Sōzōshin Sakusei [Approved 2-5]

Platinum Hearts BLEACH RP

Just a note: I accidentally misunderstood what a Ziamichi was. I thought a Ziamichi was the Spirit. “The Personality of the Host” is where I started to properly understand what each term meant.

» Name: Sōzōshin Sakusei (Sakusei = first name)
» Titles: Kosui-san, Empress of Awesome (self-declared)
» Race:Shinigami
» Age:666
» Gender:Female
» Affiliation/Rank:Currently none.

» Appearance Written: Sakusei looks like a 17 year old (about). She possesses, oddly, naturally white hair that's always put in a high ponytail (held together by a red, fat ribbon), and droops down slightly below her waist. Her eyes are coloured differently, which for some reason, originates from the Moogle type Ziamichi within her (left eye is yellow, right eye is purple).

She dons a long coat similar to 's but with a charcoal hood, and wears a white t-shirt and bottoms that look like black sweatpants almost, all of which is her attire when in battle. She changes clothes like a normal person, and changes them according to the place she's in/near, when using a Gigai, which she has oddly been able to freely exit.

Her facial structure is similar to Yui Takamura from Muv-Luv Alternative Total Eclipse. She is 5'8, and has a rather attractive body, equipped with 86,58,84 as her 3 sizes (like my selected vocabulary? I do). Her features are somewhat deadly to look at if you already have a girlfriend, as your blood pressure may suddenly arise.

Personality: I usually automatically manifest a personality for my characters while in game, but I guess I could make one now.

Before being possessed by the spirit, Shinigami Sakusei was extremely Timid and quiet. Her shyness was on a whole new level, and she wasn't close with anyone at all. She seemed to be nearly void of emotion, having not a hint of girlyness (personality wise. She's extremely feminine when it comes to appearance XP). She would usually be found praticing Kidō or reading a book. This type of personality allowed her to go unnoticed, and therefore be perfect and incognito or stealth missions (her personality became adaptable to situations, allowing her to think plainly and think of ways people wouldn't notice herself). Even though she was extremely good with being 'invisible', she was still extremely nonathletic, and therefore unsuited for the . Shinigami Sakusei is extremely intellectual, despite not wearing glasses, and is capable of analysing and calculating situations with prestigous speed. It's really a wonder why she was unable to join the ranks of Shinigami earlier, but I'll get into that for the History Section of the Template.

» History: the Shinigami Sakusei started out as a rookie in the 4th division. She actually only applied to the 4th division and was recently accepted. She had lived for 666 years, training vigorously, just to become a Shinigami. She had a phenomenally low Reiatsu (which is coloured magenta), and as result, made up for it with an unnatural affinity for Kidō related subjects, including physical and theoretical application. She could be considered masterful with Kidō (if you would allow her to), being able to use most spells without chanting them. She would often times come up with new Kidos and test them, almost always resulting in a failure (just a little countermeasure for if I want to try to create a new one). She usually has little resolve, and was quite timid, allowing for the Spirit to rather easily take over her body entirely. She didn't have a family in , being far too shy and quiet, to the point that others would mistake her to lack emotions or be mute. During this time, the Spirit began to corrupt her mind, and she soon after succumbed on the same day she became a shinigami (bad luck brian moment right there). Just a side note, Shinigami Sakusei did not possess any Phantom Tech whatsoever.

Reiatsu Color: Magenta

- Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Ryudo Tsubasa and Yowaihime Tsuyokunaru (two personalities prefer two different names. Of course, as the Zanpakutō Spirits are a part of her soul, she tends to automatically know which personality is active at present time).

- Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: Oddly enough, it only looks like a single orb of light. It can see, hear, touch, smell, taste(?) but how it does so is unknown, as their is no head, let alone a face.

- Inner World: It is mostly void of everything, save for a single purple sun, and invisible ground that is seemingly impenetrable. The rest of the place looks like a bluish-purple world that seems endless, but if you were to venture out in this world, you will eventually hit an invisible wall.

- Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance: Two especially thin Nodachi that is surprisingly lighter than most normal katanas.

Release: Announce Thyself, Ryudo Tsubasa!/Announce Thyself, Yowaihime Tsuyokunaru! (depends on which personality is active)

- Shikai Description: Except for the sharpening of her swords, the appearance does not change.

- Shikai Abilities:

Ryudo Tsubasa: gives her a special passive ability known as Tetsu Hada. Tetsu Hada transfers the reishi around her into herself, granting her a significantly larger reiatsu (this occurs slowly, but constantly increases). Since it comes to her slowly, most of it gathers around herself, making a thick atmosphere that is hard to pierce, thereby granting this ability the title "Tetsu Hada", or "iron skin" (HAHAHA).

Yowaihime Tsuyokunaru: gives her the passive ability known as Gainen Kōdo Henkō. This passive ability brings any Kidō that she announces to full potential. Basically, she can say a Kidō without chanting it, but it would be just as strong as if she were to say it with the chant. This ability does not make her Kidos with a chant stronger than before. It only applies to Kidō without chants.

