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[Vizard] Logan :: Tempest Gale :: Monsuta [Approved 1-3] LoganPI
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General Information
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Birth Name: Logan Bane
Chosen Name: Tempest Gale
Appearance Age: 23
True Age: 396
Gender: Female

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Overall Appearance
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Appearance: Logan is a fine woman : she has a nice body shape, almost hourglass in appearance. Her hips are definitely feminine and very smooth. She has a thin, but yet still slightly meaty shape : this helps considering she may be considered diminutive in size. Not the tallest of women, reaching around 5'6, Logan is yet aggressive : the light meat under her skin is all muscle. Wiry and dangerous, she seems to have the grace of a predator. Her long purple hair is often not taken care of properly, simply brushed and left as it would. She doesn't seem to hold much vanity, as she wears an eye patch over one of her eyes. Her clothes tend to be baggy, even with her voluptuous aspects. Very simple, as her eyes seem to flash with a ferocious aspect, and her canines are almost like fangs.

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Personality
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Personality: Logan is a trip in herself : willful and hard headed, she never lets anything go. Easy taken to the ideals of revenge because of her life, and never cracking her armor, the woman seems to be as unmovable as a mountain when she decides herself. A little bit rash, but mostly ready to smash things in the face, the vizard finds herself often resorting to violence : even when expression soft emotions. Needless to say, a day with this woman is never boring. She always has a myriad of interesting activities : a bit of a trickster at heart, it seems that she has a hard time taking things seriously. At least to anyone that didn't know the truth of Tempest, and how intense she could be.

Those that have witnessed her intensity are shaken by it. Simply because inside of her lies a fountain of emotions : each of these emotions are put as power sources, enough said. In fact, Logan is calculating, and very easily able to carry out any order she receives. Almost like a loyal soldier, she has the brains to be able to do some amazing things. She runs a tight ship, whenever command is needed : tomfoolery and idiocy are not accepted when they are on duty. Some call her intensity almost manic, dangerous in all forms.

That's because none of them know the very extent that this woman would bring her life to. No fear, no hesitance : because life wasted was wasted, and couldn't be brought back. Logan has a interesting philosophy : keep those that care for you close, blow up the rest of the idiots. Running with a foul mouth, and not afraid to use her body, Logan is manipulative and socially adaptive. Her acting on par with some of the best in the world, and her ability to take in any situation and flow it into her advantage are unparalleled.

After all, nothing should flip her : because everything was usable in some context or the other, shouldn't it? Some may call her insane : because she also tends to have that sort of suicidal tendency. But she has incredible luck : or is it skill? She has no problems using everything she can : to blowing up buildings, to killing family members, or killing wounded teammates to prevent them from giving information. Some may call her merciless, but the point of the matter is simple : the goal is the only priority, doesn't matter how you get there.

Logan also doesn't seem have problems being cruel or nice : she doesn't seem to distinguish such things. Friends are those that help her : foes are those that impede her. To the vizard, she doesn't particularly care for boundaries : open and free, and holding herself to no restraints, is a life she dares to live no matter what. Some may call her evil : she just calls herself smarter then the rest of the idiots. What she wants, she wants, what she gets, she keeps like a mad woman. Simply, this is one bundle of a woman : and a heck of a vizard too.



[Vizard] Logan :: Tempest Gale :: Monsuta [Approved 1-3] LoganIDK
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History
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~ The Morning Star ~

Logan was born to two parents : both of them were in the army of course, and after the maternity and then paternity breaks, they pretty much left their child to a nurse. So Logan grew up with distant parents : and they insisted on training her in several different things : firearm combat, martial arts, tactics. Basically, they made sure that she was an army brat : she knew how to feet and how to kill before she even hit eight years old. This frightened her school mates : particularly when she beat one when he tried to take her teddy bear. Ruled by her parent's training, their codes and their ideal, is was no question as to why the girl was acting out. She was put in a private school, and forced to get along with her peers : the teachers were not picky about punishing deviants. Resenting her parents, the girl found herself only with two friends : the nurse that was raising her, bit by bit, teaching her good things, and Hilda, a foreign student. Soon enough, she was alright : still a sort of degenerate, but able to function in society. All of this as she turned 10. Her life wasn't hard : just very ruled and by personality, she hated being bound.

