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I. Basic Information


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» Name:Izayoi Sumashuu
» Titles: Shadow of the North
» Age: 16
» Gender/Sex: Male
» Origin: Devastation
» Kingdom: North
» Affiliation/Rank: Kingdom of the North

» True Appearance Description:

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II. Personality Traits


» Personality:

» Energetic: Izayoi at his core as a character is bursting with energy, so much so that many tend to find him annoying. Most of his time is spent fighting, planning practical jokes, or training in order to do more fighting, but Izayoi's rambunctious behavior lends itself marvelously to many other activities as well. Anything Izayoi sets his mind to that can be accomplished through hard work and willpower he tends to achieve with little difficulty. This doesn't make him hyperactive though, despite his normal eccentricities tending to make it seem as such, as Izayoi can more or less control himself despite the abundance of energy, but this creates a problem for him once the build up reaches its boiling point. Unless he has an outlet for this explosion of energy, he begins to grow frustrated, anxious, and agitated. Additionally, most activities are tedious to him and only temporarily stave off the stress and anxiety, consequently he seeks out his favorite activity, fighting, as a means to really exhaust that energy and erase the tension. As such, this tends to make Izayoi seem rather hungry for battle, moreso than he really should be, as he is not necessarily a warmonger by nature. It does make him rather irate however when he cannot find that fisticuffs related outlet or an opponent strong enough to engage him properly.

» Prankster: Perhaps Izayoi's most prominent trait to those who are familiar with him is his propensity for practical jokes and his general light-hearted, vibrant nature. This has generated a strong rapport and ingratiated him to many a people and led to him forming a rather strong between him and his retainers, however it has also done wonders for making him seem like a fool to the majority of the populace. This behavior has most likely formed due to his innate need to compete with his elder brother, however it often tends to have the inverse effect. Most people responding to his antics, comparing him to his "Crown Prince" brother as the "Clown Prince," and it makes Izayoi rather depressed on every level, yet only seems to exacerbate his antics . Izayoi is almost at a point in his life where he's been so conditioned to play the fool that he simply does not know how to behave in any other way. The only time this facade is dropped is around his father, who sees through his act immediately and, in his own way, encourages a more genuine form of tomfoolery for his son to participate in.

» Tough: As someone who loves fighting, Izayoi comes with the mental fortitude required to handle the kind of rigors and abuses that getting punches in the kidney repeatedly kind of requires. Additionally, as the younger brother to the perfect Kamui Curor, Izayoi who did not share his elder brother's brilliance and cognitive capacity, he had to be tough-skinned in order to carve his own place and identity in the world and to stop the ceaseless comparisons to the "perfect" Kamui. Because of his association to his brother, cannot let himself display weakness or falter at any time, and he achieves this with his combat prowess and the juvenile mask he chooses to wear. To his allies he must constantly work to be respected, and to his enemies he constantly feels the needs to be intimidating and condescending. It isn't necessarily all an act however, Izayoi most definitely has a rough and chew outer shell. The boy feels the need to constantly run head first in to danger and he often takes on challenges that others would deem insane, refusing to be deterred in his drive for recognition and dominance. He is quite the tenacious and aggressive individual... but his drive mostly stems from wanting to receive the recognition that he had never truly gotten in the shadow of his brother. Izayoi above all wants to be taken seriously and show others what he's made of, and it's hard for him to accomplish this if he appears even the slightest bit weak. Izayoi seeks to reach an insurmountable level of strength to be acknowledged as his brother's equal or, ideally, his better.

» Seeker of Freedom: Tying in to his inferiority complex, Izayoi hates the feeling of being cornered, of being told what to do, or of not doing what he wants to, usually because he is so often compared, negatively, to Kamui. Consequently, he enjoys the freedoms of life and won't settle for anything less. This can mean many things: It can mean that he tends to avoid following the rules and the laws of the land, and will choose to do what he wants instead. His preference, hedonistically, is to have the world around him be bend and cater to his whims, and he is quick to anger and will readily display annoyance to anything that goes against that. He feels as though he knows what's best for himself and others opinions tend to be rather irrelevant on that point. This manifests as well in his unmistakably blunt sense of honesty, as saying anything less than such honesty does not do what he believes is justice to his own majesty. It also manifests in a sense of irresponsibility. Izayoi has been known to drain the kingdom coffers on silly and honestly quite pointless things on more than one occasion simply because it suited his whims. He doesn't hold himself back, and doesn't want to. The more freedom he is permitted, the happier he tends to be when all is said and done.

» Strategically Inept: It further flows from the earlier point however that Izayoi is very irresponsible. Izayoi is very, very poor when it comes to planning things out ahead of time. He very much lives in the moment and that shows through in his general lack of foresight in many situations. This is not to say he is tactically inept of course. There is a wide gap between strategy and tactics. In a combat situation, despite his rather blusterous personality, Izayoi is rather intelligent. He is creative, ingenious even, in the moment. However it is when he has to plan five or six moments ahead where the blunders began and in his mind, it is his greatest weakness and then thing that keeps him so far away from his elder brother...something that fills him with an utterly extreme amount of rage and anxiety. It also really emphasizes his overarching lack of proficiency with money and responsibility, unable to really appreciate the future for what it is given that he cannot live outside the now.


