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Welcome to The Platinum Hearts Scroller. Here you can find our most recent Of the Year and Of the Season winners. Happy Roleplaying! --- Member of the Year: Locke --- Character of the Year: Alastair Eisfluch --- New Characters of the Year: Mizu Morikawa and Igendai Gyakusuma --- Social Thread of the Year: A Letter for Hymn --- Combat Thread of the Year: Raise Your Spirits --- Member of the Season: Paradigm --- Characters of the Season: Byakuya Kuchiki and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Applications of the Season: Armina Willsaam and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Fight Thread of the Season: Search and Destroy --- Social Thread of the Season: Damage Assessment --- Event Thread of the Season: Midnight Assault
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Craig Walker [Approved Human 2-1++] Empty Re: Craig Walker [Approved Human 2-1++]

Mon May 27, 2013 6:33 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes: The only thing I would like you to fix and then you are approved is this. The damage from eye beams are strong which can really hurt weaker enemies and 80% hurt stronger ones. It can block with stronger attacks or stronger defenses yet it can't handle against higher Kidō, bankai or grand rey cero.

Bring the percentage down to about 60% for me and your all good, everything else looks fine and balanced to me. I'll approve soon as you do that.
Tier: 2-1++

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Craig Walker [Approved Human 2-1++] Empty Re: Craig Walker [Approved Human 2-1++]

Mon May 27, 2013 7:36 pm
Alright approved congrats
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Craig Walker [Approved Human 2-1++] Empty Re: Craig Walker [Approved Human 2-1++]

Wed Feb 25, 2015 9:56 am
Craig Walker [Approved Human 2-1++] Image354

Welp, I'm moving this character into archives upon request.
You can find the request here in my communication thread:

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t7253p170-thefrost-s-communication-thread#85375


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