When she turned 10, is when things got bad. Hilda was visiting, and her nurse, Kriem, was watching them. That's when Logan's parents came back home : and it was a good day, a day of family and fun.. at least until her father took his gun and shot her mother. And then Kriem. And then Hilda. Logan would have been shot too, if the purple haired child hadn't kicked him in the nuts. Her eyes running with tears, and her body moving on the instincts they had built into her, the girl grabbed the gun : shot him twice in the forehead, and once in the groin. After the fact, she dropped the gun, and freaking out, quickly ran out of the house, remembering the smile on his face when she shot him. Tears streaming, she had barely made it just out of range, when the house exploded. Thrown to the ground, the girl turned and saw the house in flames, ashes falling from the sky.

After three hours, when the fire died, Logan crawled to the house, finding only the bodies of her mother and father, bloody but relatively safe. They had various cuts, and yet, no matter how hard she looked, there was no sign of Hilda's or Kriem's body. She did find out that the fridge had survived, and took a bag of food, and dusted her clothes. But her eyes looked at the scene, confused. The girl began to step away, going down the road, into the forest : it was where she resided for two years, before armed forces found her. But they weren't any army : they were terrorists. Taking the small child into their fold, they quickly examined her, telling her that she had been under the Lucifer drug.

What the drug was meant to do was make the user see something beyond : they weren't exactly sure, but the amount of things it ruined was beyond count. The drug was horrible : people went insane and died from it, and they were surprised that she had survived such administration. After all, she was at almost 10 grams a dose : it seemed it kept going up each birthday she had. It explained a lot, but not enough : making her choice, the girl choose to stay with the terrorists, since they were survivors for the most part, and wanted this inhumane drug to end. That was a choice that she alone could make.

~ Ninth ~

Joined with the terrorists, Logan knew she had to learn how to fit better. That took about two years : they were starting to send her out on scouting missions, her sweet face and voice very gentle. And yet she was forgettable : nobody knew how she erased her traces, but she had never been found. One of her trade marks had been bombs : that was her favorite thing to do, so the terrorists enrolled her back into school. But it wasn't any school :it was a chemistry school for geniuses, which made many frown. Surprisingly, she not only kept up, but surpassed a great many of her fellow students. Perhaps side effects from Lucifer : but what was important was that she had gotten a degree in chemistry, and that the army was eying her. More importantly, the American army, where it was believe the drug was made : this gave the terrorist their best shot at something they always wanted : an inside source. That was something they needed horribly.

So they took it. Taking computer courses, Logan quickly became recruited by the Americans : structuring her education, it was quickly obvious she would be one of the best they had ever recruited. In fact, they placed her in a special organization, where there was twelve of them : and she was named Ninth. Almost none of them met face to face : in fact, Ninth only met one other of their organization. Fourth. And his assistant. Of course, they were chasing each other : funnily enough, Ninth's mission was to act as a terrorist, in order to draw out true ones to a baited trap. It was almost too funny, but the woman didn't mind : everyone knew who Logan Bane was back then. The great bomber : the one that made any bomb explode, no matter who tried to stop them.

But back to Fourth. When he and Ninth met, there was instant kinship : after all, Fourth had grown up in the army as well, before engaging himself with the police. The two held a many romantic ties : but eventually, all good things had to end, as Fourth was killed. His assistant took over, and Logan felt a bond with him too. It was easily their association, as they fought in a world that seemed to turn more and more into turmoil. And things like spirits began to be associative with reality : that scared everyone. So the army had decided something : to use project Lucifer with one of the spirit's bodies, in order to create super humans. That was the one time that all 12 had been gathered at once : it was said that the world trembled when that happened. Logan herself couldn't tell you : a lot of them surprised her. People she had seen and met, knew slightly : a lot of them were her fellows. Surprising, but it fit, as all twelve looked on. And it became clear when the first of them broke, that the experiment failed.

All died. Or did they?

