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Raiki
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Sun Sep 12, 2010 1:52 pm
ARRANCAR

GENETICS

Character Name: Zefonse


Character True Age: over 20,000


Character Appearance Age: 23


Character Gender: Male


Orientation: 2nd Espada



Personality: He doesn’t care about much in life or death, being alive for so long makes him feel rather empty, only in fighting he is “alive“ existing only to fight to the fullest of every thing. He is smart in battle able to look at the area and think of the outcome‘s. Has a habit of saying “KSH” In fight’s, he follow’s his order’s well to the point and teeth. He does hold a warm spot for children and wont risk fighting in place that might harm them. He goes to great length’s to make sure that the fight goes’ on for a long time. He enjoys spicy food, mostly Mexican, he hates sweet‘s for some odd reason, and has bad luck with bird’s which he can never figure out since he try’s to keep some as a pet (running gag) he has a bad choice of word’s around women he doesn’t know and won’t fight them seeing its not right for a man to hit a women which makes it sounds he sexist but he not. When he by himself he ponders and try’s to remember his past, feeling lonely about it all hone’s his still’s till he can stop thinking about the past Despite all this he is rather social and well try to get along with other’s likening there likes and such

GENETIC LOOKS

Appearance: Having Long to his mid back raven black hair, with some bang‘s in front of his face giving him a rather violent but clam look, His eye‘s are strong unmoving eye‘s that are a dark green, he wear‘s the Espada outfit modified making it come around his shoulder’s and show his chest which are covered by a chain mail like shirt, the pant’s he wears are the same, his Zanpakto is on his back. His face is young but also very warrior like always smiling for no reason, only changing it when he gets serious, he always stand up right and being very tall around 6’10 feet, he is slim and well built, he has a scar going over his right eye in the form of an cross. The 2 is on his left shoulder.




Bone Appearance: Around his neck are horn‘s that are like those of a stag beetle.

Reitsu Colour: A mix of color‘s, a dark black with some gold and blue into it giving off a royal and rather deadly feel to it.


ZANPAKUTÔ

Sealed Zanpakutô:
.Ciervo Volante-Having a grey handle with some gold and blue markings to it, the blade is a rather odd it’s a large blade about 7 feet long so its stays mostly on his back Thou sealed it does have two attack’s in this mode
Verschlingen- A dril base attack what happens is Zefonse Channels his Reistu into his blade and does a stab attack then a large drill beam goes flying straight forward very powerful and effective at close to med range, at long range it gets weaker.

Sueño de hadas- the second attack in this form and best for long range for a odd reason, channeling his reistu into his blade till it reaches it peek and then slicing the air in front of him in a “X” as it fires forth and makes a wave in its after shock it is the strongest attack in the sword the longer the range the more powerful it becomes, this attacks goes on till it hits something in that time it gather engery from how far it went. Weak at close range but good for a stun the other downside is that the fact it can be dodge easy but thankfully he able to control the path his hand moments able to make it go in all sorts of paths till it hits something.




Racial Abilities:
Gran Ray Cero- colored sliver with a dark crimson aura to it, strangely has the power to split into two and attack from two different area as well track the foe for a limited time (meaning have to out run them)

Cero Oscuras- A black cero with deadly range and speed, like his aura its muti colored, a dark black with sliver and gold into it with some crimson, its also strangely has the power to bend and track the foes but its slower if it does that so mostly it just fires in a straight line


Lucanus cervus- A stronger version of Gran rey cero of Zefonse own design two times stronger and faster speed colored gold, it take a bit to charge up but once it fires it just as fast as the gran rey cero taking form of two stab beetle horns on both sides that track the foe and crush them they can be broken if hit with a 70 levl kindou spell.

Escopeta cero- A really crazy move used in all forms basically 15 cero’s at once same power of each one just shorter range like a bala, to use this ether hand must be in a fist

Bailando Arma cero- Think of a machine gun fired cero in a row about 5 per second used for a total of 20 seconds all colored gold, can make the fight turn, to use the Zefonse turns either hand to the side in a “chopping” hand and make a arc while his hand glows gold for a second.


