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This application of Nel is based around a canon 400 years past her normal time. She will be different to the canon version but kept along similar lines


Character Name:
Nelliel tu Odelschwanck

Character True Age:

Character Appearance Age:
6 in child form, 20 in Adult

Character Gender:

Espada Guards


Nel's appearance is in stark contrast to her vocabulary, which contains a number of bizarre phrases and words one wouldn't expect such a small child to know, such as calling her uvula a "throat penis" and referring to herself as a masochist. Ichigo Kurosaki assumes her Hollow companions are responsible for this. Nel and her companions also represent oddities among Hollows, though most Hollows are evil, Nel actually fears Shinigami, assuming they are in fact the evil ones. In spite of this, she develops an attachment to Ichigo and follows him into Las Noches. During their super sentai intro she prefers the name "Thieves: Nel-Don-Pe." She also seems to speak with a lisp in her child form, frequently pronouncing "S"s as "T"s.
As Nelliel, she is much more mature, composed, logical, sophisticated, and intelligent than her child form. She is also relatively level-headed in terms of how to fight, stating that if one's excuse for a battle is to fight out of hatred, prejudice, or simple competition, as Nnoitra does, then it is merely instinctual and animalistic, and that it makes the challenger look "childish," "unworthy," and "not much of a warrior". Though Nelliel has proven during her last few minutes as a full-fledged Espada that it is 'acceptable' when it involves vengeance, she does not view even that as a reason to fight. Unlike many of the Arrancar, Nelliel is somewhat pacifistic, and according to her Fracción, has despised engaging in combat even when she was still among the upper ranks of the Espada, unless it involves self-defense and protecting those dear to her heart. It is for this reason that Pesche and Dondochakka decided to simply be content with her child form and banished themselves from Las Noches. She refuses to finish off weaker or injured opponents, and will stop fighting them once they've been disabled or incapacitated, a trait shared with Kenpachi Zaraki.

As witnessed during her numerous fights with Nnoitra, Nelliel's shown to be relatively calm and silent when fighting, preferring to speak only when spoken to, a rather uncommon trait among most Arrancar. She is even shown to enjoy reading, usually seen reading a book after her mission or after waiting for Nnoitra to wake up after their recent battle.

Nelliel's also shown to be a loyal, respectful, and trustworthy warrior, who will diligently follow the orders of her commander, provided said commander has proven his worth.

She's also knowledgeable, analytical, easygoing, fairly compassionate (usually towards her friends), humorous in her own right, and exhibits a cheerful, energetic demeanor when off-duty. Although having grown up physically, she somehow retains her child-like affection over Ichigo, best-shown when she unexpectedly bear-hugged him after attacking Nnoitra without realizing that Ichigo was losing consciousness.



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Child Form
Nel is a female Arrancar that has hazel eyes and blue-green hair. She has a large scar coming down from her forehead to her nose, larger than average incisors, and a crimson line that stretches horizontally across her face right below her eyes.

The remains of her Hollow mask make up a cartoonish skull on the top of her head. A crack runs along the left side of the mask and four of the teeth on it are broken off. The location of her Hollow hole is currently unknown. Her clothing consists of a simple green gown, which, in her original form, tears to become a top and skirt.

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Adult Form
Her previous form is that of a full-figured woman with long waving hair but otherwise similar features. Her skull mask changes slightly, its features appearing sharper and less cartoonish with a pair of curved horns. A large "3" is tattooed on her back, indicating that she was the former 3rd Espada.

Bone Appearance:
Nels bone appearance is that of a goat skull on her head covering the top half of her skull and looks somewhat cartoonified. When she is in adult form, the skull looks more deathly and real.

Hollow Hole:

reiatsu Colour:


Sealed Zanpakutô:

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Her Zanpakutō has a green sheath and a tsuba that resembles a pair of crescent moons joined together at the back.

Racial Abilities:


Child Form

Age Shift: At any time, Nel can transfer her reiatsu through her body at a massive rate causing her entire being to alter forms between her original and child states. By boosting the rate, she can enter her original form until she is exhausted.

