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Blade
The Hybrid King
Joined : 2011-06-07
Posts : 2654
Age : 26

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Fri Jun 13, 2014 2:48 am
THE RAKSHASA DEMON TEMPLATE

BASIC INFORMATION
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» Name: Eliza Woad
» Titles: The Broken Rakshasa
» Age: 62
» Gender: Female
» Affiliation/Rank: Guardians Of Hell (Rakshasa)

» True Appearance Written:

At first glance, Eliza is seen to be a small girl with quite petitie features. Just like most who are of small stature, Eliza is very petite and flaunts said body without disregard. Usually found wearing a pair of short, black jean shorts with a hoodie of black coloring, Eliza is shown to wear quite casual clothing whenever found in hell and outside of hell. The hoodie that is mostly dawned by the tiny female is black in coloring and is always unzipped to show her breasts and abdomen. The female is pale in bright sunlight and a tad darker when in darker areas, but not by much. With petitie breasts to match the rest of her body, a scarf of black and purple lining can be found wrapped around her neck. Short, white hair falls from the females head along with piercing red eyes that peer directly into the souls of others around her.

Along with her casual wear, Eliza can be found wearing a small t-shirt that states "Death Kills" on the front of it in large white lettering. Usuaully, when wearing this shirt, Eliza can be found wearing a pair of long, slightly tighter white jeans along with a small baseball cap to hide her eyes. This outfit is usually used to keep others from seeing her eyes and face while she walks around the human world, or any world for that matter. Eliza refrains from showing her true self in most cases when it comes to being outside of hell, only special cases being called upon when she dawns her black hoodie.

Another thing that can be seen when looking at Eliza quite closely is that her skin color shifts with that of the lighting. Her skin is quite smooth and radiates almost a light of its own, as if it were a flame that was trying to guide others through a deadly area of sorts. This appearance trait is something that Eliza has never been able to truly describe or explain, she has come to terms with the light radiating from her pale body. The light itself does illuminate quite a bit of spacing, so even if the woman were placed into an area of dark recesses she would not have to worry of seeing the immediate area around her. While this is a trait that she knows almost nothing about, the female can also cause it to completely turn off, allowing for certain things such as enemies or creatures to not spot her in certain moments that she would not want to be seen in.

A fourth and final thing that can be noted towards Eliza's body is that she has a small scar that rests right along her left eye, ranging to the lower half of her left cheek to just slightly above her left eyebrow. The scar is long and slightly large in comparison to most scars that occur on people throughout time, small dots being noted on each side of the scar. Twelve dots in total can be found on each side, making for an amount of twenty-four dots to be within her scar. These dots are caused by the scarring that the self-stitching she did to her. The scar is visible in almost all lights and can be seen from quite a distance due to the paleness of her skin against the dark red of her scar.

» True Appearance Picture: (If you have an image, feel free to post it here. If not, remove this)

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PERSONALITY INFORMATION

» Personality:

Secretive || לא גלוי
Among every trait and characteristic that Eliza might contain within both her own mind and the combined minds of her sins, Secrecy would be the first and only trait that a person would be able to identify above all else. Eliza does not allow others to know of what she works on. Eliza does not allows others to know how she feels nor what she thinks. Eliza simply does not allow others the capability of knowing anything and everything about her. Despite being a Guardian of Hell, nearly every other Guardian she has come into contact with knows nothing of the girl. She has never once expressed feelings or thoughts towards the other guardians, not even Ravan himself. Despite this, Ravan has been prone to knowing things that she herself doesn't even know, nor will seem to know for quite some time. In the end, Eliza's secrecy is something that did not stem from previous years or from being hurt in some type of way, instead, Eliza has been given this Secrecy by her own regard. Simply put, Eliza just feels the need to hide what it is she thinks, whether you're the devil himself or some lacky of a goodie goodie two shoes on earth. Eliza does not tell, Eliza does not speak.

Quiet || דְמָמָה
To go along with the fact that Eliza does not like others knowing both what she thinks and feels, Eliza is prone to being quite silent when it comes to being around others. What this means is that despite Eliza needing to interact with others due to her position within Hell, she does not. She rarely speaks to most people that travel through hell and she never allows herself the pleasure or time to speak to randoms that she has nothing to do with or ever will have anything to do with. The only person that Eliza can be found talking to on a daily basis would be Ravan himself due to the fact that he knows something that she does not. Ravan is someone that Eliza has grown not fond of, but content with. Just as it is with her secrecy, nothing has brought on the fact that she is quiet, it is something that she has simply adopted due to the want to. She does not speak to others, she never will speak to others. In her own mind, Eliza is alone and wishes for it to be that way.

Bad-Tempered || רַתחָן
Eliza is the type of female that, when agitated, will not keep her mouth shut. Despite her quietness, Eliza has been known to have one of the worst tempers of a female that you could ever run in to. The smallest thing that pisses her off will not be able to walk away without obtaining some type of tongue lashing from the female. Eliza may keep her mouth shut when it comes to simply talking to people and interacting with others, but when someone finds it a need to piss her off, Eliza is not the nicest of the bunch. Having a hot head and being hard to deal with allows Eliza to hold onto this bad temper for as long as she wishes to, her lack of caring for others being obvious when she holds a grudge or treats someone as if they were less than trash. Eliza has never been known to hold this bad temper for anyone, so if you plan on stepping on her toes, prepare to deal with not only her anger but her mean words as well.

