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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Rachel Dare Revamp [APPROVED, 0-5]   Thu Oct 17, 2013 6:22 am




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» Name: Rachel Dare
» Titles: The Gate of Dreams
» Race: Human
» Age: been alive for 18 years, looks 16 years old
» Gender: Female
» Affiliation/Rank: yayjuu, karakura high school

» Appearance Picture:

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» Personality:
  • Spoiled: Rachel is a doorway to dreams, pulling the objects of her desires in to reality. As such she is used to getting what she wants, and if this is a physical thing there is usually no problem as she can create it herself. However, when it comes to dealing with authority or how people behave towards her this becomes a problem. She is used to getting what she wants, and saying no to her can result in a temper tantrum or a fight if not controlled correctly.
  • Energetic: Rachel has an enormous amount of energy, even for someone with a young body like hers. She seems to never tire out, always on the move. She has no trouble running for long periods of time, and it is rare to even see her need to catch her breath.
  • Piggy back ride addiction: Yes, by some strange force, Rachel is actually addicted to piggy back rides. Just like with a drug addict, if she doesn't get her fix, she will go in to withdrawal, causing her to become violent and oppressive. Once given a piggy back ride, she will return to her normal energetic, childish self.
  • Cat like tendencies: Rachel has started to exhibit some cat like actions and communications since her change in appearance. She sometimes mewls, purrs, or hisses when talking with others. While these tendencies are extremely weak at this point, they seem to be slowly becoming more a part of her normal habits.

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» History: It was 18 years ago when she appeared on this planet with nothing but the clothes on her back. No history, no name, no parents, as if she had just appeared out of thin air. Despite her unusual circumstances she was taken in by an orphanage in the town she had been found in, a bustling area called karakura town. It was here that she would spend the first fifteen years of her life, playing with the other kids, doing chores, and going to school. However, nobody could fail to notice that she didn't age one day in all these years. She was sent to many doctors, one after the other, but none could figure out a reason why she didn't age. After five doctors tried and failed the orphanage gave up, resigned to the fact that she would age. She did learn slower than others, she successfully completed about half a year worth of school work during a normal semester while at the orphanage.

In her fifteenth year a family came to visit the orphanage. They were no ordinary family though, they had strong spiritual powers within them, and they adopted Rachel, curious about the unnatural energy they had felt about her. In her new home thing were much nicer, and even though they had started to train her in martial arts and to utilize her powers, her learning sped up. After two and a half years though, she found out that they only wanted her to in order to kill a very influential man at the time. Furious from their betrayal, she killed them and left. Wandering around karakura city, she took what she wanted and stole food to get through her life. Eventually though, she was found by a man know as James Raven. Despite what she had done, James decided to take her in and help her, and with him she made a couple friends.

After a couple months she was contacted by the yayjuu and told that they would like to help her, that they were an organization for people like her. Curious, Rachel had taken up there offer and gone to join them. She has yet to have the option of telling James Raven, who she sees as a father to her. Most recently, during her meeting with Schrodinger Yuudeshi, her formed changed and she awakened her other half, Inverse.

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• Natural Attributes:
Unnatural energy signature: To those who can sense energy, Rachel's energy feels extremely unnatural, they can innately understand that her energy is not of this realm.

Eternally young, and Semi-Immortal: Rachel has not aged a day since the day she came in to existence, and she will never end up aging so long as she lives. She will live forever unless killed by unnatural means, her bod being eternally young. The lack of aging is due to how she came to exist. The energy that gave birth to her was enough to force a plane of existence out of its normal place in the planescape, and it will forever sustain her at this age.

Well trained in martial arts: Rachel has been trained well in martial arts, and has about the same skill as someone who has been practicing for five years.

• Powers:
Stormreaver Inheritance: Rachel was "born" when Quor Tarai channeled the Stormreaver's magic in to a dream. This impacted Rachel, leaving an imprint of the Stormreaver's abilities upon her soul. The Stormreaver's abilities are based off of lightning and thunder, and this is the basis of Rachel's abilities.

