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by THEFROST
on Tue May 31, 2016 9:24 pm
 
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The Guild Of Heroes

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Welcome to the guild of heroes.
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❂ Name:Sijel Evela (What Is Your character's Name?)
❂ Application Link:https://www.platinumhearts.net/t15502-sijel-evela-approved-3-5 (Please post at least a WIP before applying.)
❂ Title: Nightmare Monarch (Any fancy hero title?)
❂ Rank: Front line defense
❂ Reason: Sijel wants nothing more to be accepted and around people like him in some way. (Why are you applying this character for the guild of heroes?)


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❂ Name: Sor'vn
❂ Application Link: King of Storms
❂ Title: King of Storms
❂ Rank: #1 Tactician
❂ Reason: Sor'vn believes that he can repair the bonds he lost with his Hoshidan and Nohrian brethren by working with the Guild of Heroes as the Ultimate, and the best tactician. He will work as hard as he can to be the best, and to recover what he has lost.
by Henrex
on Tue May 31, 2016 7:36 pm
 
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The Guild Of Heroes

Guild Of Heroes Template

❂ Name: Sor'vn
❂ Application Link: King of Storms
❂ Title: King of Storms
❂ Rank: #1 Tactician
❂ Reason: Sor'vn believes that he can repair the bonds he lost with his Hoshidan and Nohrian brethren by working with the Guild of Heroes as the Ultimate, and the best tactician. He will work as hard as he can to be the best, and to recover what he has lost.
by Nix Shraik
on Mon Apr 25, 2016 10:03 am
 
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Shraiks MINIBURST tracker #15



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by Cookies
on Thu Apr 07, 2016 11:39 am
 
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Hate & Memories [OPEN]




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How rude. Not only his words was interrupted before he could finish his sentence, but he attacked with 'an intent to kill'? Well, scare tactics do not work against someone like Hisao as long as it is within his calculations. Instead, he grinned back with joy when Henrex leaped towards him and attempted to punch him. Since his Nasods is just right behind him, it didn't take long to command one of them to move right towards his chest and take a punch from his fist, leaving Hisao himself harmless from his little antics of proving himself. From this moment, he took this as a declaration to fight instead of backing off. This was all he needed to know, since he has already successfully lured Henrex in with those words alone.

The sight of him was pitiful, showing nothing but pointless flood of emotions towards Hisao. In response, he laughed uncontrollably from this sort of reaction and he thought that this young man was boring from the beginning. Man, why didn't he discover such a way to exploit him so soon!?

"Kuahahahahaha!! I see, i see! Now you're getting more and more interesting, weakling! I guess i'll bring you down to hell together with this district then!"

His switch was flicked. Insanity exploded right out of Hisao's body within an instant. It has been forever since he felt like this! Kuahaha! Since he wants to back up his claim so much, then he'll let him do so! With a flip of a switch of the Dynamo behind his ear and manipulating all six of the Nasods behind him, Hisao intends to place them on a circulations right in front of him, and forcing it to gather electromagnetic energy right in the center of the circular formation. Since he didn't intend to output a lot of power, the process didn't take a second to fully charge the energy before him and then? Fire into several beam of electricity towards Henrex, each beam alone while is not fired into one massive blast is considerably weak, it would still have enough power to puncture a reinforced body of an average shinigami.

That wasn't enough though. After his attempt to damage Henrex with those beams, he would quickly regather the Nasods around him for protection. Reaching out both his index and middle finger towards Henrex, he would only utter out a single words and that is, Hadō. Without giving it a name or a number, his fingers would suddenly release a massive thrust of kinetic energy with enough force that would rival to that of a speeding train, in exchange for dispelling considerable amount of spiritual energy from his fingers. If you're confused? This Hadō is Hisao's version of the Hadō #1, Sho. By reverse-engineering it using his knowledge, he would be able to enhance that kido into his own by changing its method in using it.

If any attacks came from Henrex during the process, these Nasods would automatically defend Hisao by firing a concentrated beam of electromagnetic energy, and it would have the power of a Cero from a Menos just from a single beam. Avoiding those beams would be a difficult task too, since they are within a close proximity with Hisao, he would be able to manipulate the beams via electromagnetism with just a wave of his finger and redirect them to his targets like a homing missile. Of course, his range is quite limited if the distance is beyond 500 meters.

Regardless whether if he failed his attempts or not, his laughter would became more insane, as if his sanity just broke like a piece of glass. Fueled together by the bitter past memories he had with the district, this would further drive him into destruction around him. He doesn't expect anyone to like him nor does he need allies, as long as he can achieve what he wants, casualties are not of his concern. That is Hisao's nature, and no one can change it.

"Kuahaha! Is this all you can do, weakling!? I am just getting started!!!"





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by Sage
on Sat Feb 13, 2016 12:34 pm
 
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Chao Yuexian [WIP]

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Sample #1
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Chao Yuexian's slumber, like any other ancient being, never really consisted of actual sleep. Generally, practicioners like her entered a meditative state for the sake of cultivation during recuperation. The physical body naturally regained its strength, otherwise the whole merge of cultivation and rest would be redundant altogether; however, more importantly, the mind not only regained strength, but grew in strength. Or, in the sense of cultivators, the soul grew strength. This was all philosophy on power, so the actual substance of this belief was subjective and therefore irrelevant to anyone besides cultivators--at most, it was a religious practice.

The matter of fact was still that sleep, to the woman, wasn't truly "sleep". A strand of consciousness as a basic practice was to be set aside, aware of the surroundings during meditation for self-preservation. Yuexian’s ancient era was, after all, "rowdy", to say the least. As a result of this "set aside awareness", when the doors of the black castle Chao Yue resided in shifted, she quickly reacted. Well, she'd like to have reacted instantly, but the accumulated dust on her body and around the room nearly entered her mouth from the jerking of her facial muscles.

Her expression of astonishment quickly shifted to disgust before her lips tightly shut. Shortly after, the entirety of Yuexian's body shook violently, all the dust around her vibrating away in an ellipse. With that, the woman quickly rose to greet the new master of the castle. Some many years ago, not that she could accurately recall, the ancient Yue came across a well known king, renown for... something. This event was far enough in the past for Chao Yue to forget. In the end, as an attractive wanderer with no official identification during the time period, both Yue and the king held interest in each other; the king, moreso some superficial affection, and Chao Yuexian, a fascination with the land he occupied.

Governments changed nonstop throughout many centuries and millennium on any number of planes; in fact, the occupying tyrants and different dynasties changed so often, it formed a blur to Chao Yuexian's recollection. So, for the conspicuous black castle the renown king lived in to show features of a time nearing Chao Yue's own immemorial generation, naturally the curiosity within her bloomed. In the end, fulfilling both the king's desire to have this woman nearby, and the woman's own desire to explore the origins of the mysterious castle that allowed entry only to "chosen ones" as it turned out, this King included, Yuexian founded residence in the castle.

Her self-isolation deep within a hidden room of the castle eventually let those nearby forget her visage, and after the King's passing, all beings within were quickly evicted. For an indeterminate amount of time afterwards, the Black Castle was quiet. Chao Yue, taking notice to her sudden isolation, paid little heed and returned to cultivating her lost power. Thus, when the doors of the castle reopened, the woman found it suitable to greet the new "King".

With her usual grace and trained etiquette, Yuexian greeted the King briefly, attempted to explain a few things concerning the origins of the castle as far as she knew--an attempt, considering she had no idea whether her words were heeded, not that she cared--and went back to cultivating. Her level of interest with the new King himself wasn't all too depth'd; after all, even with the old king, the castle itself is what enticed her. For the time being. Soon after, his sheer existence within the castle brought many, and it wasn't often that someone held such a level of charisma. From here, Chao Yuexian's interest in the man himself bloomed.

Exiting the hidden room, Yuexian came to greet the man once more. Whether or not he was aware of her staying in his castle without permission--again, it was a negligible detail. If anything, had he desired her leave, she would've fled without a fight, since even if she did adamantly desire residence in the castle, with ease and insight into the soul Chao Yue realised she wasn't his match. Whatever the outcome, the matter of fact was Yuexian's raise in activity.

For quite some time, she roamed the castle, often engaging in conversation with the new guards and even the king, prying into what exactly made him worthy of the castle's acceptance, and where his particular charisma originated. Whether from the man himself, his actions, or the whispers of the guards and occasional visitor, to some extent Chao Yuexian understood his aspirations. And, with increasing interest in these goals and the man, the Ancient offered her services. Time was far too boring purely spent cultivating, after all. Whether or not her personal motivations coincided with his was a different matter altogether, as well as whether she personally agreed with his view on the world, and the actions he would--and did--take to enact and support these aims.

Yet, since her offered services, few matters of excitement came up. Her decision to join his personal group...what was the name?... Yuexian's decision to join was mainly fueled by the assumption that events of excitement and energy would come and go. As one could guess, it was a major disappointment to discover the languid atmosphere of the castle. So, when another being of immense presence arrived, as if it were natural, Chao Yue's interests were once more sparked.

