Yuudeshi Concept - Tohru/Kinki Yuudeshiregnant.

Tue Apr 01, 2014 5:28 pm

(Kinki, Misaka, Misaki, Kobato or Tohru) Yuudeshi

Electrified Hatred

Feedback from Yuudeshi members, please.

The idea for the Yuudeshi I'm making is that she hates her brothers and family out of jealousy. She's pissed that she was born so weak and frail, while her brothers managed to have that or avoid it while still being powerful. Kin hates that she has no power or anything, only a weak spiritual energy she can barely feel. The idea with her is hatred, jealousy and resentment up until some point a ways after she gains powers alone. At that time she'll crach and burn, fighting someone she couldn't possibly kill or even stand up to after being out classed again by her brothers.

She detests them, becoming angry enough to turn her apartment complex into a ruined one. She’ll break down after retreating from family showing up to stop her, and break down in secret. After which, someone close will be there to comfort her, be is a brother like Shadin, Kakine or even her boyfriend/girlfriend at the time. She’s the youngest Yuudeshi from her mother at the time, and her naïve thoughts of her brothers being born with all that power at the start is the result of misconception in her thoughts.

Her mother after all, is a hard ass and doesn’t understand how her daughter has no power what so ever in her eyes. She’s useless in that aspect, not even wanting to get a cyber brain like her brothers out of the scary feeling she’ll loose her soul or mind if it was switched. In truth, Kin/Tohru is merely afraid to advance. Scared she’ll never come out of her brother’s shadow’s. Her fears, hatred and personality lie in the dark shadow cast over her of power.

She may be flawless in school, but Kin has issues with people and her personality being intolerable and asking for someone to kill her. The world’s become so much less forgiving, far mother than in the history she’s learned and as a teenager her arrogance is higher than you can imagine, even for someone her age. Again, she makes herself feel bigger than she is, even being hypocritical and throwing the names of her parents and siblings around, with threats like “Shadin and Kakine would kill anyone who hurt me!” She’s truly a hypocrite in fear of everything.

Constantly neglected by teachers and students alike for her look on live and attitue, she won’t tell her mother, as she can’t stand her. She even stole enough money from her brothers accounts to fend for herself through school and a few years of college and work. She’s an ungrateful brat and knows no love or thankfulness to her family. She’s mentally ill from all of this, and ever so full of hate. The perfect target for a demon.

After going as far as to disown the family vocally to herself, she fester’s her jealousy, burning and casting it into more hatred and darkness in her heart. With these attributes, at 14 she only has imaginary friends. People she has created in her mind that understand her, when she’s only talking to herself. It all is her fault. She never question why Shadin and Kakine were so powerful. She never sought them out as a younger sister should when scared, and she always has made excuses for the things she’s done wrong to herself and others. All her actions are justified to her. Even the killing of innocents who piss her off.

She doesn't realize her family has always been there, watching her and over her as they should, as the entire family does for each other. Except her. She took it all for granted like a little spoiled brat and never saw herself doing wrong. Not once, and by the end of this plot section, she'll have to start working towards forgiveness and for the power she didn't know was in her all along. The Anima Stone. At the time of whoever showing up occurs, it is then the stone thats been in her since her birth will awaken.

But she won't have help. She'll more than likely be working alone to atone for the deeds she's done. Even doing side jobs for Shadin and Kakine, and other family members just to regain their forgiveness, if they're angry to begin with.

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On another option. She could even join her powers and start killing people who anger her, still throwing her name around. Eventually becoming nuts enough to outright attack family out of self imposed hatred. She'd be so crazy she wouldn't care on the power difference, and would wear herself out trying to end everything.

Then eventually the same as above could stop her. I don't know, man. My ideas are everywhere and in every shape and form. I love deep emotional plots, even if one has been wrong and lying to herself all along, but its gone on so long its true to her and borderline nothing could change it.

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New concept!

Wed Apr 02, 2014 1:06 am

To begin with, is Kin your characters name? If not whats he got to dow with it? Personally, I cant see any of the Yuudeshi hating their clansmen, especially not the founders of the clan (Shadin/Zin/Kakine) and so I really dont see why anyone would be angry at her since everyone has their own reasoning for killing. I suggest refering to Frosts request thread if you want to make Shadins/Zins sister since its his clan. Additionally, with the standard created by the Yuudeshi Clansmen, I cant see a direct off spring of Kakines/Shadins and Zins parents having such a distant personality on the grounds of envy. Thats just my opinion really, you couls approach this a different way, PC me in chat sometime and ill tell you how if your interested.

Wed Apr 02, 2014 1:19 am

※Hold It, Bro※

Whether you have noticed it or not, from Kyle's information when i planned on making Misaka Yuudeshi, i was noted that she is one of Shadin's sisters, if i remember correctly. Its better for you to stick it that way than remaking it entirely, unless you want to make a Misaka Imouto as a Yuudeshi instead.

