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Ceros to Menos [Saber Upgrade]
Thu Jan 12, 2023 8:49 pm
» Name Of Character: Sabertooth Striker
» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t22919-sabertooth-striker-4-4#156071
» Upgrading:
4-4 -> 3-5
Evolution Stage: Adept -> Advanced
Martial Skills: Beginner-> Adept
- Appearance Addition:
Since becomming a Menos Grande, some of Saber's more feline features have diminished and warped. Her fangs shrinking in size and a pair of large curling horns having frown from her skull as a result of the mix of souls in her body. She is now a towering 20 meters in height and shrouded in a large black cloak, though her thick, spiked hide is visible through it. She is rather small for a Gillian, and her MAsk retains it's unique appearance as a symbol that Saber, or rather the mix and mesh of dominant consciousnesses inside of her, retain some semblance of sanity and cognizance.
- Mental Stat Regrade:
Willpower: Adept
Mental Deduction: Adept
Focus: Adept
- Personality:
Since becomming a Gillian, Sabertooth's personality has shifted slightly. While she retained much of her personality of caution and cunning, she has become much more aggressive. This is a combination of her newfound hunger at evolving, as well as from being affected by other souls fighting for control. While Sabertooth remains the dominant soul, se is not the same as she once was, as though some of the stronger competition have been mixed in.
- Old Hollow Power:
» Hollow Power:
Encantadora De Agua (Water Charmer)
Striker's core Hollow Power: the ability to manipulate water. At present, this ability has expressed in niche abilities such as her Water Veil and Flow granting her very unique abilities. However because she is such a young hollow, this means that her general skill with broadly manipulating water outside of these abilities is very low. She can only manipulate water within 5 meters of herself (Though water can be fired up to 10 meters away while still maintaining full force) and this manipulated water can only exert force and speed as if it had a Strength/Speed skill 1 level below her Hollow Power skill.
Velo De Agua ( Water Veil):
Striker's special ability , creating a thin special film of water secreted from her body infused with her Reiryoku. This veil renders her almost completely invisible to the naked eye by bending light that passes through the water around her. This veil is potent in what it does, but not infallible, as it causes a shimmer around her frame that can still give away her general position. Additionally, while this ability is a near perfect visual veil, this ability does not shield any other senses from tracking her.
Cura de Oasis (Cure of the Oasis):
Striker's special physiology is capable of converting water she comes into contact with to sustain and fuel her body, allowing her to double the speed of her healing and recovery from negative effects while she is in contact with a water source. This also halves the energy drain of recovering while in contact with a water source (A water source is any body of water with volume at least equal to her body's volume).
Flujo (Flow):
Striker's ability to partially liquefy her organs, allowing her to compress her body to incredibly thin dimensions allowing her to easily slip through spaces 1/5th her size.
- Updated Hollow Power:
» Hollow Power:
Encantadora De Agua (Water Charmer)
Striker's core Hollow Power: the ability to manipulate water. At present, this ability has expressed in niche abilities such as her Water Veil and Flow granting her very unique abilities. Thanks to her increase in power, Sabertooth has extensive mastery over water around her (Within 25 meters, though it can be flung up to 50 meters) manipulating it with speed and strength equal to her Power Control. Additionally, thanks to her increase in power, she is also capable of producing water, up to 1 tonne (1000kg or about 260 gallons) of water per post.
Velo De Agua ( Water Veil):
Striker's special ability , creating a thin special film of water secreted from her body infused with her Reiryoku. This veil renders her almost completely invisible to the naked eye by bending light that passes through the water around her. This veil is potent in what it does, but not infallible, as it causes a shimmer around her frame that can still give away her general position. Additionally, while this ability is a near perfect visual veil, this ability does not shield any other senses from tracking her.
Cura de Oasis (Cure of the Oasis):
Striker's special physiology is capable of converting water she comes into contact with to sustain and fuel her body, allowing her to double the speed of her healing and recovery from negative effects while she is in contact with a water source. This also halves the energy drain of recovering while in contact with a water source (A water source is any body of water with volume at least equal to her body's volume).