Exiting her room, Chao Yue approached the Throne Room to greet the King once more, taking time in her walk to gaze upon the castle's intricacies and admire it. After all, the Ancient was one to appreciate scenery and mundane novelties. Hopefully, this new presence would share similar sentiments. Even with so many people in the castle, there was little livelihood, and by extension a sense of loneliness for Chao Yue to covet. Though, she appreciated even that much.

On her way, there was no distractions, and out of both familiarity and her own level of strength, there was no one to stop her. The aura of nobility and seniority she exuded did well to discourage anyone approaching her, though it was mainly them knowing the strength in her presence. The aura from Chao Yuexian shouldn't create too large of an impact anyways, so much as her elegant gait. Arriving at the Throne Room, the woman respectfully pushed open the rear door and approached the throne from behind. Without moving to stand before the king, regardless of his actual recognition of the act Chao Yue bent in a curtsy appropriate for the current era's noble etiquette.

"Chao Yuexian greets this King."

After taking the formalities the Ancient placed importance on, both out of personal belief, habit, and legitimate respect for him, Chao Yue walked forward unreservedly to stand at his side. Bending forward in an inquisitive posture, the woman brought her face closer to the man and tilted her head. For a moment, her eyes rested on the beverage in his hand, quickly returning gaze to the man. Chao Yue's preferences in drinks, evidently, was not shared with the king. Her physical preferences, however--this King seemed suitable. Not that she would act upon the thought, for a number of reasons.

"Something of interest is happening, I presume? Care to speak about it?"

Regardless of his reply, the swinging open of the main doors to the castle told the woman more than enough. Straightening her back and looking forward, Yuexian analysed those who entered, once more out of habit and personal interest. Though, moreso than the young appearance that seemed of minor attraction--on a number of levels--his speech caught her ear. With some arrogance and seniority, though the rhythm he spoke with was grating, Yuexian understood a few things. Firstly, this boy was undoubtedly the presence of interest that drew Chao Yue from her room. Second, his attitude wasn't pleasurable. Nothing at the level of irritation, as the years have tempered the Ancient's sense of tolerance, but neither appreciable. To some extent, Chao Yue understood that this may just be a personal quip as a result of her upbringing and beliefs on presentation, as is the origin of many of her issues. Either way, this appearance seemed to be the first step on the path of excitement that the King was supposed to bring her.

After the boy finished speaking, Chao Yue turned her face to the king atop his throne, quietly awaiting a reply. Only if found necessary and appropriate, Chao Yue would interject. More or less, if it were her "turn to speak". Otherwise, she was just here to observe, and if anything, comment about the event afterwards. To that extent, the Ancient simply stood there, by the throne, and smiled politely.


Sample #2
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    "Hate is not the opposite of love; apathy is." - Elie Wiesel


"Disdain is the easiest emotion to overturn into affection."


The irony in being strong is the vulnerability of carelessness. Any number of immortals, Dao Cultivators especially, will without exception be subject to the effects of arrogance in strength, whether they're aware or cautious as ever or not. It's sort of an eventuality, as some even consider it a rite of passage alongside ascending into true godhood on the scales of power. As a matter of course, Chao Yuexian had experienced this 'rite'. Somewhere along the lines of her earlier ascension in strength, long before she was regarded as having reached the "pinnacle".

More than anything, stepping on a grievously poisonous bug was the most embarrassing of ways to go for an “Ancient”. A patron of death in one of the many religions on countless planes once perished through similar circumstances, despite being regarded as one of the most powerful amongst the celestial ranks. As one could guess, Chao Yuexian stepped on a bug. During her attempts to increase power through external means, such as harvesting the remains of exceptionally powerful creatures to develop tools to accentuate her abilities, the Ancient went barefoot into an infamous forest, known to claim the lives of countless warriors who wanted to test their mettle.

And now? Here she was, serving a young boy who looked some two or three years younger than herself. Of course, as an immortal existence, their true ages were far further apart. Reason being, his late mentor was a renown medicinal guru, and he--the only disciple and successor to all the "miracle doctor's" methods--was the one person she knew in immediate vicinity that could cure the particular poison held within the bug. Yuexian was, at this time, a being that hungered for power by developing her body and abilities. The ranks of medical knowledge wasn't too desired or relevant to her studies; considering the affluent background she came from, Chao Yue was educated on the subject, but after so many years, the majority had been lost.

Ever since, she struck a deal with the young boy to watch and protect him from any adversaries for three months. Her absolute strength was the main factor in being subject to such a small amount of servitude despite the literal life-saving performance he offered. Despite that, her impatience increased further, for two reasons: One, the attitude the boy carried. As her life-saver, she did owe him much, but the confidence and arrogance in his tone and way of carrying himself was devoid of all traditional forms of etiquette and manners taught in the halls of nobility. Even worse, the way he looked at her was the same as those immoral sons of dukes and emperors that desired Chao Yue. Though it's a subjective matter, the Ancient could be considered desirable on an aesthetic level.

The second reason was even more compelling. The very forest she now dreaded as a result of her being poisoned, was the same forest the boy made way towards. The boy was incredibly secretive, not that Yuexian was particularly interested in anything but paying her dues. The location was unsettling nevertheless.

"Mmm, we're going to go way deep into the forest, alright?"

His voice wasn't unpleasant at all, and even carried a soft tone, though to Chao Yue it only sounded like carelessness despite the danger in the surroundings. In response to his directions, the woman's face furrowed in reluctance. With clear displeasure in her voice, Yue replied,

"Deeper? I'm guessing you're well aware, but the deeper we go, the stronger the creatures."

"And that's why you're here, right?"

His amused laughter struck a few of Chao Yue's nerves, not that she acted on that feeling. The blatant dependency he put on her was by no means enjoyed. While he may have found interest in Yuexian, whether it be her whole being or just her appearance, at this point the Ancient looked at him with even a bit of disdain. As with most Ancients, considering their culture's value on power, Chao Yuexian found little attraction to anybody weaker than herself--which in and of itself was an incredibly high standard, though reasonable to her degree.

Around two hours later, the pair finally found themselves nearing the centre of the forest. Of course, any creatures they encountered along the way was repelled by Yuexian considering her strength. The whole way through, the boy held a smile even in the face of certain death; generally, Yue admired the brave, but in this situation what was seen was not courage, but an incompetent lack of fear.

The further they went, the more apparent a hidden mountain within the forest became. Even with Yuexian's ability to fly as per her cultivated strength, from an aerial perspective there was no mountain in the forest; nevertheless, the mysteries of the earth were wider than the imagination could hold. At most, the woman wrote it off as a magically hidden feature of nature. At first.

The anxiousness on the boy's face alluded to a different truth. His eyes were always fixated on the peak of the mountain, and the excitement washed away his powerless and innocent smile of carelessness; instead, the steely face of determination and desire revealed itself. The wide change in his demeanor was as unsettling as the infamous forest itself, as per Yuexian's perspective. That one gap in appearance was enough to spark the woman's curiosity.

"Boy... what's so interesting about that mountain?"

Yuexian expected some sort of reply to deviate her focus on his mountain-affixation, or anything to leave the question unanswered; surprisingly, the level of excitement he held was enough to put down the guard on his secrecy this time around.

"It's not the mountain that's interesting--it's what resides in it! A Dragon God!"

Just as Chao Yue was about to shout in fear and immediately demand to go back to the nearby town the boy came from, two harmonising roars resounded throughout the entirety of the forest. It echo'd back and forth with such force, the trees near and far all shook violently while the Earth shook, all dancing to the same frequency.

"!!! Boy, this is what you came for!? A quick death?! Come on, we need to go! This is not time to blank ou--"

While Chao Yue was chiding him whilst motioning to run away, the boy's steps only carried him forward, towards the mountain. There was a voice within her saying 'Just leave him and go! Your life is priority!' In opposition, another voice said 'come on, just forcefully grab the boy and go! Two lives is easier on the heart to save than one!' After all, Yuexian owed him her servitude, and the moral conscience within her was infrequently silenced.

In the end with little internal struggle, the woman bolstered towards the boy with her hand grabbing his arm. Contrary to her intentions, Chao Yuexian's body froze. Two unfathomable presences pressed down on her from above, and as her gaze rose to the sky, two serpentine creatures with long snouted whiskers, looking beneath them with malice in their eyes.

"F...Flood Dragons!"

On offshoot descendent of the true dragon race with Eastern appearances, Flood Dragons represented the closest existence to this plane’s civilisations to an actual dragon. Naturally, their power was far below a true dragon from any number of planes, but inherently far above mortal beings. Even the renown “Běishén” had difficulty combating these creatures, and yet here they were! Two at that!

"Boy!! Now is the time to ru--!!!"

Once more contrary to her intentions, the boy wriggled loose from her grip, and with speed unprecedented compared to his powerless existence, he shot off towards the mountain at speeds higher than what mere mortals could perform. Unfortunately, the distance crossed in a second was incredibly inferior to Chao Yuexian's speed, let alone the two flood dragons whose durable bodies were by default more than enough to surpass Yuexian's abilities.

