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General Information
Name: Malcolm Stone (aka Mr. Caveman)

Appearance Age: 30’s
Possible True Age: 26
Possible Gender: Male

Hollow type: Vasto lorde

Personality: Malcolm is a foul hollow who curses so much that he cannot make a sentence without cursing out. In his past life he is a slayer, a human chosen by a spirit or demon to fight for them or to fight for mankind, but as a hollow, he was abandoned for dead and he is deeply pissed off not at mankind...oh no, it was TelcinVohlis, his former master that pissed him off. Since his childhood, TelcinVohlis was the one who turned him into a slayer in the first place, only to enslave him for his personal gains of drawing attention away from him and onto Malcolm. He soon earned the nickname, “Mr. Caveman” which hardly affects his mood. He has a complex set of rules for him to follow;

Death is a form of disgrace.
Not to kill unless willed to kill.
Not to fight a child unless forced to.
When having sex, finish the job.
Love is a form of strength but not a reliable kind.
Women are women...they look better clothed anyway.
Men are men...they have to hold a sword, not their dick.
Children are children...they are not religious idols, they are human beings.
Jerks are jerks...they have to apply fist directly on their face, then repeat.
Sushi are good, don’t waste them!
Demons are demons, to hell with them!
Arrancar are Arrancar, they need a good book on ass-whipping.
Any arrancar is considered a traitor to Hueco Mundo and are weaker than real hollows.
A bigger stick is needed for a bigger problem...works every time.

The Hollow
(Fill out the part that your Hollow fits into and Leave out the others or remove them from the Application as they are not needed.)

Lesser Familiar Appearance:
Lesser familiar Abilities:

Gillian-Adjuchas Appearance:
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Vasto Lorde Appearance: Malcolm stands approximately seven and a half foot high as his slender body was clearly armored with occasional three foot spikes protruding from his shoulder blades, forehead, two corners of his jawbone, and from both his Achilles’ heels. The mask was featureless other than two ornate eye sockets of rubies and ambers, symbolizing ferocity beyond mere recognition. While his white, hardened hide was capable of withstanding a lot of punishment, Malcolm was naturally equipped with a bladed lance on his back made from his fallen Gillian Menos. His feet each have two toes that are crooked upward to appear reptilian while split to tear apart his foes either up or down with kicking. He only has two arms that ends with talon-like hands that each extends six fingers. The fingers are separated by threes as they are arranged like the claw in a crane game in arcades. Notably, the hands are disjointed, allowing him to twist his hands more than three-sixty degrees rotation; he can even choose to tear off his hand and toss it at his enemy’s face to blind them before growing a new one to continue fighting. The hollow hole was located in the chest as common for any other hollow, but it has teeth surrounding it like a mouth to draw spiritual energy into and it strangely oozes out amber liquid rather than black liquid. On the back of the mask, Malcolm has black hair that goes down to his lower back while some black hair (presumably the beard) appears along the jawbone of the mask. Evident from his heavy footsteps, he is fiercely strong while exhuming black aura with red outline, uncommon for a powerful hollow and a single evidence of how fierce he can be. When facing him, he stood as a living definition of ferocity and vengeance. Humorously mysterious, Malcolm has a loincloth around his pelvis. As for the voice, it is deep while hinting with steel rubbing against each other when he is speaking.
Vasto Lorde Abilities
Wild Fighter: Damage and collateral are the names of the game that Malcolm goes by. Either he hits the most enemies in one attack or causes enough destruction to use the environment to his advantage from forcing debris to fall upon the enemies or kicking debris into the enemies. Anything he can grab onto (including a tissue paper) can be turned into a weapon for him to use against the enemies. This is the reason he is the epitome of violence.

Bladed Lance: Made from the nose of a Gillian Meno, Malcolm’s weapon of choice replaced the demon sword that is now in Hanako Yadomaru Junior’s possession and takes the appearance of a white triangulated spire with one side being narrowed into a blade and jagged like a saw while the tip of it sharp enough to pierce through virtually any form of hierro. It is shaped to be a lance, but Malcolm can treat it like a Nodachi, a two-handed form of a katana that usually used by few shinigami like Captain Unohana Retsu. Generally the size of it was nine feet long and three feet wide with four feet blade depth. Considering it was made by Hollow Bone, it can deflect or stop any form of bala and cero.

