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ARRANCAR

GENETICS

Character Name: Akane Suzume Mischevang

Character True Age: Only about 250

Character Appearance Age: Akane looks to be in her middle teens.

Character Gender: Female

Orientation: Akane serves under her older sister, Ashlei.

Personality:
Akane is often viewed as a considerably bad-mouthed, sarcastic young teen. Regardless of the situation (minus the presence of an adult), Akane won't hesitate to swear her pretty little mouth out. Being quite temperamental, when Akane becomes angry, a string iof insults almost becomes an expectation. Akane is often the type to jump to conclusions easily, though this is usually only with Ultimos and Rihiku; regardless, they are often responsible in some way, shape, or form. As a result of her temperamental nature, Akane can also become quite violent and abusive, namely by hurling punches at people.

As vulgar and abusive as she may seem, however, Akane still has a soft side for a number of people. As Ashlei is her only sibling and a very timid person, Akane is very protective over the older twin, often taking Ashlei's side in an argument just to defend her. Should anyone tease or harass Ashlei, Akane would be either the first to know or the only one to go to great lengths to find out. As attached to Ashlei as she may be, however, Akane also has a soft spot for stronger males; still harboring what has become more than simply a crush, Akane would do nearly anything to help them. When one is able to clamber into Akane's good books, they will certainly be in for a very strong friendship.

GENETIC LOOKS

Appearance:
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Akane's usual outfit is shown in the pictures above...in fact, it's her only outfit style.
Bone Appearance: Akane's bone remnants are quite hard to see. In fact, if she masked her reitsu signature, it would be impossible to tell that she was an arrancar. The remnants are a pair of flower-like hairpins on the side of her head.

Reitsu Colour: Akane's reitsu is dual-layered and the colors are a bright crimson with a royal blue outline

ZANPAKUTÔ

Sealed Zanpakutô: It takes the form of a pair of red gloves.

Racial Abilities:
  • Bala (虚弾 (バラ), bara; Spanish for "Bullet," Japanese for "Hollow Bullet") Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal Cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twenty-fold speed.

  • Cero (虚閃 (セロ), sero; Spanish for "Zero," Japanese for "Hollow Flash," "Doom Blast" in the Viz translation) are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Gillians, Adjuchas, Arrancar, and the Visored have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently. Akane's ceros are salmon pink.

  • Garganta (黒腔 (ガルガンタ), garuganta; Spanish for "Throat," Japanese for "Black Cavity") is how Arrancar and Menos-class Hollows move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tōsen, Kisuke Urahara and Mayuri Kurotsuchi have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

  • Hierro (鋼皮 (イエロ), iero; Spanish for "Iron," Japanese for "Steel Skin") refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakutō bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar generally have proportionally stronger skin than usual.

  • Negación (反膜 (ネガシオン), negashion; Spanish for "Negation," Japanese for "Anti-Membrane") are energy fields are used to rescue fellow Hollows. Only the Gillian-class Menos have shown the ability to use it. Negación fields surround a target in a square beam of light that isolates the target from the dimension they are currently in, making it impossible to harm them. The field then pulls the target towards the Menos that created the field.

  • Caja Negación (反膜の匪 (カハ・ネガシオン), kaha negashion; Spanish for "Negation Box," Japanese for "Anti-Membrane of Negation") meant to simulate Negación fields, which are used to punish their subordinates if necessary. The cube, when used on a subject, traps them in an alternate dimension from which there is no escape; however, this assumes it is being used as intended. More powerful Arrancar, namely the Espada themselves, can escape given enough time.

  • Pesquisa (探査回路 (ペスキサ), pesukisa; Spanish for "Inquiry," Japanese for "Probe Circuit") is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions very similarly to sonar.

  • Sonído (響転 (ソニード), sonīdo; Spanish for "Sound," Japanese for "Sound Ceremony") is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami Flash Steps and the Quincy Hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of Sonído is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound caused by Flash Steps.

  • Gemelos Sonído (双児響転 (ヘメロス・ソニード), Hemerosu Sonīdo; Spanish for "Sound Twins", Japanese for "Twins Sound Ceremony"): It allows Akane to create clone-like afterimages of herself. Up to seven clones can be created using this technique.