» Likes: Fighting, Good Ole Dad, Chicken

» Dislikes: Kamui, Complacency, Brussel Sprouts


III. Guardian Beast


» Name: Erebus
» Age: 29,000 years
» Gender: Well then
» Origin: Encompassing Darkness

» Location of Resonance Marker:Erebus’s Eye, Izayoi’s Back

» Appearance:
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» Personality: Erebus is both the peculiar Sugiuran’s Guardian Beast AND his Sacred weapon. At first, through a combination of Izayoi’s rather unique heritage and his inborn natural aptitude for destruction, Izayoi was not born with a sacred weapon. Perhaps the Gods thought his body as a whole was weapon enough. For whatever reason he was not graced with a weapon at birth, however, Izayoi would not stay without his weapon for long. During his first fit of destruction, a fit that required Sagumi to etch the Restriction Seal into his very being, Izayoi’s sacred weapon and by extension his Guardian Beast, came into existence. Beyond Sagumi’s foresight, the excess energy that the restriction seal would remove from Izayoi and filter off into areas unknown caused the formation of Izayoi’s Guardian Beast and Sacred weapon, Erebus.

While the two do not have the greatest of relationships, Izayoi is very much a being of light, joy, happiness, laughter, and exhilaration, Erebus is the polar opposite, representing all the negative energy that is cast off by the restriction seal, they did seem to form a sort of bond. They were opposites, but as much as Erebus hated the happiness and light that was young Izayoi, its very existence was the obnoxious amount of energy that Izayoi's very existence output. Without Izayoi, Erebus had no hope of existing. On the opposite side, as much as Izayoi hated the creature of darkness and shadow that seemed inexplicably bound to him, Erebus HAD saved him on multiple occasions in multiple fights since his engagement with the Water Serpent. As such, the two tend to detest each other to alarming degrees. However, because Izayoi’s energy output is the only thing keeping Erebus in existence, the creature is obligated through survival instinct to protect Izayoi. This is the primary manifestation of its power.


» History: Long ago, when the Sugiuran World was still whole, Erebus was a “God of Old.” When Zha’til had formed, a time long before the Sugiurans, the legend states that Erebus was among the founding pantheon of the Multi-verse. As the legend goes, when the Gods created their World, their many universes, Erebus was the glue, the thing that held them all together. His being seeped into every crevice between the worlds and was the veritable ocean of dark that held the very Multi-verse together.

Whether or not this Erebus is a “God” is entirely debatable, but he is most definitely the being that the myth was based upon if it wasn’t the Deity himself. What is undeniable is that Erebus is very old, very malicious, and very powerful. Omens constantly refer to how Erebus leaked through the seams of the Multi-verse and stole children and ruined crops and old travelers across worlds used to pray to Erebus to spare them on their travel. The validity of either of those beliefs or practices is certainly debatable, but Erebus himself is proven to exist. When the world was forcibly separated from the multi-verse by the Sugiurans, Erebus, the glue, was dragged with them.

Erebus had roamed for a time, while he tried to fit between the crevices of this Multi-verse, it most definitely did not feel like home and more and more Erebus began to creep into the universes themselves and this quickly made him a target. The more and more this creature of legend began to show itself, the more fear began to perforate amongst the people and at the same time, the greed. Expeditions were sent to capture the creature and eventually, in a hilariously twisted turn of events, Erebus was captured.

It was then that they sought to turn him into a weapon. Erebus was forcibly bound to a young Suigura who, at the time, they believed to be a failure. Young prince Izayoi had lived his entire life in his Elder Brother’s shadow and by comparison was deemed to be quite inept. So they did the best thing they could think of to salvage him AND utilize their newfound prize. They turned the young prince into a catalyst for a monster, the first engineered Bio-Weapon.

It definitely was met with success, at least in the eyes of the Sugiuran populace. Erebus didn’t exactly share their enthusiasm, bound to a whelp and Izayoi by comparison wasn’t exactly happy to be stuck with a “God” that children were taught to be terrified of. Which brings us to the present day, where the two attempt to not get each other killed, either directly or indirectly.

» Flimkien Powers:

Encompassing Darkness: Erebus was the glue that held Universes together and that nature persists to this day. While Erebus’s most common form is the shadowy image of a wolf, that is not his actual form. Erebus’s physical body will permeate around the perimeter of any area he is in up to a radius of five hundred meters. It is from this that all of Erebus’s abilities are founded and this is the area that he is able to strike from. However, this ability follows some very strict rules for allowing Erebus to manifest in his Flimkien state. First and foremost, Erebus’s body must always be connected to the perimeter of a circular(note two dimensions) area around Izayoi’s body. Consequently, in a completely open field, Erebus will always only be able to manifest two hundred meters away from Izayoi at any given point in the Flimkien.

The exception to this is terrain. Erebus is able to travel along any object that is a solid and is currently touching the surface of the ground within his five hundred meter radius and is able to use any piece of terrain in his “area” as a springboard for any of his abilities and redefine the boundaries of his Encompassing Darkness. However, for something to qualify as “Terrain” it needs to be at least one foot tall, Erebus is not yet able to manifest on blades of grass and skewer people as they walk.

Umbrakinesis: Erebus is darkness himself and Erebus is violent. Erebus is able to project his body of darkness outward and use it as a kinetic force in various ways. The most prominent method of which is to jettison tendrils of darkness from his Encompassing Darkness at his foes. These tendrils, depending on the form the darkness takes, are capable of lacerating or bludgeoning his opponents with an absolutely startling efficiency making it absolutely dangerous to venture near the boundary that Erebus innately sets up around Izayoi. However, there are many inherent weaknesses to this ability.

The darkness is a kinetic force, and as such it can be interacted with by other kinetic forces. While normally swinging a sword at darkness would be pointless and undoubtedly result in a padded room and a particularly constricting jacket, in this case what that sword will hit is very much there and the defusing kinetic energy will deflect the danger that the victim would face. So while the sword is not technically hitting the darkness, it is hitting and diffusing the kinetic energy that Erebus creates, consequently sparing themselves from harm. In addition, the effective range of Erebus’s Umbrakinesis is fifty meters. Putting yourself at least fifty meters away from wherever Erebus’s boundary is will prevent the Beast from ever being able to touch you.

