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Kakeru
Kakeru
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Tue Feb 05, 2013 10:09 am
The Skil upgrades are a no go good sir~ You need more than just soloing stuff, so get people into a thread, fight em and get stronger that way, Soloing stuff at your level won't fly unless it's GM'd by a Mod or Admin etc.

Now to your skills. Now that I got Freaking DragonForce On.

Chaos Lvl: The first level of the Berserker state; Eric goes in a change something called the Chaos form which he can with normal state or any of his transformations. Eric's body constantly gives off a powerful glow when using this form and his attacks release a dark red combination of Chaos Energy due to the chaos power of bloodeyes. It allows Eric to channel as much power as he needs to use his power in even stronger ways than ever, increasing his abilities to a higher level.

How much Higher?

Ultimate Chaos Lvl: The second level of the Berserker state; Eric's body is changed completely into something very different the Chaos form. The Ultimate Chaos form which the mad one can with normal state or any of his transformations when the mad demon chooses to. Described as a feral, golden-coated monstrosity armed with razor-sharp claws, Eric can generate four additional phantom arms made of concentrated chaos energy from the portals on his back. The arms, including Eric himself, are capable of releasing inconceivable volumes of chaos; even Eric's screams produce booming shock waves.

Uhm... Okay. What does he exactly transform into?

Warlord Berserker Abilities
Augmented Wild Senses: An augmentation of wild senses that focuses of all six of deadliest animals known the average man of the known world. This augmented power focused of sense of the animals allowing to sense & point an enemy's movements at a higher speed. With the animal senses, Eric can quickly detect what kind of speed the enemy is using examples like flash step, sonido, chaos warp or quincy's hirenkyaku. A dark combination of shadow movement, shunpo & pesquisa in an animal hunter sort of way.

You're a demon not a VIzard! Man. Say it's Shadow Movement. and a manipulation of Za Koa.

And what are the six deadliest animals? That'd be pretty pertinent in formation.

Chaos Venom Attack: This is a strong physical combo attack used by the mad demon. First, Eric Zarathos right-hooks the opponent, and proceeds with a double axe handle. Next, Eric kicks the opponent in the air, and finishes by jumping into with a left hook kick away, inflicting a great deal of damage and pain. If he misses any part of the attack then the opponent won't feel it or 50%-75& of the attack

What about defenses? I mean you're trying to force damage again, be careful with that.

Berserk War Cry: An warrior's warcry; A violent sonic scream attack which is known by some warlords, berserkers and tyrants. The air storm blast is formed invisble to enemy's eyes and then once the word is given it unleashed and powerful unseen air storm blast which can reduce an enemy's attack by 65% or hurt an enemy's ears causing them to bleed. the move can only be used three times because it can actually damage vocal chores used for talking. If used a fourth time, Eric's tongue will bleed and he'll wont be able to talk for three weeks

...Lol Why would he use this? Any way that's fine, What's the AoE and stop trying to force Damage.

Hellraiser Overdrive: An burning overdrive which gives the mad demon flame-lava enhanced punches which can burning effects to an opponent. Eric relies entirely on a enhance flame brawler style of fighting. Whether he possesses any skill in swordsmanship is unknown as he never uses his Zanpakutō in combat. His skill in hand-to-hand combat combined with his unbelievable strength makes him quite a dangerous opponent. Eric is able to fight barehanded, using swift movements to land blows on his opponents before they can even.

How long does it last?

Fire-Based Punch Attacks
Flame Destroya: This is an Demon-exclusive technique that hardens the user's zoa koa and releases it in a swift yet potent flame blast within the fist. While similar in function to an arrancar's Cero, the technique is not nearly as powerful, though thanks to its composition its speed is 20 times faster and allows for it to be fired in quick succession. In addition, it possesses more concussive force than a typical Flame Cero does.

Make it 10 Times faster or just say it goes at master Speed.

Darkness Exploder: This is a powerful attack in which the user manipulates their demonic zoa koa to disrupt the planet's geomagnetic field. With a swift upwards motion of the hand, Eric can create a massive atomic explosion that has the potential to cause an almost endless crater in the desired area. If Eric is attacked then the attack is completely gone.

Uhm... okay.. I'm not too sure you can mess with the Electromagnetic Field of the earth in that capacity, Especially to create atomic explosions. Reword this and Title this different sounds kind of silly.

Lightning Shadow Dark Claw: An lightning version of the Shadow Claw attack this is the same attack but the attack is imbued with red electricity. When his claws extend giving off an shadow energy slash attack which strong but fastlike attack that can send lightning shockwaves once the claw hit the opponent. It can be blocked by armor or stronglike defense depending greatly on the enemy's strength this had 50% more strength to bala.

-Fire =/= Lightning. How fast and how large and is their AOE and remove the forcing damage part.

Augmented Lightning Shadow Dark Claw: An lightning version of the Augmented Shadow Claw attack this is the same attack but the attack is imbued with dark red electricity. Which his hand will actually grow as with his claws, the demon claws will start turning black unleashing energy from each claw tip with dark electricity. When delivered darker and supreme energy lightning slash faster and stronger then the original Shadow Dark Claw. Stronger enemies will feel the pain of the attack while weaker opponents will have their skin rip off from the demon claws violent electric shock.

Okay... UHm... Again Lightning =/= Fire, but eh I guess this is okay.