• Pure Abilities:
Electric absorption: Rachel has learned to see electricity and to draw it in to herself to fuel her abilities. She is constantly absorbing the static electricity in the air, this is not considered a source she can draw on due to it being a source she naturally draws on to get her base power.

Electric bolt: Using this ability Rachel discharges a ball of electricity from her hand towards her enemy in order to shock them with it.

Lightning whip: Using this ability Rachel forms a thin tendril of electricity in her hand. This tendril is 8 feet in length and lasts until Rachel dispels it. Anyone but Rachel touching the tendril gets shocked as if they had just been hit by a bolt of lightning.

Lightning Punch/Kick: Using this ability, Rachel charges her spirit energy, moving it in circles, with circles next to each other rotating in opposite directions. This causes a large electrical charge to gather around her fist as she punches, pouring in to her opponent when she hits them.

Thunder Punch: After making a punch, Rachel can quickly withdraw her hand while at the same time blasting the area her hand had been in with her spirit energy, causing a thunderous sound in the area, harming others with the loud noise. Depending on the distance from the attack, the victim's natural and/or unnatural resistance to loud noises, this can could pain, temporary deafness, permanent deafness, disorientation, and/or damage to the ears. This attack can be combined with a Lightning Punch.

Lightning Feet: This is her equivalent to the shinigami flash step, she charges the soles of her shoes or feet with electricity, allowing her to move at flash step speeds for a short while. This causes a crackling, sizzling sound as she moves, the lightning interacting with the air next to it as she moves. She uses her Power Control skill in order to indicate how proficient she is in this maneuver, like a shinigami would use the hoho skill to determine their abilities with flash step.
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Sacred Release

• Sacred Release Appearance: While in her Sacred release, Rachel's body is surrounded by a 1 inch layer of yellow glowing electricity. Otherwise there is no change.

• Sacred Release Powers:
Release requirements: The very nature of Rachel's sacred release is that she compresses a huge amount of electrical energy within her body before letting it explode outward within her. Thus, to even activate her sacred release Rachel needs an enormous amount of electrical energy, something she can only obtain by draining electricity from an external source. Something like a power line, electric socket, power plant, things of that nature.

Electricity manipulation: In this form Rachel can manipulate electricity as if it were just another limb on her body. If she attempts to manipulate electricity caused by an enemy's technique, she will only gain control of their electricity if her control skill (Power Control) is greater then their control skill. However, if her control skill is equal to her opponents control skill, if her and her opponents tier are within 1 major rank of each other (a 1-1 is within a major rank of a 0-2 to a 1-5), then the technique stops, frozen in its current state until one of them decides to give up their attempt to control it. Otherwise, the one with a higher tier takes control of the technique, though they will find that there is some resistance, making them clumsy with it.

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Ascended Sacred State

•Ascended Sacred State Appearance: When Rachel unleashes her ascended sacred state, the electrical aura that surrounds her in her sacred state courses down in to her dominant hand, forming in to a large, two handed European blade. The blade crackles with stored electricity and sonic power, as if waiting to lash out at the closest one to her.

• Ascended Sacred State Powers: In addition to the powers of her sacred state, which she retains in this form, she gains new abilities from this release.

Sonic Resistance: Rachel has complete immunity to any of her own sound based attacks, and due to her own sonic powers insulating her ears from otherwise dangerous sounds, she ignores 50% of all sonic based attacks.

Sonic Slash: Using this technique, Rachel lets loose a blast of thunderous sound as she slashes her blade towards her opponent. The sound is extremely powerful, measuring 100 decibels at its lowest. With each usage of this technique, the power increases by 10 decibels, but it decreases by 10 decibels at the end of each of Rachel’s posts, to a minimum of the base 100 decibels. Rachel can only use this technique 3 times per post.

Electric lash Once per post, Rachel’s sword will lash out with electricity at Rachel or the person nearest to her. If it lashes out at Rachel, she is unharmed because she simply absorbs the bolt of electricity. However, to others the bolt would be extremely dangerous, possibly deadly, if they did not have a defense mechanism of their own to save them.

