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~Amaya~
~Amaya~
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Shunido Empty Shunido

Mon 03 Oct 2011, 7:28 am
Custom Racial Ability


  • Name: Shunido
  • Type: Sound Movement
  • Effects: Shunido is a sound movement that ashida had learned by himself.The shunido is exclusive only to ashida himself, can be learned if being teached by ashida about it.

    Shunido is the combination of shunpo and sonido, as discovered by ashida.It can move about 2 times faster than shunpo, sonido and hirenkyaku, but a very exhausting ability once used.When using this ability, it requires large amount of spiritual energy to do the shunido (except ashida himself requires moderate amount of energy since he already used to the ability already.

    When the user used shunido, the user can create dozens of afterimages and it takes time to confuse the enemy (about 1/2 post).It has the combination sound of "swish" and a static 'booming' sound.While speaking and using shunido together, it also creates afterimages voices.It was like hundreds of voice speaking one person only.Also, these afterimages contains less reiatsu than the user's reiatsu, but it can confuse the enemy to guess which one is the real one unless they found out they have less reiatsu than the real one.

    The shunido can only use once per thread, as well its available for combat (private or open) and event only.



  • Notes: Only the tier 0 can learn it from ashida since its an exhausting ability to use.


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Pockeh
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Shunido Empty Re: Shunido

Mon 03 Oct 2011, 8:14 am
While this ability is ALMOST approvable, there are two issues I see.

The afterimages having the same reiatsu as him is a bit.. OP. Maybe not in concept, but you say here that it "instantly confuses" them, which is godmod.

Also, Fifteen times the speed of any of the three techniques is also WAY too fast, especially for someone who isn't specifically trained in speed. Even twice the speed is a bit much, seeing as how it's already too fast for the naked eye to see.

Tone that ability WAAAAAAAY down, and then we'll see.


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~Amaya~
~Amaya~
Female of Dual
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Joined : 2011-07-14
Posts : 443
Age : 28
Location : New York

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Shunido Empty Re: Shunido

Mon 03 Oct 2011, 8:23 am
Fixed~ :3
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Shunido Empty Re: Shunido

Mon 03 Oct 2011, 5:08 pm
For now, approved, unless someone else says they have a problem with this.


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I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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