"Mortal, you shall not intrude on these lands!!"

One of the celestial beasts roared in the language of the ancients, demanding the child to stop. Additionally, both creatures shot forth in chase. With increasing reluctance and a scowl, Chao Yuexian felt no other choice but to go after him as well.

Throughout the sky over the trees and land below, explosions rung unceasingly. From her observations, Yuexian felt that both Flood Dragons were on par with her in strength; therefore, by no means would she be capable of resisting their full-frontal offensive in a mad desire to chase after and stop the boy.

Of course, the sound of reason and instinct for survival continuously resounded in her mind. 'Go, leave the child behind! He's not even that great of a person to begin with--he brought this calamity on us, so what due grievances are we to suffer with his death!' And yet, Yuexian fought steadfast in her position to protect him. Though true, she didn't particularly like the boy, the fact that he saved her was irrefutable, and what worth is she if her word could not be kept? Survival was important, but what determined proper living was the quality of life. The devil within her heart would only continue to expand and overwhelm her mentality should she ever falter.

That was simply who she was. A stubborn girl, willing to lay down her life if only to live true to herself. Chao Yuexian may not be so righteous as to always uphold justice; there was selfishness in her heart that put worth on things and people. And today, it was exactly that selfishness to be the person she could, and would be. Even at the cost of her life.

"AGHH, Screw it! Today, Flood Dragons, it will be two who fall, or three! No less!"

The battle progressed nowhere, and her stalling only offered to keep the dragons a constant distance away from the boy. Eventually, she would undoubtedly fall, and in turn, him. Having never been a fan of useless actions and wasted death, the only acceptable alternative to Yue was their fall. Of course, that was an improbable situation, unless her firepower rose a notch. To do that? Beyond simply the magical force of psions, Yuexian would be pressed to add something from the depths of her soul--enough to overcome the opponents worth two of her. That amount of energy drawn from her origin may as well be the equivalent of giving up all her cultivated power--to return to mortality, with probably few methods available to reverse what was lost.

Eh... I've always complained about how life was too long anyways.. As long as I don't leave behind regrets, right?

Assuming this to be her final moment, Chao Yuexian distanced herself from the two flood dragons and closed her eyes, reaching into the depths of her soul to draw out maximum power. With a rough shout, immeasurable power began emanating from the Ancient's body--at the very least, enough to challenge both her opponents' might. In turn, their confidence in a true dragon's descendents conveyed itself. With a powerful charge, the three collided.

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The darkness and silence receded. Yuexian's eyes opened with a glossy look. Her sight blurred, and only offered to reveal indiscernible shapes and movements. Surely, death awaited her at the corner, and against all odds, the feeling of life flowed through her. Had it not been for the inability to move anything but her face, and the lack of any power within her soul, Chao Yue would've assumed herself dead.

Mulling over the state of her existence, the blurred shapes became clearer. The sight before her? Maybe the prospect of death served better. What she saw...

A Dragon God.

"You've heard correctly, boy... Those who pass my trials, I pass unto them my powers. But, the more people who enter my trials simultaneously, the higher the difficulty."

"That's fine. Then, can I take it now?"

"If you so wish, though the burden on you will be twofold."

Chao Yue only exhaled when the visage of the Dragon God's head receded into the shadows. Afterwards, the boy who spoke with the grand beast turned and bent down. He only rose with Yuexian carried in his arms. The unexpected action instantly threw the already confused woman into a fit. Had it not been for her inability to move, she likely would've kicked and flailed around in his grasp.

"!!! Boy, what are you doing! Rather, w-what is going on here!?"

"Mmm, your confusion isn't unwarranted.. Just that, it's a long story.."

"Just as it looks, I have all the time in the world now! So feel free to explain! For what I've done for you, you owe me that much at least!"

In response to her displeased face, the boy could only offer a wry smile. Had she not been held in her arms, the boy might've even raised his arm to scratch the back of his head, cliche as ever.

"I guess, to make a long story short, from the words of my late master's patients, I heard of a dragon who lives in a hidden mountain within this forest. If you overcome the tribulations he gives, the dragon will offer you a portion of his power."

..... W-wha?? His desire to charge into a forest that held flood dragons of all things--that was crazy enough. But for the boy to desire a path to power through a Dragon God? Sure, tales of this happening were by no means nonexistent. But nonexistent did not mean prevalent. Above all else, his actions happened to drag Chao Yue into things as well! There were no regrets in her actions, though undoubtedly she would bite her lip in dissatisfaction for having lost her power, and, beyond that, unexpectedly her mobility as well. Just, to give all that for what sounded like a distant dream? Of course she felt frustrated!

"Ahh, fine!! Leave me be, then; I heard the last bit. Just leave me here for now, and take me back to the city after you've finished the trials."

The boy showed only an astonished face. And after that, a furrowed brow that hinted irritation.

"The dragon said the trials may last anywhere between 6 months to several years."

Silence. For a few moments, neither of them said a thing. Only after quite a while, Chao Yuexian broke the silence with a sigh.

"Let it be so, then; I've risked my life for you, as you saved mine from prior. With this, my debts are paid. Leave me here nonethele-"

"NO!"

The boy's sudden shout surprised Chao Yue, especially as his loud voice reverberated throughout the cavern walls in an echo.

"It'd be a waste for such beauty to simply rot away in a cave so devoid."

Yuexian only offered a blank stare towards the young boy, whose face wore a serious and stern expression. For a moment. Quickly after, the Ancient broke out into laughter, giggling away the serious atmosphere.

"Hahaha, that's quite a statement, boy! But it's not so easy to court a lady, you know!"

The flowery words he spoke didn't quite touch a heart-string in her, but to any other gal in this situation, Chao Yue had doubts that his charm wouldn't succeed. To the Ancient, it was moreso seen as an adorable attempt of an earnest young man--an amusing assertion, if anything.

"Fine, fine--take me away, boy. Either way, I've resigned myself to death already. I can't move anyways, so the only difficult to be had is for you."

"Mmm.. Thanks, for cooperating. Though, I'd have to ask that you not give up so easily. The words from before already dealt a big enough blow to my confidence."

With a wry smile, the boy set forth into the darkness that held the dragon, Chao Yuexian still in his arms. Mere minutes later, that wry smile transformed into something far darker.

END OF THE MAGUS APPLICATION

by Gamedragon
on Sat Jan 30, 2016 4:37 pm
 
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Topic: Zen (Update) [1-1-]
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Zen (Update) [1-1-]

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [0]
  • History is of appropriate length [0]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [0]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [0]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


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Comments/Notes:
Viz wrote:I am going to make a case here. Zen had been approved in 2010 with an application much worse than this and I have been using him without issue, or update, since then. It wasnt until a few days ago that I noticed he needed a retooling. For all this time his history as a former captain has never been questioned as it has never had an essential role in the plot and has just been powerwise. I had even talked to Frost and he said I did not have to worry about bankai and shikai because in his older version he had them unlocked already.
this is his old app: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t15-zen-approved-1-2
There is no way someone can tell me that this updated version is somehow worse than the one I wrote well over 6 years ago.


Let me give my response that should be heavily noted for the rest of this check. A character is not grandfathered entirely. Zen is grandfathered, his threads are grandfathered, though specifics in the application are not grandfathered due to the fact that since this is the year 2016, we have newer, updated standards for characters of a higher tier. I plan on checking this application as if it's a current day 1-2, so I expect it's writing and such to be of an equal standing.

Secondly, let me ask this. How am I supposed to know that this is an update if you havn't put -any- mention in the profile that this is an update? Not a link, or even putting in the title that this is an update? People come and go from the site, and if you look at the time I joined, I don't even know most of the characters here. This is the second time this has happened, though the other person was much more understanding. As a rule, I'd like it if you were to remember to put in the title if you're making an update, since at the start, I looked at this as a new profile with no previous ties to the site.

Third, I'd like to see quotes from Frost himself rather than simple mentions, because even he has said that if he is going to be mentioned, it should be in a quote for accuracy and legitimacy. Yes, general things like releases will remain the same, and tier will be around the same range, but that doesn't mean that all of it can not be changed, altered, or modified to meet new standards. I am generally going to be asking for a lot more work to be put into this profile for it to retain it's 1-2 status since many people of that tier have put in a much larger amount of work application wise.

Viz wrote:There is no way someone can tell me that this updated version is somehow worse than the one I wrote well over 6 years ago.


In terms of application standards, yes, it is worse. Back then, an application of that standing would have been accepted, but now? It's certainly quite the opposite.

Now to the -actual- check.

For the history, the first thing I'm going to mention now that I know that this is an update is that it should be longer and more detailed. With the updating of characters comes the updating of their history, lore, powers, and everything in order to meet the standards that are present today. I don't mind if a lot of his history involves threads that he's been in since creation, and too current day, since it gives him more depth as a character on his application and lets people know more of what he did other than just somehow getting shikai from the academy then go on to get bankai and beat up powerful hollows. Add in what he did that wasn't strictly all of this, add in what he did as a member of Squad 13, add in other adventures, character development. ADD IN THE FEELS to the character to remind people that this was someone that's been active for years and years.