Healing Saliva: Her saliva seems to possess some form of weak healing power. It is activated by her reaching into her mouth and massaging her uvula, causing her to vomit. The vomit has a similar appearance to saliva, leading her to believe that it is.

Cero Doble: A unique ability to swallow enemy attacks and fire them back with a more powerful force exceeding that of the original hit, indicated by the eyes on her skull mask glowing, although using it seems to exhaust her. Unlike in her original form, Nel does not mix the swallowed Cero with her own; instead, she simply sends it back.

Rudimentary Sonído: She is able to accelerate her movements with what seems to be a rudimentary form of Sonído, which she refers to as "Chōka Soku" (超加速, Super Speed; "Super Acceleration" in the English dub). When she uses this Sonído form, her mask's eyes glow.

Adult Form

Age Shift: in her original form, Nel is constantly pulsing her reiatsu to keep herself standing in this state. if she wanted to return to her child form, Nel could slow her reiatsu tempo or exhaust herself to shift back. This does however, leave her exhausted and unable to return to her original form until she has rested for a good few hours.

Master Swordsmanship Specialist: As a former Espada, Nelliel has much experience at fighting, showing hardly any effort in her advanced use of swordsmanship. Her body flows elegantly when engaging in combat, so finely tuned that she can stop her attacks at a moment's notice and subsequently execute lethal attacks with absolute precision. She easily defeated Nnoitra a number of times, who is a highly proficient swordsman in his own right.

Expert Hand-To-Hand Combatant: Even without the aid of her Zanpakutō, Nelliel has shown herself to be a quite powerful fighter. During her battle against Nnoitra, she was shown able to skillfully dodge and counter his attacks. She was also shown using her swordsmanship in conjunction with her hand-to-hand combat.

Sonído Master: Her speed has greatly increased as well, fitting with her former position and was able to repeatedly sneak up on and effortlessly avoid Nnoitra with her speed. She was also able to easily take the badly hurt Ichigo to a safer place during one of Nnoitra's attacks.[40]

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Cero Doble: She retains her attack absorption ability in her original form, but now performs it with greater ease. According to Nnoitra, Nelliel's specialty is to absorb an incoming Cero and fire one of her own while returning it, thus creating a potent Cero Doble (重奏虚閃 (セロ・ドーブル), sero dōburu, Spanish for "Double Zero", Japanese for "Heavy Performance Hollow Flash"). While her child form severely limits her Arrancar powers, she is still powerful enough to absorb and redirect a Cero blast from a Privaron Espada-class Arrancar in its released form, though the effort seems to tire her immediately. In her original form, the force(s) of the Cero Doble is augmented greatly, owing to the fact that she rebounds the attack while blending it with her own Cero, drastically increasing its power, as befits the former third Espada.

Hierro: Nelliel, while in her original form, has Hierro befitting the strength of an Espada. It is strong enough to allow Nelliel to counter Nnoitra's blade with a kick, and showing no signs of injury.

Enhanced Strength: Her strength is greatly increased, fitting with her former position. With her great physical strength, Nelliel is capable of fending off attacks from even gigantic weapons like Nnoitra's, launching her opponent several meters away with a single punch and slicing the Hierro of an Espada-level Arrancar opponent effortlessly in one swing of her Zanpakutō. She is also capable of stopping Nnoitra's Cero barehanded.

Immense Spiritual Power: As the former third Espada, Nelliel has a grand amount of spiritual energy, powerful enough for her Fracción to sense it from a large distance. Renji even stated that her spiritual power was close to Ichigo's, confusing the two for a moment.

