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Sun Nov 21, 2010 3:54 am
ARRANCAR




GENETICS

Character Name:

Senaru Iyhnidar

Character True Age:
100 years old

Character Appearance Age:

Her age is unditermined, She is however precived to be very young due to her egg like state anywhere from 5-10 years old when out of the egg.



Character Gender:
Female
Orientation:
Espada/Fraccion
Personality:

Senaru is a pecular creature, their are many things Senaru doesn't like and she isn't afraid to speak up from behind her protective shelled crib. With a bratish temper when she doesn't get her way and an ichy cero finger, cause her to get out of hands at times. Maybe it's the secure feeling she gets from her shell or her youth that robs her of the maturity to hold her tounge. But one thing is for sure her innocence is foreshadowed by her sudden bursts of wisdom beyond her years, Although capable of holding her own in a fight shes more fit as an adviser then a combatant making use of her powerful pesquisa to collect information on the battle field. When off the battlefield she tends to regress to the nature of a human child, running about through her masters chambers, chasing tiny roach hollows, and occasionally getting frightened and scurring back to her masters side and to the confines of her egg shell.


GENETIC LOOKS

Appearance:

Senaru is a unique arrancar, most mistake her for a hollow.Due to her shy nature she is almost always hiding within a dense shell. Only in the solitude of her espada's presence does she ever come out of her shell. The egg is 3 feet in hight and is less then 100 lbs, she moves in the shell by floating off the ground. To see Senaru opens a small crack in the shell in which two glowng eyes are visible. Do to her restricted vision she relies primarly on her senstive ability to detect and track rietsu. The shell is purple with blue spots speckled on it. It is said that the spots change color depending on her mood and can vary from red as a display of anger to gray as a display of sadness. The shell itself can be manipulated changing its exterior to layer extra layers of defence or projecting the shells exterior into sharpened spikes for the ramming attacks that she commonly uses.[size]
Senaru Iyhnidar What__s_in_that_egg_by_Unitheunicor

When she does leave the shell she takes the appearance of a 5-10 year old blue haired girl no taller then 3ft. She is often timid and carries around a white hollow faced teddy bear and is dressed in cute red and white arrancar attire with skirt.
Senaru Iyhnidar Babyarrancar

Bone Appearance:
Her head has half a crown that sits atop her head above her right eye.
Reitsu Colour:
light Purple

[size=24]ZANPAKUTÔ

Sealed Zanpakutô:

Commonly spit out from an opening in the shell her zanpakuto is a two part chakram that is weilded via kinisis to further protect her shell. The handles are pink and are adorned with small string tassles.

Senaru Iyhnidar Two_piece_chakram_apart
Racial Abilities:

Kinisis-Senaru has a strong psyhic presence eminating from her shelled figure. In the shell she is capable of moving objects such as stones up to many times her size and is even able to project forces on enemies and their weaker attacks pushing and tossing them with modest force, possibly knocking an enemy who is caught off guard for an unpleasnt impact with a nearby object. She also can restrict the movements of lesser opponent's making it hard to move, it's easily resistable by stronger opponents. In her released form this psionic power becomes more focused and controlled. Tapping into her own rietsu supplies she can move around objects of massive preportions, and throw around increasingly power forces, even capable of restricting movements of her more powerful enemies the stronger the enemy the faster it burns away her rietsu.

Shell: Senaru is able to hide herself in a protective egg shell, hiding her gentle outlook from the enemy.

RESSERECCION

Resereccion Name:

Fukayousei

Resereccion Release Phrase:

"hacchi"


Release Actions:

Senaru literally hatches out of her protective shell keeping true to her release phrase hacchi. The egg begins to crack and shatter unvaling her stunning and deadly beauty, an elegant blue skinned harpy like creature with blue hair and devilish eyes. She weilds a long tail and shimmering wings equipped for sustained flight. Her hands and feet also boast sharp claws made for ripping and taring as good as any sword.


Resereccion Appearance:

Senaru Iyhnidar Iyhnidar__For_Always_by_Senaru

Resereccion Abilities:

Duplicity-Senaru releases up to five images of herself, they each share a common reshi signature and can only deal physical attacks that knock back the opponent with psychic force and are easily destoryed.

