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Sugiura Template


Basics


Name: Ali Al-Saachez
True Age: 2272 (Claimed birthday is July 11, which is the day he burned Uruk to the ground)
Gender: Male
Personality: Ali is a self admitted enthusiast of war, conflict, and violence, as stated in this quotation to a reporter: "That little brat...The one who kidnapped him, brainwashed him, trained him in combat tactics, and made him into a guerilla fighter...was me. I'm a warmonger. I enjoy wars so very much. I'm a terrible man who leads his life by following the most primitive human impulses.". He takes pleasure in the misfortune of others (to the point where individuals have called him a monster). Ali wishes only to experience battles and went into fights for the sheer joy of it. Ali doesn't follow a battle "flow" or "honor" and laughs at those who do. It's he who can outsmart his oppnent that wins the battle, not the fool that follows a pattern. As long as he wins and survives, Ali will take any means neccesary, including striking down his bosses or allies.
As stated above, Ali is a warmonger. However, he loves everything about wars, except for their ends. Ali loves to see (and do) villages and cities raided, bruned to the ground, the men being hung and gutted, the women raped and mutilated. Ali doesn't mind using child soldiers, in fact he enjoys using them and bringing them up as they can be the most radical, the most loyal, and the most hate-filled soldiers a man could want. Ali is also very charismatic when he wants to be. His words can swoon women and get the most peaceful men to raise arms. Ali greatly favors adorning all his wears in the color crimson (as it reminds him of the flames of war).
Sugiura Class: Musha


General Appearance

Appearance:
Ali Al-Saachez [Approved, 0-4 TSURUGI] FrontAli Al-Saachez [Approved, 0-4 TSURUGI] Back
Ali Al-Saachez is not there to look pretty. He doesn't have sparkling eyes that ask "will you be mine?" Nor does he spend money on cutting his hair. If he feels it's too long, he takes bowie knife and cuts it himself. He shaves with the same knife, though he lets his goatee grow. His maroon hair is one of his most standing-out features, actually. His muscular body, especially his arms, is a result of his centuries of training as a mercenary and a terrorist. He has a blue tattoo on his left arm with the design of a mixture of wings and flames, yet there is no distinction between the two. When outside of his Tsurugi, Ali wears a faded red sleeveless shirt, whose sleeves were cut off by Ali himself. He wears loose blue pants with a green stripe on his upper left leg. He has military-style boots that are stained with dust and blood. Ali also wears a pair of tan gloves and a white cloth whose edges are ripped to shreds.
Animalistic Traits: Ali does not have any exterior animalistic traits, but it's not like he'd want them. Ali can live off the land just like an animal, hunting his prey and killing it with what he was born with. His strength is comparable to that of an alligator's jaw. He can rip a person's skull in half with little effort. He can seemingly float without using any power, however it's more like his legs moving rapidly as he jumps around, avoiding attacks.
Appearance Age: Mid-thirties
Height: 190 cm
Weight: 81 kg


Natural Abilities


Magic:

>Ali Al-Saachez
>Magic


Other Weapons: Ali carries a large Krag-style Bowie knife, which he uses for everything from cutting up meat, stabbing, and shaving. Ali has welded a steel ring to the handle, allowing for him to use it for fishing, rapelling, and even his casual twirling.

Tsurugi

Name: Arche
Type: Kazuuchi-turned-Shinuchi
Curse: Because of the uniqueness of the Arche, it lacks a curse.
Smith: Michael and Johann Trinity (Soul is that of Nena Trinity)
Standby Form Appearance: Ali Al-Saachez [Approved, 0-4 TSURUGI] Purple_Haro
The Arche's standby form is a small ball which is actually a robot with arms and legs tucked away in containers on its top and bottom. It can fly by flapping its "wings" which are the containers for the arms. Ali normally punches the thing away or kicks it when angry.
Humanoid Form Appearance:
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Personality: Nena is overall: impulsive, egotistical, sadistic, immature, and has sociopathic tendencies to her judgment. Although she believes in changing the world, she also has a sick sense of humor in randomly hurting people based on her whim and personal logic. Due to the way she was created, she has a limited sense of moral and ethics. She's able to kill without reserve nor regret. It is possible that she even has a deep-seated overall contempt, maybe even a possible hatred for all of humankind itself, as evidenced by sadism and sociopathic tendencies. The only thing of any importance to her are her brothers and war. Nena loved her brothers beyond the cause of Celestial Being. In fact, it was their teacher's (Alejandro Corner) idea to build the three Throne units for them to work in tandem. However, her love for war supercedes her love for her brothers.
History: Nena was the youngest of three siblings. Her older brothers (Johann and Michael) were both students under a Kazuuchi designer known as Alejandro Corner. Alejandro recruited Nena as an OS designer because of her natural skill with computers from the time she was able to turn one on. Nena spent whatever free time she had working on a self-sustaining Kazuuchi design that would not require a pilot. The first step was designing a power source, which her brothers helped with and thus the Throne Eins was created. The second was developing a computer system that would map the data of the so-called GN Drive, which was installed within the Throne Zwei. The third step would be a ranged weapon which would allow for the computer to map the brain's activity during combat to its fullest. The final step would be taking that GN Drive and Brain Mapping data to a test frame that would allow for the pilot to be in there in case something went wrong. The Throne Drei was designed with that in mind, though it never left the rough sketch phase. The most pivotal moment in her life was when Ali Al-Saachez killed both Michael (who was working on the Arche's original form, the Throne Zwei). Nena was mortally wounded right after and to save her life, Johann bound her soul to the Throne Zwei's unfinished frame. Johann was murdered soon after.