~ The Hyena of the 11th Squad ~

In fact, their mortal bodies died : but they were all presented into spirit form. That's when chaos broke loose : hollows had come into the base, and new spirits were sent to fight them. It didn't take long for the weaker of the 12 to fall : the hollows were strong, even as they struggled. Some of them were taken and dragged with the foul beasts : some had managed to remain under the onslaught. Turn out that only three or four had remained : it was a saddening thing, but it was so. But their bodies were rotting : that much was obvious, even as Ninth slammed her fist on the ground. Claiming to overturn death, it startled her when a soft voice told the woman to sleep. And then her world went black.

Awakening in some rustic, japan like setting, the girl quickly adapted : alone, she lived in the area for a year or two, before she found herself hungry. At this rate, she was looking 23 : she had spent quite a while with the terrorists and the Twelve. The woman felt her internal clock stop, as she was facing a large wall. Curious, she tilted her head this way and that, before someone finally asked what she wanted. Surprised, the purple haired girl wasn't sure how to handle that request. With a punch to the person's shoulder, she muttered the word food. The surprise on their face was instant, but then a soft look : dragged, the girl was brought inside something called the Seireitei : within moments, she was full and registered to the academy.

Passing the academy easily, Logan found herself facing a new world. And slowly she became used to it : flowing into habits easily, finding herself well within the 11th squad, in which she was a big grin and then a dangerous flair. She could attack hand to hand, physically, but her preference of bombs was clear. She kept it up, and even invented knew ones in the spirit world. In all she fit pretty well, and when she was asked to go clean up a rogue's attacks, she found no problem with it. It had been around 200 years since her integration : so it was about time she got a more interesting mission.

Many in the Seireitei called her a Hyena, since her laugh was like a cackle, and she had that predatory look, particularly when fighting. Reckless, she was a good person, well in most part. Sometimes, it took people several moments to admit that : but generally liked, nobody could understand the consequences of the Lucifer drug and the experiments that had taxed her being so early in life.. or predict what could happen. After all, the past was haunting when it wanted to be.

~ Kriemhild ~

Fighting against the rogue, it soon became obvious that Logan didn't feel well. Collapsing in battle, her teammates finished the rogue off : but it was too late. The shinigami felt her entire body buck in and out. It was very odd, as she fell to her knees : almost immediately, her teammates brought her to the medical bay : where she was transferred to the Vizards, considering her new condition. The infection spread rapidly : it became obvious that the cut over her eye was the infection site, but as to why she let herself be hurt was a different story. One such tried to sync with her spirit, and there was only fragments that escaped. Needless to say, it had been important : and soon enough, the woman had her inner hollow.

At first, they were gingerly pressing each other for control : but eventually, something else seemed to take place. Rather then to take control of her hollow, it was like Logan was letting the hollow fuse with her. Unusual, this frightened the Vizards, and Soul Society : and within two weeks of being shunned, Logan took a vacation. And decided never to come back, eloping during that time. It was obvious that something was wrong : the hollow was too close, and easily, slowly, Logan was losing control, lashing, striking. And softly, Logan sunk into the world of the hollow, the warm arms of the other enlacing her. It was comfortable : a feeling long forgotten since Hilda and Kriem.

Such a feeling was so comfortable, that something broke. There was no longer a separation : Hilda and Kriem became Kriemhild, and that was her inner self : that hollow that changed her life. Together, hand in hand, they changed their very core : Tempest Gale was allowed to exist on that day, to birth and look upon the world with unrestrained eyes. And that's when chaos began : tactful and never greedy, the elegance of the vizard Tempest drew eyes. And it was simple then, an offer made, and accepting, after fifty odd years of wandering, and doing as willed.. well let's say the soldier side was never going to be erased.

~ The Monsuta ~

Joining them was another choice : and although she wasn't the best to subscribe to the mentality of well, whatever they wanted, Logan just wanted : well correction. Tempest just wanted to keep going.. after all, the world is a wide place. And this was just the start, and she knew it better then anyone.