Indestructibility: This is a bit of a misnomer. To even be able to destroy something it needs to have physical form and in this state, Erebus does not. Consequently, it is impossible to injure or destroy Erebus in any way while he is in this state. He is the absence of light, it’s somewhat impossible to destroy nothingness.

Photo-Absorption: Conventional wisdom would maintain that you combat darkness with light, conventional wisdom is an idiot. Darkness in and of itself is the destruction of light. Darkness is not synonymous with “Shadow.” As such it is not possible to “banish” Erebus with light sources as his body will simply absorb and destroy light particles as simply as a human would breathe or poop or contemplate driving a rusty nail through their temple if they have to listen to “Is it too late to say I’m sooooooooooooooooooooooorry” one more time on the damn radio.

» Matul Ispiritu Appearance: Whenever Erebus is forcibly broken down into Eidos and given a metaphysical form, the Beast of Encompassing darkness, instead of manifesting in the wide border will be forcibly compressed in to the matter around Izayoi, entirely localizing the boundary of Erebus’s field to the area around Izayoi. This forms as a swirling mass of darkness that encompasses Izayoi that comes to a woflish-esque head fit with teeth and a muzzle, though it would appear to be capable of taking any form it wishes.

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» Matul Ispiritu Powers:

Darkness Defender 2417: Unlike his Flimkien state, Erebus is very much a solid being in this form, having been forced to solidity through the Matul Ispiritu process. However, with a solid state, Erebus is able to contribute in quite a different way. Any incoming attacks will be met with the shadow manifesting for a moment and blocking the attack. However, the overall strength of the attack has very little bearing on whether or not it is blocked, when struck the shadow will insert an equal and opposite energy signature into the attack, regardless of whether that is spiritual energy or even kinetic energy. While the shadow can theoretically block any form of attack, regardless of strength or type,the shadow itself, when materialized, can be destroyed. Every time the shadow blocks an attack or hits something, it loses its “charge” for materializing in this world. So regardless of whether the attack was a massive cero or someone flicking it with a finger, the shadow loses a charge and can potentially be destroyed. Erebus’s charges are dependent on Izayoi’s use of the Atomizer. Every time Izayoi uses the ability, Erebus gains a single charge. Whenever an altercation begins, Izayoi's Erebus will always begin at zero charges. Given the unstable nature of the energy Izayoi wields, storing any charges on the Erebus shadow is impossible for him at this time, forcing Izayoi to build up his defenses through in the moment offense.

Umbrakinesis: Erebus is darkness himself and Erebus is violent. Erebus is able to project his body of darkness outward and use it as a kinetic force in various ways. The most prominent method of which is to jettison tendrils of darkness from his Encompassing Darkness at his foes. These tendrils or waves or pulses or whatever Erebus feels like doing, depending on the form the darkness takes, are capable of lacerating or bludgeoning his opponents with an absolutely startling efficiency making it absolutely dangerous to venture near the boundary that Erebus innately sets up around Izayoi. However, there are many inherent weaknesses to this ability.

The darkness is a kinetic force, and as such it can be interacted with by other kinetic forces. While normally swinging a sword at darkness would be pointless and undoubtedly result in a padded room and a particularly constricting jacket, in this case what that sword will hit is very much there and the defusing kinetic energy will deflect the danger that the victim would face. So while the sword is not technically hitting the darkness, it is hitting and diffusing the kinetic energy that Erebus creates, consequently sparing themselves from harm. In addition, the effective range of Erebus’s Umbrakinesis is twenty meters from Izayoi, limiting his ranged options.

Darkness Rises Again, and Again, and Again: This is a not in the least a misnomer. In this form, unlike the Flimkien, it is more than possible to “kill” Erebus when he is this form. Enough kinetic energy can physically “break” Erebus, forcibly ejecting him from this mode and returning him to his Flimkien. If Erebus is “destroyed” like this, there is a three post refractory period before Izayoi is able to metaphysically manifest the Beast.

Photo-Absorption: Conventional wisdom would maintain that you combat darkness with light, conventional wisdom is an idiot. Darkness in and of itself is the destruction of light. Darkness is not synonymous with “Shadow.” As such it is not possible to “banish” Erebus with light sources as his body will simply absorb and destroy light particles as simply as a human would breathe or poop or contemplate driving a rusty nail through their temple if they have to listen to “Is it too late to say I’m sooooooooooooooooooooooorry” one more time on the damn radio.


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IV. Character Background


» History Izayoi was running out of time, his entire life. He was born a twin to Sagumi Sumashuu and Aceldama Cruor and from the very moment he was born, Izayoi seemed to just know that he was the lesser son. It wasn't necessarily a blatant thing, Izayoi could not with much confidence say that he was less loved growing up than his brother or that he was in any way neglected, but Kamui had already been chosen to inherit his father's secrets and young Izayoi was not born soon enough, he had run out of time before he even had a chance to participate. He was loved however, which in and of itself was something he was thankful for growing up. It did leave him a little bit wanting. Izayoi strove for excellence in all things that he would and even without the special training Kamui received, Izayoi always seemed to know that he would forever be the lesser brother...and this further exacerbated itself when he nearly destroyed the Northern Kingdom.

At around two years of age, already deemed the less prominent son, Izayoi was selected in the project to create a super weapon to combat the Tig-Ani in the inevitable recapture of their home world. It was to this end that Izayoi was forcibly bound to the Old God Erebus., Izayoi's resonating signal then manifested...meting out some explosive results. Whether or not Erebus is truly a god is left up to interpretation, but it is beyond reproach that he is one of if not the most powerful Guardian Beast that the Northern Kingdom had ever come across. The young boy’s body, as adept to the act of Symbiosis as only a child could be, could not hope to contain and direct Erebus’s power. Izayoi's body was not strong enough to contain his powers and when they began manifesting, the world around him began to explode. To this day the crater in the northernmost side of the Kingdom remains to this day. Using Kakeru's ice to encapsulate the blast coming from the boy, internalizing it and preventing the energy from spreading outward, it took the fully released Sagumi to push through the energy in order to apply the seal to section off Izayoi's capacity. If not for the timely intervention of Kakeru and Sagumi's combined efforts, stopping the explosive nature of the newest Prince of the Cruor, young Izayoi could very easily have completely and utterly destroyed the Sugiuran World all on his own. This was the moment where the Restriction Seal was first applied to Izayoi, etched into his very core.