Ciervo cero asesino- In face the most deadly move in Zefonse self made Cero’s think 10 Cero Oscuras at once and done again for 5 seconds 10 each time, this lays wake to everything in its path no matter how strong it is the downside to this Zefonse can’t use this move a lot due to the energy drain but prefect for his DUES EX RESSERECION attack.


Hellfire- Weaken in sealed form but a great attack none the less, colored purpled and black the flame it shot out like a Bala or Cero both are the same amount of damage it can be controlled from afar making escape harder, but it can be broken and beaten with stronger attack’s.

Enhanced Hierro: Due to his Stag beetle like natural his Hierro is higher then other despite the fact it should be weak since he gave up speed to keep his healing.

intsant Regeneration is the ability that allows a Hollow to heal most injuries very almost instantly, with the exception of the destruction of the head any vital organ is safe besides the brain.



RESSERECCION

Resereccion Name: Ciervo Volante
(Stag Beetle)



Resereccion Release Phrase: I am the white void. I am the cold steel. I am the just sword. With blade in hand shall I reap the sins of this world, and cleanse it in the fires of destruction. Ciervo Volante. The end has come!"



Release Actions: Pointing forward and letting goas it breaks away into his flesh while saying the phase, as soon as “The End has come“ a large shock wave is made and it makes a mini earthquake shaking the ground and a thunderstorm appear‘s

Resereccion Appearance:

Zefonse the 2nd Espada 0297agitoeclipsebyagito



Resereccion Abilities:

Near Endless supply of Reitsu- due to his nature, Zefonse break down the matter around him into Reitsu and take it in so he can fight for longer periods of time (can’t take in to much thou or else suffer from a energy overload)

Unholy blades- Blade’s form from his Reitsu they can also be fired out like missiles and be used to link up attack’s each as strong as a cero on impact and faster then a Bala blast, they can be controlled remotely and be formed at any giving time. (250 swords can be formed at once that can surround a large group or use them to set trap’s, they can be broken) they are very fragile like glass so thats why they are used that way.

Lighting- Replacing hellfire with the deadly lighting, strong as a Cero and has a wild path, mostly used for close range, but can act with the Unholy Blade’s and be fired thou them making great attacks and trap’s


Near lighting speed - thou slower then Yorouichi and Shadin Yuudesh its almost near there class, thou he can’t see while using this he can attack very quickly and without warning.

6th sense- Able to feel the area around him for 50 feet and counter.

intsant Regeneration above



DUES EX RESSERECION

Dues Ex Name: Ciervo Volante XV


Dues Ex Release Phrase: The wheel of fate is turning heaven or hell. Ciervo Volante XV [b]


[b]Dues Ex Release Actions: forming all the Unholy blade‘s and stabbing himself with them as he takes them in his armor breaks away and makes a large dust cloud



Dues Ex Appearance:
Zefonse the 2nd Espada 13




Dues Ex Abilities:

Greater Enhanced Hierro: Now almost unbreakable or being able to cut but can still be hurt over time, and suffers from a great lack in speed.


The armor, Sankishin Susano'o, bestows him with incredible fighting prowess, allowing him to tap into infinite reserves of power, enabling him to fight for prolonged periods of time without rest and to increase his own strength. The various eyes adorned all over the armor suggest that they are for sight enhancement as the helmet features no visor. (can still be worn out think of energy overloads and injury’s over time) Also it allows use to Break and negate Kindou away. the claw's can channel many cero's into one blast, aslo there is a hole in the cheast with the armor covering it, it can move away and fire a stronger version of attack's he can use in the other forms mainly the gran rey Cero or every other of his move's.

Ciervo Volante- a nodachi with an odd blunt tip in place of a sharp point. The sword is attached to a sheath on his back with a slot to allow him to draw the sword without straining his arm due to its long length, it has holy properties. It apparently possesses the ability to negate Kidou as well. (10 feet long) Able to use the attack's from his sealed form with very much higher power.



Can project energy barriers that repel enemy attacks and allow him to effectively counter advances towards (can be broken if the foe is stronger or they know how to break it)

Carnage Breaker- A berserk type of move breaking open his hand many wire’s force there way out making his whole arm into a wire horror show it then lash’s out to attack the foe becoming many sharp but hard to see wire’s unless it in mass’s, if a foe is trapped Zefonse sends a pulse of energy thou the wire’s to shut down there nerve’s to make them stop moving, this attack is painless but this takes a long Time to heal from even with High Speed Regeneration due to the fact this move change’s his whole arm at the atomic level.