Violent Cero: As Malcolm charges the cero by the hollow hole in his chest, he vibrates the air around the cero to the point that it can disorient anyone who tries to get close to him and when he fires it, he can continuously fire the cero for the next ten sentences, causing mass collateral damage up to two football fields by arc width. If he stops the cero midway, the cero is cancelled, but the damages caused remains as the result. During the firing, the cero not only vibrates the air around it to disorient enemies, it also pushes the airborne spiritual energy around it, causing a void that makes the enemies spend more energy than normal and therefore get exhausted quicker than normal and unable to maintain forms that requires spiritual energy as a constant supply. The void generally lasts four rounds and only affects those who stand in ground zero of the cero attack or in its previous path.

Furious Bala: Slower than most bala attacks, but more punishing to those who are hit by them, Furious Bala are attacks that does not hurt the enemy, but disperses spiritual energy in and around the enemy, exhausting them quickly. Depending on how much sentences were made before Malcolm chose to stop it, it fires three bolts of bala per sentence. Unlike most bala, the balas are fired from the three spikes around Malcolm’s face. The method is that the bala vibrates to the frequency, matching the spiritual energy in the air, tricking the enemy’s body into believing it was spiritual energy it can use and explodes within the enemy. It is relatively harmless, but it saps the enemy within the enemy and disperses the energy around the enemy, making it look like a frequent outbursts of spiritual pressure to others, but the enemy can pick up on the fact that his or her energy was being torn out of them with each bala that enters them. The only times it was damaging is when it was impacting the enemy who was already exhausted as it starts dispersing the spiritual life force within them. At that point, the enemy’s life is in peril while it also heals anyone close by, even the enemy’s allies.

The Reaper Leap: It is like Sonido, but it only works when “teleporting” to an injured ally or an injured enemy. Generally, Malcolm is like a predator whose hunts down injured preys and goes straight for the kill, but in technicality, it is not an attack as it is more of a handicapped flash step. The speed limit for the flash-step was up to five hundred miles per hour and anyone can sense him coming because this ability releases a high discharge of spiritual pressure when starting and makes the same discharge when arriving to the destination. To anyone who is below tier two, the discharges may cause them to lose their breath for a moment, therefore stunning them for a few precious seconds.

Ambidextrous Monkey: Malcolm can use his lance with one hand and can even switch hands for effective time management between attacks. The bladed lance on his back was a hybrid between a spear and a sword, allowing him to use it like a large sword or as a lance. Preferably, the weapon does far more damage when thrusting, but when slashing and chopping, the bladed edge of the lance can be treated as a heavy sword class, despite Malcolm’s ability to use it with one hand. He can still choose to use two hands for double the damage effectiveness, but it is just quicker for him to use one hand and being able to switch hands. With his special hands, it remains very unlikely that a captain class shinigami will be able to disarm him without chopping his hand off first due to a very strong grip and wrist strength.

Ferocious Presence: Spanning over nine blocks in diameter, Malcolm’s entrance was a fanfare with an aura that can loosen even a tier one character of their solid stance and take heed. The most noticeable feature of the aura was its capability to echo Malcolm’s shouts, making it sensibly be from all directions around the enemies. Because of that amplification, his shouts can render anyone close to him by distance virtually deaf and plagued by the bells ringing in their head (a symptom of temporary deafness.)

Unrelenting Spirit: Malcolm is capable of exceeding his own limits, allowing him to take damage, do damage and persist substantially more than some enduring fighters.

Omega-Bane Hollow Hide: Particularly rare for a hollow to develop, the Omega-Bane is a special body structure that allows Malcolm to withstand attacks and shirk off attacks that are either “one-hit wonders” or critical attacks. So pretty much even the highest form of magic will not affect him as much as others, but it is only the highest form of magic like Burning Star and Ryujin Jakka that cannot affect him at full power. Spells like Shakkaho and attacks from Getsuga Tensho can still affect him like they usually do due to their lower power level than something like the forbidden kidos.

Cursed by Fate: Malcolm was cursed by TelcinVohlis since childhood and he was freed by Hanako Yadomaru Junior by the means of a violent death, due to his undying wish to avenge his misfortune, Malcolm’s thirst transcended death and allowed him to remember who he is in the past and practically remember everything from the past, thus defying the laws of death and make Demons his eternal enemies. As eternal enemies, Malcolm can be treated like he is stronger, harder and faster than he is before whenever he fights a demon. It doubles when he fights against a Demon Lord as TelcinVohlis is a Demon Lord. He believed that he is the one who will kill TelcinVohlis and not Hanako Yadomaru Junior or her mate, Koichi Iramasha.