  • Gran Rey Cero (王虚の閃光 (グラン・レイ・セロ), guran rei sero; Spanish for "Grand King Zero", Japanese for "Royal Hollow Flash") is a Cero that only Espada are capable of using. It is performed by mixing an Espada's own blood with the Cero. The result is a Cero with a much greater attack power and speed as well as a change of color unique to the Espada. It is also many times more powerful than a normal Cero, capable of disturbing the fabric of space, it also seems to spin like a razor upon release as it compresses and decompresses due to the sheer speed and raw power. It is a drastically potent Cero, used only by the Espada themselves. Akane's Gran Rey is a reverse of her reitsu's color.

  • Llamas Carmesí Cero (Spanish for crimson flame zero; Japanese for Burning Crimson Hollow Flash) : This is one of Akane's special Ceros. By condensing her flame-like Reitsu into a ball, she then fire the Cero, which acts and looks like a spiraling tube of fire. It's said that this is a customized Gran Rey, since she has yet to learn Oscuras.
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  • Gran Terremoto (Spanish for Great Earthquake; Japanese for Royal Terror): This is a special type of punch by Akane. She condenses all of her reitsu into her left hand (despite being ambidextrious) and then punches the ground in below her. However, it is only good for anti-building attacks. It creates a series of small explosions among the wall of the building and thus the building will collapse.
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  • Gran Aglomeración (Spanish for Great Crush; Japanese for Royal Angle): Another special type of punch by Akane. She will condense her reitsu into her right hand (despite being ambidextrious) and will punch an object in front of her. If she punches a person (of a lower tier) or animal, she could easily break bones. If against a wall, it will penetrate as if someone shot a 120mm shell through it.
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RESSERECCION

Resurrección Name: Benitsubasa (Crimson Wings)



Resurrección Release Phrase: The release command is Despidida '(lit. Spanish for Farewell). However, she has been said to have four release commands: Kuso Kurae, Bakayarou! (Fuck off, you dumb bastard), Kutabare Kono Ama! (Fuck you, you bitch!), and Notare Jine! (go die in a ditch).

Release Actions: To release her zanpakuto Akane punches her fists together and then a spiral of blue and crimson fire surrounds her.

Resurrección Appearance: Resurrección: In her Resurrección, her fists glow slightly. That is the only change to her appearance.

Resurrección Abilities:

  • Cero Estellas (Spanish for "Stars Zero"): It is a white cero that takes the form of a 7-pointed star. Each point is able to be controlled and each fires off a beam in rapid succession for a total of 5 shots per point, then the center fires off a massive beam to end the attack.

  • Physical Augumentation: As Akane herself describes it, her old Resurrección removes all of the limits on a "human" body, enhancing her physical abilities. Her strength and speed are raised to the point where even most expert Bankai users struggle to keep up and fight with her. But what she considers is the most useful feature of her form is the enhancement of stamina and the increased relaxation rate of inner organs (increased rate of oxygen absorption, decreased muscle stress rate). In this manner, she is capable of sustaining herself in combat much longer than she could in her sealed state.

  • Cero Pintor (ゼロ画家, Zero Gaka, Spanish/Japanese for Zero Painter) is Akane's enhanced version of her regular Cero. She appears to fire it from her own fists, the sphere of energy appearing a few inches away from it. At first, when fired, it seems like nothing more than a harmless laser. But once it connects with its target, the compressed energy is released. The resulting explosion is enough to disintegrate almost anything that it comes in contact with, though not entirely. Even equal tier opponents need to avoid this attack under fear of disintegration.

  • Cero Pintor: Eterna Lluvia (ゼロ画家: 永遠の雨, Zero Gaka; Spanish/Japanese for Zero Painter: Eternal Rain): A heightened variant of Cero Pintor. Instead of one single laser, a barrage of lasers are fired from the fingertip like an automatic machine gun. Their power, individually, is less than the original Cero Pintor's, but they are still potent enough to disintegrate much lower-tier opponents who are careless enough to get hit by it. When at least one explodes, the size matches half of a skyscraper's width. Anyone caught in this barrage will have extreme difficulty in avoiding it, even more so due to Akane's ability to change the direction of her finger and keep firing. There is a weakness, however. Eterna Lluvia's recoil when being unleashed causes Akane's arm to shake violently, hindering accuracy. Continuous use will result in the immobilization of the arm she is firing from, as well as a severe exhaust of energy.