For the next ten years of his life, Izayoi spent all his time learning to filter his abilities through the seal so as not to bring harm upon others, silently cursing his union with the monster Erebus and the innate danger it had made his very existence.. This led to a certain stigma and fear of the child from the kingdom and while he did not meet such opposition and ire from his family, the concept that he was a pariah among his species was rather painful. He was never going to be fit to inherit much from his father due to the volatile nature of his being and he was never going to win the hearts and minds of his people like Kamui could which put Izayoi into an awkward position. Thus he resolved that if he couldn't be the king his brother was groomed to be, he was going to be the hero his father was. He unfortunately had no idea how exactly to do that, so he went with what he knew. Izayoi simply began fighting, everything and anything he could. It was when his father and brother were on a trip to the human world that his opportunity struck. Without its two chief defenders, a terrifying sea monster was attacking the southern edge of the kingdom and the local peacekeepers were having a fit of trouble dealing with it.

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It was the first time that Izayoi had ever truly needed to use his powers for any extended period of time and even then...it did not take him very long. The boy disposed of the serpent without much effort, only needing a few moments and a single strike to bury the serpent monster. It was here where Izayoi's powers were fully utilized for the first time since the initial cataclysm that was his childhood. It was then that young Kamui's sacred weapon and guardian beast manifested, Erebus. Enough energy had finally been released from the young boy's body that it began to coalesce in to a being all on its own, a sentient one that that. Erebus was born. Izayoi spent the next few days of his life trying his best to get used to the evil spirit of shadow and malice that seemed to follow him around like an overly attached girlfriend with varying degrees of success while Izayoi continued to pursue his quest to be mighty. As Kamui went off to develop in to quite the potent magus, Izayoi kept his focus more on the physical nature of his family's heritage, continuing to hone his skills in the Martial Arts, a fact that continued to pester him as he still never truly managed to keep up with his elder brother despite devoting considerably more time to the craft.

Then Kamui was sent to the human world, chosen to be the Liaison between the two organizations, connecting the Vanguard and the Sugiuran Kingdom. Izayoi did not like the idea, both because he was not sure how he felt about attaching their kingdom to an Earthen one, even if his Father came from the species Izayoi had serious reservations about the Sugiurans interacting with any outsiders, regardless of their species. And then the real reason he was upset, Kamui had been chosen for it, Kamui and not Izayoi. The thought almost sent the boy in to a rage, storming out of the palace. By the time he had returned home, Kamui had already gone and Izayoi was left alone, well, as alone as he could be with his mother and three other siblings. However, whenever his father was gone, that left Izayoi as the chief guardian of the Northern Kingdom. Which is what he would serve as, for now, until the time came where he was needed to answer his people's call.



V. Abilities & Equipment


» Natural Abilities

Xingyiquan: A practitioner of xingyiquan uses coordinated movements to generate bursts of power intended to overwhelm the opponent, simultaneously attacking and defending. Forms vary from school to school, but include barehanded sequences and versions of the same sequences with a variety of weapons. These sequences are based upon the movements and fighting behavior of a variety of animals. The training methods allow the student to progress through increasing difficulty in form sequences, timing and fighting strategy.

Xingyiquan features aggressive shocking attacks and direct footwork. The linear nature of xingyiquan hints at both the military origins and the influence of spear technique alluded to in its mythology. Despite its hard, angular appearance, cultivating soft internal strength or qi is essential to achieving power in Xingyiquan.

The goal of the xingyiquan exponent is to reach the opponent quickly and drive powerfully through them in a single burst — the analogy with spear fighting is useful here. This is achieved by coordinating one's body as a single unit and the intense focusing of one's qi.

Efficiency and economy of movement are the qualities of a xingyiquan stylist and its direct fighting philosophy advocates simultaneous attack and defense. There are few kicks except for extremely low foot kicks (which avoids the hazards of balance involved with higher kicks) and some mid-level kicks, and techniques are prized for their working within key principles rather than aesthetic value. Xingyiquan favours a high stance called Sāntǐshì, literally "three bodies power," referring to how the stance holds the head, torso and feet along the same vertical plane. A common saying of xingyiquan is that "the hands do not leave the heart and the elbows do not leave the ribs." This philosophy is very similar to Wing Chun.

Immense Energy: Izayoi is an absurdly powerful Sugiuran. The boy inherited his father’s incredibly potent body and as such inherited his father’s natural immensity of being. While Izayoi cannot yet tap in to into its immensity, that doesn’t necessarily mean it does not manifest, Izayoi’s destructive potential being readily available and intimidating despite his inability to properly harness it, causing him to often seem to be on the same league as his father and elder brother without actually holding that much strength. What Izayoi is able to utilize this power to do is rather terrifying in its own right however and even if someone knew that the boy’s massive presence did not represent a massive control over it, it would not be wise to underestimate what the Sugiura of Destruction is capable of.