And now the second part of the history. Remove all mentions of Aizen or any other -canon- bleach character you may want to put in. This is something that I will not debate, this is something that I am flat out denying. There is no mention of any canon characters in his original history, so there should be none in his current history.

Extension of this profile is going to be needed in order to reach near current standards, such as lengthening history, adding more into powers, adding more to personality, making his shikai and bankai mean so much more than a simple baton that likes music. This isn't me singling you out, this is something that everyone who had to unarchive recently must go through to meet today's standards. I am giving you a break in that I don't expect you to go as fully hard as needed, since this was approved before.

Next up is his abilities and powers.

Viz wrote:Sound Manipulation: Zen has the ability to create sounds around him and fights with sound. When attacking he creates semi-visible waves of sound that appear as shimmering air, due to the distortion the changing pressure causes. The sounds he creates change the form of the attacks, thus making them predictable. Sounds such as woodwinds create a sphere that expands around him, brass creates a cone that expands in front of him, and strings make a straight line.


I want more description on this, saying so much more about what can be -done- with this manipulation. How do these attacks work? How much damage do they cause? How much of a drain is it to perform these feats? Tell me more about it other than just the looks and that he can do it.

Viz wrote:Iluminacion: This ability spreads out 500 feet around Zen. He can create touchable, semi-solid illusions. They are mostly used for Zen’s performances but it can be used in battle to disorient opponents. An example would be him creating a wall, that feels like a wall, but when you apply any sort of extra pressure one would go through it.


Is there strain to this ability? How much energy does it cost to keep up a single illusion, or multiple? The ability seems fine with the fact that these illusions can still go through them, but what's not fine is if this is all free with no limitations and a pretty fairly sized radius.

Viz wrote:Bianca: Condenses reiatsu in front of Zen to create a white shield infront of him that absorbs the next attack so that it deals only half of its damage. If Zen is much stronger than his opponent it can negate the attack.


I want a cool-down on this and a listed strain to it. A shield that automatically reduces an attack by half damage can be amazing against higher leveled people, and even having the possibility to negate attacks is pretty big. Right now, it's written so that he can use it whenever with no costs, please change that.

Viz wrote:Bemol: Aurora collects ambient reiatsu from around the opponent reducing the effectiveness of Kidō of an individual for 2 posts.


So, Aurora begins to take the reiatsu from around the opponent, an energy source that's typically internal, to reduce the effectiveness of Kido for a full two posts? I'd like a bit more detail, and explanations. How much is the Kido reduced? Is there limits on if the person has a higher Kido skill than Zen? What if they're equal, or lower? Please give a bit more description for abilities that just go-off with no real defense against them.

Viz wrote:Sharp: Zen releases reiatsu from his body to increase others, or his own, Kido for 2 posts.


So he just releases this with no drain to his own being? Typically releasing reiatsu takes an amount of energy away, I'd like it to be said how much is taken away along with a limit on how many others can be increased. Is it simply one other person, or is it a group? Lastly, how much is their Kido enhanced? Is it a 1.5x increase? 200%? More description is needed.

Viz wrote:Staccato: Zen forms small orbs of reiatsu and sound at the tip of his baton and fires them in rapid succession.


How rapid is this firing? How many shots per second or minutes? Also, how powerful is each individual shot, and how long does it take for him to maintain this ability for a small amount of time? How about longer?

Basically, from this point on, I'm just going to say if any ability isn't a natural ability, that it should have a listed drain of some type, also stating how great the drain is depending on the ability.

Viz wrote:Timbre: This gives Zen an acute sense of hearing, which allows him to be able to hear things from miles away, if he focuses on it. With even greater focus he could identify the resonance of objects, allow him to create blasts of sound that counter that vibration, shattering the objects.


So let's say someone has a sword made from a 0-2 crafter, and Zen somehow hears its resonance... He has the ability to lol-shatter it? No, I'd rather if this ability's second part was worded differently to include the fact that some weapons alone may be stronger than Zen.

Viz wrote:Arpeggio: It allows Zen to use more than one Kido at the same time often causing them to combine into a kido that has the properties of the two or three kido used at the time. The incantation of the kido is spliced together to make a new incantation. Splicing kidos in this way require twice, or three times as long for it to be cast, leaving him open while he casts it. This also averages their level. If he wanted to combine #1 with #50, the resulting kido would be equal in strength to #25.
When combining them he cannot combine kido outside of their own class, he cannot combine Hadō with bakudo, though he can combine bakudo with healing kido if they have an area effect. He can attempt to combine kido that oppose each other, such as fire and water, but this has a high chance of failure. If he is able to combine them the kido created creates something new, such as mixing fire and water kido to make steam kido.
Doing this takes concentration, the more kido he tries to combine, the more focus he has to have. He has been able to combine as much as 4 kido at one time. Combining Hadō is more complicated due to their more unpredictable nature. Bakudo are easier to combine as they are very structured and orderly.


I shouldn't need to mention that for every extra kido he tries to mix, it has a formula sorta like
2 kido = 2x drain
3 kido = 3x drain
4 kido = 4x drain
with all of this having a base extra drain due to how the ability works, correct?

Viz wrote:Fermata: Using a combination of reiatsu and sound Zen creates a loud blast around him. Most projectiles that are in within 5 feet of Zen stop moving for 1 post. This effect follows him. If he moves from the position the projectiles will move once more, and any projectile he tries to send out are also stopped, meaning he cannot use projectile attacks for one post.


Add a limitation too this, such as the skill that this is based off of needs to be equal or higher than the projectiles launched by the target. This should be bypassed since some projectiles or weapons are made to be stronger than whatever field he may try to put out.

Viz wrote:Sound Cannon: If the opponent is weaker than Zen, Tier wise, Zen can capture non-physical attacks and fire them back. He does this by creating a circular wall of reiatsu and compressed air in front of him. This stops the attack and then Zen releases it forward. He can do this to absorb several attacks, but it has some drawbacks. While he does this he becomes immobile while sustaining it. If he absorbs too many attacks, this ability fails and all the absorbed attacks are released in front of him all at once.


How much weaker tier wise? And how many attacks must be absorbed? What if they're high in terms of energy when compared to normal blows? What if they're a tier weaker, but their skills are higher?

Viz wrote:
Diminuendo: Works in a similar way to Crescendo. This time he uses his spirit pressure to degrade kido that are targeting him. It travels in a cone shaped wave that reached out to 50 feet. Due to this shift in pressure, while this ability is used his back is exposed to attacks as his defenses are focused on his front. Strength of those attacks is reduced by 1/2.


Does this work with -all- attacks sent towards him? Even those that are leagues above him in terms of power, his energy is able to reduce it by half? Even if the attack is higher in terms of skills and tier?

Viz wrote:Marcato: V shaped projectiles composed of reiatsu and sound fly out and travel at a high speed and on contact creates 10 foot wide explosions.


How strong are the explosions, and just how -fast- do they travel?

Viz wrote:Fortissimo: If Zen makes an attacks and yells fortissimo the effectiveness of the attack raises by 2x. This makes him give out a burst of energy, leaving him tired for 1 post after using this ability.


This ability is actually fine, but I'd like to now how big the burst of energy is. Does it take, let's say a fifth of his entire energy stores? The single post cooldown is acceptable as well, but knowing just how much the burst of energy is would be helpful. Actually, I'd like it if it would be double the amount of energy of the normal version plus an extra 50% since this is an instant cast.

Now I hope I don't need to repeat this, but most of these abilities should state that they drain some energy if applicable, and how much. A big explosion from slow moving bars shouldn't take the same amount of energy as just making a fake wall a few feet away.

There is my current check, so please do remember that characters need to be updated and retooled for a reason, to meet current day standards since this site and most older members that have been around for a long while have all improved.
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Name: Zen, formerly Roy Delacroix
Titles: Master (By Pierre), Snow (By elderly members of Rukongai), Exceptional (By some in the Gotei), Secret Captain
Gender: Male
Appearance Age: 25
Age: Around 650
Affiliation/Rank: Gotei 13

Appearance Description:
Zen stands at 6’0”. He has silver hair that reaches down to his shoulders. He has a fairly lithe build that tends to disguise his true physical strength. Even while in the Seretei he tends to wear a simple white, long sleeved, button down shirt, with semi-formal black pants, and black dress shoes. He often keeps his Zanpakutō in his right pocket for quick access. He has piercing blue eyes and a fairly calm, slightly soft voice. When he is giving orders his voice deepens and becomes commanding. When he gets angry, his eyes iris’ turn from blue, to deep red.

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Personality: Zen is one of the calmest people you will find. Very few things, if anything no one has been successful yet, cause him to lose his cool. There is a rumor that when he loses his cool he might become as violent and unpredictable as a Kenpachi.