High Intellect: While in her original form, she is shown to be quite intelligent. Having a great understanding of combat and the forms, and methods behind an opponent's skill and intentions, she can discern personalities easily. She also has a philosophy on life that provides a code of honor, respect, and mercy. However, her child-like antics can sometimes block her intelligence, latching onto Ichigo, who was clearly injured, to the point where he passed out, then latched onto him again


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Release Actions:
Nel holds her Zanpakutō up in front of her horizontally and calls out its release command. The Zanpakutō glows as a hazy smoke emanates from it. She calls out the name of her Zanpakutō and the glow intensifies into a huge burst of spiritual energy that greatly affects the surrounding vicinity

Resereccion Appearance:

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In her new form, Nel takes the form of a brownish-green ibex-like centaur complete with a black horse's tail. Her hollow masks horns become longer and more curved and also extends slightly, framing the sides of her face, particularly the cheeks. The crack on her mask also closes up, although the missing teeth remain. Her shoulders are covered by armored white spaulders that come across the shoulder blade to the neck, she has white armored elbow guards and white armored gauntlets. The parts of the arm that aren't covered by armor are covered with a black material as well as her hands. There is a white armored ring at the base of her tail. Gamuza itself transforms into a double-sided lance. She is one of the few Arrancar known to have a weapon after her release (the releases of most Arrancar de-materializes their weapons upon their true forms being unleashed). All these features grant her the overall appearance of a medieval knight or a jouster.

Resereccion Abilities:

Enhanced Strength: While in her released form, her might increases further.

Enhanced Spiritual Power: While in her released state, her spiritual power increases significantly.

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Lanzador Verde: Nel throws her lance at her opponent with extreme speed. As it travels through the air, it begins to spin and build up spiritual energy. When it reaches its target, it acts as a drill inflicting extreme piercing damage. The technique is powerful enough to push back Nnoitra as well as break his Zanpakutō that he was using to block the attack

Pesado Casco: Nel's four legs are rather powerful and have the ability to create a hefty sound wave from quickly impacting them with a surface. For example, stomping the ground. This would send out a green blast around her that follows the floors around her in a circle ring shape for 40ft, knocking those hit by it off their feet. Nel wouldn't bother using this at a range as it wouldn't travel far enough to do much. It is more to get the melee attackers out and back into her range.

Gastos Verde: Nel holds her spear like a lance under her arm. She then dashes forwards at a very fast pace using all four legs to run. Her spear then emits a powerful green aura that imitates the same spiralling reiatsu as her lanzador verde. Upon touching Nel whilst she is charging, would throw them out of the way with fierce damage inflicted.

Aco Braz: Nels hands are covered in a very hard shell shaped glove. by channelling reiatsu into her fists, Nel can launch a hefty punch into something causing it to shatter (if a structure) or inflict a heavy bludgeoning wound to a target. Depending on how fast Nel is moving, this punch can vary in power. Simply standing still and punching won't be as strong as if she had momentum.


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Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master



Several years earlier, Nelliel held the rank of 3rd Espada. During her time in that position, she was constantly challenged by Nnoitra Gilga to fights to prove that males are stronger than females. Nnoitra once laid waste to an entire colony of Arrancar, prompting Nelliel to ask him why as he was given no order to do so. Nnoitra stated that no one ever ordered him not to kill them. Nelliel reminded him that Aizen's order were to "seek the Vasto Lorde", she further explained that murdering entire colonies stood against that order. He responds that not everyone is loyal to Aizen and if they resist they are rebels and killing rebels is like helping Aizen. He further reasoned that if he can take them out then they are not Vasto Lorde, stating that he is following orders just fine. He then informs her that she has gotten awfully uptight over a couple hundred hollows. Nelliel suggested that he should think before he speaks, as they themselves were once Hollows just like those he killed; it was their own good fortune that they evolved beyond that, nothing more. Nnoitra taunts her to attack if she felt she could beat him if it made her mad. She plainly responded that she was shocked as even becoming an Arrancar, Nnoitra was nothing more then a child. Nnoitra questioned her comment but is attacked and seemingly knocked unconscious. When he wakes up he sees she is sitting near him reading a book while a dead Hollow lies nearby. He asked her why she helped him, Nelliel simply tells him that she did not 'help him', she simply prevented the Espada from losing a member by putting an end to his suicidal behavior. Nnoitra explains that he can't stand her and she would obviously know that, asking why she keeps following him around.

She simply stared at him and stated that its because he was weaker than her. Sometime later Nnoitra continued to kill Arrancar and Hollow alike, determining they were unfortunate for facing him. Nelliel noted to him that it was an Arrancar he just killed to which he responded he knew that and wanted to state as a fact something he would only explain once. Something he wanted her to know was that if she insisted to continually follow him around, then no matter who stood in his path, he would not be benevolent or merciful.