Blood Kain- Blood flow’s from his body and to the out side forming a different set of armor around him giving him a more slimer look but also a twisted design, thou in this form he can only attack with physical attack’s for a short time, he hurt’s himself overtime the longer he stay’s into it.

Xero Field- A strange land base attack from, taking a Unholy sword and throwing it at the ground, Zefonse makes a field of plant’s that lash out at the foe and grow, this attack is rather slow and thus isn’t used as much but it can buy time for more attack’s

High-Speed Regeneration is the ability that allows a Hollow to heal most injuries very quickly, with the exception of the destruction of the head or vital organs


-Still has powers of his last form with the Unholy blades nerfed down to summoning around 70)-

High-Speed Regeneration is the ability that allows a Hollow to heal most injuries very quickly, with the exception of the destruction of the head or vital organs


-Still has powers of his last form with the Unholy blades nerfed down to summoning around 70)-
SKILLS

(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)

Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

PAST

History: : 20,000 years ago a clan of humans where getting ready for travel across Japan, one small boy was fighting another over food, blow after blow the fighting went on for minutes till one of them dropped dead and the winner picks up the food, these people had no name’s they live to kill and fight for food, the winner of the boys was to be Zefonse. He ate the cooked meat like a mad beast. Later on that day after resting the boy went off into the woods as it was getting dark, strange how his clan hunts at dark where the beast of the wild have the advantage. In the cold brush he was waking thou he stopped and growled at a large snake but it had a mask for some reason, he tried to warn the other’s about it but no one beside’s him can noticed it. He took note of the creature about 20 feet long about two people wide.

He remembered story’s or what his clan really called Fade’s thing’s that exist but shouldn’t the only thing in there culture that has a name. The Snake grinned and then just disappeared as the boy walked to where it once was and can feel it gone. Still hungry the boy looked up and saw his clan already moved on after all no one but him saw it. Later on that night he caught up to them they where ready to kill a hog. But the boy noticed something again pointing at the large snake above the hog in the sky, again no one saw it and when one of the men of the tribe went after the hog with a club the snake appeared around him and crushed him biting the man’s head off. To the boy he saw it all but to the others they saw him being crushed by nothing and his head was just gone.

Running soon followed everyone out for themselves pushing fighting to get out of the forest. The next day after the whole clan stayed up all night making sure nothing was after them. The boy walked to the leader of the pack and tried to tell them about the snake like creature. The leader just kicked the boy away saying ghost can’t kill anything. Just then a new creature appeared a bird with a mask above the clan, the boy pointed to the sky yelling in fear and run’s away the clan didn’t bothered to take the warning as the bird creature killed a small girl and ate her. The boy was running and running till he saw a person in black cloth’s appeared wielding a weapon he never seen before the man disappeared in a second and killed the bird as it was breaking down into dust well at lest that what the boy thought.

During the day’s that followed more and more strange creatures appeared and this man keeping killing them why is it the boy can only see them . Getting sick and annoyed about the whole thing he walked up to the leader who again kicked him angry he pulled out his club and smashed the leader head in killing him. The clan people where in shock but made the boy there leader, but this man was behind the boy and when he turned around the man was gone. He tried to warn the clan about these creature’s but they didn’t believe him even thou he was the leader now angry he killed other member’s of the clan in rage and made them as bait to other’s but then he noticed the clan that he killed with chains on them and the chains where eating away.

The boy went off alone into the forest again, this time finding the snake monster, and yelled at it for it to face him. The snake hissed and laughed it slithered over to the boy and opened it’s mouth and as the boy went in to hit the creature he found himself in a new place the sky always night. He was surround by more creatures’ as they ate him he was in pain they tasted him his life his sin’s and then he became one of them a stag beetle hollow. He looked around and like pain fell back into his clan home, they where looking around doing nothing. That is till he now a hollow ate them all there soul’s the man in black clothing appeared before the boy now turned hollow and point its weapon at him and appeared on top of him. He shook the man off and he got trapped into his horn’s and was crushed then devoured. More people in black showed up all the same level as the man, sadly all where killed and eaten. Returning to where all hollow’s go. There for many years he became a wanted for killing many shigaimi over the year’s-