[ Saw Ulqui's Post, a small reply for it ]
It really depends if she is aiming for a Tier 0 out of it since Frost did say that he would give a thumbs up for those are making a Yuudeshi. But with current tier 0 system that the admins made recently, i don't really know myself if Frost would allow it now.

Wed Apr 02, 2014 3:30 am

Ulqui wrote:To begin with, is Kin your characters name? If not whats he got to dow with it?

Yeah that's her name for short, I believe.

SouYuuki wrote:

※Hold It, Bro※

Whether you have noticed it or not, from Kyle's information when i planned on making Misaka Yuudeshi, i was noted that she is one of Shadin's sisters, if i remember correctly. Its better for you to stick it that way than remaking it entirely, unless you want to make a Misaka Imouto as a Yuudeshi instead.

I don't think terms of relatives are really of any importance here, tbh. You can make her how you like in those terms, just keep in mind Shadin is over 400 years old and Zin and Kakine are however old. So, this has been something that I've always wondered about HOW THE HELL COULD THAT BE THEIR SISTER? lol. Makes no sense to me, a 14 year old girl being a sister to people that are centuries old... Nonetheless, I think it's just easier to make her a descendent of Shadin or Zin and then just have a close relation to them in terms of whatever it is you're going to do with her. As Ulqui said, I don't think Shadin, Zin, or Kakine would really hate anyone of their own kind. Have a slight distaste? Maybe, but not hate.

SouYuuki wrote:[ Saw Ulqui's Post, a small reply for it ]
It really depends if she is aiming for a Tier 0 out of it since Frost did say that he would give a thumbs up for those are making a Yuudeshi. But with current tier 0 system that the admins made recently, i don't really know myself if Frost would allow it now.

The current 0 tier system is no different, as a matter of fact it hasn't changed at all there is no "current 0 tier system". Nothing happened, we just decided to not hand out 0 tiers to all the boys and girls of PH. However, I don't believe N2O is trying to make her a zero tier, don't believe that's his style.

Wed Apr 02, 2014 9:05 am

I was not aiming for any tier at all. Is the concept and not much else. CPK i right, I am not aiming for any set tier. Its not my style as I like hard work to gain what you want. I was just liking the idea is all, that the baby sister is made fun of so often for not being as powerful you know?

My style is story, background, plot and work. If I got auto assigned a zero tier, I'd probably be pissed. Look at Letty. I upgraded her and specifically asked for no tier up. One ability does not make a tier rise. A character's name should be either.

In response to her age. That was more of her appearance age. 4 to 400 year old guys? Nah man. That's too young. Pretty sure that would be one big stamp of WTF from family. Well I'm glad all this feedback came in! I have two other ideas for it, but wanted to clear the most dramatic up first since I like long plots!

Also, I don't have a clue what to do with her name.

Thanks for the feedback guys!

Wed Apr 02, 2014 9:09 am

please keep in mind that the other yuudeshi's grew from beings that didn't have much power themselves. so being weak or powerless wouldnt matter much them from what i know.

Wed Apr 02, 2014 9:12 am

Hold On Just One Second

._. You do realize that Kin is a god forsaken name in the Yuudeshi Clan, right? Kin Iramasha ring any bells? That's one of the Yuudeshi's arch enemies and to name someone like that in the Yuudeshi Clan is to have a Jew be called Hitler.

Wed Apr 02, 2014 11:47 am

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That name was S_E's idea. Not mine. I went with Misaka, and this concept is void now guys. None the less, Cookie when you have a sec a link to the information you're talking about would be much appreciated.

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I'm making a new concept anyway.

Wed Apr 02, 2014 7:49 pm

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Here's the new one guys!

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"Someone once asked me why I go so far for my family. Why I go as far as to step in front of my family and an enemy that I have no chance against. I've never been able to answer them. Not once. I couldn't tell you why, but I've never left Shadine, Kakine, Misaka or Tohru behind. I'm the weakest of all of us. I'll never match them, simply because I chose my path of protection and healing. A different method to do things. This method also keeps my options limited. But that doesn't matter to me. I'm here for them, and even when my brother Shadin has his own doctor, I'll be there waiting to heal him up if he'd like for me to instead.

When Kakine looses himself, I'll knock the sense back into him with my fists. If my mother or father grow old to the point they can't even defend themselves, I take any hit and knock away their enemies. If Tohru gets into a life or death battle, I'll step in and beat them back! That is my purpose. To keep my family alive. To protect them, even if I die trying. That is the Yuudeshi Clan and I will never abandon them. No. This is how a family should be! Now! I clench my fists before you! I won't let you lay a finger on them! This is the end of my thoughts! Now its time for action!"

- Judou Yuudeshi to an Unknown party after coming between them and a family member's possible death, and being called into question for the logic behind his actions.

Thu Apr 03, 2014 3:34 am

Solved has been put into the title, so as such, I will be moving this into old questions/feedback.

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