Restraining Seal: Etched across Izayoi’s back is a large seal, extending from his shoulder blades to his tailbone. This seal was etched into his very skin from a young age when it had become readily apparent that the young boy had no hope of controlling Erebus and his powers through will alone. So in response, Sagumi had successfully found the source of the problem and etched in a method to control and suppress it. As such, this seal forces Izayoi’s massive destructive power to be far more centralized and limited and allows his molecular destructive ability to not immediately destroy everything around him and himself by actually absorbing, breaking down, and storing the energy into an alternate dimension the excess energy that his Atomizer ability generates, limiting Izayoi’s destructive output. The seal forces Erebus to use this excess, discarded energy to sustain himself in all his enormity preventing him from willingly trying to lead Izayoi to his own death. As such, the more Izayoi’s power grows, the more the seal on his back sustains Erebus and the closer to his previous Godhood he encroaches upon.


» Martial Techniques

  • Name: Danketsu: Waist Turn [Gamaku]
    Description: An ancient technique that allows the user to pretend to stand on one leg, but actually stand on the other leg. The opponent is fooled by the stance and defends for the wrong leg, even thinking that the user is stepping forward but actually is taking a back step. They then see the wrong leg move forward when actually the opposite leg comes in unexpectedly. This move uses the oblique muscles to switch the leg with the center of gravity, separating the balance between the upper and lower body. When most people kick, the upper body leans to signal which leg is being used. However, the center of gravity is actually on the grounded leg, which kicks the opponent.

  • Name: Danketsu:Backward Roll [Ushiro Ukemi]
    Description: A technique derived from an ancient martial art, the Ushiro Ukemi allows the user to force themselves to hit the ground in a backward roll, providing an effective manner to reducing the impact from throws and falls.

  • Name: Danketsu:Sumokudori
    Description: A technique from an ancient style, this technique is used when an opponent has attacked with a punch and is used to counter it. The user grabs the opponent's arm, places the arm at the back of the user’s neck before lowering their center of gravity and then tripping the opponent with a sweep of the leg.

  • Name: Danketsu:Wrist Joint Throw
    Description: A Jujitsu technique, the user will grab hold of an opponent's strike by the wrist, apply pressure to the joint by curling the arm backward while simultaneously taking a step forward and placing their center of gravity behind their opponent's. They will then push forward and throw their opponent's to the ground.

  • Name: Danketsu: Bagua Steps[Baguazhang Kaiho]
    Description: A very basic footwork maneuver that the technique practitioner has been able to perfect through use of Psionsenhanced movements. When an opponent attacks,the Bagua user will circle around his side, and appear behind him. When someone attacks with a punch, the practitioner will put his same sided foot behind their opposite sided foot, with his two feet pointing towards each other. After that, follow up with your left foot, circle behind your opponent's left side and you appear behind the opponent. This can be used as a starting point for a throw or a strike. Using Psionsto enhance the movement makes it difficult to the untrained eye. The trained eye, I.E. Spiritually Aware opponents, will usually be able to follow the movement, but it is very useful for gaining better positioning in hand to hand combat.

  • Name: Danketsu: After-Image Dash[Kasumi Gake]
    Description: A useful technique, the Kasumi Gake causes the user the shoot forward in a straight line at greatly increased speed, leaving only an after-image of their body behind while their body seems to be a blur. This however needs to be a completely controlled movement and as such, cannot be used as an attack itself. The user needs to already be moving and building momentum to use the Kasumi Gake and all movement ceases completely once they exit the Kasumi Gake, leaving another lull before an attack can be executed, giving an opponent ample time to react if not caught completely off guard.

  • Name: Danketsu: Illusionary Dash [Kaihou]
    Description: The name, while the technique is no illusion, is frighteningly accurate for this Technique maneuver. The human eye has a weakness, a blind spot. Light gets into the eye by passing through the pupil. It hits the retina at the back of the eye. The retina is covered with light-sensing proteins. They relay what they sense to the optic nerve which carries the information back into the brain. The problem is, the optic nerve ends in the field of the retina itself. This creates a dark spot in the human field of vision. When these dark spots overlap or if the person is forced to look out of one eye the brain just fills in the spot looking at the surrounding picture. This is the tendency with the human brain that the Illusionary Dash exploits. After a time of watching and studying the opponent’s optical tendencies (2 posts) the user of this technique will be able to locate that blind spot. From there, is where the illusionary dash takes place. By channeling Psionsto their feet, the user will increase their speed by 10% for two posts while constantly moving into the dead spot in their opponent’s field of vision. Considering the dead spot changes whenever they move their head so much as an inch, it will seem as if the user of the Illusionary dash is flickering in and out of focus, making it difficult to effectively read the Illusionary dasher’s attacks. If the opponent loses or has lost functionality in one eye, the user can cause themselves to disappear from view entirely. Given the location of the blind spot, this Technique functions are a range of six feet.


  • Name: Danketsu: Palm Push [Sōtenshu]
    Description: A simple yet potentially devastating attack, the Sōtenshu greatly calls upon the Psionscontrol of the user to incapacitate a foe in a non-lethal manner. Placing both palms on an opponent’s chest, the user will force their Psionsout through their palms and into their opponent’s body, sending a concussive force through their victim and sufficiently knocking the wind out of them and at most, fracturing a few ribs. The use of this technique requires substantial amount of Psionscontrol and can only be used by clans with immense Psionscontrol or those who have under gone immense training and are specially characterized as having strong control over their Chi.

  • Name: Danketsu: Running Palm (Senkugoshoha)
    Description: The user will adopt a strong and firm stand and will slide along the ground five meters toward the target. The user will then thrust his palm from the hip and out, causing a large amount of Psionspressure to emanate from the user forward in a meter long radius cone in front of the user. The pressure will act as a concussive force that will push the victim back up to fifteen meters away from the palm thrust and will also completely dissipate any projectiles in the zone.


» Resonating Signal

Atomizer:

Izayoi’s chief and, in and of itself, only ability he truly has is his ability to break down, split, and utterly destroy atoms that he physically comes into contact with, effectively making his mere existence a walking nuclear explosion waiting to happen and would inherently pose a severe health risk to not only himself, but everyone in his vicinity. Thankfully, with the Restraining Seal in place on his back, Izayoi’s mere existence does not threaten anything and everything around him. It does not completely remove his ability to split atoms around him however and Izayoi has found many a way to utilize this ability to great effect.

