Kimoi, Shinryu [Approved 1-3]

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Senchineru

I'm a touch confused by this one, does this mean he can after three posts make himself immune to outside agents? Is that a permanent immunity to those things from then on, or just for the duration of the thread?

Sekai-teki Hayariyamai

Can this be removed or otherwise handled one it's on you? If not, it should have something of that nature.

Kano/Taminaru

Can either of these be resisted? As it stands it seems as though anyone hit, no matter who, would be equally affected.

Shunko:

Wholly my fault for not noticing this sooner, so I do apologize deeply for that and for the delay. You should definitely go into more detail on this ability. Shunko isn't actually a universal technique on PH, so simply saying that he can use this doesn't actually explain any of its mechanical effects, or its elemental affinity. Additionally, while I'm fine with his shunko lasting an exceptional amount of time due to his usage of it over his zanpakuto, indefinite usage is too long. Even Sui Feng and Yoruichi, two of the absolute masters of shunko, have been unable to reach that degree of capability on PH.

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in [X]
  
• RP Sample Present [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

• Willpower: Elite
  
• Mental Deduction: Advanced
  
• Focus: Advanced
  

• Power: B
  
• Influence: B
  
• Resources: A
  

Comments/Notes:
Tier: 1-3
Hazard Rating: B

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