Thanks to her increased control, Saber is capable of pumping energy into the water she herself produces and concentrating her healing abilities on one particular area of her body (An area no greater than 25% of her mass) to instantly heal the focus area. This ability has a 3 post cooldown, during which Saber will not be able to regenerate.
Flujo (Flow):
Striker's ability to partially liquefy her organs, allowing her to compress her body to incredibly thin dimensions allowing her to easily slip through spaces 1/5th her size.
Thanks to the liquid pressure buildup and the drop in mass thanks to how large she is, doing this causes her to experience a sudden spike in durability as her mass and reiryoku are compressed creating a powerful layered surface tension which acts in a manner similar to hierro (durability boost scales off her Mask Protection), as well as producing superheated steam to escape her body burning her immediate surroundings in a 5 meter radius. She can sustain this for up to 3 posts before needing to expand back to her normal size, and incurring a 4 post cooldown on compressing herself regardless for how long she was compressed.
» Why:
Sabertooth has not only had a considerable amount of Combat throughout her threads, but also has consumed a considerable ammount of humans and other hollows thanks to her tendency to kill and eat hollows that draw unwanted attention.
Numerous small hollows and several larger more powerful hollows have been devoured, and thanks to her sneaky, exploitive nature even coerced a human (Kenichi) into assisting her in taking down bigger, more powerful prey, including a Gillian-level Menos Grande.
Due to the sheer ammount of food she has been eating, she is being bumped up to her next stage of evolution.
In addition to this, she has also been honing her other skills as a means of improving her ability to hunt. Mainly her increase in her Power Control (An upgrade earlier during a burst that she has taken advantage of in her threads) resulting in a slight expansion of her capabilities.
Crouching Dragon Hidden Tiger (Hollow Consumption, Strong Hollow Consumption, General Combat.)
Balancing the Books (Hollow Consumption, Martial Skill Training, General Combat)
Second Contact (Major Hollow Consumption, Combat.)
Mental Skill Regrade:
As was evident in Sabertooth's grading, her mental skills were asked by the grader to be reduced to beginner because she is a hollow, despite the fact that cunning and cognizant hollows exist at her level. I think that the way Sabertooth is played, and even how she was written purely in her original app and history and personality, exhibits a vastly more mentally competent creature than what she was graded at. In my mind, these aren't even upgrades, this was just how she was always supposed to be, and as such I would like to request that her mentals be regraded, with this as my approximated spread for her currently.
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Re: Ceros to Menos [Saber Upgrade]
Tue Jan 24, 2023 6:18 am
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- First Check:
Cura de Oasis (Cure of the Oasis)'
—Rather than mess around with things like quadruple recovery time, you can just say that they can instantly regenerate the focused area but their regen goes on cool-down for the period afterwards.
Thanks to the liquid pressure buildup and the drop in mass thanks to how large she is, doing this causes her to experience a sudden spike in speed,multiplying her speed by 3 when active, as well as producing superheated steam to escape her body burning her immediate surroundings in a 5 meter radius. She can sustain this for up to 3 posts before needing to expand back to her normal size, and incurring a 4 post cooldown on compressing herselfif she does so for the full three posts.
— Three times speed is too much, this would make more sense as raising her durability given the fact she is compressing her mass and making herself more dense as opposed to speed.
— Also three posts is a long time and she should go onto a cooldown after doing it regardless of time, rather than it being 3 whole posts required to bring this to the point of cool-down.
- Second Check:
I appreciate the use of something comparable but Blut is a poor example due to the nature of its racial skill wording and there being more onus on the player to expand and characterise it in their application.
I would recommend rephrasing it to something such as "the condensing of their body also compresses their reiatsu into their various layers to skin to create a thick layer around their body for the duration to create a passive defence" a focused hierro essentially.
Also you refer to the skill as Power Control which is the Human skill. A tiny nitpick :^)
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Re: Ceros to Menos [Saber Upgrade]
Tue Jan 24, 2023 6:35 am
Turned Oasis burst into an instant heal and turned the drawback into shutting off regen as requested.
Changed the Flow boost to durability and fixed cooldown conditions as requested.
Changed the Flow boost to durability and fixed cooldown conditions as requested.
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Tue Jan 24, 2023 6:54 am
Flow Compression reworded
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