Sometime later he challenges her to a fight to which Nelliel explains once again that she would not draw her blade against the likes of him. Stating that he will not draw her into his demented world, Nnoitra told her that she was over thinking as the only reason they needed to draw their blades against each other was for the simple sake of drawing their blades. Nelliel noted that she did not understand that reasoning. She then asked what drove his blood lust. Nnoitra simply stated that gasping for his final breath in the heat of battle; to have his entire being defined by that moment was his greatest desire. Nelliel questioned this philosophy, noting that it would be a temporary high. He agreed to the truth of that but stated that nothing else could fill that void. He was given power and he would use it kill anyone standing in his way until he died on his feet, taking in his last breath.

During this time, Nnoitra would constantly challenge Nelliel to battle, each time she would easily defeat him. It was during one of these battle she went to leave and he told her that it was a battle to the finish. When she asked him if he wanted her to finish him off, she told him that she simply refuses and further said him to stop talking all big. She stated that there was a time when they ceased being Human, and became beasts. Now, as Arrancar they had regained their sense of reason. She explained to him that rational people, when going to battle need a reason to fight and he had none. Nnoitra screamed at her that he had a reason, he could not stand her. Nelliel detailed that it wasn't a reason just an instinct as he is a beast and she didn't recognize him as a warrior. Therefore she had no reason to bear the life of someone not a warrior. After Nelliel left, Nnoitra was approached by Tesra Lindocruz who offered him a hand. In response, he threw his Zanpakutō at him, hitting the structure behind the Arrancar. Nnoitra told him not to act friendly with him, and that just because he lost did not mean they were of the same level. When Tesra asked why he had to pick on Nelliel and no other Espada, Nnoitra explained that it was because he hated her, some female being able to outrank, be greater than a man on the battlefield; that was his reason.

Sometime later, Nnoitra teamed up with Szayel Aporro Granz (who was not an Espada at the time) to perform a sneak attack on Nelliel as well as test a device he created. As Nelliel was searching for her Fracción, she was confronted by Nnoitra, who asked her if she was looking for something. Nelliel stated it was none of his business and asked if revealing his weapon was a form of intimidation. She advised him to keep it concealed if he didn't want to look weak and moved on. There was an explosion which got Nelliel's attention. Once the smoke settled, she saw the her Fracción, Pesche Guatiche and Dondochakka Birstanne, gravely wounded. She turned to Nnoitra and asked him if he forcibly removed their masks as she became enraged. They initiated a fight during which a device made by Szayel created a fake image of Nnoitra and distracted Nelliel. By exploiting the opportunity, Nnoitra attacked Nelliel and hit her from behind, causing her a wound to her head and her mask to break on the front left side. The attack scarred her forehead and left her unconscious. He took her unconscious body and stated that she would probably call this an act of a beast but it didn't matter any to him. He was approached from behind by Szayel who asked if there was anything else to which Nnoitra responded that his job was already over.

Szayel asked him if he needed to be so cold as they had worked as partner and that he should at least be allowed to admire their end. Nnoitra detailed that he didn't remember being his partner and they just happened to have the same motives. Nnoitra threw Nelliel off the side of Las Noches so that he could increase his power by the time she returned. Nnoitra told Szayel that they were going, but Szayel told him that he would appreciate if he lost the presumptuous tone. Nnoitra snapped back that he wasn't even an Espada. Szayel stated that if not for the equipment that he prepared, Nnoitra wouldn't even have had the chance to attack Nelliel. Nnoitra then asked if he should really be speaking to him that way. He looks over the side of Las Noches at Nelliel and her Fracción's prone bodies and was surprised as she had reverted into a child. Szayel noted that he had not anticipated this and he had never seen anything like it before. He deduced that her Reiatsu was leaking out of the wound on her mask, shrinking her spiritual body as a result.

Afterward, Pesche and Dondochakka vowed that they would protect this newly weakened Nel at any cost. They took the roles of her playful older brothers, never revealing to her their true identities or her own identity for fear of her memories coming back. According to Pesche, this was because she had always hated fighting, and in her child form she was spared from it.