DUES EX RESSERECION

Dues Ex Name:
(what name does the second resserecion go by?)

Dues Ex Release Phrase:
(what do they say to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Release Actions:
(what do they do to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Appearance:
(describe what their Dues Ex Segunda looks like)

Dues Ex Abilities:


SKILLS

(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)

Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

PAST

History:
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"Hate....it drives us ALL."
Akane doesn't remember much of her childhood. In fact, the earliest she can remember to is only age ten. Akane, much like her sister, was really just surrounded by bad luck. Akane doesn't remember her original name, but the story of Akane's name will be told later and she'll be referred to as Akane in this history as well as Ashlei being reffered to as Ashlei instead of many of her other names.

While Ashlei was a reitsu container, Akane had little reitsu herself. However, she did have something odd...she was constantly mimicking the reitsu of the strongest source nearby. Most of the time, it was Ashlei. This caused Hollows to storm at her as well, though not even close to the same amount as the ones attacking Ashlei. Eventually that ability went away, but another came in its place.

People sometimes claim that when they pass by lamp posts, they will turn off and when they walk away they turn back on. This was caused by an electric-type reitsu around them. The mimicking reitsu disappeared but an electric-type took its place. It wasn't fun for Akane. She would see people die in horrible car accidents because her reitsu affected the traffic signals. However, she was doing this without knowing, so there is actually no way to say whether it was her or not. In fact, the cause of her death is a good example.

A bullet train used to run through their village's outskirts. One day, Akane was crossing the tracks and out of nowhere, a train slammed into her. Only her shoes and feet were left on the ground. There had been a massive electrical surge and it had turned the train from going on the main line to the scenic route. What was worse was that there was a train coming the opposite direction....so the two collided, with what was left of Akane in the middle. The worst part? She survived the initial impact with the one train.

Akane never met a Shinigami. Thus, she became a hollow. She looked almost like a boxer. The mask had a few protrusions that covered her eyes slightly. Her fists, however, were massive. One fist was half of the size of a minivan. Her punches could crumble buildings, gaining her hollow name of "Crumbles." Akane disliked that nickname and would kill anyone who called her that. She wandered within the depths of the icelands of Siberia until she heard that there was a shift in power in Hueco Mundo.

Akane had once met Sosuke Aizen. However, she did join him because he looked a lot like the Captain's son. Soon after meeting him, she returned to isolation within Siberia. While there, she'd tear hollows apart and eat half of them. The other half went into a pile that she kept behind her. Of course, this drew a rogue Arrancar to her area. The two entered combat and only by the Arrancar's mistake of trying to block one of her punches she was able to beat him. Before he could do anything, she bit him in half. This time, however, she ate both halves.

Akane's power increased. She became an Adjuchas...and a strong one at that. Over the next 200 years, she kept fighting rogue hollows and arrancar, eventually becoming a threat to the Espada. When Ashlei sent one of her Espada to deal with Akane, the Espada recognized a resemblance in their reitsu. He brought the two sisters back together. Of course, it wasn't as simple as that. Ashlei did not originally believe that this hollow was her sister, and she sent her away into the desert. However, as she disappeared she said something, that neither remember now, but it was something that the two sisters had said to one another long ago.

Akane disappeared within the desert and met up with a band of adjuchas. Of course, they didn't take her seriously and a brawl broke out. Akane was able to take a good bit of them on, but there were simply too many of them. Ashlei had set out herself to find Akane, but she was almost too late to save her. Right as one of the Adjuchas was about to rip Akane in half, Ashlei used a Gran Rey Cero and bifrucated the hollow.