» The Spirit's Name: Sōzōshin Sakusei
» The Spirit's Race: Demon (not a part of the Za Koa family)
» The Spirit's Gender: female
» The Spirit's Age: 314
» The Spirit's Pictured Appearance: this is what the spirit itself looks like.

» The Spirit's Personality: Sakusei mostly deceives people, easily telling full on lies without hesitation. To her, deceit is second nature, so playing poker with her is inconceivable. She seemingly wears her emotions on her sleeves, but half the time, she's acting. With that said, she seems to be extremely laid back. She's somewhat condescending and jokingly insults others, A LOT. Keyword is joking, as she does not seriously think these things from the bottom of her heart (does she have one?). She can adapt to just about any situation you can think of, and for the most part, isn't too shy when it comes to the opposite sex. As a psychological skill, she can detach her emotions are separately use logic and reasoning, which comes handy in many situations. This isn't to say that she cannot make an emotional decision. As a girl, she most definitely has moments where emotion overrides her (for example, if she sees a cream coloured bag for under 1000 yen. Did I mention her favourite colour is beige?). Her favorite animal is a panther, but really likes dogs too. She favours huskies among the rest, but isn't too fond of her allergic reactions that occur when occupying a space within 1 meter of a dog. Oh, she's bisexual. This personality specially manifested after possessing the Shinigami Sakusei; reasons being that she was able to fully appreciate materialistic objects when she could actually use them (humanoid body).

» The Spirit's History: i'm guessing “Is there a history to your spirit” means that it isn't required. But, just a little background: is unaware of her origins, and is not a part of any known Demon families or groups. Demon Sakusei is a original individual (but not hipster).

» Ziamichi Spirit Powers: as a demon, her abilities transform the body of the Shinigami Sakusei with each stage.

Some abilities that the Spirit has granted the host without transformation is:

nigh-clairvoyance: basically, she's just aware of her surroundings to extremely small details.
Teleportation: only possible in dire situations. She has no control over this, and is automatically teleported to another area. The maximum distance she can teleport is 3500 kilometers. Any solid object that touches her is teleported with her, so if an enemy is contacting her right when she teleports, she's pretty much screwed. This would happen in the moment she was to die (after being roughed up severely. Teleportation does not apply when she is about to be insta-killed). Furthermore, the teleportation skill can only be used once. She must be replenished to full health again, and once again beaten to near death for teleportation to become activated again.

Demon Spells: she is especially proficient with Demon Spells. They make up for her lack of strength/speed (pretty much any form of athleticism is absent in her. She is of course much faster/stronger than the fastest/strongest among 'not so special beings', but among those with supernatural talents, not so much).

Stage 1: It is referred to as mental release. The only physical change given are moogle ears. With each transformation, Sakusei gets cuter and cuter. The first ability she is granted with this is minor precognition, where she is able to tell the near future by 2 seconds, only when she puts her entire focus into it. Because of that, her clairvoyance ability will not be useful during this time, and she is basically unable to use her other senses effectively. The second, and last, ability she is granted is minor psionic abilities. At this stage, only telekinesis and minor telepathic communication.

Stage 2: Referred to as just Second Release. She gains a pom pom that's attached to the top of her head by a small, indestructible thread that always manages to curl towards whatever position her head is pointed it at (if she stans straight, that's where the thread goes towards; if her head is pointed in a horizontal position, say to the left, that's where the thread will go towards). Her ability of precognition is furthered slightly, allowing her to use clairvoyance while using precognition (still only 2 seconds max). Also, her psionic abilities are furthered as well, and she can use minor mind reading as an ability. If the person she reads is at anytime aware of their mind being read, she must disconnect. The chances of a person aware of mental invasion is probably low, as this ability isn't (i'm assuming) common. Also, she develops faster regeneration, not yet achieving instant regeneration, but still rather high (probably 70% faster than normal? Feel free to dumb this down if you think 70% is too much.) If having stage 2 as a starter is too much, I'd understand if she couldn't use this yet.

Stage 3: Referred to as Mid-release. She gains moogle wings as well as enhanced effectiveness with Demon Spells. Similar to Zanpakutō's Shikai ability, although not as powerful. Probably just a 30-50% boost. Her psionics enhance too. At Stage 3, she can preform mental attacks, sending telepathic waves on different frequencies, and disrupting focus, motor skills; essentially impairing brain function. Effectiveness of this ability depends on the targets resistance, mental capabilities, etc..

I plan to make more stages, but that's all I can come up with for now. I hope that's okay.