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The first representation is in the destructive capabilities of Izayoi’s physical exertions. While he is not really left wanting physically compared to anyone he’s yet to meet outside his youngest sister, Izayoi’s true power comes not from physical exertion. With every strike the man makes, regardless of physical exertion applied, Izayoi will split the atoms in the air around his strike, effectively generating a nuclear explosion with each hit. The restraining seal will reduce the impact radius, scrub away any residual radiation and temper the overall destructive capability of Izayoi so much as sneezing, but it does not nearly do enough to stop Izayoi’s strikes from being some of the most devastating in our world. Izayoi is capable of delivering a strike equivalent to a quarter of a kiloton nuclear explosion in his base form and it is speculated that without the restraining seal in place, Izayoi would begin to dangerously encroach upon the territory of a megaton bomb. However, due to the fact that the restraining seal IS in place, Izayoi’s abilities are a little more difficult to conjure willingly. Instead of the occurrence happening naturally, Izayoi needs to exert genuine focus to generate. Izayoi cannot react on the fly with the ability, consequently every attack that he uses his atomizer on needs to be premeditated and direct with a considerable amount of physical force behind it. This ability gets progressively stronger with each release Izayoi undertakes and the seal slips away.

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In addition, the Atomizer is not limited to being used solely upon other people. Izayoi has long since learned how to properly use his explosive and destructive ability on himself. Izayoi is capable of using his destructive power to launch himself in a direction at rather terrifying velocities. Izayoi is capable of launching himself at rates that more than double an equally tiered shunpo or racial equivalent, giving Izayoi a rather remarkable amount of speed outside of his own normally impressive physical capabilities. In addition, because the nature of his movement is quite literally an explosion, the amount of pressure generated from his movement would normally kill him if not for the restraining seal and his own training to resist these forces through conscious effort, making it rather dangerous to use if his mental capacity is in any way hindered. In addition, comparable to his ability to strike, this ability is considerably hampered by the Restraining Seal. In order to effectively use it, it requires preternatural thought, precluding its use in “panic” situations that would require an adaptive thought process or a quick reaction. So it needs to be a premeditated action rather than a reactionary one With that risk however carries a rather impressive benefit. On top of the immense speeds this kind of movement is capable of, the movement will generate immense pressure around the user as he's moving, almost pushing everything else aside. When moving with his Atomizer, Izayoi will cut through the air so intensely that it will push aside anything in the air that would do the user harm. As such, any attacks that Izayoi would otherwise sustain when using the ability are completely and utterly overpowered and neutralized provided the strength of the attack is not a level higher than Izayoi's strength. This protection only applies in a forty five degree angle in front of him however, so despite being completely invulnerable to head on attacks, Izayoi is still very susceptible to off angle attacks.

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This ability also gives Izayoi, to an extent, the ability to manipulate matter. However, while most abilities of this vein typically shift the matter from one thing into another, Izayoi is only capable of shifting the molecular bonds in an items to weaken its structural integrity. He cannot actually shift the molecules into anything else or even do much more than destabilize them, fracturing the structural integrity of the object. This is one of the few moments of finesse that Izayoi possesses, tending to prefer outright flashy destructive capability over something this subtle, but he has found numerous uses for such an ability and has taken the time, however short, to learn to fully utilize it. While in most inorganic substances this is a relatively simple matter, working against organic tissue or a spiritually charged object is considerably more difficult and not only requires a lot of exertion on Izayoi's part but time as well, rendering applications in combat to effectively be useless.

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Energy Destruction: In addition, Izayoi’s Atomizer carries an ability that is truly, truly terrifying. While the ability to split atoms and the destructive levels of kinetic energy that accompanies it is terrifying in and of itself, Izayoi’s atomizer allows him to do something else, something terrifying. Izayoi is capable of destroying energy.

Matter, in general, is easy to manipulate and it is the thing most people directly interact with on a daily basis. You can throw a rock, punch a rock, pee on a rock, all of these things happen on a physical plain, the world of matter. Destroying a rock is simple, you use kinetic energy to break the molecular bonds of the rock. However, Izayoi does not need to do such, instead, Izayoi can completely and utterly destroy the kinetic energy holding the matter together, simply dispersing it into apparent nothingness and breaking most conventional rules of physics.

Izayoi is still limited, he needs to be in physical contact with his hand in order to destroy the energy in question, but Izayoi is able to destroy any form of energy that does come in to contact with his hand. Of course, Izayoi does not physically destroy energy, because that would be physically impossible and quite silly. Instead however, with this ability Izayoi is able to forcibly cause all forms of energy to break down in to heat and immediately disperse as a mild heat in to the air around him, allowing him to completely diffuse and effectively "destroy" any energy based attacks or abilities. Izayoi is capable of blowing through up to 75% of all form of energy based barrier through sheer destructive power as well, making it very difficult to stop an encroaching Izayoi. Of course, Izayoi is restricted to actually meeting the energy with his hand in order to properly destroy the source of energy, making the functionality of this ability very dependent on Izayoi’s physical abilities to fully utilize the energy destruction and allows opposition to either maneuver around Izayoi’s defenses or trick him through misdirection.


» Matul Ispritu Gifted Abilities
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Remote Destruction: The atomizer came from Erebus himself and when Izayoi has condensed the Beast in to his metaphysical state, Izayoi gains the ability able to select a location within one hundred meters of himself, send out a pulse of his Psions, and then use that Psionic Energy to split an atom in that area. This allows Izayoi to generate miniature, controlled, explosions that can range from a localized Psionic detonation up to half a kiloton bomb, shoring up the major weakness of range that Izayoi had suffered upon until now. Izayoi can insert this explosion by firing a small, barely visible kernal of pitch black energy, reminiscent of Erebus, to the spot triple the speed of an equivalently tier bala.