Astal Quills-Senarus many quills are razor sharp and can be launched at reasonibly high speeds with a simple burst of rietsu. The quills are launched in bursts of 10 to 20 and are small projectiles.

Stardust breaker-Senaru charges her wings with rietsu and dashes toward her target with a charged ball of sparkling energy which she firmly plants into the the enemies midsection or face. Instead of exploding the ball begins to strip down the targets reshi bonds acting like a drilling recking ball. Equal to a level 45 destructive art.

Rebirth-upon a near death occurance Senaru reverts back to a dormant small egg reinforcing the shell and in two days she will return to her normal sized egg unable to use her release without an additional days rest or a sufficent feeding.

DUES EX RESSERECION

Dues Ex Name:
(what name does the second resserecion go by?)

Dues Ex Release Phrase:
(what do they say to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Release Actions:
(what do they do to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Appearance:
(describe what their Dues Ex Segunda looks like)

Dues Ex Abilities:
(explain the several powers and abilities this final form grants them)

SKILLS

(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)

Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

PAST

History:

Senaru is a very young arrancar with no one knows exacly how long shes existed. She was stumbled upon by the espada on a mission and became very attached to the espada and serves them unquestionably. She learns more and more each day as if she was starting her life over again from the begining.


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Last edited by Shoku on Wed Nov 24, 2010 11:10 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Senaru Iyhnidar Empty Re: Senaru Iyhnidar

Sun Nov 21, 2010 5:38 am

ARRANCAR
You have really messed around with the size of text. Can you go through and fixe the codes cause I can see several [size] sitting around for no reason



GENETICS

Character Name:

Senaru Iyhnidar

Character True Age:
100 years old

Character Appearance Age:

Her age is unditermined, She is however precived to be very young due to her egg like state anywhere from 5-10 years old when out of the egg.



Character Gender:
Female
Orientation:
Espada/Fraccion
Personality:

Senaru is a pecular creature, their are many things Senaru doesn't like and she isn't afraid to speak up from behind her protective shelled crib. With a bratish temper when she doesn't get her way and an ichy cero finger, cause her to get out of hands at times. Maybe it's the secure feeling she gets from her shell or her youth that robs her of the maturity to hold her tounge. But one thing is for sure her innocence is foreshadowed by her sudden bursts of wisdom beyond her years, Although capable of holding her own in a fight shes more fit as an adviser then a combatant making use of her powerful pesquisa to collect information on the battle field.

I suppose you could get away with this personality but it would be nice if you had more to show for it. Try and explain how she acts in and out of battle or something to give yourslef a bit more. We advise 2 paragraphs for perosnality

GENETIC LOOKS

Appearance:

Senaru is a unique arrancar, most mistake her for a hollow.Due to her shy nature she is almost always hiding within a dense shell. Only in the solitude of her espada's presence does she ever come out of her shell. She moves in the shell by floating off the ground. To see Senaru opens a small crack in the shell inwhich two glowng eyes are visible. Do to her restricted vision she relies primarly on her senstive ability to detect and track rietsu. The shell is purple with blue spots speckled on it. It is said that the spots change color depending on her mood and can vary from red as a display of anger to gray as a display of sadness. The shell itself can be manipulated changing its exterior to layer extra layers of defence or projecting the shells exterior into sharpened spikes for the ramming attacks that she commonly uses.[size]
Senaru Iyhnidar What__s_in_that_egg_by_Unitheunicor

So how big is this form and how heavy is it? could I carry it in my hands or is the building sized?

When she does leave the shell she takes the appearance of a 5-10 year old blue haired girl no taller then 3ft. She is often timid and carries around a white hollow faced teddy bear and is dressed in cute red and white arrancar attire with skirt.
Senaru Iyhnidar Babyarrancar

Bone Appearance:
Her head has half a crown that sits atop her head above her right eye.
Reitsu Colour:
light Purple

[size=24]ZANPAKUTÔ

Sealed Zanpakutô:

Commonly spit out from an opening in the shell her zanpakuto is a two part chakram that is weilded via kinisis to further protect her shell.