He enjoys keeping order and following the law to the best of his ability. He seeks to bring arguments to a quick and calm resolution, but he is willing to use force to restore order, starting with non-lethal, and using lethal force only when necessary, something his Zanpakutō allows him to do effectively.

He has enjoyed music since before his death. Spending so much time on Earth since the 1900’s his enjoyment of music has only increased. He can often be found in his music store selling instruments, old music formats, teaching classes, and sometimes preforming concerts for charities.

While he enjoys things to be orderly and lawful, he also enjoys seeing chaos ensue in certain situations. He knows that it is a part of nature, and only steps in to calm the satiation when it is getting out of hand.

Zen has another side to him, one that few see and live to tell the tale. Beneath the calm, relaxed façade hides a monster. While few things get under his skin, those that do, drive him mad. The switch on a much more sadistic side, a more authoritarian side. When he is in this state, though he is not in a blind rage, his attacks are much more forceful, his words commanding, he will do whatever it takes to have his target follow orders. His irises turn a crimson red when he is in this state.

Likes: Most music though he prefers classical. Sweets. Order. Deep down inside he likes to watch chaos unfold as he stays cool, calm and collected.

Dislikes: Metal music. Unregulated chaos.
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History:

Zen was born in Paris, France a 24 years before the French Revolution to a wealthy aristocratic family to the name Roy Delacroix. Throughout his early years he had a great affinity towards everything that had to do with music and his parents greatly agreed to further his studies into the musical arts. At the age of 17 he was greatly known throughout Paris as a music prodigy and he became a man that everyone looked up to and many women wanted to marry. His parents arranged many women to date him hoping that he would propose to one but he never did. While he had great interests in them, he never felt the need to carry on the family line.

One day when he was tending to the rose garden in his own home, he discovered a man in the middle of the rosy briars. The man didn’t know how to speak, or do much of anything. He was quite tall and had red hair, the same color as a rose. The man seemed to learn how to do things quite quickly for someone who seemed to have been born recently. He decided to name the man Pierre d’laRose. Pierre was a fairly common French name, and D’laRose meant “from the rose”, quite appropriate from where he seemed to have been born out of. They spent quite a few years together, but fate had other plans.

The French Revolution had reached its peak, and the heads of the bourgeoisie must roll! While loved by many it was time for his death. While many were dragged to their deaths at the guillotine, Roy had accepted his fate years ago, back when the revolution started, he walked calmly and with purpose to la demi-lune. Many had attended his beheading, not in the traditional sense to be joyful at his death, but to solemnly mourn what was going to happen. Very few were allowed to speak much before their death, and even of those Roy’s words were different. “I stand here today to face the cards fate has dealt for me my friends! While today you may mourn the loss of a friend, a composer, a fellow Frenchman that while has not lived through your struggles understands your rage and why you must do this please do not mourn for long! I know that victory will soon be at your door, and that France will become the country you want it to be! One where everyone has the chance to live as freely as they desire and were the upper class doesn’t oppress the rest! If I have to sacrifice my life for the good of the country I gladly accept my fate! Au revoir mes amis, ma musique peuvent remplir vos cœurs jusqu'à la fin des temps.
Not long after his death he ended up where many spirits do, Rukongai. It was so alien to him. He remembered his entire life, here it was very different from what life was in France, regardless of what class he was there. Even here he was fairly well off being in a Fifth district. He was fairly well known for being calm and fair. People always felt at ease when he was around, many of the more elderly residents claiming that his soul was as pure as freshly fallen snow.

While he did have a calming aura due to his personality, his spiritual aura was slightly more dangerous. He had so much energy within his own soul that his spirit pressure did cause issues for those that were too close to Zen. This caused him to live more or less alone. While he did have friends, they needed to keep their distance physically or else they might get hurt. For someone that remembered being alive trying to grasp the concept of controlling this energy was foreign to him. It wasn’t uncommon for people around him to become stunned or feel pain when he wasn’t paying close attention to it. This obviously drew some complaints to those that did not know he had this issue, and on several occasions the authorities were called. While it wouldn’t have taken too long for his power to have been brought to the attention of Shinigami, scared residents running away when they see him and some getting hurt just expedited the process.

Being told that he should apply to the Shino Academy several times during these, he thought it would be worth at least a try. He didn’t know what to expect for the entrance exam, he didn’t know much beyond controlling his own reiatsu to a limited degree, if they asked for anything else he would likely fail. The test was not difficult at all. It just consisted of proving he had an appropriate level of reiatsu and that he could control it. He passed with fairly high marks. While he did have quite a high level of reiatsu; so much that once he let go of his concentration, he stunned some of the Shinigami administering the test. He apologized to no end for this, he didn’t mean to do it, but it was alright, they told him that the fact that he could hold back some of that energy being dead for only a few years was quite amazing. He held a lot of potential inside of his body, and that being in the academy would greatly improve his abilities.

He had a very strong connection with his Zanpakutō spirit. He could go into the inner world and spend time with it, but the spirit never said a word. It’s not like he wasn’t able to. He could communicate with Zen, he just wasn’t talking to him. Their relationship was similar to a teacher and student. His spirit taught him how to do things without speaking, using gestures and music to communicate with Zen. It took a while to understand it, but Zen got it. It still frustrated that it wouldn’t speak back! He wanted to understand why he coudlnt control his sword, but every time he asked his spirit just motioned to Zen “It’s a secret” or “Soon” but that didn’t mean anything to Zen, it wasn’t an answer. This frustrated him to no end. He needed to go out and get some fresh air sometimes.

Often he went out to the calm forests to try and get his sword strikes in order. One day he came across a beautiful lake. The waters were calm and reflected light almost as if it was a mirror on the ground. What he found even more interesting is that sounds that happened around it were amplified and there was minimal interference. It was as if the lake was a giant amplifier. He was so interested in it that he decided to go to the center of the lake and try it out himself, essentially forgetting that he was here to practice. He had no instruments to test out the lake with, but every musician knows they always have an instrument on them, their voices. While not the best singer Zen wasn’t horrible. He closed his eyes and started to sing.

What he heard was amazing. The surrounding area filled with his voice. It resonated and reflected inside the lake, amplifying it and filling miles around with his voice. This place was perfect. He felt so serene. Suddenly he felt his own reishi spike. In front of him stood a man wearing a pure white suit with a red tie. Zen instantly knew who this was. It was the spirit of his Zanpakutō. They had met before in his inner world, but the man never spoke. At the time it was mildly understandable, but as it kept going on it was frustrating. Finally, the man spoke “It seems you found your own voice.” The spirit said. Zen was confused about it, find his own voice, what did that mean. “You came here to train your sword skills. But you left that behind and found something you were good at. Something we are both good at.” Zen felt the need to pull out his Zanpakutō and hold it in front of his spirit. They both held it, and Zen finally learned his Zanpakutō’s name. He nodded at Aurora and said “Command! Aurora!”

The area was filled with a brilliant blue light, his spirit pressure pushing the water away from where he was standing. In his hands, instead of a sword, was a medium length conductor’s baton. It was simple. Dark blue with some silver bands along the bottom, middle and tip. He was surprised at what he was holding. Now it made sense why he was so bad at Zanjutsu! He wasn’t going to need it! Though his spike in pressure did set of some alarms, so he was surrounded by 4 Shinigami who promptly took him back to the Academy.
After a few days his Zanpakutō hadn’t changed back to its sword form. This meant it was one of the few constant release zones. This usually meant that the owner had great spiritual power, but at the same time it could also mean that they couldn’t control it, shown by the inability to revert it back to a lower power state. Regardless of that fact, he still released his Shikai, putting him far ahead of what other students could do.

Zen as stationed in squad 13, having graduated from the academy fairly soon after unlocking his shikai. He was stationed in different locations of the human world, rotating between cities that were having hollow problems, as with his shikai he could quickly dispatch of any low level problems. Though he did find it strange that no matter where he went there were a significantly higher quantity of hollows, and they were getting stronger. He also noticed that Shinigami stationed in the human world were also going missing as of late, which was even stranger. Those in the squad were strong enough to take care of the regular hollows that came to Earth and there were not reports of anything too strong, so them dying in combat would be highly unlikely. He wanted to ask his captain about this but he was always out on missions and could not be reached via other means of communication.

One day the captain asked several members, to go meet him out in a cave, which was a fair distance from the Seretei and populated areas of the Rukongai. The closer they got to the cave Zen felt the presence of hollows. A large number of them, but he couldn’t pinpoint any of them. It got stronger and stronger as they went into the cave, where they saw the captain standing infront of an open Garganta.

Everyone was surprised at the sight, but before any of them hollows jumped out of the portal and took them by surprise. That had all been attacked by one, with the exception of Zen, who blasted one with sound, causing it to disintegrate in the air. The rest of the group was dead, the hollows eating their bodies, consuming their energy. The captain had a sullen look on his face, saying to Zen that he broke orders by not feeding the hollows. Failing to follow the direct commands of a captain is insubordination and he had to be punished for it. The hollows that had come from the Garganta ran over to the captain as they began to melt and the dark energy they released covered the captain’s body. An insane laugh filled the cave as the captains body was distorted and mutated. He no longer was a Shinigami. Before Zen stood a giant hollow. Its giant bony mask like face staring down at him, its mouth dripping with hunger. Zen’s instinctive nature was to flash step away, if he had to fight it was not going to be inside of this cave.