However, given that keeping the condensed Psions together for that long at those ranges is difficult while maintaining the level of destructive power Izayoi is capable of, his is very limited in just how many times he can use this ability. The small, localized explosions he can use rather frequently and with ease, however the more and more devastating the explosions the more and more energy Izayoi needs to use to maintain the energy required to split an atom. Consequently, the full blown destructive force that Izayoi is capable of exerting in this form is heavily limited in its frequency of use, the maximum potency only being able to be used once before Erebus is forced to revert back to the Flimkien.

I. D-Ranked Modern Magic

    Name: Hale Particles
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Speed
    Rank: D
    Effect: Hale Particles is a Speed Type Magic that turns air molecules into ice particles, and then applies acceleration at sub-sonic levels. It is a highly efficient magic, unfortunately becoming less efficient and requiring more power when used in arid conditions. This is a basic spell that almost every magician understands and can utilize
    Name: Iron Breaker
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Movement
    Rank: D
    Effect: This technique doesn't view the sword to be cast from iron and steel, but identifies the "sword" itself as a concept of applied Movement Type Magic to allow the slashing motion with the aid of the Magic Sequence. The "sword" is identified as a singular concept turned into a molecular blade that can't be shattered, blunted, or broken as if it were able to cut through any resistance along the slashing axis. Consequently, using this magic the Sugiuran is capable of turning any object in to an effective slashing weapon.
    Name: Mirror Cage
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Combination: [Convergence/Absorbtion]
    Rank: D
    Effect: is an area of effect spell that utilizes Convergence Type and Absorption Type magic. Mirror Cage works by setting a target as the origin, causing every light source within a five meter radius to be reversed, so that no outside light can penetrate the area surrounding the target, which results in a pitch black prison.
    Name: Oscillation Mine
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Oscillation
    Rank: D
    Effect: Oscillation Mine is an Oscillation Type magic that liquefies the ground with oscillation magic in order to solidify it by evaporating the moisture. The rapid transition between condensed hydrogen gas to expanding hydrogen gas leads to an unstable compound beneath the ground, causing anyone who applies pressure to the location to cause the ground beneath themselves to explode, violently.
    Name: Phantom Blow
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Oscillating
    Rank: D
    Effect: Phantom Blow is a flashy but intangible attack that can incapacitate the opponent by causing concussive-like symptoms using a single Psion shock-wave. Usually triggered through a snap of the fingers or a swing of a Sacred Weapon, the magician can send this spell toward an opponent like a projectile, roughly equivalent to the speed of a bala.
    Name: Yamatsunami
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Combination [Speed/Weight]
    Rank: D
    Effect: A Speed-Type/Weight-Type Magic that first minimizes the inertia of the user and the weapon while closing in on the target at high speed. Then this hidden sword technique transfers all of the stored inertia from the user and weapon movements to the point of contact with the target. This is the Sugiuran Equivalent of the Shunpo with the added effect of being specifically designed to be transitioned into an offensive strike, sacrificing some maneuverability that the Shunpo normally affords for the added devastation that comes from the Yamatsunami’s capacity for offense.

I. C-Ranked Modern Magic

    Name: Active Air Mine
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Oscillating
    Rank: C
    Effect: This spell manipulates the Eidos around a target zone of space up to twenty meters away from the caster. The user will then set up a ten meter cube as a spatial zone and then the Activation Sequence sets another cube within this which is five meters on each side, with the vertices and the center, nine points in total, being designated as epicenters. Active Air Mine enables the user to tag all solids that enter the Magic Activation Zone with magical vibratory waves. By generating compression waves inside the target zone, it undergoes repeated partial expansion and contraction. The rapid heating and cooling is repeated and hence, even solid rock weakens and collapses, allowing the user to generate repeated concussive and degradating blows to targets inside the target zone, akin to being repeatedly punched.
    The user can either consciously trigger each blow inside the zone, or he can use it in a more automatic, trap-like capacity. This magic sets numerous epicenters within the area where the targets are present, which generates virtual waves that give rise to vibratory waves within the targets. Instead of directly applying the waves to the targets with magic, the user sets up an area which causes the phenomena of applying such waves to the targets. The moment the waves from the epicenter come into contact with such a target, the virtual waves become real waves within the target and affect it in reality.
    Name: Air Bullet
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Convergence
    Rank: C
    Effect: The Air Bullet spell, uses magic to generate pockets of hyper compressed air, collectively concentrating the carbon dioxide and nitrogen in the air into small bullets. The magician can then jettison the bullets of compressed air at a target and releasing the metaphorical pressure valve at the target location, generating a massive explosion at the location, the turbulent gases and pressure exploding outward. This is a popular and effective mid to long range weapon for Sugiurans due to its ease of use and potent destructive properties.
    Name: Multiple Bounce
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Speed
    Rank: C
    Effect: Multiple bounce doubly functions as a Speed Type and as a Reverse Speed Type Magic that takes advantage of the kinetic energy vectors. The first form of this technique doubles the velocity of an object in a specific instance, whether it be an arrow, a thrown weapon, or a sword swing. The latter variation of this technique does not make any precise adjustments to the target’s trajectory, but purely rejects all the targets back, simply reversing the trajectory and the accompanying force of an object back the way it came provided the magician’s magical skill is greater than the force of the incoming object.
    Name: Phonon Maser
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Oscillating
    Rank: C
    Effect: Phonon Maser is an Oscillation Type magic that raises the number of supersonic oscillations, to form a quantum heat ray, effectively generating a laser of pure super concentrated heat at a target. This is a Sugiuran Energy Beam Attack roughly equivalent to a Cero..
    Name: Pressure Slash
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Weight Type
    Rank: C
    Effect: Pressure Slash is a Weight Type Magic that that uses the gravitational force of an object and extends it further along the length of a weapon or object, up to double the objects length. The gravitational force that is extended from the tip of the object to form a thin repulsion field that can slice through anything it touches as if it were a hyper vibrated sword, making the user’s weapon all the more dangerous.
    Name: Slithing Sanders
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Combination [Oscillation/Dispersal]
    Rank: C
    Effect: Slithering Sanders is a magic where stones of dry ice are produced and water vapor is condensed. This combination of magic that utilizes Oscillation Type and Dispersal Type Magic to melt the ice, creating a fog of carbon dioxide, which has high electrical conductivity through which a static charge is run through.
    Name: Spark
    Type: Modern
    Subset: Release
    Rank: C
    Effect: Spark is a Release Type magic that forces out electrons from a substance and causes an electric discharge phenomenon. The magic target is usually the air molecules within a narrow range from the substance. Although ionization of this nature is a relatively common phenomenon, it requires a very high interference power because the magic affects the substance structure altering it. The targeted molecules are very limited when using this spell, consequently requiring immense focus to effectively hit with the spell.