Thunderstorm: Rachel can, at will, summon a dark cloud filled with electricity over a target’s head, that persists for 4 of Rachel’s posts. At the beginning of each of Rachel’s posts, the cloud sends down a thundering bolt of electricity towards the person in an attempt to cause great harm to their body. While one can attempt to evade the cloud and the bolts by moving around, the cloud will chase after the target while it persists and has a speed equal to the shunpo of a 0-5 shinigami with advance in both general speed and shunpo. This ability has an initial cooldown of 4 posting rounds. After using this ability twice in a thread the cooldown is reduced to 3 posting rounds, using it 4 more times will reduce it to 2 posting rounds, and using it an additional 4 times with reduce the cooldown to 1 posting round (aka, once per post). The cooldown returns to its initial cooldown if this ability is not used again after a period equal to double the current cooldown time.

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» The Spirit's Name: Inverse
» The Spirit's Race: Dream Human (Soul Evolution Human)
» The Spirit's Gender: Female
» The Spirit's Age: 18, looks 16

» The Spirit's Written Appearance:

Inverse looks exactly like Rachel, like the two of them were identical twins. In truth, Rachel and Inverse are two halves of the same coin, two parts of one being. Rachel was created by pouring material energy in to the dream being who was formerly Inverse. This caused a material body to appear in the material world that was connected to the dream plane. On the reverse, Inverse stayed as a dream being, but gained a consciousness of her own due to her connection with the material plane. Rachel recently awakened this consciousness, allowing Inverse to take her rightful place as her Ziamichi spirit.

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» The Spirit's Personality:
  • Calm: Inverse is always calm, she never gets angry, sad, or otherwise overly emotional. It is nearly impossible for one to use her emotions against her, though she shows them in small amounts she does not allow them to take over her thoughts.
  • Relaxed: Inverse is one to relax and enjoy everything in life. It is near impossible to make her unhappy, though she will harm anyone who hurts her sister, Rachel. She will never be seen with a frown on her face, her lips always forming in to a soft smile. Sometimes her smile will becoming brighter and more defined, but it is extremely difficult to get her not to smile.
  • Caring: Inverse is extremely caring, especially when it comes with her sister Rachel. She always tries to help people in need, especially those who have been hurt by others. She will never help those that hurt others or whose goals are to hurt others. She will in face actively fight against them, using her caring for others to fuel her in battle.
  • Fun loving: Inverse, like Rachel, just loves to have fun. Unlike Rachel though, Inverse can find ways to make almost any situation fun. She sees the possibilities of fun in all things, using this to always keep herself laughing and happy.



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» The Spirit's History: Approximately 500,000 years ago, in a corner of the universe millions of light-years away, the Quori born on the plane of dreams invaded a small planet, intent on stopping all change. However, this was a planet ruled by dragons and a giant empire, and combining their knowledge and an ancient device, the king of the the giant empire, the stormreaver, managed to push the plane of dreams away from our plane, the material plane, making it impossible to open up portals to it, or otherwise travel there except during dreams.

Now, naturally Quor Tarai, the spirit of the plane of dreams, did not take kindly to this action. On the other hand Quor Tarai knew better then to act at that time, waiting for the giant magic and the emotions to calm down on both sides. However, the Quori were not going to wait, and they started moving on their own. By manipulating beings of this worlds dreams, they managed to get them to breed a being that the Quori could then inhabit despite the giant's magic. As the actions of the Quori forcefully pulled closer to the material plane, the giant's spell started to put pressure on the dimension. This caused pain to Quor Tarai, the same as if a human was slowly being crushed between to walls of steel.

Luckily for Quor Tarai, the Quori were defeated, their scheme figured out, and stopped. Once again was pushed away, the pain fading from Quor Tarai as the magic pushed it back to where it had been before. As the years went by while Quor Tarai waited for the giant's spell to fade, it changed how it dealt with it's realm. Taking a more active role in what went on, Quor Tarai made sure to get rid of any remaining Quori who might attempt another act like had happened with those before. While Quor Tarai waited it plotted, figuring out how it would draw itself back in to its original spot in the planescape.