The moment Zen was outside he took out his Zanpakutō and sent out a sonic message to the Seretei, asking for assistance as he had encountered a very strong hollow. It was going to take time for help to arrive, he had to fight it alone for the moment. He did recognize the area he was in, the lake with good acoustics was near here. The hollow followed him, firing cero and bala as he did, but zen was fast enough to doge out of the way as he made it to the lake he was looking for. One he got to the lake the former captain talked to him in a voice filled with madness. He asked Zen what he thought he was going to do, he wasn’t strong enough to win. He offered him a choice. He could join him as a hollow, or die due to his insubordination, he was still his captain, he had to follow orders, and Zen had to follow orders.

Zen was indeed conflicted about having to follow orders, but he was not obligated to follow someone’s specific orders. A buzzing sound filled the air, it was the sound of static noise. Zen’s reiatsu started to show, it was sky blue, and looked like the visual representation of the noise, static. The color started to change though. The blue was starting to darken, turning redder and redder, until it was a brilliant crimson color. The static noise was amplified by the lake bellow, now it could be heard for miles around, and the hollow grabbed its head as the volume was unbearable and pain inducing. Zen chuckled as he opened his eyes slightly, his irises the same crimson color as his aura. He told the captain that he wasn’t going to follow his orders. He no longer was his captain, and that Zen was the one that was going to dictate what was going to happen from now on between them.

Zen heard Tenmei’s voice telling him to call out his real name. It was the time to unleash his real power and bring order to those that dare defy him, those that would dictate their own laws and orders above his own. Zen smirked as he whispered “Bankai.” At that moment the static ended as the crimson energy covered Zen’s body. His spiritual pressure went over the roof, this was at the same time that members from squad 11 reached the area, they stopped right at the clearing as they were stricken with fear. The hollow was also stricken with fear as that is what Zen’s pressure commanded. Zen didn’t look any different, but his Zanpakutō was now heavily ornate.

Zen flash stepped directly in front of the hollow and released a flurry of blows at him. Zen was not skilled in zanjutsu, but he was exceptionally good at hakuda. He tore into the hollows body, blood spraying all over his body, his hands covered in it. He gave an upper cut sending the hollow flying into the sky. As he did his Zanpakutō was covered in his red reiatsu, it solidified into a short, but sharp, blade. He quickly reached the hollow and started to tear into him again, this time his hakuda translating into his short sword, slashing and goring the hollow. Its body parts falling down onto the lake, staining it red with its blood. At the end of this assault there was nothing left of the hollow except its head. It fell to the ground. Zen landed next to it as he glared down at it and pointed his Zanpakutō at it. He said to it “Insubordination” before blasting it with sound, causing the mask to shatter.

The squad around him had seen the entire battle, if one could call it that. The captain of the 11th squad was also present and approached Zen. He took Zen to the captain commander and explained what he had seen Zen do. At this point Zen had calmed down, his eyes no longer red, his aura calm. The captain commander asked to be left alone with Zen. He asked him to explain wat had happened, and Zen explained everything that he had seen. The murder of his squad members and the hollowfication of the captain. The commander looked at Zen and asked him to never reveal the hollowfication incident to anyone. Zen agreed to that order. After the meeting he was placed as the Captain of the squad 13, as there were few members left and he was deemed the most capable of doing the job.

His stay as captain wasn’t long, only lasting a few years. It’s not that he didn’t like the job, but he just didn’t want to continue in his position. He wanted to relax and live a normal life. Though he still wanted to keep the world safe. He went to the commander and asked if he could go live in the human world. He explained how he felt and that he was still willing to help the Gotei when needed. This came as a surprise as no one had asked for this type of request before. At first the commander was reluctant to allow him to live in the human world, but a deal was struck, he would live in the human world for one normal human lifetime, and return to the seretei for 50 years, to ensure that his identity would not be revealed to humans.

While in the human world one day he found something interesting. In the dusk hours he saw something glowing in an alley way. He took a look inside to find a large crystal rosebud that radiated a large amount of spirit energy. He got closer to see that someone, or something was inside of it. It seemed to be a small man, but upon closer inspection it was an arrancar. An arrancar in the city? Sleeping? That was odd. Though he did get a sense of familiarity. It had been so long. He got close and used his own spirit pressure to melt away the crystal structure. As it melted the man inside woke up. His first instinct was to cower in the spot he was in. After a few moment the man started to cry and ran up and hugged Zen. The arrancar cried into him and said he was happy that Zen-san had found him. That’s a name he hadn’t heard in a long time. Few people had ever called him that. Zen looked down and tiled the Arrancar face to look at him. Past the tears and the pieces of broken mask, the face was familiar. He recognized him, it was Viz. Viz used to be a Shinigami, but had decided to side with Aizen many years ago. Viz told his story, to how Aizen had taken advantage and turned him into an Arrancar, how he escaped and waited there for someone to find him.

Zen didn’t know what to do. Viz was an arrancar, but he didn’t seem like he was evil. He was scared and just wanted to be safe. With a sigh he decided to help Viz by letting live him in his house. Slowly word did get out that Viz was there, and that he was an arrancar. At first it was quite troublesome as people were assholes and didn’t understand, but as time went on Zen helped Viz and others understand the situation, so that Viz could be safe.

Centuries passed in the human world and as humans became more spiritually aware and events passed Zen did not need to hide any longer. He did not need to fake his identity and split his time between the human world and the gotei. He now had the life that he wanted, to live in the human world and still work for the seretei, his own rules. Eventually the Gotei restructured itself, and as such they were looking for people who were capable enough to become captains of now much larger branches of the organization. Having the strength and previous experience of being a captain Zen volunteered to be the captain of the Kido Corps. Where he proudly serves to this day.

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Reiatsu Color: Sky Blue/Crimson

Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Tenmei (Aurora)

Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: Tenmei is a man dressed in a completely white suit with a red tie. He stands at a height similar to Zen’s with short brown hair and red eyes. For the first few meetings he was completely silent. When Zen awakened his Shikai he heard Tenmei’s voice, which was deep and commanding.

Tenmei is also known for manifesting himself more often than other Zanpakutō spirits (more detail in the Shikai section).

Inner World: Their inner worlds is an empty gold stage surrounded by darkness. A spotlight shines on them when they are in it.

Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : Currently none. It is a constant release Zanpakutō, it lost its sword form when Zen first released it.

Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: None.

Release: Command! Aurora! (Meijiru! Tenmei!)

Shikai Description:
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Shikai Abilities:
Manifestation: Tenmei can willingly manifest himself outside of the inner world. While all Zanpakutō spirits have this ability, he dos it relatively frequently in comparison. He often comes out when he pleases, depending on the situation. Sometimes he just wants to be outside, sometimes he wants to keep Zen company, sometimes he wants to chime in on a conversation in an external manner, and in dire situations when Zen can’t act for himself.

When in battle Tenmei has the same abilities detailed in this and the Bankai section, and always acts as if he was in Bankai, regardless of whether if Zen has activated it in battle or not. Tenmei will only be in battles if Zen has gotten to a state where he cannot fight, but is not unconscious. An example of it would be when Zen was in a fight with HIsao, and he could not move without having dealing damage to himself, essentially being paralyzed, but in that case Zen asked for the help, before it being provided.
Tenmei can only provide assistance ONCE per thread. The duration of this cannot exceed 5 posts, but if he sustains a large amount of damage, or if he willingly returns to the Zanpakutō, he cannot participate in the battle again. This also counts if he is outside of the Zanpakutō before a battle starts in a thread.

While outside Zen’s Zanpakutō abilities’ power are cut by 3/4 and he cannot access Bankai. The only exception to this is the Arpeggio ability. The cost of merged kido goes up by 4x.

Order: Zen’s Zanpakutō focuses on maintaining order, and more importantly the order Zen wants others to follow. This has manifested itself in the way of music, no matter how disorganized a piece of music sounds there are underlying rules that allow the music to be played. He uses some of those rules as his abilities to maintain order as the conductor of the battle field.
Sound Manipulation: Zen has the ability to create sounds around him and fights with sound. The manipulation can work in various ways. He can create normal sounds within the area that his Illuminacion affects, that is these sounds don’t have any effect that normal sound wouldn’t have. They can range from a pin dropping to that of an entire orchestra playing. In a similar way he can manipulate leady existing sounds, as long as they have exited what created them. For example he could make someone voice sound differ after their words leave their mouth, even going as far as making their words make no sound at all. Creating and manipulating sounds in this way does not require much, if any energy on his part.