Senaru Iyhnidar Two_piece_chakram_apart

Even though you give an image, can you describe what it looks like so we see you have an understanding of it.

Racial Abilities:

Kinisis-Senaru has a strong psyhic presence eminating from her shelled figure. In the shell she is capable of moving objects such as stones up to many times her size and is even able to project forces on enemies and their weaker attacks pushing and tossing them with modest force, possibly knocking an enemy who is caught off guard for an unpleasnt impact with a nearby object. She also can restrict the movements of lesser opponent's making it hard to move, it's easily resistable by stronger opponents. In her released form this psionic power becomes more focused and controlled. Tapping into her own rietsu supplies she can move around objects of massive preportions, and throw around increasingly power forces, even capable of restricting movements of her more powerful enemies the stronger the enemy the faster it burns away her rietsu.

Be very careful with this ability becuase its a form of god modding. If you say it works only on NPC then it could be excused but to be able to control, push back and restrict the movement of another player is god modding and cannot be allowed.

Shell: Senaru is able to hide herself in a protective egg shell, hiding her gentle outlook from the enemy.

RESSERECCION

Resereccion Name:

Fukayousei

Resereccion Release Phrase:

"hacchi"


Release Actions:

Senaru literally hatches out of her protective shell keeping true to her release phrase hacchi. The egg begins to crack and shatter unvaling her stunning and deadly beauty, an elegant blue skinned harpy like creature with blue hair and devilish eyes. She weilds a long tail and shimmering wings equipped for sustained flight. Her hands and feet also boast sharp claws made for ripping and taring as good as any sword.


Your release actions are what your body does to transform. For example, Grimmjow claws his own sword with his fingernails while yelling pantera, yammy unleashes a load of reitsu and yells to release etc. Try to describe its appearance where it asks for the appearance

Resereccion Appearance:

Senaru Iyhnidar Iyhnidar__For_Always_by_Senaru


I do suggest you move the appearance description of your resserecion here rather than in the actions

Resereccion Abilities:

Duplicity-Senaru releases up to five images of herself, they each share a common reshi signature and can only deal physical attacks that knock back the opponent with psychic force and are easily destoryed.

Astal Quills-Senarus many quills are razor sharp and can be launched at reasonibly high speeds with a simple burst of rietsu. The quills are launched in bursts of 10 to 20 and are small projectiles.

Stardust breaker-Senaru charges her wings with rietsu and dashes toward her target with a charged ball of sparkling energy which she firmly plants into the the enemies midsection or face. Instead of exploding the ball begins to strip down the targets reshi bonds acting like a drilling recking ball. Equal to a level 45 destructive art.

Rebirth-upon a near death occurance Senaru reverts back to a dormant small egg reinforcing the shell and in two days she will return to her normal sized egg unable to use her release without an additional days rest or a sufficent feeding.

DUES EX RESSERECION

You do not need to fill this out if you do not want to but it is advised that it is here so the application appears completed. The dues ex resserecion was created by the cero espada to reach a stage similar to the segunda etapa resserecion. It is not as strong as the etapa, but is more pwoerful than the normal resserecion.

Dues Ex Name:
(what name does the second resserecion go by?)

Dues Ex Release Phrase:
(what do they say to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Release Actions:
(what do they do to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Appearance:
(describe what their Dues Ex Segunda looks like)

Dues Ex Abilities:
(explain the several powers and abilities this final form grants them)

SKILLS

(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)

Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

PAST

History:

Senaru is a very young arrancar with no one knows exacly how long shes existed. She was stumbled upon by the espada on a mission and became very attached to the espada and serves them unquestionably. She learns more and more each day as if she was starting her life over again from the begining.

This history is much too short. To write a longer history, I suggets you talk about her human life from birth to death, then her hollow life up to the arrancra stage and to where she is in the present day
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Fri Nov 26, 2010 10:43 am
I did NOT edit this application, Shoku. I can even see where it says you edited your post.

And also, I'm moving this to WIP until you make the changes.


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