Eventually, the giant magic had faded enough to put Quor Tarai's plan in to action. Using the power of dreams, Quor Tarai pulled the giant energy in to itself, focusing it in to one dream in particular, a human on earth that was dreaming about her 12 year old daughter. Preserving this dream, Quor Tarai focused the energy from the giant magic in to this dream. For a hundred years this continued, until the finally drop of energy went in to the dream, causing the dream to manifest within our realm. The resulting girl born of this fusion was a gateway between their two planes of existence, and Quor Tarai tried to nurture her appropriately. Unknown to the girl, Rachel, another being had been born from this fusion.

Laying on the bed in the dream, the girl in the dream had become something more then it had been before. When the energy of the stormreaver entered the dream girl, a consciousness was created, one too weak at that point to live on if it tried to. So it made a decision, to put itself in a stasis and let itself grow in strength. As Rachel grew in strength, so did the consciousness of the girl on the bed. Eventually it gained enough strength, but it required Rachel to wake it up. However, Rachel did not know of this girl's existence, and so she did not attempt to wake the girl up. In response, the consciousness gathered more strength, enough strength to call across the planes of existence and let Rachel know she was there. Rachel responded to this call, waking up her twin and allowing her to take her rightful place as her inner guardian and other half.


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» Natural Attributes: Dream Energy: Beings from the plane of dreams utilize one of two different types of energy: psychic energy, the energy of the mind, or dream energy, the energy of the plane of dreams. The parasitic race called the Quori used psychic energy, Inverse however uses dream energy. Dream energy is the energy that makes up the dream plane, and it exists solely on the plane of dreams. This means that to regain her energy Inverse must return to the plane of dreams. If she runs out while on the material plane, then she will be unable to gather more via rest, meaning she has no way to return to the plane of dreams on her own. If she is stuck on the material plane long enough, she will die, and if she dies in this way Rachel will be erased from existence, killing her too. However, dream energy does not naturally exist on the material plane, meaning spiritual beings of any sort will have immense difficulty sensing her strength. The only exception to this rule is those that have crossed the planar boundary and entered the plane of dreams. After a small amount of time within the plane of dreams they would become accustomed to sensing dream energy if they could sense spiritual energy before. Others however will have their sense impaired and will perceive her as 1 major tier lower then she truly is (if her true tier is 2-1, they'd sense her as a 3-1, true tier 2-3, sensed as a 3-3, etc).

Planar Hop: Due to her connection with the material plane, Inverse can 'hop' between the dream plane and the material plane, shifting her existence from one to another. This shift usually takes a couple of seconds, during which she becomes intangible, unable to be affected by either plane of existence. When hopping to the material plane, she will appear with a couple feet of Rachel, and thus Rachel must be on the material plane for it to work. When returning to the dream plane, she can go wherever she wishes within her dream bubble, as she does not have knowledge of other dream bubbles she cannot hop to them.

Material Death Retribution: While on the material plane, Inverse is unable to die. She can be wounded, but if she were to take a hit that would kill her, she would instead be returned to the dream plane where she would heal up. This does make her unable to come to the material plane for the rest of the thread. The only exception to this rule is if she were to die due to running out of dream energy and fading away.

» Racial Powers:

» Evolution Powers:
Dream Blade: One of Inverse’s most basic abilities is the ability to forge a weapon from her own dream energy. This weapon is an extension of her internal anima stone and is the very basis of her powers. Once one creates their dream blade it does not change, every time they summon it to their side it is the same as before. However, it can grow and change with their wielder. Inverse’s dream blade takes the form of a giant scythe of black and deep purple energy.

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» Soul State Evolution Stage 1 Appearance: When Inverse releases her evolution stage 1, a huge burst of dream energy flows out from her and surrounds her. After a few seconds the burst disappears, black flames surrounding her hand and arms.