Nel is first seen being chased by Pesche Guatiche, Dondochakka Birstanne, and Bawabawa. While Ichigo Kurosaki, Yasutora Sado, and Uryū Ishida are running to Las Noches to save Orihime Inoue, they come across Nel and think she is a young human being chased by three hollows. After Ichigo and his friends attack the three, Nel yells at him to stop being mean to them. Ichigo then realizes that Nel is actually a Hollow herself and not a Human. They all then apologize to Ichigo and his friends because they didn't think their game of "eternal pursuit" would cause such a misunderstanding and they all introduce themselves. Nel tells Ichigo that Dondochakka and Pesche are her brothers and Bawabawa is their pet. Ichigo is confused by this as he's never heard of Arrancar having siblings. Dondochakka explains that he just found Nel lying around and that he just had to become her brother. Everyone then decides to ride Bawabawa to get to Las Noches faster.

On the way there Ichigo questions if they are really Arrancar since they have a different feel then the ones he met in the human world. Nel explains that the ones who went to the Human world were Numeros, who are Arrancar who are at least as strong as Menos Grande. She continues to explain that they are ruled by the Espada and are combat experts who are "filthy bugs". She then notices that Ichigo is not like an Arrancar either because of his lack of mask and black clothes. Ichigo then tells her he's a Shinigami and that causes to Nel to panic thinking that they will all get killed if they go to Las Noches. All of a sudden Runuganga, the guardian of the white sands, appears and confronts Nel and her friends.

Runuganga explains that he got information from Las Noches about people invading and that Nel joining with them is unforgivable and Nel tries to explain that she isn't with them. All of a sudden, Ichigo uses Getsuga Tenshō and splits Runuganga's head in half. Ichigo believes he's won, but Runuganga gets back up and brings his head back together. Nel explains that he is all of the sand in the area and that he can always come back together. Ichigo, realizing he can't be beaten, decides to escape and think of a strategy. Runuganga says he won't allow that though and forms a massive pit in the sand that starts sucking them down. Ichigo asks Nel if he has a weakness and she explains it's water and he asks where their going to find that. All of sudden a huge blast of ice comes and completely freezes Runuganga. The ice breaks and kills Runuganga. Ichigo looks to see who did that and finds Rukia Kuchiki and Renji Abarai. Ichigo jumps off of Bawabawa and goes to meet Rukia and Renji. Nel is panicked by this continuing to think that Shinigami are bad. Ichigo returns with Rukia and Renji and they begin riding Bawabawa again. They eventually make it to the side of Las Noches and break into the palace with force.

Ichigo, with Nel Tu on his back, encounters Dordoni.
Ichigo and his group break into Las Noches and split into five directions, leaving Nel and her brothers behind. The siblings decide to follow Ichigo but get lost. Nel is the only one who catches up to Ichigo, arriving just in time to be confronted by Dordoni Alessandro Del Socaccio, a Privaron Espada with a number of #103.[19] When Dordoni tries to fire a Cero blast at Ichigo, Nel steps in, absorbing the blast and firing it back. Enraged, Dordoni attacks Nel, who is then saved by Ichigo. Ichigo apologizes to her for holding back his power, which caused her to step in and get hurt. Dordoni then makes an attempt at attacking Nel further to goad Ichigo into using his Hollowfication. Outraged Ichigo places Nel down and Hollowfies attacking and defeating Dordonni with ease, as Nel looks on. Dordoni later wakes up to a drooling Nel who is using her "saliva" to heal his wounds. He then explains to Ichigo and Nel why he has faced them and then goes to attack them again even though he has already lost. Ichigo swiftly takes him down and leaves with Nel.

Nel and Orihime are protected by Ichigo as he fights Grimmjow.
During her trip further into Las Noches with Ichigo, she witnesses his clashes with Ulquiorra Cifer, the 4th Espada and Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez, the 6th Espada.