Final Demon Archangel of the Holy One: The final unknown ability. Eric splits himself in half as unknown kage dimensional gateway forms inside unlocking to Purgatori. Eric opens up his body and a fallen angel with appear as the demon archangel starts to awaken. Eric will dissapear and the demon archangel with emerge from the remains of the demon's flesh. The Demon Archangel will have all of Eric's powers and abilities. Yet Eric's skill set will be boosted by one but it can't exceed master. The Demon Archangel's name is Joshua. Once Kade Hiroshima's original first name. The final attack of the Fallen Angel is True Angelic Black Sabbath the super megadeath attack. With one finger, the fallen one summons both angelic and demonic energy as massive spiritual energy spear imbued with quincy reishi, iramasha's chaos power and finally demon zoa koa power. The demon archangel grabs the spear and then starts crying a tear of a human and of a demon enhances the power of the spear even more.Which turns the spear both white and black. Once thrown and if it hits the target the blast radius is shocking nothing human would survive it. The enemy would need a barrier or strong defense to block the massive blast. Actually the blast radius is 15 miles long. This can be blocked by a stronger attack but the enemy will feel 83% of the attack. Once the Demon Archangel dissapears, Eric will return instantly and teleport back into the demon world where he'll be knocked out 13 days. Because of the destructive power of the True Sabbath the pain he'll feel. The demon must be at near death or in a dangerous situation to use the final ability power.

Again what's with you and forcing damage.


Judas Arts: The forbidden demonic arts of Judas artifacts; These were Eric's original and forbidden arts before and angel iramasha and powerful demon defeated him stripping him of these arts. The dark Judas arts focuses onto the two deadliest elements which the mad demon had trained completely the death element and the forbidden soul element which he had to kill many demons and witches to learn. However their a downfall to learning this ability, Eric can be stripped of this move again if the Lament Configuration an legendary angel iramasha attack is done.

...I don't get this at all.... you're saying you using something that Demons innately can use from I think... as an innate and it can be taken away bro? Doesn't make sense. Aren't DEMONS supposed to be able to innately use Death and soul? I mean... aren't they demons?

Judas Arts
Void Howling: Originally the angel imprisonment spell, Eric needs to be critically damaged for this technique to have the full effect on an opponent. Whenever the mad demon been attacked the dark cross emerges from the shadows trapping his opponent. However if the enemy had enough speed or breaks the dark cross then the attack is ended but when the opponent completely placing on the cross sharp vines start piercing his body and some vital organs not enough to kill him but to cause him serious pain. Then the curse effect sets into motion when the opponent actually believes 5 billion clones of Eric are stabbing him one at once. While goblin demons are pinning him to the cross biting at the enemy's fingertips and toes. Yet it a violent illusion which leave the enemy with a massive shockwave to brain filled with deadly nightmares a normal human would die from.

How much damage first off and where's the resistance clauses for the whole Nightmare illusion. Make a table.

Ultimate Judas Priest: A wizard called this move ultimate dispel bound but in the past it was given another name. This is shadow and powerful version of the original Judas Priest but this technique is greatly augmented. A pure shadow like defense move used by various witches and warlocks. The user must be severely hurt when using his move and one hand must be on the ground. If attacked by an enemy by some sort of attack, energy blast, sword attack, almost getting impaled, etc. The user's own shadow will block the attack immediately however it can be only used nine times if used a tenth time the user will die.

Uhm... This isn't too bad, just how strong is the shadow of the user?

Final Lost Ability
Judas Destroyer: The dark forbidden powers of the death and soul element combined to recreate the perfect death weapon which was created years ago. Eric perfected this lost attack about 10,000 years ago. The attack starts with the mad demon's eyes going completely pitch black allowing complete and total darkness to fill them. Eric clenches his right hand into a fist as both soul energy and death energy fill his fist as it start glowing with the dark power. The mad demon will start emitting an dark red aura when this aura disappears it means the attack is charged. The mad demon will started crying blood from his right eye then with one finger pointing at his opponent. Eric shouts the name of the attack and two thin deathlike zoa koa beams are unleashed from the fingers. One remains straight while the other coils around the straight beam. If this attack hits it has been known permanently cripple enemies even killing them also been known weaken Zanpakutō powers. Because when the attack hits a person it attacks the immune system then it goes after an person's blood burning it to death then the person's flesh starts to dissolve.
Judas Destroyer's Disvantages

The main disadvantage of the attack is the time required to build up enough energy for the focused attack of destruction It takes a post to build up the aura energy to focus the full power into the attack. Another one is if the demon is attacked then the attack energy begins to lose energy if he looses too much then the attack is over meaning he'll need to start all over again. The final disadvantage its a major strain to his eyes as the mad demon starts feeling pain the tears of the lost souls is what it's called.

Nigga nigga nigga you can't "Weaken" Zanpakutō abilities. Take that out! Uhm.. how long does it take for him to actually use the move, and Power Scales my GOD PLEASE USE THEM This is a bit silly.

Just go like this. Rank, what happens from the stages of charging once released, then what they'd have to have in their stats to uhm... resist the attack somewhat unless they can match a stat of yours, and it can't change.

For now Denied until MAJOR Fixes Happen.


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Kakeru
Kakeru
Nise no Eiyū
ZX's OTM
Joined : 2012-05-31
Posts : 1343
Age : 33
Location : Kagatsuchi

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Mon Feb 18, 2013 8:32 pm
Very reluctantly Approved.


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