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RP Sample
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The wild laugh was like a hyena's, white flashing in the dark. That flash was enough : it seemed the rogue understood. ''Running away, aren't we?'' she said, another laugh rolling out of her lips. With a push, fire exploded outwards, and it was almost tingling down her spine. A breath was released, as the shinigami's steps exploded forward : towards the target, blade flashing. The other had skills, she would admit that much, being able to keep her at distance like this, but her teammates would be here any time now. Her blade flashed again, as she was relentless, each movement calculated. She knew she had the advantage, as the purple haired woman stepped back, pressing the button again, sending another explosion rocking. It was too easy, as she felt her body shiver with excitement.

Her steps were quick and fast but suddenly halted, when a familiar head greeted her. ''H-H-Hilda?'' she stuttered, even as her blade lowered. The shock was too much, even as she was running towards her. Searing pain laced around her eye, and with a howl, the Hyena back away, blood splashing in the air, landing on the ground. Yells from the bushes showed her teammates were here, as her face could only face where Hilda was, a strange smile on the other's lips. Making a questioning noise, and holding her burning eye, she reached a hand towards the figure.

Her fingers curled as light extinguished, pain deep within her very soul, as it seemed light itself was winking away.. disappearing. And then it was gone.



[Vizard] Logan :: Tempest Gale :: Monsuta [Approved 1-3] LoganA
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Zanpukto
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Zanpakutō Name: Phoenix the Harbringer

Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: Phoenix doesn't really have a shape or material form : in all cases, he is a whisp of a prescence. Almost ghostly like, the vague shape of a man with wings is visible : but that is all, as no defining features can be found. It is more like a prescence rather then a spirit, particularly after the infection. The best that can be said is that Phoenix is about 5'9 and has a wing span totalling of 20 feet. Which means each wing is ten feet : it's no wonder his shape is small compaired to those.

Zanpakutō Spirit Personality: Phoenix is the strong silent type : he doesn't really speak much to his weilder, or the hollow within. But he is wise, and very rational : he isn't controlled by emotions and seems to think clearly. With a black and white morality, it often seems like he's the fuddy duddy : but it is easily shown that is he loyal and very protective of his mistress : otherwise, he may have lost to the hollow and become absorbed. He also seems to be very protective and kind towards his mistress, and aggressive when prodded the wrong way.

Inner World: Strangely, this Zanpakto's world is bland : a plain almost as far as the eye can see, ashen gray in color. There is a single place that is not plain : these are ruins, about the height of a sky scrapper. There are three ruins : the central one being the tallest, seemingly reaching to the sky. The two beside it are lightly behind it too, making a triangle, and are of the same height. They reach only about four floors each. The stone is also ashen gray : the insides are bare. The main tower only has stairs that go up and up and up, whilst the two smaller towards have floors on the 3rd and 4th level, but stairs for the rest. A really dark and dry place, it's almost as if people are uninvited.

Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: The Zanpakto is actually a lot smaller then most : it's about 3 feet in length and a light weight blade. It is able to be held in one hand for speedy attacks, or held with two to add more power to it.

Release Phrase: Phoenix, Down!
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Shikai Information
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Shikai Appearance: The zanpakto flashes a brilliant color, before becoming formless around Logan's hands. This energy like light then forms as bracelets and anklets around Logan's body, along with a choker. They are clear in color and two inches wide with almost an inch of thickness. They seem to almost meld into Logan's skin, but yet are brighter then anything else.

Shikai Abilities: ~The Reign of the Aftermath~
Logan's shikai seems very in tune with her personality : adaptable and destructive. In fact, Logan's shikai lets her gain access to something commonly attributed to the zanpakto she has : but rather then fire, it's energy. In essence, her shikai allows her to manipulate raw energy : a fusion of fire and lightning, if the elemental break down were to occur. This energy is dangerous and seems to approach levels of danger like the very sun : aptly naming this energy plasma, Logan controls it with her transformed shikai. Passively, she can use Kidō made up of the energy even when not in shikai : but once she phases into shikai, they are able to move to their full effect.