After Ichigo finishes off Grimmjow, they are suddenly attacked by none other than Nnoitra Gilga, the 5th Espada. As they fight, Nnoitra notices Nel, recognizes her stating she has become pathetic and asks if her broken mask aches. Ichigo then questions how does Nnoitra know Nel. Nnoitra explains that he wondered why she was here figuring Ichigo brought her but states he realizes now Ichigo brought her not knowing who she really was. Ichigo is confused not knowing what Nnoitra means so the Espada explains that she is Nelliel Tu Odelschwanck, an ex-Espada. Nel tries to deny the accusation prompting Nnoitra to step on her but Ichigo blocks the attack and while Ichigo is telling Nel to not worry, he is kicked himself and is sent flying. Nnoitra comments that it does seem as though she has lost her memory, but after getting her head broken its no wonder she has forgotten all that has happened. Ichigo questions what does he mean broken, Nnoitra explains as he picks Nel up by her head that he is the one broke her head. Ichigo yells at him to stop and becomes enraged charging at him but Nnoitra counters only for Ichigo to get in close and slash him down the center of his chest. But Ichigo then realizes his blade has made contact but has done nothing. Nnoitra asks if he has already forgotten that there is no way he can cut him with that blade. He then kicks Ichigo again sending him further away, explaining that Nel always made him mad just like Ichigo is doing right now, thus why he broke her head from behind and threw her out of Las Noches. Ichigo screams at him to let her go and rushes to attack him but Nnoitra counters and throws Nel away in the process. As he goes over to a wounded Ichigo he states that its time to end this as he grabs Ichigo's sword arm and breaks his wrist. Seeing Ichigo hurt triggers Nel's transformation into her original form much to Nnoitra's surprise.

Nnotira states that she has returned to her original form. Before he realizes it she uses Sonído to move Ichigo to a safe distance away from him. After a small talk with Ichigo who reassures her they are still friends, Nel resolves to face Nnoitra. Though Ichigo is uncertain at first, it is revealed her former rank as 3rd Espada. Nelliel rushes to attack Nnoitra and cuts him across the chest before he can react, surprising him entirely. He tries to attack her but she effortlessly kicks his Zanpakutō away, pushing him off balance and sending him a distance away from her. He eventually stops himself and fires a Cero at her, causing Ichigo to scream out trying to warn her. Nelliel simply places her hand up stopping the blast entirely much to Nnoitra's surprise. She then sucks the entire blast into her mouth fires a Cero Doble at him causing a large explosion. Tesra lets Orihime go as he runs off to aid his master but no sooner than he does that he is sent flying away into nearby debris. Nnoitra appears injured along his right side, asking Tesra who told him to let go of that woman to which he apologizes. Nnoitra smiles at Nelliel and asks what is wrong, he was hit by a Cero that she absorbed and then added her own to it... so why is he still alive? He notes that her face is asking that. He then admits that he forgot about her Cero Doble, her trademark technique. He then explains to her that she doesn't get it as she has forgotten one thing. Since she left Las Noches, he asks her how many years have passed since she disappeared? He then states that she shouldn't think the power of the current Espada is the same as when she was an Espada and that the number on her back is meaningless now.

The two Arrancar continue to battle with both facing each other evenly. As they fight Nnoitra asks if she remembers calling him a beast and even saying their strengths weren't even. He then gloats asking how does it feel being beaten to death by the same beast. Nelliel then kicks his Zanpakutō away as Nnoitra goads her, Nelliel tells him its such a pity as it will be difficult to transform again after only just returning to her original form. Therefore she didn't want to resort to it, and she begins to release her Zanpakutō. Nnoitra realizing what she is doing moves to stop her but isn't fast enough and is forced back by the release of reiatsu. He is quickly overwhelmed as Nelliel uses her "Lanzador Verde" technique which he tries to stop with his Zanpakutō but the attack succeeds on getting through regardless slamming him against a slab or rock. Nelliel goes to Nnoitra and tells him that its over but he should not despair as she will not take his life. In an instance she reverts back into a child to everyone's surprise. Nnoitra steps on her and laughs then kicks her prompting an enraged Ichigo to attack again, only to be slammed into the ground. After getting bored with fighting Ichigo he commands Tesra to finish him off, to which Tesra releases his Zanpakutō and proceeds to beat Ichigo mercilessly. Nnoitra then forces her to watch as Ichigo is brutalized.

