Sekima Hiwatari [Done]

GENETICS

Character Name:
Sekima Hiwatari

Character True Age:
342

Character Appearance Age:
14-17

Character Gender:
Male

Orientation:


Personality:
Quiet, reserved, and generally goes with the flow. Sekima's a pretty
chill guy and quite easy to get along with, once you look past the whole
'man of a few words' thing. He reaches out to others and gains their
trust. He forms bonds with others and helps them out, pretty much only
when he's asked to, sometimes even at the cost of himself. Sekima is all
right with the fact he's either used as an emotional crutch or even a
sacrifice. He knows when to give people space when confronted with their
own problems.
Through all the different kinds of people he meets and
interacts with, Sekima adopts the role of the best friend, son, rival,
team member, and so on - but when it comes down to it, he's not any of
those. Like his power, Sekima is everything and nothing at the same
time.

However, despite all the bonds and close friendships he's
made,Sekima is still a loner. He's content on leading his missions in
life alone and seems to be fine with this. Any burden, problem, or
internal conflict he's got, Sekima bears silently. He opens himself in
order to let others approach, but he never really lets anyone in. Even
in the end, only a very small handful of people somewhat understand him


GENETIC LOOKS

Appearance:


He is 160 cm tall and weights 40kg.He wears a normal Espada uniform, short pants and long sleeves shirt. He also wears a long black scarf.Has black eyes and short, spiked, black hair.

Bone Appearance:
On his hair

Hollow Hole:
Stomach

Reitsu Colour:
Red

ZANPAKUTÔ

Sealed Zanpakutô:


Racial Abilities:
Cero, Bala, Gargunta, Hierro, Negación, Pesquisa,Sonido


RESSERECCION

Resereccion Name:
Doragon

Resereccion Release Phrase:
Roar in the heavenly skies , Doragon

Release Actions:
Sekima will bit his hands which later drips blood on his Zanpaktou.The wound will heal itself in a few seconds.

Resereccion Appearance:


Resereccion Abilities:

Flight - Due to the wings that grew on his back , Sekima was granted with flight.


Fire Replenish- If Sekima eats fire , it will be like eating real food. Eating fire will heal Sekima's wound or fully restore his spiritual energy.

Hidden Fire Form; Flame Lotus: Phoenix Sword- Sekima ignites his entire body with the power of the resureccion. He
then charges towards the enemy and delivers a devastating punch that
blows up the enemy.

Fire Dragon's Roar -Sekima breathes a long line of fire that becomes a large fireball, which burns his opponent.

Fire Dragon's Iron Fist -Sekima engulfs his fist in large flames and punches his opponent.It has the potential to send opponents flying backwards .

Fire Dragon's Wing Attack -Sekima takes hold of his opponent and ignites his arms and hands on
fire, in the form of dragon wings as support, to throw them far away
while burning them.

Fire Dragon's Flame Elbow - After Sekima ignites the tip of his elbow, he uses that flame to strengthen his fist, and rocket the opponent high in the air.

Fire Dragon's Crushing Fang -With his hand ignited with a large flame, he gouges his hand into his
enemy and quickly swipes his enemy away from his sight.


DUES EX RESSERECION

Dues Ex Name:
Faiādoragon

Dues Ex Release Phrase:
Roar with the Gods of the Heavenly Skies,Faiādoragon

Dues Ex Release Actions:
There will be fire blazing around Sekima which will burn anything it touches into ashes. Then , fire will be on Sekima which won't hurt Sekima. Sekima will later transform into his Dues Ex.

Dues Ex Appearance:


Dues Ex Abilities:

Flight - Due to the wings that grew on his back , Sekima was granted with flight.

Blaze of Glory- Blazing hot fire will be on his body without hurting him. The fire can burn anything except Sekima. The wings on Sekima's back can be protected by the fire too.The fire's maximum temperature is 2500 degrees Fahrenheit.

Equipment of Fire- The fire can also be an armor and a weapon. If the fire was to be combined with the scales , it will be a very good equipment.

Blaze of Destruction-This ability needs a lot of spiritual powers.This may kill the user because of the heat from the flame that will burn anything that is burnable or melt rocks or steel. The only way to survive the attack is use the scales as a shield. This attack is more or less a last resort. The only way to use this is the user must be at least a 2 meter from the enemy.