One step above is taking sounds and making them dangerous in a non “supernatural” way This means he can take sounds and make them dangerous based on their normal properties, such as volume, frequency, direction, speed, and pressure. By affecting volume he can take even the quiet drop of a pin and turn it into an ear splitting sound. Changing it frequency Zen can turn a dangerous high volume sound into something that is inaudible, thus causing the effects of his non visible sounds to seem to come from nowhere. This means that he can create infra and ultrasound. While infrasound is relatively harmless, the ultrasonic vibrations can be used to create vicious vibrations that can make even the sturdiest materials crumble, though it might take some time if it was made by a very good crafter (This is further explained in Timbre). An effect that this ultrasound can do is cavitation, which is voids that quickly pressurize causing extreme pressure and heat, resulting in a shockwave. This does not happen unless he uses ultrasound for a long period of time, and it can occur randomly. When changing direction Zen can move the sound in his area of influence, changing its trajectory. When this happens the sound forms into a semi visible stream, as the forced air distorts and bends light slightly. Changing the speed that which the sound travels, by itself doesn’t do much besides slowing down or speeding up the sound wave, but when combined with pressure is when things get different. When Zen changes the pressure at which the sound travels this increases the force that it has, essentially making sound a powerful force. When changing the pressure and speed of sound Zen can create wind, ranging from a gentle breeze to powerful gales. While not too complicated or taxing, using these abilities, such as creating a sustained gale, can slowly drain his energy.

Things start to get more draining when Zen creates his own waves to fight with. While he can control waves inside of his Illuminacion, when it comes to creating his own attack sounds he is limited to an area of 10 feet around his body. The waves can be pointed in any direction, but they are limited to 4 types: sphere, line, cone, and blade. They each have their own properties. Sphere creates an orb of sound around Zen. This orb can range in size from 10 feet in diameter, to 100 feet. A line burst can reach up t0 250 feet away, but can only be up to 10 feet wide. A cone can travel 100 feet and progressive gets larger as it travels, reaching a maximum of 50 feet wide. Blades are compressed waves of sound that Zen can control throughout his Illuminacion. Cone and sphere waves become weaker the more that they travel, only being 1/4 of their original strength when at their maximum reach. Line waves don’t lose their strength, but they can only be fired in one direction, and after being fired Zen cannot change its direction. Blades do not lose their strength, but Zen must concentrate on controlling them to keep moving them.

He does not need to be entirely focused to use this ability, but the more complex actions he takes the less he can concentrate on abilities that require concentration, such as Arpeggio.

Tempo Strike: With his sword gone Zen has focused on Hakuda, but that doesn’t mean that he can’t use his Zanpakutō as a dagger. By covering it in air and spirit energy he creates a very sharp blade. He basis his skill with this weapon off of his Hakuda skill instead of Zanjutsu.

Iluminacion: This ability spreads out 500 feet around Zen. He can create touchable, semi-solid illusions. They are mostly used for Zen’s performances but it can be used in battle to disorient opponents. An example would be him creating a wall, that feels like a wall, but when you apply any sort of extra pressure one would go through it.

This ability is mainly passive. The sphere of influence does not carry any constraints to maintain as, in essence, is just an area of effect. He can maintain only one or two illusions at a time. The size of one illusion cannot surpass 100 feet, total. That is he could make a 50 foot, by 50 foot wall (this has an area greater than 100 feet, but in this case what matter is distance over substance). He can combine illusions to make a larger one, but there will be a small, visible, gap between them. When someone, or something passes through and breaks the illusion it cannot be used for 2 posts. If they break just one Zen would only be able to use one illusion. An illusion cannot be changed during the same post, if Zen wishes to change it, he has to wait until he is in a new post to do so.

Illusions do not have to be singular objects. He could create hundreds or thousands of a single object if it is small enough. He could create 100 6 inch by 6 inch butterflies and have them fly around the area of effect.
Bianca: Condenses reiatsu in front of Zen to create a white shield in front of him that absorbs the next attack so that it deals only half of its damage. If Zen is much stronger than his opponent it can negate the attack.

The shield is composed of standing wave. This wave arises when he opposes the resonance of his own spirit pressure with a sound wave. The wave is completely stationary, creating a strong, stable shield that by sheer pressure and immobility. When compared to Bakudo this would be in the range of #30. An attack that surpasses that level of strength passes through the barrier at half strength. If the attack surpasses #60 it bypasses the shield completely.
This aility can only be used every 4 posts. While it does not consume much internal energy, it does decrease his spirit pressure. After 4 posts his spirit pressure returns to his usual level.

Bemol: Zen fires a small orb of concentrated spirit energy that, if it hits its intended target they are shrouded by Zen’s spirit pressure. Due to this strong oppressive force it has similar effects to being in very close proximity to Zen. While its main purpose is to decrease the power of Kido by 5 numbers (thus turning a #20 to a #15, an essentially making anything less than #5 not work), it can cause effects such as fear, paralysis, stunning and pain. Since he still controls this pressure, he can attempt to make opponents feel these effects at will. The effects of this attack are dependent on the spirit pressure of the opponent. If they have a pressure greater than Zen’s the effects are much weaker, if it even works at all. If it works it lasts for 2 posts. A target affected by this has a “b” hovering over their head.

This takes 5% of his internal energy to use. While it may not be a lot, due to his large internal reservoir, to some this amount of energy could be overwhelming. He can use this ability 2 posts after the effect ends, or 2 posts if he misses.

Sharp: Similar to Bemol, but it works in the opposite manner. In this case the energy that he sends out adds to the targets own energy pool, strengthening their kido by 5, and increasing their spirit pressure for 2 posts. Other than that it works the same as Bemol. A target affected by this has “#” over their head. He cannot use it on himself.

Staccato: Zen forms small orbs of spirit energy and sound at the tip of his baton and fires them in rapid succession. The rate of fire is 300 RPS (18,000 RPM) but the orbs do almost negligible damage on their own, but they have decent knockback if the target is hit constantly by them. This ability does not take much concentration to hold for a long period of time, for a maximum of 2 posts. He can use other abilities while he maintains this ability going. After he uses this continuously it hasa cool down period of 1 post.

Tenuto: Zen creates slow moving bars of sound energy that home in on a target. While slow when they come into contact they create a deafening boom that causes moderate amounts of damage. If they do not hit something after 2 posts they will explode wherever they are.

Timbre: This gives Zen an acute sense of hearing, which allows him to be able to hear things from miles away, if he focuses on it. With even greater focus he could identify the resonance of objects.

An objects resonance depends on the material it is made from. When an object is exposed to a wave that has the same resonance it begins to sake violently and eventually break, shatter, or fall apart. The simplest example of this is when an opera singer hits the right pitch and shatters a glass. Objects of poor quality break much easier than those of higher quality. The better quality the object is the longer it takes for it to break, in some cases it could even be impossible to break them. Objects do not need to be exposed continuously to the sound wave to break, as each time they are exposed they take some damage. When the object breaks is subjective to its quality. An example would be that it would take less than one post for Zen to shatter a tree, a low quality sword would take about the same time, while a Zanpakutō could take from 10 to 30 posts of constant exposure to break. Bankai cannot be broken using this ability.

Arpeggio: It allows Zen to use more than one Kido at the same time often causing them to combine into a kido that has the properties of the two or three kido used at the time. The incantation of the kido is spliced together to make a new incantation. Splicing kidos in this way require twice, or three times as long for it to be cast, leaving him open while he casts it. This also averages their level. If he wanted to combine #1 with #50, the resulting kido would be equal in strength to #25.

When combining them he cannot combine kido outside of their own class, he cannot combine Hadō with bakudo, though he can combine bakudo with healing kido if they have an area effect. He can attempt to combine kido that oppose each other, such as fire and water, but this has a high chance of failure. If he is able to combine them the kido created creates something new, such as mixing fire and water kido to make steam kido.

Doing this takes concentration, the more kido he tries to combine, the more focus he has to have. He has been able to combine as much as 4 kido at one time. Combining Hadō is more complicated due to their more unpredictable nature. Bakudo are easier to combine as they are very structured and orderly.
Using this ability to splice two kido does not come at an extra cost, when splicing 3 kido the number increases by 5 in cost, when splicing 4 it takes 10 more. When putting the kido together the energy goes up respectively depending of the average that is created. The energy needed to create the kido is 2x, 3x, or 4x the average cost. If he were to merge Hadō #10 and #20 it would cost 2x what #15 would be, but the strength would be equivalent to #15. If he were to combine #30, #40, #10, and #20 it would have the average power of #25, to that you add 10, so it becomes a #35, and then it becomes 35x4= 140. As the last example shows, the more kido are used the more diminishing returns you get, due to having a very high cost, but if the kido used include very low numbers the resulting kido would be fairly weak compared to the energy put into it.

Fermata: Using a combination of reiatsu and sound Zen creates a loud blast around him. Most projectiles that are in within 5 feet of Zen stop moving for 1 post. This effect follows him. If he moves from the position the projectiles will move once more, and any projectile he tries to send out are also stopped, meaning he cannot use projectile attacks for one post.
This blast actually indicates that he has essentially frozen his spirit pressure closest to his body. This ability locks him into place for the post, not being able to move via conventional means. The only way for him to exit this area is to flash step out of it, but doing so could cause him to take some damage from the projectiles. It has a cooldown of 1 post.