» Role Play Sample: I usually just adapt to whatever way the RP I'm joining does it:

As a single stream of blood ran down from the left side of her lips, she smirked, inferring insult to the attacking assailant. “Was that a love tap?” Her eyes were set on a male; approximately 5'11 and 200 lbs.
“If he was to attack, only three ways are possible; from the left, right, and front. Any diagonal strikes would be too risky, as the trajectory of my blade unsheathing could block any attack he could dish out. If he were to attack from his right, a vertical strike starting from the bottom would be most logical, and from my right, a horizontal swing would be natural.” These mental calculations ran through her mind, and a wide grin shortly followed.
Three syllables flowed out her mouth, as her lips moved in a way one could clearly guess what she said. “First Release”.
The leaves of the Sakura trees from all around them rustled, as the straight road, starting from a black gated fence and seemingly ending after curving downwards, into a valley, became invisible to the eye, as the colour 'pink' was slathered upon the ground.
A dark presence began to fill the scene, while the young woman known as Sakusei released the hilts of the twin blades resting on her back. Her body language, which rarely showed anything, hinted a sense of ease in her.
Suddenly, a pair of furry ears popped out of her sleek, violet hair, and what seemed to be a frightening occurrence, quickly turned into any Otaku's dream come true: an attractive girl with pointy animal ears.
Expecting an infatuated expression showing on her target's face, she quickly took initiative and unsheathed her swords, knowing that speed was most definitely one of her weaknesses.

This is my first character, so the template might not be filled out with high-quality, but it certainly was a fun experience and most definitely a well thought out piece of work. A small request is that, since tiers represent one's , and Sakusei has an especially low amount, could you put her tier level at 4/5? It said that the Ziamichi's would automatically be put at 2/3 tier (unless I misread), but it seems to be out of character for her, and I would enjoy people underestimating her abilities. I, of course, wouldn't mind if she had the capabilities of someone at tier 2/3, but in terms of title and label (and pretty much only as a label and title), perhaps you could keep her at tier 4/5? Just a request, so I'm fine with it not being that way.

Also, as a special demon ability for her:

Name: Kyomu Sen (Nothingness Ray)
Who Can Use it: anybody who understands the logic behind transcendence of physics (they must realise, there is no logic in transcending physics. It's ultimately for people who understand that not everything has to be complicated. If this is accepted, please leave out this part in parenthesis. I feel like it's important for the people to figure it out). Naturally, as a demon spell, It is preferred that only demons are able to use this.
Type: Offensive
Prayer:N/A
Effects: it's similar to cero, where skilled people can use it anywhere, but it's mainly used in one place (it's generally a small line that generates 3 inches forward of the forehead). The difference is that it's nearly unblockable. A relatively high level of defense is required to block this attack. Obviously, the higher the tier, the harder it is to block. The limited part about it is that it's slow; slow enough for any person without shunpo or any type of speed enhancing ability to dodge. Even if you don't have anything like shunpo, if you were more than 30 meters away from the initial blast, a supernatural being without speed enhancing abilities, you could still pretty much dodge. The ray is really thin (circumference is about 5) and hard to keep up, but more skilled people could, of course, use it more efficiently. There is no effect on the person when using this ability, unless they go over the amount they can use. This ability begins to damage the user's body, and can't be healed with instant regeneration. The amount of time it takes to heal the damages received from over usage should be equal to the regeneration rate of the user's base form.
Notes: the amount of usage for this ability should be equal to or slightly above the amount of times cero can be used (regular cero). I'd say 3 times max for someone tier 4.


Willpower/Determination: Adept
Mental Deduction: Advanced
Pain Endurance: Adept
Focus: Advanced


General Skills For Host

• Durability: Adept
  
• General Speed: Beginner
  
• Strength: Beginner
  
• Weapon Skill: Advanced

Racial Skills For Host 

• Hoho: Beginner
  
• Kidō: Advanced
  
• Zanjutsu: Advanced
  
• Hakuda: Beginner
  

Ziamichi Skills For Host

• Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Beginner
  
• Control Over Spirit: Beginner
  
• Seal Strength: Advanced
  
• Sync-Rate: Advanced
  

Will Skills For Host

• Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  
• Mental Deduction: Beginner
  
• Pain Endurance: Beginner
  
• Focus: Beginner 
  

The Spirit's Skills
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General Skills For Spirit

• Durability: Adept
  
• General Speed: Beginner
  
• Strength: Beginner
  
• Weapon Skill: Advanced

• Za Koa Skill:/Advanced
  
• Demon Magic: Advanced
  
• Shadow Movement: Beginner
  
• Akuma Kyōdo: Beginner
  

Will Skills For Spirit

• Willpower/Determination: Adept
  
• Mental Deduction: Advanced
  
• Pain Endurance: Adept
  
• Focus: Advanced 
  

I just realised that this thread is in the wrong Forum. If it wouldn't be a problem, could someone perhaps move it?

I think I fixed everything! Ready for another check

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCKYEEAAH I'm really over-excited about this.

Just one quick question: where do I start out at?

Ziamichi Will Skills
Willpower/Determination: Adept
Mental Deduction: Advanced
Pain Endurance: Beginner
Focus: Adept

Ziamichi Tier: 3-2-
Ziamichi Rank: E-

Lio. You're getting a whuppin' later. When I find ya. '_'

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