The energy is corrosive in a fashion : in fact, it's a lot like nuclear fallout in some manners. Able to rot away energy within it's areas if placed under a gas form, it's dangerous not only to enemies but allies both, making her use of the energy very dangerous. When in a liquid form, it melts things, much like fire, but much hotter : in a solid form, it leaves a sort of ''burn'' : wiping away markers on the area. It's much like a burn, but much more destructive at a genetic level : too many of these on the thighs and being barren might become an option. Needless to say, this can also be used in the format of healing, by ''burning'' away infected cells.

But as with all things, Logan prides herself on the offensive : the energy can also be compressed and used in the manner of explosives. It works well with gases, and other such compounds that are of an exploding nature. Essentially, it's a pretty way to explode things. In general, the shikai ability breaks down in categories, like so.

Gas Form: A vapour that can only reach up to 10 feet in distance, but is corrosive, breaking down energy in this field. It is unmovable, and doesn't distinguish between allies or foes. This works only on energy that can be degraded : meaning elemental components. Pure Reiatsu will not be degraded, by the virtue that it does not have a component to degrade, in a physical manner on the world. Other such energy will be treated as such. This gas is also very volatile : a light push of Logan's energy can make it explode like a hot sun, reaching to about 20 feet in total of exploding damage area, from the center of the mist.

Liquid Form: A liquid that is throwable at opponents, or storable, provided the right parameters are met. Basically, the liquid is fire, but hotter : thus it can easily harm anything it touches. A similar composition to this is lava, and that is what it looks like, but much more clear. It would take an extreme chill to cool it down. It has similar properties to the sun, including harmful UV rays, should one be in it's presence without protection too long. This material can be cooled partially by contact with mercury and aluminum of all things. This cooled off version is less dangerous and can be used as a light source. This cannot explode other then in bubbles.

Solid Form: A solid made of this material is sharp, cutting, and very hot. However, it is easier to manage as it will not melt anything it touches without a long contact period. Rather, it takes harmful rays to the extreme : it can easily wipe out genetic anomalies or create them by over exposure to direct skin. Of course, this follows the genetic continuity that darker skin by nature is less affected by the power of the burns. However, armor may also prevent it to a degree : think of it as covering one's self from the sun. The solid is harmful to everyone but Logan : however, the levels vary on their will power and their physical power. A more adept person would have a much higher threshold for exposure then one not so physically inclined. This can explode in a total of 10 feet from it's center point. [Other defensive factors are case by case.]

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Bankai Information
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Bankai Appearance: -
Bankai Abilities: -
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Inner Hollow & Mask
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Inner Hollow Description: If anything, Kriemhild looks exactly like Logan : a perfect mirror of the girl, just like Hilda was. Purple of hair and the same gaze, it seems that Kriemhild however prefers Logan's gigai look rather then her actual appearance, since it was then they were twins. However, rather then appearing completely normal, small demonic horns are present on the side of Kriemhild's head. This was also brought over to the gigai in some capability. In fact, it seems that mostly Kriemhild's looks were used in building Logan's gigai.

Inner Hollow Personality: Kriemhild is anything but calm : her appearance may rely on that impression, along with most of her bodily expressions, but Kriemhild is anything but. Loud, rude, busy-body, judgmental, nose-picking : the list doesn't stop there. Kriemhild is a bit of a bitch nature, since she likes to pick apart people : apart from her super-sadist tendencies, and her want to kidnap anything that shines and is adorable and make a monster out of it, she seems a lot like Logan. But just a bit more hay wire. Well a bit isn't enough : let's just say that people notice the difference between Kriemhild and Logan when the switch does happen. The inner hollow is also a tiny bit of a control freak as well.

Hollow Mask Appearance: When Kriemhild comes in control, it doesn't look like much : initially, rabbit ears of hollow bone are made, along with a puffy tail. But it becomes obvious over time, the creeping of the mask down the sides of Logan's face : it is in fact smooth, and wax, completely blank except for two eye holes and the ears. Depending on states or powers, there may be symbols running around in the ears alone : the mask that covers logan face is always pure white, minus her eyes.

Inner Hollow Powers: ~The Field Maiden~
Kriemhild is a dangerous opponent : her powers, unlike Phoenix which centers around energy, centers around a person's environment. Simply put, Kriemhild can temporarily make fields. Each field is different from one another, and serve a different purpose. these field go to a maximum of 20 feet distance from the center.