» Soul State Evolution Stage 1 Abilities:
Abyss Flames: The flames surrounding Inverse's arms and hands during this stage are known as Abyss Flames. They will not hurt Inverse, but anything else that touches them will be caught on fire by the flames. These flames will not burn like normal flames, instead they will devour the object they have caught aflame as if they were a severely acidic substance.

Abyss Flame Strike: Using this unique attack, when Inverse next strikes her opponent, the opponent will be surrounded by a huge burst of black flames, similar in appearance to those on Inverse's arms. Not only will the initial force damage their bodies, but the flames will start to eat through their body like an acid.

» Soul State Evolution Stage 2 Appearance: When Inverse releases evolution stage 2, another huge burst of dream energy surrounds her before dying down to reveal the changes. Two huge arms, covered in ragged robes hang over her. The hands, which are the only part that are exposed from the robe parts, are shaped like bones and clearly made of dream energy. In these arms is a huge scythe, sized for a creature of the size of these arms. In fact, it looks like she had manifested the arms of a being ten times her size, with a scythe to match.

» Soul State Evolution Stage 2 Abilities:
Arms of the Abyss: In fact, her evolution stage 2 is just manifesting the arms and scythe of the being in her evolution stage 3. Like in her evolution stage 3, the arms react as if they are a part of her.

» Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Appearance: When she releases her evolution stage 3, a huge burst of energy surrounds her. Instead of dying down though, it forms itself in to a gigantic robed creature ten times Inverse's size. The tattered robed go all the way to the ground, and under the hood a skull sits. The hands coming from the robe seem to be made of bone, and in its hands it holds a scythe sized for such a creature. The whole being is black and purple in color, obviously created of her dream energy entirely. Visually it is semi transparent, allowing one to see Inverse underneath it.

» Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Abilities:
Abyssal Death: A manifestation from a dream about death, this being is constructed purely of Inverse's dream energy. It mimics her body movements, acting as if it was a part of her body instead. Every part of the being is solid, and able to take extremely powerful hits without suffering much damage. In addition, its huge scythe will do a large amount of damage if one would be hit by it.


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» Unique Traits:
Dream Creation: What Rachel has gained from being the gate to the plane of dreams is the ability to pull any dream object in to the material plane, where we live. In addition, since she has Inverse within the dream plane, she can cause anything to exist within her dream bubble, allowing her to pull anything in to the material plane. However, even though she may be able to create any item in the dream plane, there are limitations in bringing it in to the material plane. First off, bring items though the gate is taxing on her body, and so she can only bring a limited number through the gate in a thread. In addition, due to the fact that the portal between the planes if existence is only as strong as she is, if an item is too powerful she won’t be able to bring it through the gate as it would reject the material plane.

Planar Hop: Due to her connection with the dream plane, Rachel can 'hop' between the dream plane and the material plane, shifting her existence from one to another. This shift usually takes a couple of seconds, during which she becomes intangible, unable to be affected by either plane of existence. When hopping to the dream plane, she will appear within a couple feet of Inverse, and thus Inverse must be on the dream plane for it to work. When returning to the material plane, she can go wherever she wishes to in the universe, so long as it can support her life.

Dream Blade: Rachel has been able to forge her own dream blade thanks to her connection with Inverse. When she summons a dream blade, she will always summon hers, and Inverse will not be able to summon Rachel’s dream blade. Like all dream blades, it is made from pure dream energy. However, due to Rachel’s talent and dedication to martial arts, it has taken a completely different form then Inverse’s. Rachel’s dream blade takes the form of three sharp claw like blades that extend from the back of her hand, curving and running parallel to her hand and arm. Another three claws, the exact same as the other three, form on her opposite hand.

Dream Blast: By pointing her dream blade at an opponent and compressing energy in it, Rachel can let loose a blast of dream energy, similar to that of an arrancar's cero. The strength of this technique is determined by her 'skill of power' rank. This blast is always dark purple in color.

» Forms:

» Drawbacks:
Dream Creation Drawbacks: Rachel has a limit to the number of items she can pull through from the other side of the gate, depending on her tier.