The hollows scattered and Ashlei and Akane were left together. Ashlei asked of her life while living and Akane told her all she remembered. A teary-eyed Ashlei punched Akane's mask in, making it shatter. Because it was hollow reitsu that broke the mask, she was able to mutate into an arrancar. The two embraced one another for about ten minutes, and then Ashlei asked her name. Akane said she had none, and because of the color of her hair Ashlei gave her the name Akane. Akane soon swore that she would protect Ashlei, since she had saved her life.


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ARRANCAR

GENETICS

Character Name: Akane Suzume Mischevang

Character True Age: Only about 250 as a Hollow, though she is truly about 470 years old.

Character Appearance Age: Akane looks to be in her middle teens.

Character Gender: Female

Orientation: Akane serves under her older sister, Ashlei.

Personality:
Akane is often viewed as a considerably bad-mouthed, sarcastic young teen. Regardless of the situation (minus the presence of an adult), Akane won't hesitate to swear her pretty little mouth out. Being quite temperamental, when Akane becomes angry, a string iof insults almost becomes an expectation. Akane is often the type to jump to conclusions easily, though this is usually only with Ultimos and Rihiku; regardless, they are often responsible in some way, shape, or form. As a result of her temperamental nature, Akane can also become quite violent and abusive, namely by hurling punches at people.

As vulgar and abusive as she may seem, however, Akane still has a soft side for a number of people. As Ashlei is her only sibling and a very timid person, Akane is very protective over the older twin, often taking Ashlei's side in an argument just to defend her. Should anyone tease or harass Ashlei, Akane would be either the first to know or the only one to go to great lengths to find out. As attached to Ashlei as she may be, however, Akane also has a soft spot for stronger males; still harboring what has become more than simply a crush, Akane would do nearly anything to help them. When one is able to clamber into Akane's good books, they will certainly be in for a very strong friendship.

GENETIC LOOKS

Appearance:
Spoiler:

Akane's usual outfit is shown in the pictures above...in fact, it's her only outfit style.
Bone Appearance: Akane's bone remnants are quite hard to see. In fact, if she masked her reitsu signature, it would be impossible to tell that she was an arrancar. The remnants are a pair of flower-like hairpins on the side of her head.

Reitsu Colour: Akane's reitsu is dual-layered and the colors are a bright crimson with a royal blue outline

ZANPAKUTÔ

Sealed Zanpakutô: It takes the form of a pair of red gloves.

Racial Abilities:

  • Bala (虚弾 (バラ), bara; Spanish for "Bullet," Japanese for "Hollow Bullet") Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal Cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twenty-fold speed.
  • Cero (虚閃 (セロ), sero; Spanish for "Zero," Japanese for "Hollow Flash," "Doom Blast" in the Viz translation) are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Gillians, Adjuchas, Arrancar, and the Visored have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently. Akane's ceros are salmon pink.
  • Garganta (黒腔 (ガルガンタ), garuganta; Spanish for "Throat," Japanese for "Black Cavity") is how Arrancar and Menos-class Hollows move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tōsen, Kisuke Urahara and Mayuri Kurotsuchi have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.
  • Hierro (鋼皮 (イエロ), iero; Spanish for "Iron," Japanese for "Steel Skin") refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakutō bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar generally have proportionally stronger skin than usual.
  • Negación (反膜 (ネガシオン), negashion; Spanish for "Negation," Japanese for "Anti-Membrane") are energy fields are used to rescue fellow Hollows. Only the Gillian-class Menos have shown the ability to use it. Negación fields surround a target in a square beam of light that isolates the target from the dimension they are currently in, making it impossible to harm them. The field then pulls the target towards the Menos that created the field.
  • Caja Negación (反膜の匪 (カハ・ネガシオン), kaha negashion; Spanish for "Negation Box," Japanese for "Anti-Membrane of Negation") meant to simulate Negación fields, which are used to punish their subordinates if necessary. The cube, when used on a subject, traps them in an alternate dimension from which there is no escape; however, this assumes it is being used as intended. More powerful Arrancar, namely the Espada themselves, can escape given enough time.
  • Pesquisa (探査回路 (ペスキサ), pesukisa; Spanish for "Inquiry," Japanese for "Probe Circuit") is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions very similarly to sonar.
  • Sonído (響転 (ソニード), sonīdo; Spanish for "Sound," Japanese for "Sound Ceremony") is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami Flash Steps and the Quincy Hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of Sonído is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound caused by Flash Steps.
  • Gemelos Sonído (双児響転 (ヘメロス・ソニード), Hemerosu Sonīdo; Spanish for "Sound Twins", Japanese for "Twins Sound Ceremony"): It allows Akane to create clone-like afterimages of himself. Up to seven clones can be created using this technique.
    Himself?
  • Gran Rey Cero (王虚の閃光 (グラン・レイ・セロ), guran rei sero; Spanish for "Grand King Zero", Japanese for "Royal Hollow Flash") is a Cero that only Espada are capable of using. It is performed by mixing an Espada's own blood with the Cero. The result is a Cero with a much greater attack power and speed as well as a change of color unique to the Espada. It is also many times more powerful than a normal Cero, capable of disturbing the fabric of space, it also seems to spin like a razor upon release as it compresses and decompresses due to the sheer speed and raw power. It is a drastically potent Cero, used only by the Espada themselves. Akane's Gran Rey is a reverse of her reitsu's color.
  • Gran Rey Impacto Cañón Cero (roughly Grand King Impact Cannon Zero) is a special form of Cero only useable by Arrancar and high-level Vizards that have specifically trained for it. It is ranked "level zero" because it is unlike any other Cero. It does not explode, and it deals no external damage. It is a heightened form of Cero, useable only by a master. Only the strongest can hope to add it to their arsenal. To perform it, the user clenches their hands into fists and presses their knuckles flat against the enemy's body. They then release a burst of Cero energy from each fist that passes through the enemy's skin, dealing no external damage, and directly attacks the enemy's insides. Being attacked by this Cero technique can make one ache so much that they are doubled over in extreme pain, and is described as being like "trauma". Using it on a limb, such as an arm or leg, can leave the muscles so damaged that the limb goes numb. When used on the torso, the victim can sometimes begin to cough up blood from the internal damage. However, the technique is also dangerous to the user. Using it even once can leave the user extremely winded, panting and gasping for air. Firing it repeatedly can put the user in physical pain. It is the ultimate Cero attack, but using it is extremely risky. While the technique is traditionally used by pressing the user's fists flat against the victim, the bursts of Cero energy actually travel through the air about a foot from the user's fists. But despite this distance, it is almost exclusively close-quarters. She is able to sheath her fists with spiritual energy, augmenting the amount of damage that her punches inflict
    This ability sounds way too powerful right now accompanied by the number of powers you have given Akane. Even Ashlei does not perform this move but she can use the Cero Diablo which Akane will have permission to use. Her position won't be high enough to use this ability and its making her seem OP
  • One of her abilities is strange, she has stated that if she cuts a male (of any sexuality) on their body, she can manipulate their hormones, causing them to become highly attracted to her and thus lose focus on the battle. She has also stated that the more reiatsu her male opponent has, the more powerful her control over their hormones. This ability has two holes in it. The first and most obvious is, it won't work on females at all. The second one, is that if her male opponent has low reiatsu levels, she has a weaker hold on them, this means that she can either: one, not have enough control, or two, lose control after a few minutes.[/url]
    So if this hit Rihiku of whom has shit loads of reitsu, he will be completely controlled? The more reitsu they have makes it seem as though taking down zero tiers with this a walk in the park. Becuase of this, the power needs either removing or rewording
  • Llamas Carmesí Cero (Spanish for crimson flame zero; Japanese for Burning Crimson Hollow Flash) : This is one of Akane's special Ceros. By condensing her flame-like Reitsu into a ball, she then fire the Cero, which acts and looks like a spiraling tube of fire. It's said that this is a customized Gran Rey, since she has yet to learn Oscuras.
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  • Gran Terremoto (Spanish for Great Earthquake; Japanese for Royal Terror): This is a special type of punch by Akane. She condenses all of her reitsu into her left hand (despite being ambidextrious) and then punches the ground in below her. However, it is only good for anti-building attacks. It creates a series of small explosions among the wall of the building and thus the building will collapse.
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  • Gran Aglomeración (Spanish for Great Crush; Japanese for Royal Angle): Another special type of punch by Akane. She will condense her reitsu into her right hand (despite being ambidextrious) and will punch an object in front of her. If she punches a person or animal, she could easily break bones. If against a wall, it will penetrate as if someone shot a 120mm shell through it.
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    WHen you say this could break bones, of whom are we hitting? A normal human or someone of great power? Explain that note a bit