This ability is based off his Kido skill level. Those above his level, or its equivalent for other races, have no trouble bypassing this barrier.
Bankai Description: True Name: Infinite Aurora (Mugen Tenmei).
Unlike other Bankai Zen’s bankai causes minimal change to his Zanpakutō. The baton he holds turns gold and very ornate, a constant stream of music notes float around Zen. When in Bankai, regardless of what he was wearing before, he wears his captain uniform.

Bankai Abilities:
Concerto: Zen can now use his sound attacks from an origin point that is not him. He can create attacks that originate from an area within his Illuminacion range (500 feet). They still travel in the same shapes, but those that have a cone or line shape can be positioned at different angles.
Sound Cannon: Zen can capture non-physical attacks and fire them back. He does this by creating a circular wall of reiatsu and compressed air in front of him. This stops the attack and then Zen can release it forward. He can do this to absorb several attacks, but it has some drawbacks. While he does this he becomes immobile, as he has to lock himself in place to absorb he knockback from attacks as they suddenly stop. While there is no limit on how many attacks he can stop, the more attacks that he stops increase the load, eventually attacks can overload his ability to stop them, causing them to release their energy wildly around the area, hurting Zen and firing the energy randomly.

Crescendo: A cone shaped blast of reiatsu that empowers kido, and other reiatsu based attacks that travel in this area. This area is a 50 foot cone. Any spirit based attack that enters it is empowered by 1/3.
Diminuendo: Works in a similar way to Crescendo. This time he uses his spirit pressure to degrade kido that are targeting him. It travels in a cone shaped wave that reached out to 50 feet. Due to this shift in pressure, while this ability is used his back is exposed to attacks as his defenses are focused on his front. Strength of those attacks is reduced by 1/2.

This only affects attacks that are below his own Kido skill. Those at and above his skill are affected minimally, but are still affected by it to a small degree.
Simile: Zen can attempt to copy kido used by others to negate them. This mainly works for kido that he has already learned, that is he cannot cancel a kido that he hasn’t seen before. If he wants to cancel it, he must take some time to learn a bit about it. If he sees a new kido it takes 3 posts to be able to copy it, and 6 posts to be able to cancel it. This only works for kido that are open to everyone. It does not work for kido made specifically, or only known by one or a few select characters.

Marcato: V shaped projectiles composed of reiatsu and sound fly out and travel at a high speed and on contact creates 10 foot wide explosions.
This is similar to Staccato. Its fire rate is much slower at 10RPS (60 RPM). The projectiles hae the strength of bullets, but their 10 foot explosions do not cause much damage, they essentially just create large knockback.
Silencio: Sound based attacks have a reduced effect on Zen. The strength of these attacks is reduced by 1/3.

Fortissimo: If Zen makes an attacks and yells fortissimo the effectiveness of the attack raises by 2x. This makes him give out a burst of energy, leaving him tired for 1 post after using this ability. Doing this makes the Kido cost 2.5x its original cost.
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General Skills
  • Durability: Advanced
  • General Speed: Master
  • Strength: Advanced
  • Weapon Skill:Adept


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Adept
  • Kidō: Advanced
  • Zanjutsu: Adept
  • Hakuda: Advanced


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You are a quiet, intelligent, and funny person. In most situations you don't bother being serious to anyone, as you enjoy making the ones you love smile with pranks and puns. However deep inside you are an intellectual with many secrets that you'd hate to burden others with. When it comes down to it you can be extremely serious when you're hurt, and will stop at nothing to get your revenge. Seemingly on the outside you also appear as fairly lazy which you are, but you're very strong when you need to be anyway.
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Tier: 3-5
Comments/Notes: I won't get too strict on this one, so i'll just point the simple changes that need to be done.

Kazerou wrote:Depending on the main color of the fan Momka is able to enhance elemental kidou and even generate the element that the fan represents at that moment. She is able to have 2 elements active at once and often has Ice and Wind active on a hot day and wind and fire during a cold one. Along with strengthening elements her Hadō are more deadly and her bakudo are stronger making binds and barriers less than likely to be broken but anyone stronger than her can easily break her bakudo as an approximate percentage of effectiveness of Momoka's Bakudo is 10% more sturdy than an average bakudo and her Hadō are only a mere 12% stronger.

For an odd reason the fan gives off a rather alluring scent to those near her, it's different for everyone, it's there possibly to attract people to her or even ensure people don't loose her.

First, you are not going to start off with a high tier, so explain what elements can she currently manipulate at the moment.
Secondly, how skilled and powerful is she in manipulating elements? Could she create basic weapons like swords? Create blasts? Explain where her skill currently stands in elemental manipulation.
Third, the element of her Zanpakutō is accordance to the weather. Its confusing, since you would need to determine and 'set' a weather for her Zanpakutō to use the specified element. I recommend that she should be able to switch elements at her own will, if not, you should give a more thorough explanation since she would possess a huge variety of elements via different weathers and of course, i'm not going to allow that until i see how this character develops.
Forth, enhancing elemental kido yet you said, 'strengthening her elements'. Wat? Kido or just her elemental kidos? Just explain what is going on in this one.
Lastly, she could enhance elemental kido yet you wrote that her Hadō is 12% stronger and Bakudo is 10% sturdier. Does it apply to all Hadō and Bakudo or just the elemental types. Please choose between the two.


Kazerou wrote:As time goes by and she casts kido the symbols will begin to glow. The stronger the kido the more power the tessen stores and when 2,4,6 or all 8 of the symbols are glowing Momoka may channel the power stored into a blast, Bind or barrier.

First, how powerful would the blast/bind/barrier depending how many symbols are glowing? Does it reset back to its original state once she released the symbol's power. Explain.
Second, we have kido up to #99 or even past that number. From what # kido to what # kido would she need to cast for one symbol to glow. For example, she would need to cast #1 to #30 kido for 20 times to glow, and etc.
Lastly, could she use this symbol indefinitely? Does it need to cool down after use? Would it have side effects or drain her energy after usage? Explain.


Kazerou wrote:When unfolded into a full circle there appears to be a lack under that tree. The design on the tessen always seems to move as if it were an actual garden and tree. A dragon seems to be flying over the garden while holding 4 orbs in its claws, these begin to glow when certain conditions are met. In the water there are four fish which also glow when conditions are met.

First, wat is this full circle? Please explain.

Kazerou wrote:As the Symbols light up the strength is also enhanced for every 2 symbols lit up to 5/10/15/25% however if they stop glowing the overall power of her kido goes back to normal.

First, this is confusing. Strength of the Zanpakutō's attacks or is it the strength of her kido?
Second, the 5/10/15/25% is, sometimes, hard for some to understand. Give an example of how these enhancements would take effect in an actual battle. For example, a #20 Bakudo barrier would usually able to take only one hit from a cero before it shatters. But with the #% of the enhancements, it could take # hits before it shatters, something like that. Give some sort of actual representation so everyone would understand how these enhancements would take effect.
Finally, after the symbol resets back, would it still retain its original power/enhancements or would it be reduced the more she uses the power of the symbols?


Kazerou wrote:Ontop of Kidou enhancement her Shikai also gives her accelerated healing as she is stuck she begins to heal damage to her but it's not instantaneous. Her energy is also self replenishing so she's able to cast low and mid kido near endlessly. When in a full circle Momoka can throw the tessen like a disk where it coats itself in reiatsu and able to cut through steel if enough force is used.

First, during healing, what wound can she heal or cannot heal? Would she only able to heal minor wounds like scratches and wounds like a sword slash and etc. Depending on the severity of the wound, how long would it require before it completely heals?
Secondly, i'm fine with self-replenishing energy, however, with her tier that i'm giving, she can't simply cast nearly endless amount of low to mid-level kido. She could simply spam kido and not have any underlying effects since even mid-level kido is still powerful. You need to give some limits to the self-replenishing energy, since i can't allow some 'lolregenerateenergy&spamshit' thing going around.
Thirdly, 'when in full circle'? Wat? Its so suddenly mentioned without prior knowing what this 'full circle' even do in the first place. Just wat dafuq?
Finally, when she throws tessen, it is coated in reiatsu, right? Considering that it can cut through solid steel if enough force is used, then how much energy would she use to empower tessen to such a point?


Kazerou wrote:however her reflexes are sharper to the point she can react to many situations quickly.

First, i need a clear example of her reflexes to the 'many situations'. Why? So people would know exactly where her reflexes would stand. We wouldn't want to be firing a blast moving 3 times the speed of sound and she could just avoid it just because her reflexes are 'sharp to the point where she could react to many situations quickly'.

I apologize if i seemed too strict, but i've already went loose on this check. If you want to know why you have so many things to fix, hit me up on skype since you know me. Otherwise, get to fixing.

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