Stubborn || מְעוּקָשׁ
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BACKGROUND

» History[i] Three paragraph minimum of your characters history. Also include how they became a Rakshasa as it is very key to the powers and appearances they can take.


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THE DAGI TVACA (Dāgī Tvacā)

» Dāgī Tvacā Name: The Forged Scar

» Dāgī Tvacā Appearance:

Eliza's Dagi Tvaca, The Forged Scar, has never appeared anywhere else on her body nor taken the form of a different appearance other than that of a scar on her face that coencides with her left eye. As stated before in her Appearance, Eliza has a scar of large length that protrudes from above her left eyebrow to the lower half of her left cheek. This scar is the tainted skin that had once been attempted to be pried off by that of a fellow guardian that lives in hell with Eliza and the rest of Hell's Guardians. The scar contains twenty-four dots in total, twelve on both sides that make up the outer edges of this Dagi Tvaca. The Dagi Tvaca itself has never been ripped from her skin and stands to be colored of a menacing red shade. The Dagi Tvaca has never appeared to look differently other than the dots increasing in total while the years have gone by that others have tried to help her remove the said Dagi Tvaca. The Dagi Tvaca has continued to grow in length slowly but surely as she has gotten older, the shading of it not growing any deeper in color though.

» Dāgī Tvacā Release Appearance:

Unfortunately, Eliza does not yet know the appearance that her Dagi Tvaca takes on once it has been activated due to the fact that she has never been able to properly activate it. With that being said, Eliza has gone to great lengths to trying to remove it throughout her years of being within Hell, but the female has been without progress.

» Dāgī Tvacā Powers:

As the previous paragraph described, Eliza has not a single clue as to what her Dagi Tvaca allows her to do. Along with that, she has never been able to even activate a slight portion of the scar, therefore not allowing her access to any and all powers related to it.
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GENERAL AND NATURAL SKILLS

» Natural Abilities:

Outstanding Intellegence
Blah Blah Blah

Abnormal Amounts of Speed and Strength
Blah Blah Blah

Reasoning Beyond Compare
Blah Blah Blah

Master Swordsmen


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SIN/DEVETA/UNIQUE ABILITIES

» Sin/Deveta/Unique Abilities: (Those Rakshasa born of a Sin implanted in them are capable of having powers related to their Sin. Those born of Deveta and Death can take on traits that would be associated with him, and the unique abilities are born from the "birth" method. Depending on how your Rakshasa was made, this could highly influence their unique power-set)

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NARAKA JANAVARA (Hell Beast)

» Naraka Jānavara name: (Do they have a name?)

» Naraka Jānavara Personality: (What type of personality does your Naraka Janavara have? At least one paragraph on this)

» Naraka Jānavara Appearance: (Does your Hell Beast take on the appearance of a wild beast of Hell, or does it take on a more humanoid form? This is up to you.)

» Merged with Rakshasa?: (Is this Hell Beast holding a portion of the Rakshasa's power or is it only holding it's own? Depending on your choice, it may make your Hell Beast stronger than others, but other Rakshasa of equivalent tier stronger than your character until merged in their final form)

» Naraka Jānavara Abilities: (What sort of powers can your Naraka Janavara use? These can be basics things or indepth explanations, it's up to you. Note: those who hold a portion of their Rakshasa's power are likely to have more abilities

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TUKARA SAITANA

» Tukaṛā Saitāna Name: (Does your Tukaṛā Saitāna have a name?)

» Tukaṛā Saitāna Appearance: (what does their appearance look like? For Rakshasa not storing power in their Hell Beast, their appearance usually remains far more humanoid shaped. For those with power in their Hell Beasts, once merged, the appearance is usually much more demonic and frightening)

» Tukaṛā Saitāna Powers: (Depending on your birth method, this may also influence their powers in this final form. What sort of powers do they gain by accessing this ascended state?)
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THE SKILL SHEET

To Find Out about what these skills are for, please READ THIS THREAD before you try doing anything to it. After you have read it, do not feel your skills out until a staff member has graded your thread. We will also do your will sheet for you upon grading your application.

Rakshasa Skills
  • Dāgī Tvacā Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Naraka Jānavara Control: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Astitva Ki Barhata: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Reality Warping: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Naraka Jānavara Skills
  • Demon Magic Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Rebirth Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Demon Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner



DE Control
  • Semi-Immortal Capacity: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Breakdown Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Necromancy Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • DE Barrier: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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ROLE PLAY SAMPLE

» Role Play Sample:(Show us what you got by posting a sample of how you role play. Any previous thread or new material is accepted!)



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For now, i am moving this to the Old W.I.P since its been 2 weeks old or so wihout much work on it, but no worries since you can still continue working on it, if you need it to be moved, checked or just about anything to deal with the app if needed, just post here or here to inform us to help ya' out with it.


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Archiving due to member inactivity.


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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