for a few years until it striked again.

Ayane met a new recruit in her squad in the middle of the night where she really didn't expect to see the guy. he was very polite and kind towards her but she just thought he was like all the other guys that talked to her. However, he seemed much more caring and eventually, she agreed to help train him to get over his own past and give her something to forget about her sister. After training with him, the two went out for dinner but before they even ate anything, Poliro confessed to her. Being the girl she was, she ran away and hid but was found and the two talked it over. that was the day she fell in love with Poliro.

Soon after this, Ayane asked Rola to help with the training and he agreed happily. The two captains trained Poliro until he was able to perform bankai and Ayane took it upon herself to test it out for him with her own. However at a point where she would have died if she was hit, she suddenly grew ill again. the stress on her body and forgetting her sister caused her mind to recall the past events and spasm, causing her to fall to the ground. Poliro and Rola immediately took her to squad 4 where she lay in a coma for almost 2 weeks. Rola explained to Poliro her past and how she fell ill like this but nowhere near as bad. After a week, the two thought she had actually died from it, but the following week she woke up and walked into her barracks as though nothing had happened.

A good few years have passed since then and ayane grew as a promise to poliro. She wanted to be a girl that he would recognise and love more than anyone else and being a little kid wasn't going to get her anywhere with him. So, she asked Rola to help her out and using squad 12, She became the girl she is now, had her sword changed and made herself into a beautiful goddess.

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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Fate

Appearance:

Ayane Redwood [Older] [WIP] Twisted+fate

Lets keep this simple, and say Fate is a man. he is also a very cool man with a long poncho and a cool hat. he has a wolverine style beard and sideburns going on and its hard to see where he keeps moving his hands. he holds on his waist a book on metal links and wears casual modern clothes. However, he certainly looks like a magician with a western style top hat. Fate acts like a mysterious man that is always looking up to Ayane and respecting her every wish as a gentleman. Howveer, he is a tedious guy that likes to look on the dark side of life and speaks with a tone similar to that boring teacher at school. However, he iss till pretty cool and knows what he is talking about. he is fate after all.

Inner World:

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it is rather odd as to what inner world Ayane actually has and reasons for it, is actually what it turned out to be after her old one. This place is a bright sunlit casino with many wandering people. Each person represents a possibility fate has for her and the less people here, the less likely she will win a game or fight. fate, is usually among this crowd as she stands by a table dealing cards to what she calls her 'Players'.

Sealed Zanpakutô : Ayane's sealed zanpakutou is a card. A plain card from a deck of 52 cards but the card is always random whenever she looks at it as though it changes whenever it's not getting attention. the card has no special effects or anything, so Ayane Must go into Shikai to do any possible damage to her target.

PhatomTech: Nopes

Release: Parallel to Destiny, Lend me your power, Fate!

Shikai Description: Ayanes card suddenly splits into 52 cards, each one with a different picture and each one having different properties depending on the picture. Her body does not change appearance in the slightest except for the cards she has.

Shikai Abilities:

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Card Games: Ayane is able to cause each card she uses to activate their special ability. Depending on the colour of the card, the ability triggered will differ but she must always use the same words to use them. They are as follows:


  • Set 'card colour': When Ayane places a card onto a surface or target to cause it to activate. When set, the cards cannot be moved, destroyed etc Without calling a trigger, Call or Fold.
  • Trigger 'details': Ayane follows this word with details on how the card can be triggered.
  • Call 'Card Colour': Ayane can right away cause all cards she has 'Set' of a certain colour to activate at once.
  • Fold 'Card Colour': Causes all the cards of a certain colour to zoom up and return to Ayanes hand.


Once she has put the cards she wants into play, she can use the above words to make the cards activate their properties. The following are what each Card colour can do.


  • Red: The card literally explodes into flames with a metre diameter.
  • Blue: The card causes spikes of ice to shoot in all directions from it like a porcupine. Each one ranges from 1 to 4ft long.
  • Green: The card releases a poisonous gas that makes the targets eyes water and blurs vision for 6 seconds.
  • Brown: The card causes the ground to quake slightly, throwing people off balance.
  • Yellow: The card sends a jolt through whatever it is attached to and anything touching it as long as it conducts electricity.
  • Black: The card detonates with foul energy when triggered, causing dark damage.
  • White: The card sends a pulse through the target that it is stuck to, healing their wounds slightly by about 5% of the damage they actually took.


It is wise to remember each card is an area of effect ability. After the card does its ability, it zooms back to Ayanes hand to be used again. the cards triggers themselves are a very etchy part of her abilities. Reason for it, is she can actually say whatever she wants the trigger to be. For instance, a trigger could be:

"Fridge door open," To stop someone stealing the cake.
"When stepped near, within a metre radius" To use as proximity.
"When coming into contact" To use as a touch trap etc.

Bankai Description:

Ayane enters a state where she claims to be 'one with her cards' and its somewhat obvious to see that she is, as she pulls out another set of cards that she can only use in bankai. These cards have a blue crystal colour as though they were amde of water and a number on each one. the number goes up to 10 and seems to follow the same route as the Espada but the higher the number, the stronger her card is. And the reason they vary in strength, is that each card is a special summon card. Also, each summon can only be used once, and can only have one active at a time. They are set just like any other card, but upon activation via a trigger specified by the card itself, will spawn through the card as a glowing figure before materialising.

Bankai Abilities:

Ayane is only capable of summoning a certain three numbers at the moment, but as she gains stronger, Fate will bestow more powerful cards for her to use.


  • Special Summon 1: Feral
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  • Special Summon 2: Atlas
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  • Special Summon 3: Anivia
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  • Special Summon 4: ???

  • Special Summon 5: ???

  • Special Summon 6: ???

  • Special Summon 7: ???

  • Special Summon 8: ???

  • Special Summon 9: ???

  • Special Summon 10: ???


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S K I L L S H E E T

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General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Kidou: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Chao
Chao
Queen Of The Sands
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Posts : 3408
Age : 30

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Age : 27
Location : England

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Comments/Notes: Poliro: OMG YES YES *throws face into Ayanes boobs*
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