RESSERECCION

Resurrección Name: Benitsubasa (Crimson Wings)



Resurrección Release Phrase: The release command is Despidida '(lit. Spanish for Farewell). However, she has been said to have four release commands: Kuso Kurae, Bakayarou! (Fuck off, you dumb bastard), Kutabare Kono Ama! (Fuck you, you bitch!), and Notare Jine! (go die in a ditch).

Release Actions: To release her zanpakuto Akane punches her fists together and then a spiral of blue and crimson fire surrounds her.

Resurrección Appearance: Resurrección: In her Resurrección, her fists glow slightly. That is the only change to her appearance.

Resurrección Abilities:

  • Cero Estellas (Spanish for "Stars Zero"): It is a white cero that takes the form of a 7-pointed star. Each point is able to be controlled and each fires off a beam in rapid succession, then the center fires off a massive beam.
    What? I dont even understand what this means. The points shoot off and then the entire thing or?.... what? -is clueless-
  • Dom Caída (Spanish for Sun Fall): Akane focuses the light of the sun onto the opponent before magnifying the intensity of the heat. The magnitude of this technique is capable of instantly incinerating an opponent that doesn't have a proper defence even capable of putting out other fires
    the way this is worded is again overpowered. Incinerating instantly is OP, and giving no sort of example of a targets tier makes me think your incinerating everything without fire resistance.
  • Dom Caída Cero (Spanish for Sun Fall Zero): By combining is cero with her Dom Caida Akane is able to produce a much higher variant of the Cero that focuses more on burning through an opponent rather than explosive force.
    Even stronger than instant Incineration?
  • Escenas Graves (Spanish for Grave Scene): Akane pulls down medium sized meteor fragments with tremendous force used to surround the enemy and pin them down before crushing them beneath the sheer numbers.
    So your pulling space rock from space... that wuld take ages
  • Physical Augumentation: As Akane herself describes it, her old Resurrección removes all of the limits on a "human" body, enhancing her physical abilities. Her strength and speed are raised to the point where even most expert Bankai users struggle to keep up and fight with her. But what she considers is the most useful feature of her form is the enhancement of stamina and the increased relaxation rate of inner organs (increased rate of oxygen absorption, decreased muscle stress rate). In this manner, she is capable of sustaining herself in combat much longer than she could in her sealed state.
  • Cero Pintor (ゼロ画家, Zero Gaka, Spanish/Japanese for Zero Painter) is Akane's enhanced version of her regular Cero. She appears to fire it from her own forehead, the sphere of energy appearing a few inches away from it. At first, when fired, it seems like nothing more than a harmless laser. But once it connects with its target, the compressed energy is released. The resulting explosion is enough to disintegrate almost anything that it consumes. Even extremely strong opponents need to avoid this attack under fear of disintegration.
    Another overpowered cero?
  • Cero Pintor: Eterna Lluvia (ゼロ画家: 永遠の雨, Zero Gaka; Spanish/Japanese for Zero Painter: Eternal Rain): A heightened variant of Cero Pintor. Instead of one single laser, a barrage of lasers are fired from the fingertip like an automatic machine gun. Their power, individually, is less than the original Cero Pintor's, but they are still potent enough to disintegrate opponents who are careless enough to get hit by it. When at least one explodes, the size matches half of a skyscraper's width. Anyone caught in this barrage will have extreme difficulty in avoiding it, even more so due to Akane's ability to change the direction of her finger and keep firing. There is a weakness, however. Eterna Lluvia's recoil when being unleashed causes Akane's arm to shake violently, hindering accuracy. Continuous use may result in the immobilization of the arm she is firing from, as well as a severe exhaust of energy.
    Yet another stronger version of an OP cero?

DUES EX RESSERECION

Dues Ex Name:
(what name does the second resserecion go by?)