Tsurugi Unleashed

Calling Phrase: Let who will boast their courage in the field, I find but little safety from my shield. Nature's, not honour's, law we must obey: This made me cast my useless shield away. Begin the massacre, Arche!
Armor Appearance:

Height: 6 meters
Weight: 1150 tonnes
OS Name: GNW-20000
Fixed Armaments: Carrying over the signature weaponry from the Throne Zwei, the Arche has two large armored skirts that protect its side legs and thighs while holding its GN Fangs. While Zwei had its container partially exposed, Arche's container is completely covered in armor plating for added protection for Arche and its Fangs. When launching the Fangs, a small opening can launch the Fangs in immediate pairs in the front and rear of the containers. Arche's GN Fangs are enhanced/improved versions of the original GN Fangs, identical in design but sporting overall higher capabilities. They are faster, highly maneuverable, and have stronger beams than the originals. Like their predecessors, the GN Fangs double as flying beam rifles and beam daggers. The GN fangs are not particularly powerful weapons, only able to inflict light damage against an enemy Tsurugi, however they are quite dangerous en-mass. The true purpose of the fangs is to use their small size, speed, and numbers to overwhelm enemies, leaving them open to the Arche's swords.
In close-quarters combat, Arche is capable of using its two beam sabers concealed inside the toe portion of the Arche's feet, allowing Arche to engage multiple opponents simultaneously. The long slender arms give Arche greater reach against targets in melee combat.
Optional Fixed Armaments: None
Hand-held Armaments: Both the GN Buster Sword and GN Shield are docked on the arms of Arche and the former can quickly slide forward into Arche's grasp. The sword itself secretly doubles as a GN Beam Rifle, which can be deployed by transforming and revealing the gun within the mid-section of the sword; it was a rarely used feature. The GN Shield also possessed the ability to unfold its clavicle antennas and deploy a beam shield.
Shinogi: Die Jagd - Reißzähne des Tieres (The Hunt-Fangs of the Beast)
Shinogi Abilities: This involves all of the weapons of the Arche. The Arche will have all ten of its fangs pass towards his opponent. As they pass by in random directions, the fangs fire a single beam each before they return and impale the opponent. The way the fangs appear as they imaled the enemy resembles fangs biting. The GN Fangs will push the opponent towards Arche. Ali will then turn the GN Buster Sword to its Buster Rifle mode and charge an enourmous amount of sheer energy in the barrel. As the opponent nears Ali, he will stab the rifle into the opponent's chest, firing the rifle at point-blank range.
Shinogi Drawback: Ali will burn the barrel with the immense charging, giving it a once-per-six-posts usage limitation. The weapon also has a twice-per-thread usage else the barrel will need to be replaced. The final issue is that the attack relies on the GN Fangs being able to push the opponent towards Ali.


Jagd Pack

Calling Phrase: All is not lost; the unconquerable will, and study of revenge, immortal hate, and courage never to submit or yield, and what is else not to be overcome. Begin the hunt, Jagd Arche!
Armor Appearance:

Height: 7.85 meters
Weight: 1275 tonnes
OS Name: GNW-20000/J Jagd Arche
Fixed Armaments: Carrying over the signature weaponry from the Throne Zwei, the Arche has two large armored skirts that protect its side legs and thighs while holding its GN Fangs. While Zwei had its container partially exposed, Arche's container is completely covered in armor plating for added protection for Arche and its Fangs. When launching the Fangs, a small opening can launch the Fangs in immediate pairs in the front and rear of the containers. Arche's GN Fangs are enhanced/improved versions of the original GN Fangs, identical in design but sporting overall higher capabilities. They are faster, highly maneuverable, and have stronger beams than the originals. Like their predecessors, the GN Fangs double as flying beam rifles and beam daggers. The GN fangs are not particularly powerful weapons, only able to inflict light damage against an enemy Tsurugi, however they are quite dangerous en-mass. The true purpose of the fangs is to use their small size, speed, and numbers to overwhelm enemies, leaving them open to the Arche's swords.
In close-quarters combat, Arche is capable of using its two beam sabers concealed inside the toe portion of the Arche's feet, allowing Arche to engage multiple opponents simultaneously. The long slender arms give Arche greater reach against targets in melee combat.