»Personal Mystic Eyes: (When/if a Sugiuran achieves a Master skill in Mystic Eyes, they are capable of developing their own personal mystic eye with a unique power unto themselves. If you will not have a Master level mystic eye, strike this section.)

» Equipment Pair of headphones, he needs to drown out Erebus somehow.

VI. Maxima Sindicat

(This mode is only to those who are 0-3 tier, if your character isn't written for this please remove this section or leave it striked out.)

» Maxima Sindicat Appearance (What does your Sugiuran look like during Maxima Sindicat mode?)

» Maxima Sindicat Abilities/b] (What abilities does your Sugiuran gain, or approve in during this mode?)



VII. Skill Sheets


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Symbiotic Skill Sheet
  • Sugiura Magic: Adept
  • Mystic Eyes: Adept
  • Martial Arts: Adept
  • Resonancy: Advanced


General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Advanced
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Advanced



VIII. Roleplay Sample


» Role Play Sample:(Nu)

END OF THE SYMBIOTE APPLICATION


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Comments/Notes: Alright, first off, I understand that this is just a rework and that most of these powers were already approved, but as a different staff member I'm personally uncomfortable with how a few of them work. Everything about the history and martial arts is fine, it's just mainly the abilities he has seem a little... Absolutelyinyourfacefightmebitch with little way to combat it rather than hope that Izayoi messes up.

Darkness Defender 2417 - I'd personally like to see a limit on how many charges could be made within a single post. The reason for this being is that if he uses a dash with Atomizer three times, then uses an explosive punch he's been storing up, that's a total of 4 charges made that negates all damage. This means that the only way to break through would be to use very weak, quick attacks constantly, which also means that no one would be able to do damage to him unless they were in a group of multiple, fast hitting people.

Indestructibility - Whenever someone says t hat something can never ever be destroyed or killed, I always doubt it intensely. I understand on a physical level, he can't be destroyed due to reverting back into his substantially less physical form, but what if a spiritual nuke were to hit him? He is the absence of life, but there is a conscience to him with energy being the factor that forces all of his abilities to activate. If there was some big powerful 0 tier who launched their strongest spiritual nuke meant to eradicate or disperse any spiritual presence and all those similar within it, would the Guardian Beast still be entirely immune to damage and unable to be broken?

Atomizer - I have two issues with this one. The first one being that his dash can move at double the speed of a user of shunpo that's equal to him. Normally, this could be fine at lower levels, but what if they both were at master or grandmaster? That would lead to him always being double the best speed and being able to absolutely wreck someone through going so fast that they can't even see him. I am fine with him moving faster than those of an equal level, but going full on double at high levels would make him the Flash 2.0

The second issue I have is with the invincibility given to him whenever he's dashing with it. Head-on, yeah, he should have a very strong defense, but not able to push everything off to the side. I'd much rather it be something like skills fighting, such as if someone had strength or a power that far surpassed Izayoi, they could be able to tear through the head-on dash and damage him. That's my only real gripe about the invincibility, however.

Energy Destruction - I'm never okay with the thought of energy being destroyed completely. With the ability to just -destroy- energy, that's removing something completely from the universe entirely forever, not having it disperse finely or something. I do understand the point is to break the laws of physics, but it makes me very uncomfortable. You can offer your own solution or something to justify it's ability to destroy energy since I'm fairly sure someone else somewhere on the site can do it, but if you don't want too or don't want to give me an example of how it's okay (Still not a PhD. in PH science, sorry.) then I have a suggestion. Perhaps he could finely disperse the energy from the point of impact so finely that it's scattered too far away to even be used for a long long time until it reforms?

Another concern with this ability is the fact that he could tear through a defense before him. I'm fine with absolute power colliding with someone's defense, but lol-tearing through it makes me uneasy. Personally, I'd be fine if there was a percentage of the barrier being lost through each attack, and any barrier that's below him in terms of level was actually torn through. With the way it's worded, if he was a 4 tier, he could punch through a 2 tier's barrier. I'd rather that it be lowering the defense of that barrier if a higher tier, but anything even slightly below him gets obliterated.

Remote Destruction - I like the ability, dislike that it's an on-command nuke. The purpose of the ability seems fine and all, but it seems to be almost instant, making there be little defense against it. I'd rather that someone could see it and react to it with an equal speed or higher speed level to maybe his resonance since this comes from his Guardian Beast. I like the ability and want it too stay, just would prefer some way to defend against it.
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Comments/Notes: Glad that we were able to hash out things cleanly with no drama, thanks for working with me.
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