-- The Magician's Arcana : This is an offensive field : it transforms the area into a bubble of condensed Reiatsu, making any of those under Logan's tier feel uncomfortable. This Reiatsu is made by anything the field covers, including the people inside. It doesn't drain them of Reiatsu : it simply copies it and condenses it into large amounts. This makes bubbles float around the area : should one be touch, it would explode and harm the person that touched it.

-- The High Priestess' Prayer : This is a field used for allies. It shows as a white cover over the area of effect, and is stationary. This field increases recovery times by 70% and prevent any sort of energy like attacks in that area. Lasts 2 posts. The enemy may also benefit : however those that try to use energy attacks will lose all healing properties.

-- The Empress' Throne : This is a support field as well. It shows a golden sheen, and at the center, a throne. This field is also stationary. This field increases the user's weakest attribute on par to their strongest in exchange for their strongest to weaken. [A strength major with no speed can become a Speed major with no strength in this field.] This can effect allies and enemies : each person upon entering, will be asked one question by a ghostly voice. ''Do you wish to make a deal?'' will be the question : yes puts the effect above, no does nothing. This lasts 4 posts.


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Vizard Powers
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Vizard Powers: When accessing her powers as a vizard, Logan seems to shift a bit : her hair gets lighter and she spawns those hollow bunny ears and tail. But she also holds some abilities, a sort of fusion between her zanpakto and Kriemhild's abilities : making a set of abilities that only Logan uses.

~Eyes of the Damned~
Having seen war, pain, suffering, and all sorts of darkness, it seems Logan has made her own link to such things. These eyes represent that : her eyes seem to be something unnatural. They are only able to be used at night, and they make her eyes glow demonically red. This ability lasts for 5 posts, before being on cool down of 6.

Logan's eyes are now able to ''shift'' : that means allowing her a sort of access to the realm of her own inner mind. In other words, it allows her to transpose the dimension within her mind, to reality. Now such abilities are difficult to manage : Logan needs eye contact for this to work. In such a world, Logan can not physically attack her opponent : in fact, she does not harm them directly either. She simply grants them the site of the ''Nightmare Realm''. The Nightmare Realm is simple : it seems to take the user's fears and dark side, and in a way, replicate a inner hollow fight.

However, user's with high mental deduction and will power may be able to fight this off. Another way is to simply defeat your inner darkness, per say. Such an ability isn't too combat oriented : it's more preemptive to combat, or development. A battle version of this ability is much more simple : upon eye contact, Logan is able to form a single clone like entity of the last person that eye contact was made. However, their entire colors are all black, and they do not hold any abilities unless they were witnessed. They are independent of thought and come with the basic instinct of survival, and one order from Logan. From there, the clone will evolve depending on the situation : it may also copy the original if they are still in the premises. However, they are limited to the attributes in tier that Logan : so per example, if she were to copy a 0-1 and she was 2-3, then the clone would be 2-3 and have anything that it cannot have at that rank closed. During this time, Logan cannot use any other abilities apart from basic combat : anything barring the use of energy, since hers becomes fluxed to maintain the entity. She can make a minor clone, up to 3, that only know basic combat, and use no energy what's so ever. However, they are a full tier below Logan's own in strength.

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Resurrección
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Resurrección Appearance: -

Resurrección Abilities: -

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Skill Sheet
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General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner



Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero/Bala/Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


[Vizard] Logan :: Tempest Gale :: Monsuta [Approved 1-3] LoganTA

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Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:18 pm

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  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Comments/Notes: Play fair with that copy stuff; I can see it's mostly for plot, so I'mma let you have it; just don't GM. I think we can trust you won't. In any case, APPROVED!

Tier: 2-1+

Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Advanced




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Mon Feb 27, 2012 5:25 am
I'm bumping the tier to 1-3 due to me reading through and grading, I feel that 2-1+ isn't her tier. If you have a problem, let me know. (Nrd)



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Thu Sep 13, 2012 7:07 am
Oups!

Archived due to an update!
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