Blaze of the Dragons- This ability allows Sekima to summon mini dragons made from fire. This is more or less like Coyote Stark's wolves but the dragons can fly at a incredible speed.It also explode when it come into contact with something. The range of the blast is one meter. The dragons can merge into one big dragon and Sekima can use it to travel anywhere.

Fire Replenish- If Sekima eats fire , it will be like eating real food.
Eating fire will heal Sekima's wound or fully restore his spiritual energy.
In his Dues Ex , Sekima is able to eat more.

Flame Lotus: Fire Dragon Fist -
Lighting his hands on fire, Sekima rapidly punches his opponent. Each
punch causes a fiery explosion. It had enough
destructive power to destroy the entire building.Sekima is able to use it approximately 100 punches.

Flame Lotus: Exploding Flame Blade- After a series of destructive attacks, Sekima finishes with a torrent of
blade-shaped flames that strikes the enemy in a spiral formation. Every
time the enemy is hit with a blade, it explodes and burns the enemy.This attack is so
powerful and destructive that it has been shown to smash through dragon
scales ---- which is known to have extremely tremendous endurance
capabilities.

Fire Dragon's Claw -Sekima ignites his feet with a very large flame to increase the power of
his kicks. He can also use the strong ensuing flames to jet-propel him
in any direction he wishes.

Fire Dragon's Sword Horn -Sekima ignites his entire body on fire in order to ram into his opponent
at full speed, then launch them high into the air with his large horn
of fire.

Fire Dragon's Brilliant Flame -Sekima creates fire on both hands, and brings them together, creating a
giant explosion that destroys everything around him. He
ignites both of his hands and combines the flame, but instead of
creating a giant explosion, he throws a very large fireball (5 meter wide) at his
enemy, blowing them away.

Dragon God's Brilliant Flame -Sekima summons flames on both fists.The moment he brings them together, he creates a giant
explosion powerful enough to destroy the surrounding area and blow the
enemy a major distance away.


SKILLS

• Durability: Beginner
  
• General Speed: Adept
  
• Strength: Adept
  
• Weapon Skill: Advanced
  

• Perquisa: Beginner
  
• Sonido: Adept
  
• Cero/Bala: Advanced
  
• Hierro: Adept
  

PAST

History:

~Human and Death Arc~
Sekima was born in a normal family in a normal place. He
was a clever and popular boy in school. Many people were jealous of
him. He was a the best student in the Kendo Club and He lived a normal
life until his parents died. His parents died in an accident so
Sekima was adopted by a kind person. They get along with each other and
Sekima resume his life like normal. After a few years , Sekima was in high
school. He was walking to his house. He saw some small children
playing beside the road so Sekima decided to watch them play.Suddenly ,
Sekima saw a big hollow in the middle of the road. The ball that the kids
were playing went to the hollow. The kids were going to get the ball
until Sekima came. Sekima pushed the kids aside and without noticing ,
the hollow killed Sekima. The hollow was later killed by a Shinigami.
Sekima's body was buried and suddenly , something happened. His soul
was just wondering around and he wants to find a way to go to heaven.

~Soul Arc and Hollow Arc~
As Sekima was trying to find a way to the other world ,
his chain of fate was completely eroded. He then went into a
transformation of a plus to a hollow. His hollow mask was first to form. He
struggled very hard.Later, he was in an internal world.He was forced to find
his spiritual powers in a short time. He was in the final stages
of Encroachment.He did not make it in time and he was completely turned into a
hollow.He was a dragon-like Adjuchas-class Menos.One day , at a cold night , he
met another group of Adjuchas-class Menos.One of the hollows was prepared
to eat Sekima but Sekima quickly retaliated with a swift slash of his sharp
wings and bit the hollow with his sharp teeth. The other hollow ran away to
avoid danger and Sekima continued to go on the move to further his
evolution. Sometime later Sekima had come across the same group of hollows
but now,there numbers were diminished.Sekima killed all off the hollows and Sekima was left. Sekima trained the whole day.
Although it is tiresome , he wanted to become a strong Arrancar someday..Years
later Sekima ripped off his mask and thus brought him into the life as an Arrancar.For long Sekima was stunned at what had happened and really didn't say anything about it
afterwards.

RP Sample:

(Toshiro Hitsugaya) http://naruto-exile.forumotions.net/t24-spar-with-the-kage#58

ok there are a few things that need to be addressed before I allow this to be accepted.