Dues Ex Release Phrase:
(what do they say to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Release Actions:
(what do they do to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Appearance:
(describe what their Dues Ex Segunda looks like)

Dues Ex Abilities:


SKILLS

(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)

Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

PAST

History:
"Hate....it drives us ALL."
Akane doesn't remember much of her childhood. In fact, the earliest she can remember to is only age ten. That was some time in 1937. She was in Imperial Japan, and it was a brutal place. She had an older sibling, named Saya. Saya was only a few years older than Akane, but Akane looked up to Saya. She has tried to ask Ashlei about her past, but she will not speak of it.

According to Ashlei, however, Akane wasn't a perfect child. Akane was often beaten by their drunkard father until she became 13. When she turned thirteen, her father started to sexually abuse her. Not rape, but he would molest her almost every night. This was until their mother found out. The father disappeared with a few hours. It was unknown what happened to him. Akane, Saya/Ashlei, and their mother left their hometown and moved north. Unfortunately, the Soviet army appeared and took the women hostage. They were taken back to a waiting battleship. Akane and Ashlei were seperated. Akane was for some time married to the Captain, albiet illegally.

One night, she snapped the Captain's neck and ran outside and tried to lower a life raft. Unfortunately, a guard noticed the Captain's limp body and caught Akane before she got down the hall. Akane stood resilient until the bitter end. Because the Captain was well liked, they took turns shooting her arms. Before she passed out from blood loss, the Captain's son appeared and had her hang inside of a sack from a metal pole over the side of the ship for a few days. She was miraculously alive after two days. In a last ditch effort to kill her, they tossed her in the boiler of the ship. She died instantly. Not of the fire, but she hit her head on the edge of the boiler. Her spirit was full of vengence. She became a poltergeist and sabotaged the ship. Ashlei and her mother were able to escape safely and their story split from Akane's. Akane haunted the Captain's son until he comitted suicide after he was freaking out over things Akane was doing.

Akane never met a Shinigami. Thus, she became a hollow. She looked almost like a boxer. The mask had a few protrusions that covered her eyes slightly. Her fists, however, were massive. One fist was half of the size of a minivan. Her punches could crumble buildings, gaining her hollow name of "Crumbles." Akane disliked that nickname and would kill anyone who called her that. She wandered within the depths of the icelands of Siberia until she heard that there was a shift in power in Hueco Mundo.

Akane had once met Sosuke Aizen. However, she did join him because he looked a lot like the Captain's son. Soon after meeting him, she returned to isolation within Siberia. While there, she'd tear hollows apart and eat half of them. The other half went into a pile that she kept behind her. Of course, this drew a rogue Arrancar known as Arturo Pladeato to her area. The two entered combat and only by Arturo's mistake of trying to block one of her punches she was able to beat him. Before he could do anything, she bit him in half. This time, however, she ate both halves.

Akane's power increased. She became an Adjuchas...and a strong one at that. Over the next 200 years, she kept fighting rogue hollows and arrancar, eventually becoming a threat to the Espada. When Ashlei sent one of her Espada to deal with Akane, the Espada recognized a resemblance in their reitsu. He brought the two sisters back together. In a single punch, Ashlei broke Akane's mask and somehow she became an Arrancar. Currently, she is serving with her older sister.
This history is completely inaccurate to what Ashlei has been through. Make sure you have read her history so it actually makes sense. Ashlei was never taken to a Ship, she wasn't even called Ashlei until she became an Arrancar, and the final note is that Arturo Plateado is an OP 0-0+ character so killing him in lesser hollow form would be impossible as you would be crushed just be standing next to him.

This entire history just doesn't seem like you put any work into it. Think about what your writing please as you have a lot of things to work around from both my history and the History Akane has for herself. Even the reunion with the sisters could be worded better rather than made as a simple statement.

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Mon Dec 20, 2010 3:48 pm
Should be fixed.


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Mon Dec 20, 2010 5:02 pm

Ah everything much nicer now She is viable to join the Espada guards if you wish, or an Espada herself if theres one free

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Wed Apr 06, 2011 12:59 pm
Tsubine failed hard with this app the first time. I'm surprised.
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