She is soon healed by Orihime when Kenpachi Zaraki arrives to fight Tesra, then Nnoitra. It can be assumed she might have regained her memories yet again as she locked eyes with Nnoitra and says his name as he dies. But when Coyote Starrk suddenly appears to kidnap Orihime, she remains on the battlefield as Ichigo leaves to rescue her.

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Hueco Mundo was as dark as ever with that eternal night display occurring above the hollows that lived here 24/7. The crescent moon shone brightly and reflecting off the sands turning them into a vast ocean of white. the sands sat perfectly still, stacked with wavy formations until suddenly a small puddle of sand was uplifted when a boot came down. nearby, another was thrown up as the heavy steps indicated running from the owner of these steps. She was a tall girl with long green hair and wearing a white Espada themed outfit.

Why was the girl running? well, she recently found out that she had woken up in the middle of the desert, miles away from Las Noches where she was supposed to be. In her child state, she tended to wander in her sleep or even when she wasn't asleep and then forget about where she had run off to when she woke up. Realising this, she needed to get back quickly before anything found her. Activating her Age shift, the girl changed to her original womanly form and dashed towards las Noches.

however as she ran, she made no noise nor said anything. Almost as if she needn't worry about saying anything as she bolted across the sands using a type of Sonido that wasn't like the original. She moved slightly quicker than usual, getting back to where she once started. Seeing the giant fortress in sight, the girl stopped and stood to look at it. She said nothing as she stood there watching nothing happen to the building. but then she spoke with her soft yet high pitched tone.

"Nothing... still nothing has happened to it..."

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Sun Nov 04, 2012 2:30 pm
Moving Nel to adoption.
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Mon Dec 03, 2012 6:41 pm
Can I adopt Nell, I'll be good with her. just to get me started, please

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Sun Jul 28, 2013 3:20 am
Gonna go ahead and apply for her c:


Neliel woke up sweating and breathing heavily from the dream she had, the same dream she had for the past... well, it seemed like decades.. since the day Ichigo came close to dying at the hands of Nnoitra... since the day that she had watched him be crushed and broken by Tesla.. She wasn't sure why it wouldn't leave her mind.

When she decided that her heart wasn't going to jump out of her chest she got out of bed and walked around the room. Nel turned back to her adult form shortly after the war ended, finally finding a fix for her reiatsu draining out, thanks to twelfth division..

Nelliel walked over to one of the corners in her room, to the place where she always put her sword. She never did like fighting or taking a life, but she felt safer when it was by her or on her hip, especially after what Nnoitra did to her. "Thank you, Ichigo." she whispered, to no one in particular, as she reached down to pick up her sword and unsheathe it, admiring the way the moonlight caught the blade. She had only used it once outside of training in a long while.. Nelliel once again sheathed her sword and sat it back in the corner, walking back to the bed. Not to sleep, but to think about the orange haired Shinigami.

The one that protected her during the war, the was that saved her repeatedly with his blade, body, and spirit. Now all she wanted to do was return him the favor by protecting him.... She had learned about his battle with Aizen shortly after she left Hueco Mundo, and she felt so helpless for not being there to fight with him.

She always thought Ichigo was different, special even, but for him to fight Aizen knowing that he would lose his powers just showed the depths of his resolve to protect the things that he loved. Nelliel threw her hands in her face, trying not to be overwhelmed or overtaken by her thoughts. It was an uphill battle, though, and she was slowly failing. Ichigo could have easily lost his life when fighting Nnoitra and Tesla, she remembered, clear as daylight, seeing Ichigo struggling against the crushing arms of Tesla. Nelliel felt a slow wet feeling begin to spread down her cheeks. How long had it been since she last cried? Decades? Centuries?

"If only I was strong enough to protect him, then he wouldn't have had to suffer so much pain..."

Nelliel could even remember the red-headed girl running over to Ichigo's side in an attempt to heal him,and she would never forget his words.

"Heal... Nel before you heal me."