Upper 0 Tier (0-3+ and above): 17 item limit.
Lower 0 Tier (0-3 and below): 15 item limit.
1 Tier: 10 item limit.
2 Tier: 5 item limit.
3 Tier: 2 item limit.
4 Tier: 1 item limit.
5 Tier: 0 item limit.

If she reaches the limit, she can’t make any more items during that thread. In addition, so long as she has not reached the limit, ever 2 posts she regains one item creation use, though she can’t exceed her base item limit. Also, each individual item can’t be more powerful than her tier. What this means is that if she creates an item, it can’t do something that a being of her tier wouldn’t be able to do. Should any member of a thread feel that an item she has created is beyond her tier, and a staff finds it to be such, the post must either be changed in order to bring it in to order, or if I decide to or, for some screwed up reason, I am unwilling to back off after having it discussed with me, the object will vaporize upon appearing, losing my usage and destroying the item completely.


» Control: 10

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NOTE: 's will have three to four skill sheets possibly. One for general skills, one for racial skills, one for the host's skill and possibly one for the spirit's skills if they are a different race.

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General

» Host Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of 's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Class is from tier once approved. And yes, the Host can sometimes be stronger then the spirit.)

» Spirit Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of 's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Class is from tier once approved.)

Skills:
0 Tier is allowed 1 Master, 2 Advanced for each section
1 Tier is allowed 2 Advanced for each section
2 Tier is allowed 1 Advanced, 2 Adept for each section
3 Tier is allowed 1 Adept for each section
4 Tier and below only get beginner.

General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Advanced
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner


Human Reiatsu Sheet
  • Power Control: Adept
  • Energy Usage/Regeneration: Advanced
  • Energy Resistance/Endurance: Adept
  • Physical Augmentation: Beginner


Skills For Host
  • Skill Of Powers: Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Adept
  • Seal Strength: Adept
  • Sync-Rate: Advanced


Will Skills For Host
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept

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General Skills For Spirit
  • Durability:Beginner
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Advanced


Human Skill Sheet
  • Anima Stone Strength: Advanced
  • Soul Sorcery: Beginner
  • Soul Dash: Advanced
  • Soul Detection: Adept


Will Skills For Spirit
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Advanced


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Rachel Dare Revamp [APPROVED, 0-5]   Thu Oct 17, 2013 1:59 pm

welp, this is Rachel Dare's new app due to her changing her ziamichi spirit. For reasoning, see below.

1. Quor Tarai was supposed to be a all powerful, god like being when it comes to the plane of dreams. I do not feel I, as a member of ph, should have any influence over such a powerful being.

2. I originally used Quor Tarai because I had no better idea for a ziamichi spirit. During a thread with jj, I realized a possible perfect ziamichi spirit for her, and as such I have decided to change her ziamichi spirit to the more appropriate one.

Note that Rachel still keeps the previous benefits that had been labeled as ziamichi abilities. In truth, these were abilities that were due to her existence as a gateway to the plane of dreams, and are not based on having Quor Tarai as a ziamichi spirit.

previous app: http://www.platinumhearts.net/t9351-rachel-dare-gate-of-dreamsapproved-2-1

thread during which the changes happen: http://www.platinumhearts.net/t10464-introduction-of-the-two-that-shouldn-t-existjj


One last note, her ziamichi spirit, Inverse, is pretty much a soul state human, though she uses a different source of energy due to being from a different plane of existence.

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Rachel Dare Revamp [APPROVED, 0-5]   Sat Oct 19, 2013 12:57 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


Ziamichi Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Advanced



Comments/Notes: Approved :3
Tier: 1-3

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Rachel Dare Revamp [APPROVED, 0-5]   Fri Nov 22, 2013 2:10 am

As per this thread, Rachel is now a 0-5.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Rachel Dare Revamp [APPROVED, 0-5]   Thu Feb 13, 2014 5:48 am

as per this post, Rachel has her Ascended Sacred state approved. She has awakened it in this post.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Rachel Dare Revamp [APPROVED, 0-5]   Tue Sep 23, 2014 9:10 pm

Archiving this cuz there's a newer version approved.

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