-Now a hollow the boy had only the hunger to devour soul’s he slowly joined in a mass of other hollow forming a huge hollow with a different mask then the other his own the new hollow ate other hollow for food finding there flesh and power tasty and great becoming the next level after level till he was a near-humanoid stag beetle-like Vasto Lorde-class Menos that became rather lonely in life, only finding joy in fighting, still remembering some of his past over the past 10,000 years to current day he became a natural Arrancar that was more social with other hollow’s but one by one they died due to his power, he was alone once again and never found a place to belong, one day he heard of a group called the Nuevo Espada and set out to join them maybe one day face strong people and meet people like himself forgetting about his past-



[b]RP Sample: -For many day’s on end he was walking around this place following order’s to take out nameless hollow that was planning to kill someone he found the hollow it was powerful. It hit him hard enough to draw blood break some bone’s nothing to worry about they healed quickly, taking a deep breath he hold up his hand and fired a Cero it dodge barely, the hollow somehow had the power to control metal and was trying to take his sword, Zefonse let it as it grabbed it with its ugly tail and said it was going to kill him with it, Zefonse rushed up to the hollow and punched it re claiming his sword and cutting down the nameless hollow, it was strong but no match, placing his sword back on to his back going back to report his order’s he was taking how he felt like he did this before and he got a lost memory, was he a sinner for doing this was he evil or good only time well tell but for now he happy to be with strong people-
b]



Flaw’s- Slower speed then other’s due to keeping higher defense and healing, only his first release form gives him his speed back but drops the defense, Dues Ex Release form is higher defense but a great lack of speed slower then his sealed form, in all Zefonse is a good fighter just his style changes a lot depending on the form taking lastly Zefonse cero moves are rather taxing on his body so he wont spam them such as I think for battle not spam every move I have.


Last edited by Raiki on Sun Nov 07, 2010 2:42 pm; edited 22 times in total
Chao
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Sun Sep 12, 2010 2:34 pm
Chaozi is gonna be looking at this app todays


very short sections to this app need lengthening. These include appearance and personality. Both could use a paragraph or two extended onto it. Look at other apps to maybe get an idea of how to increase your length.

This goes for your history too. Its very small and NEEDS to be a lot longer. Even if you make shit up its Alright as long as it makes sense. Think about how they were before they died, their hollow stages and their present history. Maybe even some future references.

void blade needs a disadvantage or a way to remove the effects because it is a god mod insta-kill kind of attack.

Your Bankai seal is a very very etchy kind of ability. Its disadvantage is good enough to be approve-able but please be careful if you ever decide to use it.
Raiki
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November SOTM 20112nd place
November COTM 2011 : 1st place Zefonse
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Age : 32

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Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:04 pm
done.....please tell me if anything else
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Mon Sep 13, 2010 9:53 am
Everything is fine except your history. It needs to be paragraphed with more than just a few events. Also could you try and make the app look more presentable? At the moment its not very appealing to look at.
Raiki
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Mon Sep 13, 2010 9:54 am
ugh history my weakness~ I well try but since im going to college i do it later on after i get back


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Raiki
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Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:34 pm
Add longer history X________X it was two pages on word! why is it so short here!


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Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:41 pm
and add flaws

(Agito has looked over and said it looked fine at lest to her but shall let you apporve it or not)
Raiki
Raiki
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November SOTM 20112nd place
November COTM 2011 : 1st place Zefonse
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Age : 32

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Tue Sep 14, 2010 2:04 am
removed the great seal again it was traped in history lol bad comp i said delt it!

and once apporved if there isnt thing to post can you pm me to the topic you wish for me post in so that way I wont get mixed up where for him to appear
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Tue Sep 14, 2010 11:00 am

Ok your history is basically you rambling on with very little punctuation and sense. I see what happened but it feels as though you skipped a lot his clan could be involved in. Also, your not the Trecera just yet so leave that out of your history. It could be much nicer if it was paragraphed with full stops rather than comma's.

Fix these little things and ill be fine with it.
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Tue Sep 14, 2010 11:05 am
hmmm alright, its just history and me dont mix so well i guess i can increase the info on his former clan, i wasnt going to play him as the 3rd yet just had it in the name and was going to let him gain it in story


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