Even when he was half dead, Ichigo thought of the people who were around him first.. His friends.. not himself.. Nelliel got up from her bed and walked out onto to the balcony, feeling the cold breeze of the night air around her bare arms and legs. Walking over to the edge of the balcony, she stared at the shimmering crescent-moon, trying to understand why Ichigo protected her. She was a hollow, after all. Why should he have cared..? Nelliel looked up at the sky, lamenting to herself as the night's music played, the sounds of nature creating a symphony to accompany her thoughts.

"Ichigo, I wonder what you're thinking now... I only wish that you could come back to me..."

I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.

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Wed Jul 31, 2013 1:32 pm
Ok, While I may not exactly know much about IchiNel or w/e it's called or if Nel actually feels that way, it does seem to fit her well enough, so approving.

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Hiding behind a large rock, little Nel, scanned the area before moving past it. Eternal Tag did not seem as fun anymore. There was a need for a new game. That was when Eternal Hide and Hit had been made. The game was rather simple really. Taking soft and gentle steps it took her nearly 20 seconds to take a couple steps. "Uh?"Eyes widening, she witnessed the sand begin to cave under her. Running in the opposition direction she started to laugh and cry at the same time. "You can't cwatch me. Supa speed!" In between the the boisterous sounds Dondochakka and Pesche made chasing her, and her cries and laughter it was difficult to listen to anything else.

Before she knew it she had gotten far enough from them where she could no longer see them. Inching her shoulders up almost in reflex, she neared and stuck to a nearby stone. It was not an exceedingly large rock, but it was still much larger than her. Just a few meters ahead there was a small cluster of people. It was a man and two ladies. The ladies looked rather beautiful. "You. Come on out"Surprised she was noticed she took out running. "Never. Supa speed!" To her surprise it was not very long until she was caught by the man. Flailing about in his arms she made no effort to escape but she was being rather difficult. "Beat me, beat me. Beat me senseless." The man could only look at her surprised wondering what the hell was wrong with this child. "Are you stupid?! he started, "I won't beat a child! he continued. You have to! Nel is a bad little maswo-kiss"

Before the situation transpired any further Pesche and Dondochoka finally caught up with her. Let go of our sister!" You fool! What did you teach this kid?! And she's not your sister; she's probably adopted!"said the male arrancar. Tilting her head Nel scratched her nose and wondering asked, "Adwopted. What's that?" As the two lady arrancar finally caught up with the man, they both said in unison, "It means you are not really her sister. Remaining immobile she continued to smile as if nothing had happened. And seconds went by.

All of a sudden. "No. Noooo. Ugly girl is wrong. We are swilings."The man had to hold out Nel in one of his hands and away from the lady he was now trying to push on the other direction. Arms outstretched towards Nel, it was not difficult to discern what would happen if she got a hold of her. "Ugly...Ugly?!" "Ugly, ugly, ugly, ugly, ugly!. Just as Nel had finished speaking, she held the man's arm in a hug and noticing a large fresh cut by his cheek, she gave it a long lick. The man only turned to face her in utter surprise. "I'll kill you, you fucking kid! said the other lady as she jumped to get a hold of Nel before she was stopped and held back by Pesche who hugged her hips, accidentally letting his hands slip down, which earned him a couple of kicks.

"Quiet! said the men interrupting the boisterous bickering. "Why did you do that, child?" "When I stroke my uvula, I drool! It cures things" Her words had nearly made him cringe. The upside of one of his eyebrows even twiched momentarily. "A lady shouldn't say words like stroke." Turning aside to check on his two ladies he was somewhat annoyed but pleased at their behavior. "Swee?" Said Nel in an strangely odd tone of voice. By the time the man had turned to look, Nel was already retrieving her hand from deep within her mouth as an incredible amount of liquid had resurfaced and prepared to exit her mouth. "Gyahhhhh!!!Only a scream was heard. There rest was, for the most part quite blank, or rather...dark. When she awoke, Nel was sitting on the sand, on her adult form. She didn't quite remember what happened but her head hurt. Probably one of the ladies had hit her. Behind her, one of the ugly ladies sat looking at her while another stood several meters in front of her covering her from the man's view who seemed to be bleeding from his nose.
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