Optional Fixed Armaments: The primary weapon of the Jagd Arche is the GN Launcher a high-power, high-precision, long-range beam weapon mounted on the right shoulder. The GN Launcher is capable of destroying a mobile suit with a single shot, as evidenced during the Jagd Arche's first mission where the Jagd Arche destroyed a squad of Kazuuchis in seconds. Its range is far greater than that of conventional weapons. The GN Launcher has a much higher GN-Particle requirement, a requirement that the GN Drive is unable to provide for. To make up for this weakness, the Jagd pack has a built-in GN Drive.
Hand-held Armaments: Both the GN Buster Sword and GN Shield are docked on the arms of Arche and the former can quickly slide forward into Arche's grasp. The sword itself secretly doubles as a GN Beam Rifle, which can be deployed by transforming and revealing the gun within the mid-section of the sword; it was a rarely used feature. The GN Shield also possessed the ability to unfold its clavicle antennas and deploy a beam shield.
Shinogi: Das Ende - Geschoss des Jägers (The End--The Hunter's Bullet)
Shinogi Abilities: The Jagd Arche's Shinogi starts off exactly like the normal Shinogi. It involves all of the weapons of the Arche. The Arche will have all ten of its fangs pass towards his opponent. As they pass by in random directions, the fangs fire a single beam each before they return and impale the opponent. The way the fangs appear as they imaled the enemy resembles fangs biting. The GN Fangs will push the opponent towards Arche. This is when the change occurs. Using the three GN Drives within the Arche and the one in the Jagd pack, Ali will charge a massive blast for the GN Launcher. The blast is capable of wiping out a city if it were spread out enough, but it is concentrated instead. Thus, few Tsurugi can survive being removed from existence by this beam.
Shinogi Drawback: Ali will burn the barrel with the immense charging, giving it a once-per-thread limitation. The final issue is that the attack relies on the GN Fangs being able to push the opponent towards Ali.

Past & Roleplay Sample


Character Background: Ali Al-Saachez's father and mother are unknown to him nor known to others. It is unknown if he has any siblings or any family still alive. In fact, Ali's birthplace (and birthday) is unknown, but he is rumored to have been born somewhere in the Southwest Sugiura Lands. This place is an oddity as it resembles Earth's Middle East. The place where Ali's earliest records of existence is in a small village outside of the capital city of Uruk. This village was known as Krugis. Originally, Krugis was an independent city-state. However, the nearby capital of Azadistan was displeased with Krugis and occasionally launched small attacks at the city. Azadistan was a region that contained Uruk, which is the actual capital of the Southwest.
Ali was against Krugis becoming part of the rest of the Sugiura governmental process. The majority of the people within Krugis were religious and believed in a great deity. Ali decided to take matters in his own hands, claiming to have recieved a message from "God" and that it was to not let Azadistan to annex the city. The people blindly believed him. Ali had the children raised to think that the Azadistani were not believers in "God" and that they claimed their "God" to be false. The children and adults were also trained to fight with spears and swords and ranged weapons. When the Azadistani decided to invade, Ali's trap sprung.
The Azadistani had Kazuuchis leading the first wave. Of course, the arrows nor swords nor spears could pierce the armor of the Kazuuchis. However, Ali had stolen a new model Kazuuchi known as the Enact. As the Azadistani pushed into the city, thinking they had won, Ali single-handedly destroyed the entire Azadistani Kazuuchi force. Ali then began to wonder as he watched the Azadistani forces destroy the rest of Krugis's militia. He wondered what else he could do. Since he destroyed what the Krugese thought were "Iron Giants," what else could he do? Ali then decided he would burn Azadistan to the ground.
Ali heard of a new Kazuuchi project that would put his dream to reality, the Throne Project. Ali raided the laboratory and killed everyone within it. There, he found the incomplete Throne Zwei. Ali had met a young lady not long before and allied himself with her, as long as he was paid. Basically, she hired him. Her scientists added the other two GN Drives from the laboratory to the Zwei's frame while also re-arranging and adding things to it. They built another GN Drive and added it to a heavy-assault pack known as the Jagd Pack. The scientists then decided to build a cheaper version of the third unit, the Throne Drei, with things taken from the Arche.
When the Arche was completed, Ali took the skies. The unit's GN Fangs and GN Buster Rifle wreaked havoc on the capital of Uruk. The entire city was burned to the ground within an hour. Ali's destruction spread throughout Azadistan until the entire region was ablaze. Ali was then put on the Sugiura's most wanted list. However, Ali soon disappeared from every radar as he waited for the moment to do more damage, or rather until he was ordered to. Ali may be hired by that female, but he still accepts odd-jobs...for a price. (I.E. if you wanna hire Ali, PM me the job)


General Skills
Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
Sugiura Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Animal Instincts: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Martial Arts: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Alter Control: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Tsurugi Skills
Regeneration: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Manuverability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Martial Arts: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Synchronization: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner







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