1. You won't be espada until you are tested. remove Your orientation as Cero Espada


2Resserccion Appearance needs to be longer, at minimum it needs to be 10 sentences. It's lacking a great deal in this area. This site is all about detail. Because of that you application will be accepted based on how much detail you enter in each section

3. You resserccion abilities should be actual abilities. Not traits your character gets when using it. Things like enhanced strength are usually implied when using a stronger form. So far you have two abilities and that is flight and blaze of fire.

4. You need to add much more detail to you powers. If you decide to add more than just flight and blaze of fire, make sure that each description has about 8 sentences of explanation at least. It shouldn't bee too hard to accomplish.

5. numbers 3 and 4 should also be applied to your deux Ex form

6. racial abilities. try to come up with something original and explain it. Like said in the template, there are six basic abiltiies. " Describe the Arrancar's abilities in the sealed state (if applicable). Ulquiorra's eye or Aroniero's ability to transform would be an example of this". His eye is something that only he could do. Make something original. Of course this isn't needed, it's only a suggestion.

7. In history remove that he becomes an espada. that has yet to happen as you haven't rp'ed taht out or have been tested for it in the first place.

I can't really grade this app. Appearance, history, and personality are pretty much fine. the powers of your character needs major work. Try making some attacks and explaining how they work etc.... Remember detail is key

Edited.

Fix the following.

Blaze of Fire- Sekima's weapon will be covered in fire. The fire on his weapon can burn anything. The weapon will become a bit longer and sharper.

Please, add more detail this. This is very vague ability and "this weapon can burn anything" is a bit insane. Describe what it can burn, it's limitations and how intense it is.

Fire Replenish- If Sekima eats fire , it will be like eating real food. Eating fire will heal Sekima's wound or restore his spiritual energy.

I'm fine with restoring wounds and what not, but just how much of his spiritual energy does it restore? A quarter, half, full? Please add how much. Also, put a bit more detail into this.

Hidden Fire Form; Flame Lotus: Phoenix Sword- Sekima ignites his entire body with the power of the resureccion. He
then charges towards the enemy and delivers a devastating punch that
blows up the enemy, then proceeds to headbutt him.

I need more detail on this one to. So, apparently, if he punches someone, he makes the person explode and then headbutts their corpse? See my problem? Describe that better

Fire Dragon's Iron Fist -Sekima engulfs his fist in large flames and punches his opponent which makes his opponent fly away.

Only problem I have with this is the fly away part. Make it that it has the potential to send opponents flying backwards and I'm fine

Blaze of Glory- Blazing hot fire will be on his body without hurting him. The fire can burn anything except Sekima. The wings on Sekima's back can be protected by the fire too.The fire's maximum temperature is 5100 degrees

Are we talking Fahrenheit or Celsius? In any case, try to lower it some since in either case that's a bit much for someone of this level.

Blaze of Destruction-This ability needs a lot of spiritual powers.This may kill the user because of the heat from the flame that will burn anything. Other than that , it can burn the surroundings. The only way to survive the attack is use the scales as a shield. This attack is more or less a last resort. The only way to use this is the user must be at least a 2 meter from the enemy.

Again, the only problem I have with this is the burn anything part. Fix that and we are in business.

Fire Replenish- If Sekima eats fire , it will be like eating real food.
Eating fire will heal Sekima's wound or restore his spiritual energy.
In his Dues Ex , Sekima is able to eat more.

Refer to what I said for Fire Replenish before.

Lighting his hands on fire, Sekima rapidly punches his opponent. Each
punch causes a fiery explosion. It had enough
destructive power to destroy the entire building.

How many punches can he make? What is the limit? Add more detail on this.

Also, you pasted that section two times, by the way. Look at your app.

Edited.

The fire can protect anything.

No it can't. Thats GODMOD m8

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Also make sure you give digits and stats for the powers. You can't just say 'big fireball' but need to give descriptions that show us how big it really is. For example 'Big fireball at 2m wide!'

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I would be careful about all your fire based attacks. The way you describe them makes them all seem over powered. try to make sure you do not reference anything that could be looked upon and thought of as 'instant kill' or 'unavoidable'

Edited

Alright; everything that was asked to be fixed is done.

Approved with 2-2.
Hopefully going with the espada.