True to the Ways: As a Vasto Lorde, Malcolm has arrogance deeply entrenched into his mindset as he takes pride in being one of the strongest of his kind (aka the Hollows.) That pride makes Arrancar who he called, “Traitors” his enemies and weak to him. This trait allows him to fight harder against any Arrancar or Xeno Hollows. His durability, strength, and speed are increased when fighting against a normal Arrancar, doubles when facing an Espada and triples when facing a Xeno Hollow.

Defiance of God: Malcolm has an off-landish ability to ignore only one approved death application per thread, allowing him to turn the table on the enemy even if it was inevitable that he would have been killed by the finishing blow. It is like Ressureccion, but without the form or new abilities, it just fully recovers his body and put him back at full energy, even if he was crushed, maimed, minced or diced.

Eyes of Eternity: Malcolm grasps his opponent by the neck and forces them to look into his eyes, As he talks to the enemy, he implicates mental imagery that reflects from his eyes into their eyes as a personal projection. That is the only thing that this ability can truly do, but it supports his natural charisma to break his foe psychologically by telling them things that described what they feared about themselves. Like Pequisa, Malcolm’s eyes have the alternative ability of analyzing spiritual power of the foes before him and pick up on emotional content through empathy. This allows him to pick up on cues that he can exploit to prolong a distraction or to render the foe unable to continue fighting with the belief that he has them figured out somehow.

Restorative Blood: The amber liquid that oozes out of his chest was actually a special kind of blood that allows him to restore his allies by extracting his amber blood from his hollow hole by any container and having the ally drink it. It may taste like pumpkin pie with honey, but it allows the ally to fully recover his or her spiritual power and heal their wounds quicker than normal high-speed regeneration. By dabbing his finger into the amber blood and putting it on his wound, he can heal his wound, but not restore his own energy.

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Background/Roleplay Sample
Background:

  1. Malcolm is born in Georgia, United States to a family of descendants of Frank Slayers.
  2. At a child, Malcolm encountered TelcinVohlis and is marked as a new slayer.
  3. As a young man, he graduated from high school and left the country to become a slayer.
  4. He soon earned the nickname for his destructive manner and reputation as a world-class terrorist.
  5. He was killed by Hanako Yadomaru Junior in Chaos Island and was buried in Karakura Graveyard as commemoration for his hidden heroism.
  6. Free of his mark, Malcolm for a short time slept peacefully, but the curse by TelcinVohlis turned him into a Hollow.
  7. As a lesser hollow, his immense willpower overpowered his primal needs and he finds TelcinVohlis again, only to be dragged to Hueco Mundo.
  8. In the Forest of Menos, Malcolm was left there presumably to die permanently, but he contradicted the prediction through raw willpower.
  9. He began fighting the other lesser hollows and even a few Gillian menos along the way.
  10. He eventually improved his spiritual pressure to the point that he was ambushed and forced to become a Gillian.
  11. While trapped in a Gillian, Malcolm made a simple vow; to scratch and crawl his way back to the world of the living and take revenge.
  12. He soon fought to the top and took over the entire Gillian and continues his war against the hollows.
  13. One by one, Gillian Menos fell before his powerful cero attacks and...Head-butting as the lesser hollows are slapped and crushed.
  14. With each segments of victories, Malcolm shrunk in size, depicting evolution through constant fighting.
  15. He soon became an Adjucha Menos.
  16. Seeing Malcolm as a problem to their strength, other Adjuchas began uproar with challenges against Malcolm.
  17. One by one, Gillian, Adjucha and lesser hollows are decimated by the quicker and stronger Malcolm.
  18. As he fought against a constant horde and hid away from other hordes, Malcolm survives long enough to show signs of evolution.
  19. During this time, Malcolm earned the reputation by fear and grudge for his prowess in combat, even under constant attacks.
  20. Soon, he became a Vasto Lorde under record time.
  21. After becoming a Vasto Lorde, he is still subjected to attacks, but manages to hold his own.
  22. Some Arrancar recognized his strength and tries to recruit him by force, but they perished as he called them, “Traitors.”
  23. Later on, he pursued an arrancar out of the forest and onto the white sands of Hueco Mundo.
  24. Using a Garganta that was left opened by an Espada, Malcolm escaped Hueco Mundo and traveled to Karakura.
  25. Now in the World of the Living, Malcolm began his path as both the enemy of the Espada and the Guardians of the lands.
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  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
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Skill Sheets

Durability: Advanced
General Speed: Advanced
Strength: Master
Weapon Use: Adept

Hierro: Master
Cero/Bala: Advanced
Sonido: Advanced
Pequisa: Adept


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